Anhui Candidates
The burden of students, must be reduced! I say this not because of greed or laziness, but the pressure on Chinese children is too heavy. Under high pressure, creativity and practical spirit is gradually stifled, leaving only "machines" that can take exams. It is common for Chinese children to win gold medals in international Olympiads - but where are the Chinese "Nobels"? In addition to learning, there is no spare time to imagine and practice, which is essential in the fierce competition of the 21st century. We want to "reduce the burden", not do not want to learn, but to better, more scientific learning. It has been proved that many schools carry out "second classroom" after school, and children are well educated in various aspects. Healthy body, healthy mind, is the premise and guarantee of good learning, only to reduce the burden, so that practice instead of piles of test papers, so that the brain full of imagination and creativity instead of a mountain of tutorials, so that open and good psychological instead of "score first" of confusion. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty.
The material does not give a clear point of view, but the author from the title on the set out a distinctive attitude, the beginning of the argument: "the burden of the students, must be reduced! Give a person a powerful shock. For an argumentative article of only about 200 words, how to do not exceed the word count, but also to achieve a persuasive argument, the method of argument must have to pay attention to, the author of this paper, "open the door to the mountain" method is the most ideal. The article adopts the positive and negative argumentation method, from the Olympic gold medalists but not out of the "Nobel" facts, leading to the "learning" "practice" "Imagination and practice" "test papers" "imagination and creativity" "tutorials" "good psychology" "the confusion of the 'score first'" and other analysis, but also focused, detailed and appropriate, a strong proof of their own arguments. This paper has a clear thesis, strong argumentation, and concise and accurate language. Whether from the depth and breadth of argumentation, or from the language of argumentation, is a rare masterpiece, worthy of study.
2, true love is priceless
Shanxi candidates
Love is the eternal topic of mankind.
A seven-dollar dream is a warm stream of love that stirs the heart, isn't it? In this beautiful world, everywhere is not overflowing with the fragrance of love?
Because of love, human beings can survive; because of love, human beings can develop; because of love, human beings can prosper and progress. In social life, public **** car seat, assistance in times of distress, lost when the encouragement of people to help each other, are not all a reflection of love, love refraction?
Let us all give a little love, then the world will become a beautiful paradise.
True love is priceless - even if it is only "seven dollars".
Although the article is short, it is compact and complete in structure. The use of rhetorical questions and proverbs makes the content fully expressive and powerful. (
3,Are you still afraid of setbacks?
As in every dictionary in the world, Success always comes after Failure. If you want to enjoy the sunshine of success, you must endure the storm of failure. There is no road to success is a smooth road, if you are afraid of setbacks, you can never reach the other side of the success.
The sword from sharpening, the fragrance of plum blossoms from the bitter cold - Edison is not afraid of setbacks. 1000 times of experimentation, 1000 times of failure. Day and night, the stars and moon sleep he did not sleep. However, it is also after these setbacks, Edison's name is forever in the history books. Gramophone, lamp ...... these great inventions testify to his splendor!
Can not help some of the cold bone, which get the fragrance of plum blossoms - many people say, Hai Rui is a fool, but it is also this "fool" in the corrupt dynasty with their own life washed out a clear bay. No one in the dynasty to support him, the emperor is mediocre and incompetent. However, in the face of these setbacks, Hai Rui is to swim against the current, the dismissal of what? Rumors are nothing to be afraid of! In the end, Hai Rui has left a colorful mark on the era with his own strength.
To know the pine is pure, to the snow - but, if someone can not wait for the snow, and how? It's very simple. Xiang Yu Farewell My Concubine, there is a great deal of bravado, and there is a great deal of love. But why can't a seven-foot man endure humiliation, face setbacks, and start over? "The sons of Jiangdong have many talents, the comeback is not yet known!" It is the inability to face failure, fear of failure, Xiang Yu will fall on all sides of the Chu Gao, will be so faceless and die.
