Ling Ling is less than two years old and chubby. The red little face has a pair of watery glasses. Her pigtails are tilted towards
the sky, and her pink hairband is bouncing around her head like two fluttering butterflies.
What's especially cute,
is her little mouth.
At this time, a burst of enthusiastic applause interrupted his thoughts, and he looked up sharply to see Xiao Daiming coming down from the podium. He immediately tensed up again. His eyes moved around as if searching for something, he was so uneasy that he didn't even dare to touch anyone's gaze. Then he lowered his head again, as if he was afraid of being seen by others. His ten fingertips kept rubbing around, and in a moment they were wet and slippery with sweat.
I remember that it had to be a Sunday, I wanted to sleep a little more, stay in bed not to get up. Dad saw, dragged me out of bed, said: "Little lazybones, quickly get up, will soon come to the guests!" "Guests? Who is it?" I asked strangely. "You don't know, your mom is transferring her job, and invited the leader to come for a meal. I got up early in the morning and bought the food." I took a look and it was true. Look, green greens, small lantern-like chili peppers. Live and jumping carp, and a big and fat hen, is chicken, fish, meat and eggs, all kinds of things.
At this time, my mother came out of the kitchen, and when she saw that I was still in bed, she opened her mouth: "Oops, why don't you get up? Hurry up." I wear clothes while criticizing the mother: "Mom, you open the back door again, transfer a job still have to ask the leader to dinner, you can not rely on their own real skills?" Mom got a little angry: "What do you kids know, get dressed?" I had to keep quiet. Suddenly he accelerated the pace, a left turn, a right turn, rushed through two layers of defense, came to the basket, a tiger jump, turn around and shoot, the basketball in the air drew a beautiful arc, impartial fall in the basket. I first poured a small amount of oil in the pan, and when the oil smoked, I hurriedly poured the eggs into the pan, only to hear a "ch" sound, the eggs in the frying pan quickly flooded, and it is the edge of the edge more like a little girl's skirt on the lace.
2. Language and demeanor descriptions combined sentenceMy deskmate Dong Kaixuan looks really interesting, flat head, a pair of big eyes blinking, a small collapsed nose under the big mouth closed tightly, and a lock of black hair, laughable cocked in the forehead. I liked him the first day I sat with him. (Begin by introducing the subject of the narrative . The character's appearance is characterized by his "funny" looks. The opening description of the appearance is related to the following description of the three aspects of the character of the "tablemates".
My table is very competitive. (This article uses the classification of narrative method, from three sides of the table. This paragraph writes the first point: the winning heart is strong . (Write the unhappy, jealous demeanor first: beaming, glaring .) The other day, I scored 98 points in the language test, and he scored 97 points. So a point difference, he was not happy, doe mouth to take my exam paper over, wide-eyed, carefully looked at ...... I was wondering, he suddenly like found a new continent like a big smile, to me a wink, ran to the squadron leader there, even dragged the squadron leader "please! He ran to the squadron leader, dragged the squadron leader with him and "invited" the squadron leader to come here, pointing to a word on the examination paper with his hand, and said proudly (Write again the demeanor of gaining hope of defeating the opponents: laughing, winking, and smiling proudly). Ground to the lieutenant-captain, "Look, this 'Jade' in 'White Jade is Precious', Gu Yu has written it as 'King'!" When the lieutenant took a closer look, he pointed at Dong Kaixuan's head and said, "What are you yelling about? Where's the mistake?" Dong Kaixuan glared at the squadron leader, smugly took the exam paper, and read, "'White jade is precious'...... Huh? The word 'jade' wasn't right just now, but how come it's right now?" He touched his head straight, (Finally, write the defeated demeanor: touched his head straight, nodded his head straight . Write language that is appropriate to the identity, occasion, etc., "To do well in the exam ...... rely on your own efforts ah!" (can be deleted .) The happy energy just now disappeared without a trace. I saw his pitiful look and immediately took his hand and said, "It doesn't matter, do better next time. To do well in the exam, not by looking for other people's mistakes, but by your own efforts ah!" He looked at me and nodded his head sincerely. ("Convincingly" and the comma before it should be deleted accordingly.)
