Run, run, run! His heart was thrilled, his pain could not be expressed in our shallow language, it seemed that every hair on his body had a beating joy
The most important thing is to pay attention to the observation of the character's movements. In daily life, we should pay extra attention to observe all kinds of people around the behavior of all kinds of actions, especially pay attention to the characteristics of different people's actions, seize the characteristics of careful and repeated observation.
As the following example:
Small Li pursed her lips, bowed her back, tiptoed, and approached it slowly, step by step. Nearer, nearer, and again, she was seen quietly reaching her right hand toward the butterfly, and her two open fingers closed, pinching the pink butterfly's wings. Rei jumped and jumped for joy.
He bent over, the basketball under his hands, back and forth, left and right, two eyes skittering, looking for a "breakthrough" opportunity. Suddenly he accelerated the pace, a left turn, a right turn, rushed through two layers of defense, came to the basket, a tiger jump, turn around and shoot, the basketball in the air drew a beautiful arc, impartial to fall in the basket.
Catching butterflies and playing basketball are common activities, and some are even attended by students themselves. But the writing is not specific. The above two descriptions, due to the author's careful observation, catching butterflies, playing basketball action, demeanor written vividly.
Two, is to seize the most prominent characterization of the action description.
See the following example paragraph:
He is more than 50 years old. Wearing a pair of highly myopic glasses. He removed his glasses warily and casually wiped the lenses with the hem of his shirt. "Uh-huh ......" he was about to speak, suddenly remembered something, fumbled to find in the plate, and hastily into his pocket, pulled out a box of matches, then reassuringly again "uh-huh " twice, stood up straight, and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now begin to watch the teacher do the experiment!"
The classroom hit the ground running. Teacher Mao stood in the doorway in a huff, his head hot, a few shiny beads of sweat adorning the tip of his nose, his eyebrows raised angrily upward while his mouth grinned downward. When he saw us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles in his face froze and didn't move, like a freeze frame in a movie. We were all nailed to the ground like logs.
The old man's hands were deft. It only takes a few minutes for a clay figure to be born in his hands. Watch as he picks up another lump of clay, first pinching it into a circle, then gently rubbing it with his hands to make it soft and smooth. Next, he rubs on it again, gradually separating the head, body and legs of the human being. He held this clay figure in his left hand, and his right hand fiddled with the top of the head, and in a short while, the clay figure wore a partial hat.
All three of the above paragraphs capture the action that best characterizes the character.
Example one is about an old teacher who is highly nearsighted. By describing the actions of "wiping the lens with the hem of his shirt", "fumbling to find it on the plate" and "pulling it out of his pocket in a hurry", he writes a highly nearsighted person who is not very skillful and a bit "nearsighted". Example two, the main character grumpy people angry, facial expressions to describe the characteristics of the action. For example: "standing in the doorway in anger", "hot air coming out of his head", "eyebrows raised in anger", "mouth grinning downward", "muscles grinning downward", "the face of the teacher", "the face of the teacher", "the face of the teacher", "the face of the teacher", "the face of the teacher", "the face of the teacher". ", "muscles are not moving", etc., the angry facial expression is written vividly and realistically. Example three is to seize the characteristics of the action of pinching the clay man, write a dexterous old artist image.
Three, is to accurately and appropriately use the verb.
Read the following example paragraphs and see the function of the punctuated words in each paragraph.
It was too late. The athlete who had fallen to the ground, braced himself with his hands, tiptoed on his feet, and scrambled to his feet. With the tip of his left foot pressed against the starting line and his knees bent, he crouched steadily. Both hands are like two wooden pillars inserted in the ground, the whole body slightly forward, that posture, like an eagle taking off.
This short sentence, using "fall, brace, tiptoe, climb, top, bend, crouch, insert, tilt, fly, etc." 10 verbs, the athletes on the field of preparation for the start of the race depicted accurately and realistically.
She squeezed into the gate, put her burden down on the ground; walked up, took the grass on the ground, pressed it with her knees, bent down, and tightened her hands on the waist of the grass, lifted it up, and threw it to the corner of the yard wall.
These verbs punctuated in the paragraph are used very aptly. Write the image of a capable, sharp, strong, skillful rural girl.
She saw her grandmother stand up and grasp the lid of the pot with both hands and lift it upwards. She struggled a few times before opening it slightly. A thick stream of smoke rushed out from the mouth of the stove and almost smoked Grandma's face. Grandma casually brushed her wrinkled face with her sleeve, shook her head, and said to herself, "I'm getting old, I don't have much use for this."