If the trees are afraid of setbacks, where is the lush forest? If the butterfly is afraid of frustration, where is the butterfly shadow? If the mountain is afraid of the frustration, where is the proud heaven and earth? If the eagle is afraid of setbacks, and where the fight in the sky!
"Failure is the mother of success." The rainbow is so beautiful, because that is the true color of the sun after the storm washed out. So why be afraid of failure, afraid of setbacks? Lift up your head, lift up your chest, and be brave enough to face setbacks head on and challenge them. Why fear setbacks?
4, applause a sincere and enthusiastic encouragement
Since you want to have a side of their own sky, then extended under our feet is not only a straight road, swaying in our head, in addition to the long white clouds, there are heavy fog.
Since you want to drive with a thousand miles, why complain about the journey?
The only way to reach unprecedented heights is to look up to the sky and raise the whip.
Since you want to tower above the high peaks, then you have to work hard and climb upwards with courage and determination.
What gives you such power, such bravado?
It is the applause, it is the applause that allows me to have my own sky, it is the applause that allows me to drive alongside a thousand miles, it is the applause that gives me the courage to climb the peak.
The applause is speechless, sincere, enthusiastic, more enthusiastic ......
I remember, it was a high autumn afternoon, I participated in the speech contest held by the school.
A few minutes before the speech began, I was making final preparations to ensure success.
During the speech, I looked at the familiar faces on the stage, but I was more nervous, my heart was pounding, and I just felt my legs trembling.
At this time, the whole room was silent, even the gurgling of the river, can be clearly heard, my heart more panic, only feel this quiet quiet, quiet terrible, I stood on the stage, a moment frozen, do not know what to do, a long time did not get to say anything.
Suddenly, a crisp applause into my ears, it is him - the principal in the applause for me, he calmly and forcefully clapping, like a clear spring into my heart, like a kind of flower fragrance into my nose, such as the flood waves stirring my heart.
This applause opened my mind, in the unknowing speech ended, but the applause in my mind for a long time to echo.
The applause is the power to move forward, giving me the power to face the peak of life and continue to explore.
People need applause, it can give people confidence.
Let's give a round of applause!
To the sun, to the blue sky, to the white clouds, let them convey our hearts!
Brief comments:
This article writes that the principal's "steady and powerful" applause made "me" a successful speech.
The author does not focus on the description of the principal, but focuses on the description of his own emotions and changes in mental activity, so that the reader feels strongly that "encouragement" is how precious!
5, life goes on, the pursuit of more than
Title: Growing up is a process, a process of self-improvement, self-knowledge, and the gradual process of maturity. In the process of growing up, both the sunshine and rain care, but also the cold wind and snow accompanied, they are a wealth of life. However, due to the pursuit of different, in the process of growth, there will be some differences, the pursuit of truth and progress, should be our **** the same wish; no pursuit of life is pathetic.
Please take \'Growing up and pursuing\' as the topic, make up your own topic, choose your own angle, set your own style, write an article of no less than 600 words. To write about the true feelings of the growth process, creative in content and expression, will be awarded 1-5 points of extra credit.
Life goes on and on
Life is like the wind.
What an ancient metaphor. You may lament that it comes and goes without a trace. And I trekked through the mountains, in the history of the gold sand, looking for its true meaning:
Sunny spring, I pursued the peach blossom;
The summer of the hot sun, I pursued the lotus leaves in the sky infinitely blue, reflecting the sun of the lotus flowers;
The fruitful fall, I pursued the frosty branches of the chrysanthemums;
Cold winds in the winter, I I'm looking for the snowy plums that are proud of the frost and snow, and still have a dark scent.
Perhaps, life is a pursuit, and the footprints of growth are drenched in the sweat of pursuit.
When I was a child, my parents worked in the fields, and I went with my grandmother to the fields, always hoping that the night would come, and I sat in the courtyard with the whole family, together with the "light small fan to fight the fireflies", together with the "sit and watch the cowherd weaving star".