My deskmate is also a bit confused -- to catch up with the fashion. (This paragraph writes the second point: confused . The first point is to write about his self-appreciation. (First, write his self-appreciative demeanor: lively, proud, puffing out his chest, raising his head, walking quickly, and speaking loudly.) That morning, with perfume on his face and oil in his windblown hair, he came to the classroom in a glowing manner. Teacher Wang, who was standing by the podium, smelled his scent and called him over. Dong Kaixuan puffed out his chest, thought he was very beautiful, and walked quickly and proudly to the teacher. Teacher Wang deliberately asked him, "Dong Kaixuan, why do you smell so good?" He thought the teacher was going to praise him, and raised his head even more vigorously, saying loudly, "I, well, rubbed a little perfume, put some hair oil! (The character's language, from the tone and intonation to the choice of sentence structure, is consistent with the character's demeanor, focusing on Dong Kaixuan's self-appreciation.)" The teacher looked at him, angry and amused, and said to him, "Dong Kaixuan, rubbing perfume on hair oil is not real beauty! Think about what is considered beautiful, and tomorrow we'll discuss it together." Dong Kaixuan rubbed his nose like a kitten just waking up, slipped to his seat, and scratched his hair. (Write his embarrassed and ashamed demeanor again: rubbing his nose and scratching his hair.) As if this could scratch off the hair oil and perfume. (Write the third point in the following three paragraphs: love to hit people for fun .)
My classmate is quite a player. I only sat with him for two weeks, and I was beaten by him about ten times. When Mr. Wang found out, he took us both there and asked him seriously, "Dong Kaixuan, what if you hit Gu Yu again?" Dong Kaixuan blinked and blurted out, "That's fine, just ask him to hit me back three times!" The words are so, but not out of three days, he made the same old mistake.
Self-study class, he quickly finished his homework, nothing to do, like the TV "Wu Sung" in the Wu Sung, bellowed, and used his hand to vigorously towards my leg "whack" a bit, I was in pain wow. He panicked, spat out his tongue, and said, "I'm sorry, my good and honorable Gu Yu." He also rubbed my legs vigorously. Looking at him like this, my anger subsided and I immediately said, "Never mind, never mind." (The character's simplicity is also expressed with godly descriptions. For example, the use of "a tongue out" to show his panic when he knew he had made a mistake again, and the use of "silly" to describe his willingness to correct his mistakes.)
But Dong Kaixuan was still very upset, and said foolishly: (The look and language of apology, as well as the gestures after the apology, all show Dong Kaixuan's honest and straightforward character of knowing his mistakes and correcting them.) "Give it back to me!" I'm not going to fight! He grabbed my hand when I wasn't looking and hit his own leg hard with mine. (The character's language and actions correspond to the section above where Mr. Wang talks to the two of us, so it's reasonable to write about the process of "hitting back.") "Ouch!" He shouted, and immediately laughed again, he probably thought he had "punished" himself. I couldn't help but laugh at his foolishness and his willingness to learn from his mistakes.
My deskmate Dong Kaixuan, both naughty and cute, but also quite silly. He is so silly and funny that anyone who sees him will like him, really!
3. describes the demeanor of the fragments, and describes the language of the fragments1, the little seagulls, this five-year-old girl how amusing ah! She has a doll's head with ears, and she is pretty in a flowery pantsuit! When she speaks, her two eyes flash, like a pair of bright and beautiful pearls shining. If you ask her, "Are you happy in kindergarten?" She then dragged out a long childish voice: "Fast - live, the teacher taught us to sing, dance, recite poems ......" She told stories, hey! It's so tantalizing! The Little Frog at the Bottom of the Well", "The Little Bee and the Big Black Bear", and so on. She sometimes blinking that eyelash long big eyes, sometimes make naive action, as long as you hear her storytelling, you can not leave ......
