Mulan went back to rewrite the 600-word composition.

1. Mulan's poem has been rewritten in 600 words. The quiet and soft moonlight shone on Mulan's sad face, and only the sound of the loom came from the room, and Mulan sighed with it.

Mulan really can't forget the proclamation she saw on the wall during the day, on which her father's name was clearly written. "Laner, what are you thinking?" Mulan woke up to her mother's voice and said, "Mom, can't I really go to war instead of my father?" "LanEr, you can give up this idea, don't you forget what your father said? If you dare to go to war, you will deny your daughter. You can't do that! " Mother said anxiously that Mulan was very sad to see her like this. Her father is sick, her brother is underage, and she is a daughter. Dilemma!

"Bold and uninhibited, why not meet on the deadline?" I saw my parents, brothers and sisters coming out of the door. Outside, a soldier in an open armor looked at them with a pike, and four people knelt down in fear. Mulan can't stand kneeling like this. She quickly lifted her parents up and said, "Dad, Mom, it's me. Don't you recognize me? " Parents can't believe that the soldier in front of them is actually their daughter. It was a long time before Mulan remembered her purpose and said, "Dad, Mom, you are my closest relatives. You can't recognize me in disguise, let alone those people I haven't met. Let me go to war! " Knowing Mulan's temper, her parents said, "Go, be careful on the road and be sure to come back!"

In this way, Mulan went to the battlefield, climbed the mountain, passed the customs, wore thin clothes and fought in the snow. As the days passed, the war was still not over. Every night, Mulan's body seems to get smaller.

Despite her great achievements, home is the most important thing for Mulan. She gave up her job in the world and returned to her hometown.

"Come back, come back!" I don't know who saw the notice and shouted in the crowd. Parents helped each other out of the city and looked at the distance with tears in their eyes.

"Dad, Mom!" Seeing her parents, Mulan's face looks like a beautiful flower. The three men entertained the other soldiers to go home and have a rest, talking and laughing. "Sister!" Seeing my sister come back, my sister, who had been waiting at the door, cried happily. "Sister, brother?" Mulan said with joy. Sister pointed to the backyard, only to hear a burst of crack.

Mulan's room hasn't changed, just the same, spotless. In front of the window and mirror, Mulan cut her hair, painted it yellow, and took off her shirt and clothes before going to bed. But when a beautiful woman appeared in front of everyone, the partners were shocked. After fighting together for twelve years, Mulan was never found to be a girl!

2. Rewrite Mulan's poem into a 600-word narrative. The neighing of war horses came from the ancient road. At the front, I vaguely saw a brave female general in armor. She waved her whip vigorously and ran on this rugged ancient road.

The female general of anxious to return is the famous Mulan. It is said that more than ten years ago, Mulan's family received a military sticker for Khan's conscription. Mulan, who is kind and filial, wants to spare her elderly father from the fighting. Hua Mulan, a delicate woman, resolutely disguised herself as a man and joined the army instead of her father. In the battle, she fought bravely and returned home in triumph. In the face of tempting fame and fortune, Mulan was unmoved and returned to her long-cherished hometown.

When the news that Mulan went home in rags reached the village, the whole village was boiling. The villagers' faces showed unprecedented joy, and Mulan's family was even more jubilant.

I finally look forward to this day. Mulan's parents held hands with each other to welcome her daughter's arrival, and the villagers crowded around to welcome the troops from afar. The cold wind roared, but the hearts of the two old people and villagers were hotter than ever. Listen! A horse crow from far to near. Suddenly, the road was covered with dust. Suddenly, a vigorous horse flew out of the chaos, and Mulan jumped off the horse and threw herself into her mother's arms. Emotional call: "Niang, Laner is back, your Laner is back!" " "The mother reached out a trembling hand and stroked her daughter's cheek. She didn't spit out a word, just sobbed. Father couldn't help crying. All the people present were moved by this scene. This small village is full of colored lights and firecrackers. Mulan's sister came out dressed as a new girl and looked at the mighty general in front of her. She was really surprised and happy. "Little sister! ""sister! "The sisters who have been separated for a long time hold hands tightly." Sister, why don't you see my brother? " "He is very busy!" My sister mysteriously pointed to the backyard. Mulan heard Huo Huo sharpening his knife and went to the backyard. 10 years have passed, and the former urchin has grown into a handsome and strong young man. In order to welcome his sister, he is killing pigs and sheep: "General Hua, everything is ready! Mulan looked at her little brother and her face lit up.