Gradually into the school, I am no longer limited to the satisfaction of nature, but quietly into the minds of the literati. I pursued Du Fu "will be when the top, a glimpse of the mountains," the ambition; I longed for "picking chrysanthemums under the East Fence, leisurely see the South Mountain," the free and easy; I seek "Peach Blossom Pond water depth of 1,000 feet, less than Wang Lun sent me love! "The first thing I'd like to do is to get the best out of you.
Now June is coming, the footsteps of the pursuit of the more urgent, the pursuit of the voice of the heart is more intense. Once disillusioned, but never give up the effort, and now sitting on this long-lost "sand", thoughts in the gallop, the heart in the fly, the door of the high school seems to have been open.
Growth and the pursuit of a tree on the fruit, who can not be separated from each other, if the separation will only lose.
We are in pursuit of a lilac, think out of the cardamom years; we are in pursuit of a spring, run out of the sky street green; we are in pursuit of a garden full of spring color, and then pick that branch of the red apricot, put in the heart, the feeling of life.
Growing up is an hourglass, divided into priority, pursuit and growth of equal shares.
On the monument of growth we engrave:
Remember the pursuit!
[Appreciation] This article is Jining City, full marks in the midterm essay. "There is no pursuit of life is pathetic", first of all, we read between the lines of the small author of the growth process, is a continuous progress, the continuous pursuit of the process; the pursuit of the various levels, showing the author's noble aspirations and love of life; the pursuit of the process, showing the author's self-confidence, the pursuit of the goal, the author of the aspirations of the far-reaching, just six hundred words. Far-reaching, just six hundred words, the growth and the pursuit of the relationship between the expression of the nearly perfect, the title and the end of the article also highlights this point. Secondly, the writing is fluent and the language is simple and beautiful. Metaphors and proverbs make the article graceful, and quotes are naturally and skillfully combined with the meaning of the text. The young author is rich in connotation, deep thought, in such a short period of time to write such a masterpiece, it is rare!
6, when I face care
when I face care
Henan candidates
I can use physical formulas to figure out the voltage and current values, but I can't install a simple light bulb because my father told me that it's very dangerous; I can skillfully write out the chemical formulas of phosphorus and potash fertilizers and their utility, but I can't plant a cactus because my mother told me that it's not my job. I wanted to go hiking with my classmates, but my parents were like an enemy: "What if I take the wrong bus? What if I meet a bad guy? I'm not going to be able to do that.
In the face of all this, all I can say is that my parents love me very much, very, very much ......
At the entrance to every elementary school in China, you can see this kind of pomp and circumstance: parents stand silently on both sides of the school gate, children run out the door jumping and jumping, and almost instantly the schoolbags on children's backs are transferred to the hands of their parents. Grandparents with gray hair stuffed their hands with chocolates and candy canes, and walked behind their children like servants.
This is incomparable happiness and intoxication for the child mind that has not yet reached the other side of youth. It is like a beautiful umbrella and a comfortable rocking chair.
But when we embark on the road of youth, this care will be like a rain cloud on our head, lingering. How to shake this comfortable rocking chair can not be shaken away step ah!
When the series of words of vulnerability, early love, running away from home in front of you, you will open those confused eyes and say, "Mom, what should I do?"
Of course, your parents will do everything they can to help you, but you'll have to go out into the world one day, and you'll still be saying, "Mom, what should I do?" You will be eliminated from the new century.
I want to get out of the pampering, I do not want to grow up in the shadow of the pampering. In the storm, a person's will, will be baptized and tested, which can make me more strong, the courage to face setbacks and tests.
I want to get out of the care, encounter the wind and rain forward, fell down, climb up. I believe that my future is infinitely bright, tomorrow's world will be more wonderful!
