Editor's note: The author used his own words to tell about his personal experience, and wrote real, without a word of empty words and falsehoods. From this, it can be seen that speaking the truth, expressing true feelings is the premise of writing a good essay. The language of the article is natural and simple, and it is like listening to the author telling a story. Let's take a look at this dance with my growth.
When I was a child, I fell in love with dance, because every time I see those famous dancers on TV, (they) one by one, the body is so (slim) good, jumping (to dance) is (very) more beautiful, but I envy is not these, but their love for the dance (the emotion) spirit and the kind of perseverance. Comment: It is not the appearance that is admired, but the inner spirit that has depth.
In the days when I first learned to dance, I realized that it was not easy to be a dancer. Because every week on Saturdays and Sundays, I had to go to dance class. Before dancing, we all have to practice the basic skills. The basic skills include leg press, lower back, and (mainly) just these two. After practicing the basic skills, we have to do somersaults so that we can stretch our muscles before we can dance. The longer you study, the more difficult the basic skills become, and now there are forward and backward curls. Sometimes, if you can't (roll) over, you will fall? Comment: It is only through practice that you realize that it is not easy to learn dance.
(Because learning to dance is very hard, and thus) the little friends who danced with me have gone away a lot, because they are afraid of pain and don't want to dance. I sometimes (I) also have such thoughts, but I think of their dancers perseverance, so I (have the courage to always) insist on it. As long as I think of them, I won't give up. (Excellent dancers are the role models for me to follow.) Comment: The strength to keep going comes from the dancers, and the power of role models is infinite.
Now, I'm 12 years old, (and I've been learning dance for five or six years,) so (a lot of) basic skills practiced, for me that's just too easy. (When I see children who have just come to learn dance, they often fail to meet the requirements in basic skills training.) So I said to my mom: ? Mom, why are those kids so stupid? They can't even do the Tiger Jump. Mom said: ? (Press) If you say so, then those dancers will think so too when they see you (dancing).? I thought about it and rightly so, mom was right, I should encourage them to have greater aspirations. Comment: As you learn to dance deeper and deeper, your skills continue to be solid, and you don't give a damn about the basic movements.
Learning dance has made me realize one thing: no matter what you learn, it is precious to persist. (Therefore, let dance accompany my future growth.) (Tongyu County Second Experimental Primary School five years four Wei Xinnan)
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