When there was sand in the room, there was laughter from everyone. Mulan came to her girlhood boudoir. Everything in the room is the same as before, and the loom in the corner seems to be telling the story of the past. Mulan took off her uniform and put on a beautiful red dress. She sat gently in front of the mirror and dressed herself carefully ... After washing and dressing, Mulan walked lightly and shyly to the first room. In an instant, everyone was stunned by this charming beauty. An old friend said to Mulan's father in surprise, "Dad, I didn't expect you to have such a beautiful daughter!" " "Mulan's father smiled heartily and said to everyone," Take a good look, she is Mulan! """What?" Everyone can't believe their eyes. Mulan, who has shared joys and sorrows with them for more than ten years, turned out to be a girl! Seeing this, Mulan danced with her sword, dazzling and amazed. When everyone was amazed, they all felt with emotion: Mulan! Mulan! What an angry strange girl!

Since then, the story of Mulan's becoming a monk on behalf of her father has become a much-told story, which will last forever.

3. The Return of Mulan, a junior high school composition, Mulan came home and sat on the table that belonged to her twelve years ago. It's memorable to see how clean her room is. He shed tears. Think about how powerful the "generals" who have been on the battlefield are, and think about the pain of homesickness day and night. Who won't cry? Thinking about it, she remembered that there were a group of partners outside the room, and she smiled. She wanted to see how they felt when they saw herself, so she immediately dressed up, took off her shirt, put on clothes that looked very new, put down her long hair and smiled at the mirror, because this was what she was, beautiful and beautiful.

She came out because she heard someone calling her with foul language outside, and she didn't answer. But at the moment when she bolted the door open, all the people who looked at her outside opened their mouths and eyes, while those who didn't look at Mulan looked at their companions crying with their eyes. This is already good, and some people casually ask, "What's wrong with you?" Then they took her as their sister, yes! After running around for twelve years, Mulan spoke in a man's voice every day, dressed in men's clothes and ate and fell asleep. Today, they saw Mulan. Can they believe that this is Mulan who has been with them for twelve years? It was Mulan who broke the silence first. She said, "What is everyone doing? Go to the lobby, I think the food there is ready. " Those people thought they heard wrong, and Mulan's voice seemed to change with her dress and status. Mulan left in a hurry, fearing that she didn't know what to say, so everyone went to the lobby one after another.

As expected, her father prepared food and waited under the seat. He said, "Everyone has worked hard. I am Mulan's father."

Then introduce them one by one. "She is actually a daughter. Don't be surprised, because her brother is young and she doesn't have a big brother. Her mother and I reluctantly let her go."

These words sound a little sad, and then. A partner was moved by this scene, stood up and made a toast, and then said, "I have nothing to say." You always make me admire, Brother Mulan. Oh, not brothers, but Mulan moved me more. Here comes the battle-hardened daughter. We respect her. "

After that, many wine glasses were held high, and in this way, this joyful and somewhat sad banquet slowly ended. Mulan has returned to a normal life, but sometimes she thinks of her friends.

Friends who risked their lives.

4. Rewrite Mulan's composition. The sigh of 600 words is endless, and Mulan is weaving at the door.

There was no sound of the loom, only the girl was sighing. Ask the girl what she is thinking, ask the girl what she is thinking.

The girl didn't think of anything, and the girl didn't miss anything. I saw the draft documents last night and learned that the monarch was recruiting on a large scale. There are so many conscription documents, each with his father's name on it.

Father has no adult son, Mulan has no brother. Mulan is willing to buy a pommel horse for this purpose and go out for her father from now on.

Buy horses, saddles, cushions under saddles, chews, reins and whips in various markets. In the morning, I said goodbye to my parents and set off. In the evening, I camped by the Yellow River. I can't hear my parents calling for my daughter, only the sound of the Yellow River rushing.

Say goodbye to the Yellow River in the morning and arrive at the foot of Heishan (Yanshan) in the evening. I didn't hear my parents calling for my daughter, only heard the chirping of Hu Bing's war horse in Yanshan. Not far from Wan Li, go to the battlefield, fly over the city gate, and climb mountains and mountains.

The sound of playing ball came from the cold in the north, and the cold moonlight reflected the armor of the soldiers. General, some brave men (some) died in battle, and some (some) returned after many years.

Mulan came back to appear before the emperor, who was sitting in the palace. [Mulan] is considered to have many advantages and is given many properties.

The son of heaven asked Mulan what she wanted. Mulan didn't want to be an official in Shangshu Province, but wanted to take me back to my hometown on a swift horse. When parents heard that their daughter was back, they helped each other out of the city.

When my sister heard that she was back, she dressed up across the door. I heard that my sister came back, so I quickly sharpened my knife and killed the pigs and sheep.