In the face of parental care, the author is not intoxicated, but soberly realized that excessive care can only create a life of imbecility, in the face of the actual problems of life and growing up troubles will be at a loss, and ultimately eliminated by the times. So the author cried out, I want to get out of the care, to withstand the baptism of life and test. It shows the determination of the author to grow up in life and the courage to face the setbacks and tests. This essay speaks the heart of contemporary secondary school students, but also puts forward the question worth thinking about, especially parents, that is, how to recognize the cultivation of secondary school students' ability; how to improve the quality of secondary school students themselves. This will make the article lofty intention. The small author from their own talk, and then write to the parents of excessive care is a social phenomenon, from point to point, the level of transition easily and naturally; fluent, the language is pure, sophisticated, argumentation and lyricism skillfully combined, so that the article in the sincere and moving and thought-provoking. (岳建智)
7,亲情之樂
浙江考生
Sunday, I suddenly had a whim to help my mother wash her feet. My mother looked at me with a strange look and said it was a waste of time to wash her feet after the midterm exams, but she agreed to do it under my repeated requests.
I moved the chair to the center of the yard and put a basin of water in front of the chair, and the moon was just reflected in the water.
Mother sat down on the chair.
The first thing I did was to take off my socks for my mother and touch the soles of my mother's feet, which were rough and hard, and my heart trembled.
The mother obediently put her feet into the water, the action is so light, the surface of the water ripples.
I lowered my head, the moon in the water was broken by my mother's foot, like a golden elf jumping on the surface.
I carefully washed my mother's feet, which were a little slightly chubby and thick, just like my mother, thick and not knowing how to be cunning.
"You were very naughty when you were little, you always came home at night and got your feet dirty, every night I sat in the yard and washed your feet." Mother suddenly spoke.
I looked up, my mother seemed to be immersed in memories.
I sat on a small bamboo chair, restlessly shaking the bamboo chair to the squeaking, my mother washed my feet while telling me stories: Chang'e in the Guanghan Palace, Wu Gang who cut down the trees, Hou Yi who shoots the sun ...... I always raised my head and looked at the moon, the quiet moonlight sprinkled on my little face, sprinkled on my mother's short black hair, sprinkled on the pot of water ......
"What are you staring at?" In front of me was the mother who had been eroded by the years. I hurriedly lowered my head and continued to wash her feet. Suddenly, I felt that the moonlight of my childhood seemed to shine on me and my mother again, on my mother's face and on her feet. What a beautiful mood it was! I smiled, and so did my mother.
I felt happy, this joy of affection, I had forgotten for a long time, but I inadvertently picked up, but did not change the flavor, but with the passage of time more and more thick.
Yikes! This joy of kinship.
"Where the love of the person, the text has not not to the person." Looking at the whole text, there are three highlights: first, the scene description, although the pen is light, but the role is extraordinary. The description of the moon in the text, both point out the time of the event, but also to set off a quiet, happy atmosphere, and the activities of the characters together to build a beautiful mood, show the purpose of the topic. Secondly, the detail descriptions are natural, true, vivid and evocative. "The mother obediently put her feet into the water, the action is so light, the water surface ripples", "the moon in the water is broken by the mother's feet, like golden elves jumping on the water surface", "the mother is a little fat, feet are very thick "...... all true reproduction of the picture at that time! Third, the line before and after the illumination, do not show. The beginning of the article called: "I suddenly had a whim to help my mother wash her feet." The end of this should be: "The joy of this affection, I have forgotten for a long time, but I inadvertently picked up ......" (Mijian Guo Liu Guojun)
8,I want to sing a song_05 Shanghai Intermediate School Examination full marks
The hall was brilliantly lit, family and friends Gathered together, the laughter was endless. On the table there is a large cake with 50 candles, but it will no longer be blown out, because the main character of the day - my father - has gone out and gone ......? Not because he was unhappy or unwell, but because he was a policeman!