1, "Dong Li, this is for you, home from school at noon to open and read." I was concentrating on my homework when Wang Xiao behind me handed over a beautiful New Year's card. "Can't you read it now?" I hesitated, "No!" She smiled wryly. "Okay", I looked at her mysterious eyes, hopelessly agreed.
2. I remember that it was a Sunday, I wanted to sleep a little more, stayed in bed and did not get up. Dad saw, dragged me up from the bed, said: "Little lazybones, get up, will soon come to the guests!" "Guests? Who is it?" I asked strangely. "You don't know, your mom is transferring her job, and invited the leader to come for a meal. I got up early in the morning and bought the food." I took a look and it was true. Look, green greens, small lantern-like chili peppers. Live and jumping carp, and a big and fat hen, is the chicken, fish, meat and eggs, all kinds of things.
At this time, my mother came out of the kitchen, and when I saw me still in bed, I opened my mouth: "Oops, why don't you get up? Hurry up." I wear clothes while criticizing the mother: "Mom, you open the back door again, transfer a job still have to ask the leader to dinner, you can not rely on their own real skills?" Mom got a little angry: "What do you kids know, get dressed?" I had to keep quiet.
3, I raised the trophy, walked off the podium, involuntarily came to the front of Wang Lan, said: "This has how much of your efforts ah! The trophy should be yours." Wang Lan, however, pushed the trophy back and said, "No honor is yours, I should congratulate you."
4. ...... I ate the fragrant scrumptious rice and looked at my watch from time to time. The older woman is particularly happy today. Said: "Girl, don't be in a hurry! There is your big uncle to send you back." I was about to say something, uncle quietly said to me, "Do not excuse, she is going to take me again." The aunt looked at the uncle that way, deliberately stared at the eyes and asked: "Say what bad things about me?" The uncle put his hand in a serious manner and said, "How could I say something bad about her on the day of her life?" Auntie heard, "Puff" a laugh. I also laughed.
5, mom in the bedroom to make the bed, while rushing to dad nagging: "Look, look, the bed is all ash, you smoke again at night!" Dad smiled and did not answer, just brush pots and pans in the kitchen, washing dishes ...... After a while, mom said to dad: "Busy man, I'm on the middle class today, this sink in a pile of clothes you're contracted it!" Dad said with a smile, "How much does the boss pay? Let's sign a contract ......"
6, after lunch, mom called me to wash the dishes, I refused to wash, mom said in a tactful tone: "My little dishwasher, go wash the dishes!" I went to wash the dishes happily. As I washed them, I said, "Mom, so you're a little swan washing machine!" Because mom often washes our clothes. Not to be outdone, Dad said, "I'm the rice cooker, because I cook rice for you every day." I laughed and said, "Ha, we are all household appliances!"
4. Describe the character's action Language Demeanor Essay 100 words or soDescribe the action Her opponent was now Q. She raised her ping-pong board without showing any sign of weakness, shrugged her shoulders and craned her neck out of habit, squatted professionally in a good horse stance, lifted her head slightly to show her daunting eyes, sneered, and said softly, "Serve the ball! " The small yellow ball quickly shot toward her, she did not hesitate to side, swinging her arm, "snap" hit back.
Who knew, her opponent was not to be outdone, another straight shot. She frowned alertly, her left foot backward, her right hand to the ball pushed hard, her eyes do not leave the ball.
The opponent made a direct "kill shot" that she could not defend against and lost the ball! Just one point difference, he was not happy, doe mouth to take my exam paper over, wide-eyed, carefully looked at ...... I was wondering, he suddenly like found a new continent like a big smile, to me a wink, ran to the squadron leader there, even dragged the squadron leader "please" come, with a hand pointing to the squadron leader. "to come, pointing to a word on the exam paper with his hand, yelling with glee.
Language describing the character The fellow put on a very mean face and said, "Ah, yes? Hmph, of course I expected that you didn't have any change with you. I see that broads like you only carry big bills."
This set me on fire, so I said, "My friend, you can't judge a stranger by his clothes alone. I can afford to pay for this suit, but I don't want to make it difficult for you, for fear you can't change a big bill."