I opened the door of each room and went in to have a look. I took off my military uniform, put on my old clothes, adjusted my hair as soft as a cloud at the window, and tied a yellow flower on my forehead in front of the mirror. When I went out to meet my campers, they were all surprised: after traveling together for so many years, I didn't even know Mulan was a woman! When the rabbit's ears are hanging in the air, the male rabbit's feet are jumping and the female rabbit's eyes are narrowing.

When a male rabbit and a female rabbit run close to the ground, how can they tell which one is male and which one is female? .

5. Mulan's poem was adapted into a 600-word composition. No translation. Write it yourself. Don't be ridiculous. One day, Mulan was weaving in front of the door. His cloth is always woven wrong. If it's wrong, take it apart and weave it again. Repeatedly, his father saw it and asked Mulan what was on her mind. Mulan replied, "Oh, nothing, I have nothing on my mind. It was only yesterday that I saw Khan's enlistment list, and every volume had his father's name. If you go to war, won't the burden of family fall on your mother? " So I want to go to war instead of you. The father was surprised and said, "How could you?" How can a little girl like you go to war? "? Besides, how could those officials agree? You'd better go to hell, alas, "Mulan said excitedly." Why don't I dress up as a woman and join the army instead of my father? " "But it will be discovered sooner or later!" Father said anxiously, "father, don't worry about this." The daughter has her own way. " "But ... but ... but ..." "Father, don't make a fuss. That's settled. I'll get ready. " "Then ... all right."

So Mulan disguised herself as a man and bought a horse and harness. Not far away, Wan Li came to the battlefield.

A few years later, Mulan made many military achievements. Khan gave her many treasures of gold and silver. She asked Mulan what she wanted. Mulan just wants to ride a swift horse and return to her hometown. Khan agreed to her request and gave him the best swift horse.

When Mulan's family learned that Mulan had come back, they were all very excited. Parents helped each other out of the city to meet her; Mulan's sister also painted the best makeup and put on the best jewelry to prepare for Mulan. Mulan's younger brother has started to sharpen his knife quickly, ready to kill pigs and sheep and cook a sumptuous meal to welcome his sister. Mulan went into her room, put on old clothes and decorations, and went out to meet her comrades. When they saw that Mulan was a woman, they all panicked and said, "After all these years of fighting with you, I didn't know you were a woman until today!

Male rabbits have messy feet and female rabbits have blurred eyes; When two rabbits walk side by side, can I tell if I am a male or a female?

6. The composition of the first day of junior high school rewrote Mulan's poem by about 600 words in the evening, which was very quiet. The bright moonlight shines on the earth, and everything is so beautiful and quiet. The stars are still shining in the sky as usual, and the evening breeze is blowing slowly. However, Mulan always sat by the loom and sighed, and the sound of weaving was sparse.

Mulan leaned back on the loom in a daze, preoccupied. Last night, a military order broke the peace at home: there were twelve military books, each urging my father to go out again. Mulan's tears burst out at once. The father is old, Mulan has no brothers, and the younger brother is young and underage. It is her duty to protect and defend the country. She made up her mind to join the army for her father.

The next morning, Mulan went to the street to buy horses, saddles, reins and whips. She was busy for a long time, prepared her combat suit, then said goodbye to her parents, disguised as a man and left without looking back. In the morning, she said goodbye to her parents. In the evening, Mulan stayed by the Yellow River. She didn't hear her parents calling her daughter, only the sound of the Yellow River flowing.

The next morning, she bid farewell to the Yellow River, and stayed at Heishantou in the evening.

After more than ten days' long journey, Mulan finally came to the foot of Yanshan Mountain, and she heard the shouts of Hu people's military forces. Hua Mulan swears: For her parents and the country, she must go all out to defeat the enemy!

"Kill-"The gunfire on the battlefield, the screams of war horses, the shouts of soldiers, the thunderous hooves and the "jingle" sound of swords and swords resounded through the whole earth, with yellow sand all over the sky and rivers of blood. On the battlefield, the bodies of the enemy were scattered all over the floor, and many soldiers were injured. Hua Mulan, who has been promoted to general, led the soldiers forward. The sound of fighting came from the cold wind, and the bright moon shone on the real clothes. Many soldiers fought many battles and died for their motherland. After more than ten years of fighting, the warriors finally returned home in triumph.

After fighting for more than ten years, Mulan came back with a victorious army, and the emperor held a grand celebration banquet for her. At the banquet, the emperor proposed a toast to Mulan who made great achievements in the war: "You have made great achievements. Can I make you history? " "no!" Hua Mulan smiled and shook her head: "It is right to pay for the motherland. I don't need to be a minister. Thank you for your kindness. But can you give me a swift horse and take me home? " The emperor looked at Mulan enviously. "Well, since you say so, I'll give you a swift horse. If you want to go home, I won't force you. " With that, he asked his men to take out a beloved swift horse from the palace and give it to Mulan. Mulan thanked the emperor with clenched fists and rode away.