While my dad was not at the scene of this celebration, I still picked up the microphone and sang karaoke. because I know that no matter where my dad is, he can hear my blessing: Dad, wish you peace!
With the slow movement of the lyrics on the screen, I sang. Although singing a little out of tune, but I was singing with all my heart - at this time I remembered some of my father's past, unconsciously, a stream of hot water surged to my heart ......?
From my understanding, my father is a busy man. The first thing you need to do is to get your hands on some of the most popular products and services in the world. I remember one time, the school opened a parent-teacher conference, but the teacher spoke less than ten minutes, his nasty cell phone rang. The latter thing is also self-explanatory, I had to record the teacher said, causing me to be busy, write down things even their own can not see clearly.
Another time, it was the night of the Chinese New Year's Eve. The whole family sat happily in front of the TV and waited for Dad to come back to start dinner.
But wait and wait, to 11 o'clock is not back. I was anxious and sad, and wildly call my father's cell phone. But the opposite came: "I'm sorry, the cell phone you dialed has been turned off ......"?
Already midnight twelve o'clock, grandma said angrily: "Let this bastard go! Let's eat, ignore him!" Alas! This is the real New Year's Eve dinner!
At two o'clock in the middle of the night, half-asleep, I heard a knock on the door, and I nervously rushed out and opened it. The scene in front of me made me
dumbfounded: my dad's leg was in a cast and his head was wrapped in gauze. Dad said, "The cell phone seems to be broken, so I didn't get your call." It turned out that Dad was injured in the line of duty. Ahem, Dad, how can I say you!
Although Dad's concern for me is less and less, but I have never resented him, because in my heart, Dad is a hallowed people's police. Dad often taught me, "Be upright, especially boys, be honorable!" ?
Dad, your teachings, I have never had a moment to forget. But, Dad, do you know my heart? I am really afraid that you are injured hanging flowers, just hope that you can go to work happily and go home safely; can often come home, come home to control me ......? Thinking of this, I choked up into the microphone, I shed tears. Although, unable to sing "Wish You Peace" further, my heart is still praying and blessing: wish you peace!
Point of view:
At first glance, I thought that the candidates were trying to sing the song "Wish You Peace", however, after reading the whole article, it is known that the whole article is to express the young author's praise for his father, the people's police, which is a hymn of praise for the people's police. This article selected "birthday party", "parent-teacher conferences", "New Year's Eve dinner" three things to show the father's public and selfless quality, quite typical. The language is simple and unadorned, and the words are full of true feelings. The shortcomings of this article lie in the lack of smoothness of a few statements. (Edited by Tang Huizhong)
9,: bank - running water - unrestrained_05 Xiamen full marks
I love "rapid turbulence even arrows, fierce waves if running" that dance of strength, drive my youthful upward mind;
I think "small bridges and flowing water home" that traveler's hometown
Standing in the mountains, think of that rushing water. The water in the mountains, called waterfalls, as roaring lions, majestic; the water on the plains, called rivers, as dancing dragons, graceful; the water in the desert, called the oasis, as the ribbon of destiny, contains a miracle.
Praise the water, think of the great achievements of historical figures; look at the rushing of the Yellow River has bred generations of pride: Qin Shi Huang united China's feat; Tang Xuanzong Zhenguan's rule of the great appearance; Mao Zedong liberation of China's majestic; the history of the great ah, is the Yellow River's children of the pride of the gurgling water is the power of the life of the unceasingly;
Sigh of the water, think of the dignified four treasures of the literary room, look at the history of the great brush waving the pen. Wang Xizhi's powerful handwriting, qi baishi's dragon swim dive by shrimp play, xu beihong's horse to the success of the vitality of the vast and profound Chinese literature and art is the Yangtze River roar of approval, is the source of never-ending water.