This passage describes the actions of a grandmother doing housework. The use of verbs such as "uncover, punch, smoke, flick, shake" accurately and appropriately characterizes the old man's working movements. The above examples show that accurate and appropriate verbs must be used to describe the movements of the characters in order to write a concrete and vivid image of the characters' dynamics. 手舞蹈足蹈 Descriptive Words and Sentences on Learning
(1) Words Describing Learning Attitude
diligent, diligent, painstaking, conscientious, focused, drilling, down-to-earth, diligent, modest and good at learning
diligent, hard-working, down-to-earth, not ashamed of asking, striving for perfection, digging down to the bottom of the earth, abandoning one's job, eating by hand, not releasing the scrolls, as if one were hungry, persistently, by the book, by the book, by all means, meticulous
(2) Words for Concentrating on Learning
Xiaohong happened to be sitting facing the window, the afternoon sunlight on her round face, making her cheeks even more rosy; her hand holding the pen resting on her cheeks, her crystal eyes slowly swimming in her open sockets, her plump chin slightly upturned--this is the way she looks whenever she comes up with a more ingenious way to solve a math problem, for the math teacher's familiar, beloved demeanor.
Whenever I was doing my homework, the rustling of my pen tip sounded as if a bird was singing to me, and as if encouraging me, "You have to be unafraid of difficulties and climb to the top."
She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so smoothly, as if she had been prepared.
She recited in a staccato manner, her voice beautifully intoned, and her voice was so beautiful that the audience was moved.
He, the naughty one, read too fast, chopping and snapping as if he were frying peanuts.
Juanjuan read the text in Mandarin, her voice was crisp and beautiful, even the sunlight was mesmerized, sneaking into the classroom through the window and landing on her book, not wanting to leave for a long time.
I read the book greedily, like a hungry lamb breaking into a meadow of tender green grass.
She dug into the vast sea of books, like a fish into the sea, forgetting the passage of time.
He reluctantly roused himself and opened the book, and at first it felt like lines of words moving across it, like they were going to fly; then it felt like just a blur, like a nest of ants crawling across the page.
He buried his head in his homework again, and the room was silent, only the sound of pens rustling on paper could be heard.
Students sat in the classroom, listening intently to the teacher's lecture, like dozens of flowers in silence to bear the watering of the diligent gardener.
Catchy reading sounds flew out from all the classrooms, like a moving chorus of children's voices, with notes filling the sky.
Hard work Hard work Easy effort Eat Relieved Delighted
Excited Exhausted
Excited with joy Exhausted
(3) Words describing the fruits of labor
Completed Tasty food Clean windows Spotless
Organized, tidy, neat, clean, clean and bright
Organized, tidy, clean, clean and bright
Organized, orderly, clean, clean, clean and bright
They are the most beautiful and the best of all.
(4) Good sentences describing labor
She took a stack of wonton skins in her left hand, and with her right hand, she used the tip of her chopstick to pick a little bit of filling and wrapped it in the skins, and then pinched it with her left hand and then pinched it with her right hand, and then a wonton was "born" in my hand.
I picked up the pasta sheet, picked up the filling with my chopsticks, carefully placed it on the pasta sheet, and pinched it with both hands. I just feel sticky, take a closer look, "Oops!" I couldn't help but cry out - it turned out that I pushed too hard and broke the dough, and the filling came out. I hurriedly "first aid", and it came out from the other side. I hurriedly wrapped another piece of dough around that side, and then I was able to plug the "loophole". I finally made a dumpling with three pieces of dough.
She put soap on her dirty clothes and rubbed them together, and little bubbles of soap came out of the clothes and turned them into a big pile of white foam.
She breathed on the windowpane and then rubbed her fingernails on it, a series of clean movements.
I poured a small amount of oil into the pan, and when the oil smoked, I hurriedly poured the eggs into the pan, and I heard a "ching" sound, and the eggs quickly rose up in the frying pan, and their edges looked like the lace on a little girl's dress.
I swished the mop around in the sink, wrung it out, and then bent down, front legs bowed, back legs taut, and mopped the floor.
A light needle seemed to be very heavy in my hand, and every stitch took me a lot of effort, and after a few stitches I was so tired that I started sweating.
It was our turn to pin. I couldn't wait to dip the thread in spit and twist it. But when I twisted it, I twisted the little hairs so thin and long that when I threaded the needle, it just wouldn't go in. I had to pull the hairs down to get them in. Then I tied a knot on the end of the thread, and because of the spittle on the thread, the knot always stuck to my fingers, so I had a hard time tying the knot.
