Wind, visible but not tangible, always exists around us. If we want to describe the wind, how should we describe it? Let’s take a look at how others write about style! Below are the essays and comments about writing style that I compiled for you. I hope it will be helpful to you! Essay on Writing Style Part 1
The footsteps of spring are gently approaching us, and everything is recovering. The scene is refreshing and refreshing. The spring breeze spreads its symbols in this casual season, covering every corner of the world. The warm spring breeze blows slightly, caressing the earth, like a kind mother giving birth to her children. Although spring does not have the warmth of summer, the sadness of autumn, and the vicissitudes of winter! But it brings people infinite joy! Spring breeze and spring are good sisters, and their personality traits are not much different: the spring breeze is not as hard to blow away as the summer breeze. The heat; not as sad as autumn; not as cold as winter. The gentleness and grace of the spring breeze are like a musician composing the earth. Who said the spring breeze has no color? Isn't its color the green of the grass and the buds of the trees? Who says the spring breeze has no beauty? Isn't her beauty just the swing of the willows and the smile of the flowers? Who says the smell of the spring breeze is ?Isn’t her smell the smell of earth and the fragrance of flowers?
The spring wind brings us infinite space for imagination; let us unfold our flawless imagination in the spring breeze! The footsteps of spring are gentle The earth is moving towards us, and the sight of the recovery of all things is refreshing and refreshing. The spring breeze spreads its symbols in this casual season, covering every corner of the world. The warm spring breeze blows slightly, caressing the earth, like a kind mother giving birth to her children. Although spring does not have the warmth of summer, the sadness of autumn, and the vicissitudes of winter! But it brings people infinite joy! Spring breeze and spring are good sisters, and their personality traits are not much different: the spring breeze is not as hard to blow away as the summer breeze. The heat; not as sad as autumn; not as cold as winter. The gentleness and grace of the spring breeze are like a musician composing the earth. Who said the spring breeze has no color? Isn't its color the green of the grass and the buds of the trees? Who says the spring breeze has no beauty? Isn't her beauty just the swing of the willows and the smile of the flowers? Who says the smell of the spring breeze is ?Isn’t her smell just the smell of earth and the fragrance of flowers?
The spring wind brings us infinite space for imagination; let us unfold our flawless imagination in the spring breeze!
Teacher comment: In the article, the author describes the beautiful scenery brought by the spring breeze to the earth. The description of the scenery is rich and colorful, and the content is substantial, expressing the author's love for the spring breeze. The writing of this article adopts a divided and general structure, which is clear-cut and rigorous; the metaphor and personification of rhetorical techniques are used in the description of the scenery to make the description of the scenery vivid and the language vivid. For example: "The gentleness and grace of the spring breeze are like a musician composing the earth." Part 2 of the composition about wind
The spring breeze comes to us gently, like a gentle angel, holding the wind Holding our hands, we walked into the door of spring with warmth and softness. Chunfeng is a painter. You see, it adds green jade-like leaves to the willow tree, making the willow tree dance proudly in the wind in the sunshine; it adds green and small and exquisite grass to the soil, so that the black soil is no longer lonely; it adds green leaves to the willow tree. The Begonia has added tender flowers, telling Begonia that spring has arrived; it gives blue pigments and bright colors to the sky and the sun, attracting little swallows to come, adding infinite vitality to the spring; it gives green color to the sky and the sun. It is given to the earth, which revives the earth's spring...
There are many good smells hidden in the spring breeze. The peach blossoms are fragrant, the honeysuckle is sweet, and there are winter jasmine, hyacinth...
Many sweet flavors are in the spring breeze. The spring breeze is like a magician, because it creates a dazzling and colorful spring.
Teacher comment: "Look, it adds green jade-like leaves to the willow tree, making the willow tree dance proudly in the wind in the sunshine; it adds green and small and exquisite grass to the soil, making the black The soil is no longer lonely; it adds tender flowers to the begonias full of green leaves, telling the begonias that spring has arrived; it gives blue paint and bright colors to the sky and the sun, attracting little swallows to come and provide the The spring light adds infinite vitality; it contributes green to the earth and revives the spring light of the earth... The use of parallelism expresses the magic and beauty of spring. The shortcoming is a clerical error, and the word "is" should be "make" in the writing style. Chapter 3
The mother has a baby named Feng. The mother tells the baby: "When you grow up, my child, you have to do something meaningful." "When Feng Bao Bao heard the whoosh, he went away.
Feng Bao Bao came to the field and saw farmers harvesting rice, sweating profusely. He immediately ran over and opened his big With a swish of mouth and a few swish of breath, the farmers quickly said: "Thank you, thank you. "Feng Baobao said: "You're welcome, you're welcome. "Feng Bao Bao was happy.
Feng Bao Bao came to the square again and saw the children flying kites, so he went up and blew a few breaths. The kite was swinging in the air, swinging. Seeing that the kite was swaying, it stopped immediately. When Baby Feng saw that he had done something bad, he immediately said, "I'm sorry, I'm sorry." The children said: "It doesn't matter, it doesn't matter."
Feng Baobao came to the river again and saw the fisherman pulling the boat. He blew a few more breaths and the boat started to sail. The fisherman said to Feng Baobao: "Thank you, thank you." "Feng Baobao said: "You're welcome, you're welcome. ”
Baby Feng gradually grew up. An electric power plant was built in the desert. People traveling to the desert can also feel the convenience of electricity in the desert.
People say that Feng Baobao is a good boy, Feng Baobao is very happy!
Teacher comment: The young author of this article gave life to the wind and wrote the story of it helping the farmer uncle, helping the fisherman, and helping the desert , highlighting the characteristics of Feng's willingness to help others. The article has a complete structure and clear layers. It is an excellent essay.