The realization of the flowing water, the Department of the flowing water beat the solid text bank, the bank built into the water, the water flow into the bank. Touch the cool water, don't forget the land where we stand, love the clear water, don't forget the water diversion of the bank canal. Yes, if the flowing water is the earth's petals, the bank is the petals of the flower under the flower tip. Love running water, don't forget to love the bank.
Cupping a cool water, wash a face, I saw the blue sky and green water in the rise of the earth;
Stepping into a clear stream, rushing a refreshing cool, I saw the stream running in the breeding of vitality;
Embracing a magnificent waterfalls, sobering thoughts in the brain, I saw the inexhaustible power in the runaway.
Yes, water is the source of life, running water is the sunrise of life; water is the mountain of life, running water is the life of the vast plains; water is the light of life, running water is the life of the fiery red sun!
Looking back, marveling at the long river of history; looking into the distance, looking into the future of the river. The future is not a dream, because the running water will take me to find the boundless sea; the future is not a dream, because the rushing water will give me inexhaustible power to chase the dream; the future is not a dream, because the everlasting running water will impact every piece of vast world for me!
Cheers to the running water's exuberance, cheers to the future of youth!
[Comment]
The idea of "fine", the intention of "new". The idea of this article is ingenious, linking the three things that do not seem to be related, "bank - water - exuberance" together, the association is appropriate, showing the author's positive thinking about the value of life. Especially at the end of the point of purpose, more flavor, let the reader feel the philosophy of life and connotation, stimulating. From the content of the article, I can not say that the author of the thought of eight years, the text even eight deserts, but can be seen in its spring of thought and unique feelings; from the language expression, see the author of the small good reading, hard thinking, savings are rich, when you need to be used, it will be picked up. Prose poetic language, rich associations all give people a beautiful enjoyment.
10,Equinox
The sun at the equinox is perhaps the fairest of them all, dividing the sunlight justly between the north and south of the earth. Everything in life should be viewed in the same way as the sun at the equinox-- just.
In the long river of history, there are many people who have had a great influence on China, Qin Shi Huang, who unified China; Sun Yat-sen, who overthrew the feudalism; and Mao Zedong, who founded the country. ...... However, history has made a person to carry the charge of the ancient times - Cao Cao.
Cao Cao usurped the world of the Liu family, which history calls disloyal. Cao Cao is treacherous, sinister, but also planned to "blackmail the emperor to order the vassals" plan. Even in Peking Opera, Cao Cao is a white-faced traitor. But to be fair to Cao Cao, he also had a heroic side.
To be fair to him, he had a big heart for meritocracy. After Guan Yu was captured by Cao Cao, Cao Cao did not kill him because he was one of Liu Bei's generals, but treated him with respect and made him a general. His eagerness to learn from the wise is reflected in his poem: "I have a guest, drumming and blowing a sheng". When Liu Bei defected to Cao Cao for the second time, Cao Cao's strategists urged him to eliminate the latter, but Cao Cao advised him, "Today is the time to use people, so don't kill one person and lose the whole world." Cao Cao saved Liu Bei's life and reused him. Perhaps it is because of his open-mindedness that he is able to make the most of his experience.
To be fair to him, he had a military talent that amazed the world and made the gods cry. The Battle of Guandu is a myth written by him. Perhaps the clouds of Red Cliff failed to dissipate, but half of the country is the crystallization of his wisdom.
To be fair to him, he has the grace and temperament of a floating, free-spirited poet. Read his poetry, often feel a heroic momentum, in the face of a short life, he no longer give in, "martyrs in their twilight years, strong heart." Such a political ambition has the flavor of letting life become eternal, appear more tasteful, slightly deeper in the atmosphere.
To be fair to him, he is not a good subject, but the chaos of the Three Kingdoms without him, how can the people in the north have a stable life? He chose the latter between "loyalty to the king" and "loyalty to the world".
The equinox sun is the most just, why not let this equinox always in people's hearts? Let justice prevail on earth.
[Full marks for the reason]