Once he heard these words, his attitude changed a little bit, but he still a little pose to answer me: "I do not mean any harm, but if you want to open your mouth to lecture people, then I have to tell you, such as you arbitrarily think that we can not change what you may be carrying around what the big money, that is a blind worry, on the contrary, we can not change! " .
5. A small fragment of an essay describing demeanor, language and actionMy good friend My good friend Zhang Juan has a melon-like face, white skin, and two big, grape-like eyes that blink and blink.
Long dark hair, always wearing a ponytail, looks very spiritual. Once, we were together to take the 201 bus to the shopping park.
The 201 bus is usually very crowded, even the aisle is full of people. At the Cathay stop, a gray-haired grandmother came up.
The people in the carriages were indifferent and didn't react at all. When Zhang Juan saw this, she immediately stood up and said to the grandmother, "Grandma, you sit here!" The grandmother quickly said, "Thank you, child."
Everyone in the carriage gave him a look of approval. Zhang Juan is not only a role model for me in my studies, but also a good example for me as a human being.
6. Describe the demeanor action language fragments (about 300 words)The most important thing in describing the action of a character is to pay attention to observation.
In daily life, we should pay extra attention to observe all kinds of people around us *** behavior, especially pay attention to the characteristics of different people's movements, seize the characteristics of careful and repeated observation. As the following example: Xiaoli pursed lips, bowed, tiptoe, step by step slowly close to it.
Close, close, and see her quietly reach her right hand to the butterfly, open two fingers together, clamped the wings of the pink butterfly. Rei jumped and danced with joy.
He bent over, the basketball in his hands back and forth, left and right, and kept shooting, two eyes skittering, looking for a "breakthrough" opportunity. Suddenly he accelerated the pace, a left turn, a right turn, rushed through two layers of defense, came to the basket, a tiger jump, turn around and shoot, the basketball in the air after a beautiful arc, impartial to fall in the basket.
Catching butterflies, playing basketball, are our common activities, some are even students personally participated in. But the writing is not specific.
The above two descriptions, due to the author's careful observation, catching butterflies, playing basketball action, demeanor written vividly. Second, it is to seize the action description that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.
Please see the following example: He is more than 50 years old. He was in his fifties and wore a pair of highly nearsighted glasses.
He removed his glasses with trepidation and casually wiped the lenses with the hem of his shirt. "Uh-huh ......" he was about to speak, suddenly remembered something, hands and feet in a hurry to find the plate, and hastily to the pocket, pulled out a box of matches, which is assured that another "uh-huh " twice, stood up straight, and said in a particularly loud voice: "Now begin to watch the teacher do the experiment!" The classroom hit a pandemonium.
Teacher Mao stood in the doorway in a furious rage, his head hot, the tip of his nose adorned with a few shiny beads of sweat, his eyebrows raised angrily upwards while his mouth grinned downwards. When he saw us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles in his face froze and didn't move, like a freeze frame in a movie.
We were all nailed down like logs. The old man's hands were very deft.
It only takes a few minutes for a clay figure to be born in his hands. Look at him picking up another lump of clay, first pinching it into a circle, then gently rubbing it with his hands to make it soft and smooth.
Then, rubbing on it, he gradually separated the head, body and legs of the man. He held this clay figure in his left hand, and with his right hand he fiddled with it above the head, and in a short while the clay figure wore a partial hat.
The above three paragraphs have captured the action that best highlights the character. Example one is written about an old teacher who is highly nearsighted.
Through the description of actions such as "wiping the lens with the hem of his shirt", "fumbling to find it on the plate", and "pulling it out of his pocket in a hurry", he writes a highly nearsighted, inept, and ungainly teacher. Myopia, movement is not sharp and a little "confused" the characteristics of the old teacher; example two, mainly to seize the character of the angry people, facial expressions to describe the characteristics of the action. For example: "stood in the doorway in anger", "hot air on his head", "eyebrows furiously upward", "mouth grinning downwards
Example three is to seize the characteristics of the action of the pinch clay man, wrote a dexterous old artist image. Third, is to accurately and appropriately use the verb.