Good Words and Sentences about Characters
(1) Words describing the appearance of a character
Tiger head, tiger's head, clear-cut eyebrows, red cheeks, white, soft, and full of redness
Hair full of silver hair, eyes gleaming, eyes like pools of water, fiery eyes, thick eyebrows, big eyes
Careful brows, big-hearted Iron-chested, tall, lanky, gallant, well-dressed
(2) Words describing the expression of a character
(2) Words describing the character's Heartbeat
Happy hearted Heavy hearted Worried hearted Grieving hearted
Angry hearted Wild hearted alarming hearted Panicked hearted Undeterred hearted
(4) Sentences describing the character
She had a pair of boyishly beautiful eyes adorned with long eyelashes on her face, just like two crystal grapes.
The boy had a pair of big, copper-bell eyes on his black tiger's head-like face, and was very spirited.
His eyebrows were sometimes tightly furrowed, forming a question mark between them; sometimes they were pleasantly stretched, like an exclamation mark.
His flushed face shone like a ripe apple in September.
His ears were white and red, with well-defined whorls and well-proportioned outer and inner rings, like a sculpted work of art.
Her small mouth was rich in expression: when she was happy, she would skim her lips and make a face; when she was angry, her pouting mouth could hold a small kettle of oil. The words that come out of this mouth can sometimes make people so angry that they burst into flames and sob, while at other times they make people laugh out loud.
Ms. Li had beautiful hair, black and greasy, thick and dense, and when she stood in the sunlight and gently shook her head, it shone with a colorful halo.
Smiling, smug, smiling, smug, glowing, alive
Puffy, frustrated, miserable, listless, tearful
Her little mouth is full of expression: when she's happy, she skims her lips and puts on a grimace; when she's angry, she pouts and hangs on for dear life
She's got a little kettle of gasoline. The words that come out of this mouth can sometimes make people so angry that they burst into flames and sob, while at other times they make people laugh out loud.
Ms. Li had beautiful hair, black and greasy, thick and dense, and when she stood in the sunlight and gently shook her head, it shone with a colorful halo.
My classmate, Xiao Hong, wore a big braid, shiny black, thick eyebrows embedded in a pair of big black eyes, looks pretty
She took a stack of wonton skins in her left hand, her right hand with chopsticks to pick a bit of stuffing to the skins of a wrap, and then pinch the left, the right pinch, a wonton in my hands "born! "I'm not going to be able to do that.
I picked up the pasta sheet, picked up the filling with chopsticks, carefully placed it on the pasta sheet, and pinched it with both hands. I just feel sticky, take a closer look, "Ouch!" I couldn't help but cry out - it turned out that I had pushed too hard, squeezing through the dough, and the filling came out. I hurriedly "first aid", and it came out from the other side. I hurriedly wrapped the other side with another piece of dough, and then I was able to plug the "loophole". I finally made a dumpling with three pieces of dough.
She put soap on her dirty clothes and rubbed them together, and little bubbles of soap came out of the clothes and turned them into a big pile of white foam.
She breathed on the windowpane and then rubbed her fingernails on it, a series of clean movements.
I poured a small amount of oil into the pan, and when the oil smoked, I hurriedly poured the eggs into the pan, and I heard a "ching" sound, and the eggs quickly rose up in the frying pan, and their edges looked like the lace on a little girl's dress.
I swished the mop around in the sink, wrung it out, and then bent down, front legs bowed, back legs taut, and mopped the floor.
A light needle seemed to be very heavy in my hand, and every stitch took me a lot of effort, and after a few stitches I was so tired that I began to sweat.
It was our turn to sew. I couldn't wait to dip the thread in spit and twist it. But when I twisted it, I twisted the little hairs so thin and long that when I threaded the needle, it just wouldn't go in. I had to pull the hairs down to get them in. Then I tied a knot on the end of the thread, because there was saliva on the thread, when I tied the knot, it always stuck to my finger, it was hard to tie the knot
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1, I was so excited that I paced around the house and could not wait to take wing and fly
2, it feels like the excitement of waiting for the gun to fire on the track and field to immediately run wild
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Today there is wine today drunk, do not make the gold empty to the moon.
Spring wind has green south bank of the river, when the bright moon shine me back.
Respondent: wxdddzyx - Trial Level 1 10-18 05:39
Small Li pursed lips, bowed, tiptoeing, step by step, slowly approaching it. Close, close, and see her quietly reach her right hand to the butterfly, open two fingers together, clamped the wings of the pink butterfly. Rei jumped and jumped for joy.
He bent over, the basketball under his hands, back and forth, left and right, two eyes skittering, looking for a "breakthrough" opportunity. Suddenly he accelerated the pace, a left turn, a right turn, rushed through two layers of defense, came to the basket, a tiger jump, turn around and shoot, the basketball in the air drew a beautiful arc, impartial to fall in the basket.
Catching butterflies and playing basketball are common activities, and some are even attended by students themselves. But the writing is not specific. The above two descriptions, due to the author's careful observation, catching butterflies, playing basketball action, demeanor written vividly.