"Ta-da-da", Mulan ran home, and the soil around her rose. At this time, Mulan, who was anxious to go home, was so excited that she wanted to fly home at once.

My parents were ecstatic when they learned that Mulan had come home. They hobbled outside the house, holding each other's hands, staring at the city gate, staring at …

"Dad, Mom-"Mulan's parents looked in, and Mulan rode on a horse and waved to them at a gallop. Mulan's parents suddenly trembled with excitement. First they were taken aback, and then they staggered past. Mulan pulled the horse and couldn't wait to get off. She opened her arms and hugged her parents tightly. Mother touched Mulan's face and said, "Laner, thinner, but more and more beautiful?" "Come on, it's getting late. It's good for Laner to go home! " Father patted Mulan's mother on the shoulder while leading the horse. Hua Mulan's family and her comrades who accompanied her home walked home, talking and laughing. Mulan thinks everything is so kind and beautiful.

"Sister is back, sister is back!" The younger brother cheered, and then the younger brother took the knife and went back to the kitchen to kill pigs and sheep, busy cooking food for his sister.

Hua Mulan, who came home, pushed open the door of the East Pavilion, sat on the bed of the West Pavilion, took off her shirt and put on her old clothes. Looking at the old things in the room, she felt kind and warm. She sat down, put a yellow flower on her forehead in front of the mirror, and combed the black hair on her temples.

"Zhi-"The door opened and Mulan came out with a smile: "Thank you for waiting." Said and sat down.

"Ah?" Soldiers, look at me, I look at you, dumbfounded: "I didn't know you were a daughter after more than ten years of battlefield life!" " "Ha ha ha ..." A burst of laughter broke out in Mulan's house. ...

7. Adapting Mulan's poems into a 600-word story is not a translation, but an adaptation of a composition. One day, Mulan, who has always been filial and sensible, knitted well. Somehow, there was a sigh from Mulan in the room. Mother came over and asked Mulan with concern what she was sighing about. Mulan said, "I read the military poster last night, and the emperor recruited troops on a large scale. My father's name is on many military books. My father is so old and in poor health. I can't bear to let him join the army, but he has no eldest son and I have no brother. My brother is still young! " Mother said, "There is nothing I can do about it!" Mulan thought for a moment and said, "Why don't I join the army instead of my father? You can help me hide it from my father." Mother retorted, "How can this be done?" After Mulan's persuasion, her mother finally agreed. The next morning, Mulan went out with her father, said goodbye to her mother and rode away at a gallop. In the evening, Mulan slept by the Yellow River, but she heard nothing except her parents' voices. In the morning, she bid farewell to the Yellow River. In the evening, she came to the edge of Heishan, and heard nothing but the cry of Yanshan flax.

Not far from Wan Li, he went to war. After more than a dozen battles, spies came to report: "The enemy has died a lot, so we can attack. Please ask the general to order. " The general led the army to the enemy barracks. There are indeed many people lying on the ground, motionless as if they were really dead. The general smiled. At that moment, suddenly many people came from all directions, and even people lying on the ground got up and surrounded Mulan and them. At this time, a man came out of the team and entered the enemy team. It turned out that the spy was a spy, and the enemy demanded Mulan and them to surrender. Mulan said to the general, "Heroes don't eat immediate losses, but we don't." The general said, "We surrender!" The enemy shouted with joy. When Mulan saw this, everyone jumped off the other leader, pointed a knife at him and said to the enemy, "Whoever doesn't retreat, I will kill him." So the enemy retreated and Mulan successfully broke through. Then a few years later, the general died in battle, and Mulan came back to see the emperor with a team victory. The emperor asked Mulan what she wanted, and Mulan said, "I don't want anything. I want to go home." The emperor said, "All right! Then I will reward you with 520 and a swift horse. " Mulan said, "Thank you, Emperor."