Read the following examples to see the role of the punctuated words in each paragraph. It is too late to say.
The athlete, who had fallen to the ground, braced himself with his hands, tiptoed on his feet, and scrambled to his feet. The tip of his left foot pressed against the starting line, his knees bent, and he crouched steadily.
The two hands are like two wooden pillars inserted in the ground, the whole body slightly forward, the posture, like an eagle taking off. This short sentence, with "fall, brace, tiptoe, climb, top, bend, crouch, insert, lean, fly, etc." 10 verbs, the athletes on the field of preparation for the start of the posture depicted accurately and realistically.
She squeezed into the gate, put the burden down on the ground; went up, the grass on the ground, pressed with the knee, bent down, hands hard to tighten the waist of the grass, lifted up, thrown to the corner of the yard wall. These verbs punctuated in the paragraph are used very aptly.
The image of a capable, sharp, strong, skillful rural girl is written. She saw her grandmother stand up and grasp the lid of the pot with both hands and lift it upwards.
It took a few times to open it with difficulty, but only slightly opened a crack. A thick cloud of smoke rushed out of the stove and almost smoked her face.
Grandma casually brushed her wrinkled face with her sleeve, shook her head, and said to herself, "I'm getting old, I don't have much use for this." This passage describes the actions of a grandmother doing housework. The use of "uncovered, rushed, smoked, flicked, shook" and other verbs, accurately and appropriately write out the characteristics of the old man's work movements.
The above examples show that the description of the character's movements must be accurate, appropriate verbs, in order to write a specific image of the character's dynamic image.
Xiaohong happened to be sitting facing the window, the afternoon sunlight on her round face, so that her cheeks are more rosy; her hand holding the pen resting on her cheeks, the open sockets of her eyes, the crystal eyes slowly swimming, plump chin slightly upward - this is whenever she came up with a more ingenious way to solve a math problem for the the familiar, beloved demeanor of the math teacher. Whenever I do my homework, the tip of my pen rustles as if a bird is singing to me, and as if encouraging me, "You must not be afraid of difficulties and climb to the top."
She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so fluently, as if she had prepared for it. She recited in a subdued manner, with a beautiful, melodious tone of voice, and moved the seat.
He, a naughty boy, reads too fast, chopping and snapping, like frying peanuts. Juanjuan read the text in Mandarin, the voice is brittle, very good, even the sun also listened to the fascination, secretly from the window into the classroom, fell on her book, long unwilling to leave.
I read greedily, as a hungry.
7. Description of human fragments, language, action, demeanor, appearance essay 200 wordsAction description specificity
High jump
Li He was the only one left in front of the high jump frame. The bar had risen to 1.47 meters, one centimeter higher than last year's Group B high jump record. The competition whistle blew, only to see Li He students darted forward, less than half a meter from the crossbar, he jumped and flew over the crossbar, breaking the record of the school games.
This piece of broken total *** only one hundred words, really write Li He students broke the high jump record, only half a sentence, only 20 or 30 words, very not specific.
How to write this section of "High Jump" in a specific way?
Method I decomposition of things method
[Explanation] The so-called "decomposition of things method" is the whole of something from the location, time, events, people and other different perspectives, divided into a number of small parts, and then according to a part of a part of a specific write. On the "high jump" this clip, high jump record-breaking scene, can be broken down into four aspects of the action, which is to run, jump, over, landing, and then one by one in order to describe.
[Demonstration] The whistle blew, Li He students jumped in place a few times, habitually press the left leg, and then press the right leg, straighten up the waist, a deep breath, which took a brisk and powerful pace, to the high jump frame. (Running) When approaching the high jump, a sharp turn, feet a stomp, the two actions are almost simultaneously completed. (Jump) the audience could not blink, her head and shoulders have crossed the crossbar, and then a chest, stomach, waist, a good "back over". (Over) ...... "Success!" Broke the school record, surrounded by a round of applause, shocked the crossbar on the high jump frame seems to be jumping. (landing)
Method two recall association method
[Explanation] The so-called "recall association method" is to take the approach of complementary narrative or interpolation, to recall the scene with the things related to the time. For example: the high jump record of the school games and the previous school games to break the high jump record to compare the situation, what is the difference? How was the same athlete's high jump performance different from that of the past? You can also make various associations: How did Li He look before the start? Did she have confidence? How did she start her feet at the start? What was her speed? How did she cross over to the crossbar when she got there? How did she look when she landed on the ground after crossing the bar?
[Demonstration] The bar has risen to 1.47 meters, and the whistle is about to blow. At this time, a ray of sunlight shone on Li He's face, she looked more energetic. (Write up the jump before the look) she thought of the weekdays in physical education class with the classmates practiced, the teacher also encouraged her more than once, usually also jumped also the best results. It seems that this time she is full of confidence in breaking the school sports record. (Write Li Crane has the confidence to win) With the whistle, Li Crane jumped a few times in place, habitually pressed the left leg, and pressed the right leg, straightened her waist, and exhaled y. She ran forward violently, ran from the starting point to the crossbar in big strides, measured the distance carefully again, and then returned to the starting line. Just saw her clench her fists and run forward, six meters, five meters, four meters, ...... a meter, less than half a meter from the crossbar, she was as light as a swallow, two feet a lift, a good "back over the style", broke the school record. (Specifically write Li Crane jumped high when the look of action) action is so light, posture is so beautiful. "Success!" In the students of a cheer, she ran to the physical education teacher, thank the teacher's past careful guidance: she ran to the class, thank the enthusiasm of the students to encourage ...... (write after the success of Li He's look)
Method three add details method
[Explanation] The so-called " Add details method", is centered around the center, add some details, the Li He students broke the school sports record when some of the smallest details of the performance of one by one, such as her a look, her a small action, her success after the performance of classmates, and so on. If you can properly add these details in the text, the article will be more delicate and touching.
[Demonstration] Li He stood at the starting line, calm and collected. She habitually pressed her left leg and then her right leg, and after these preparatory activities, she smiled at us and passed a glance toward her close classmates. (Detail 1) It seemed to tell the whole class that she must live up to the expectations of everyone. When the whistle blew, she measured the distance from the starting line to the high jump frame with big strides, measuring each step carefully and conscientiously for fear of the slightest mistake. Then she ran back to the starting line, spat into her palms, rubbed her hands together, clenched her fists, and started sprinting toward the crossbar. The whole crowd held their breath, watching this momentous performance. The chugging sounds from Li He's classmates faded away as she got closer and closer to the crossbar. Jumping! She clenched her teeth. (Detail 3) Only to see her make a sharp turn, her feet stomped, and the two maneuvers were completed almost simultaneously. The audience could not blink, her head and shoulders have crossed the crossbar, and then a chest, waist, stomach, feet merged, a good "back over the type"...... "success! Broke the school record, the applause around, shocked the crossbar on the high jump frame seems to be jumping ...... classmates ran into the field, embraced her, and a classmate hit her a few times with his fist, (detail four) and then lifted her high.
8. Describe the character's language. The fragment,Sentences of Morphological Description, you see: his wrinkled face slowly blossomed into a smile, it was a smile of joy, excitement, heartfelt smile.
The young people drink freely and laugh; the old people drink lightly and leisurely. Whether it is a local, foreigners, and even foreign friends, regardless of whether they know each other, strangers, the faces of the various are showing joy, overflowing with the "wine with a friend, dry cup less" feeling.
The teacher and the parent spoke again. The tears in the circle of the eyes turned a few times and fell down.
The teacher's face was even more ugly, and my heart was pounding faster. I felt so small and ashamed that my face burned and burned.
He came to the street, took a pair of glasses out of his pocket with a trembling hand, put them on his deep-sighted eyes, and stood there quietly, staring into the distance for a long, long time.