8. Rewriting Mulan's poems requires 600 words, too much and too little. Chirp, Mulan flies a plane. What kind of plane does she fly? Boeing 747! Ask the woman what she thinks and what she remembers. She wants to, and she has no money to buy a plane. Last night, she saw a military poster and needed bombers and 12 planes, but she couldn't afford one. Grandpa didn't have much money, Mulan didn't have gold and silver, so she was willing to buy steel planes from now on. She buys drawings in the east, screws in the west, glass in the south and tin in the north. She refused to go to the old hangar, no. However, I heard the tanks screaming wildly. Wan Li flew the plane, but the mountain was not closed. The hot air spreads on the wings and the sun shines on the glass. The general is scared to death, and the soul of a strong man has flown. The son of heaven is lying in a hospital bed. The director turned twelve times and gave them a slap in the face. Khan asked him what he wanted, but Mulan didn't want to go into the cell. I want to drive 747 and fly back to my hometown. My parents heard the girl's voice and picked up the machine gun. As soon as Sister A heard that Sister Mei was coming, she raised her hand and raised her gun. When I heard that my sister was coming, I raised my gun and loaded it. I opened the cabin door, hid in my plane, took off my wartime robe, put on my flight suit, put on more grenades, and put on a machine gun outside. When they went out to bury the bomb, their relatives and friends were both surprised and busy: after twelve years of separation, I didn't know Mulan was a pervert. The madman stepped on the ground, the idiot closed his eyes and they walked side by side. Who can say I'm not normal?

9. Composition "Mulan is Back" Mulan came back from junior high school in 500 years. Mulan came home, sat on the table that belonged to her twelve years ago, and looked at her room so clean and unforgettable. He shed tears. Think about how powerful the "generals" who have been on the battlefield are, and think about the pain of homesickness day and night. Who won't cry? Thinking about it, she remembered that there were a group of partners outside the room, and she smiled. She wanted to see how they felt when they saw herself, so she immediately dressed up, took off her shirt, put on clothes that looked very new, put down her long hair and smiled at the mirror, because this was what she was, beautiful and beautiful.

She came out because she heard someone calling her with foul language outside, and she didn't answer. But at the moment when she bolted the door open, all the people who looked at her outside opened their mouths and eyes, while those who didn't look at Mulan looked at their companions crying with their eyes. This is already good, and some people casually ask, "What's wrong with you?" Then they took her as their sister, yes! After running around for twelve years, Mulan spoke in a man's voice every day, dressed in men's clothes and ate and fell asleep. Today, they saw Mulan. Can they believe that this is Mulan who has been with them for twelve years? It was Mulan who broke the silence first. She said, "What is everyone doing? Go to the lobby, I think the food there is ready. " Those people thought they heard wrong, and Mulan's voice seemed to change with her dress and status. Mulan left in a hurry, fearing that she didn't know what to say, so everyone went to the lobby one after another.

As expected, her father prepared food and waited under the seat. He said, "Everyone has worked hard. I am Mulan's father."

Then introduce them one by one. "She is actually a daughter. Don't be surprised, because her brother is young and she doesn't have a big brother. Her mother and I reluctantly let her go."

These words sound a little sad, and then. A partner was moved by this scene, stood up and made a toast, and then said, "I have nothing to say." You always make me admire, Brother Mulan. Oh, not brothers, but Mulan moved me more. Here comes the battle-hardened daughter. We respect her. "

After that, many wine glasses were held high, and in this way, this joyful and somewhat sad banquet slowly ended. Mulan has returned to a normal life, but sometimes she thinks of her friends.

Friends who risked their lives.

10. Composition "Mulan Return" Mulan Return

On her way home, Mulan saw people coming and going in the street, and from time to time she thought of her relatives whom she hadn't seen for decades, so she couldn't wait to speed up her vigorous steps.

Mulan hummed happily. When parents heard that their daughter was coming back, they hurried to meet her and put on holiday clothes and exquisite ornaments. When my sister heard the news of my sister's return, she quickly put on a gauze dress and put on a layer of light makeup on her face, thinking of herself as a fairy in Osaka City. When the younger brother heard that his sister was back, he put on handsome clothes and slaughtered pigs and sheep to celebrate Mulan's coming home. Mulan couldn't help crying when she saw this scene.

The reunion dinner with the flavor of affection began. There are chickens, ducks, geese, shrimps, crabs and sheep on the dining table. Mulan thinks it's like a scene on New Year's Eve, because there are only big fish and big meat during the Chinese New Year holiday, which is so rich.

After the reunion dinner, Mulan went shopping with her family. Mulan was full of doubts and said, "When did the shops become so beautiful, people came and went, the traffic was so busy, the red lights were green, and the streets were full of festive lanterns?" My parents smiled and said, "This is to celebrate your successful return."

After returning home, Mulan presented all the exquisite ornaments to people in the same county.

Mulan opened the door of the East Room, sat on the bed on the west side, took off her battle gown, put on her evening dress, looked at the window, combed her beautiful sideburns and put on beautiful yellow flowers. When they went out to meet their comrades-in-arms, their partners were shocked: they fought together for twelve years, but they didn't know Mulan was a daughter.