-- Primary school third grade language book the first unit of composition guidance Second, the preparation of the strategic thinking This exercise is arranged to write about the scenery of their hometown, the strategy is predetermined as follows: 1. This exercise is arranged to write about the scenery of their hometown, the teaching can be combined with the oral communication to carry out, on the basis of oral communication. Open up students' minds to write about their hometown scenes and feelings.
2, this exercise is mainly to write the spring home scenery, write other seasons or other places of the scenery can be. 3, the teacher puts forward the requirements of the exercise: can write the characteristics of the scenery; in a certain order to write a clear; expressed the feelings of love for their hometowns; have a rich imagination.
4, guide the students from the hometown of a grass and trees, choose their favorite scenery, their own observations and found that the hometown of the beautiful and lovely expression. 5, the teacher in the students' work, guide them to imagine, and try to use this group of texts of the expression.
6, students initially completed the exercise, the exchange and evaluation. First let the students in the group exchange, selected well-written assignments, say where the assignments are good, point out the shortcomings, and then in the whole class exchange, and finally select the characteristics of the assignments to do the evaluation, the teacher puts forward the modification of the views.
7, after the class evaluation, students modify their own work. You can modify each other in the same seat, can also be exchanged within the group to modify, and finally transcribed clearly.
(This step should not be busy, if written to the composition book, and then let the students modify, it can be difficult. Because students for the corrected essay, in addition to read the comments, lazy to modify, the teacher is laborious and ineffective.)
8, students complete the work, you can run a "hometown scenery" as the theme of the exhibition of work. Third, the teaching preparation 1, grasp the knowledge of this exercise: (1) how to describe the characteristics of the scene in a certain order; (2) the process of writing how to develop associations and imagination.
2, the collection of materials for this exercise: (1) to collect photos of scenes in their hometown; (2) to collect some words, sentences, paragraphs, articles describing the beautiful scenery of nature; (3) to choose the most beautiful and unique places in their hometown, guide the students to observe carefully and make a record. To record clearly the name of the scene, the location of the scene, the main features of the scene, and will record the material to communicate with classmates, mutual inspiration, enrichment of materials, fully prepared for the exercise.
Fourth, the guidance of writing (a), clear requirements for the work. Let the students understand the requirements of this exercise is: (1) to be able to write the characteristics of the scenery; (2) in a certain order to write clearly, express the love of home; (3) they can develop a rich imagination.
(b), to determine which scene they want to write. There are a lot of scenes in the hometown, from where to write? To choose the place we have been, familiar.
(c), careful observation. Observation is the basis for writing a good composition, especially for the composition of the scene, leaving a careful observation is absolutely not good composition.
Therefore, we have to seize a place or a few places to focus on the scene to observe. This will give us a goal, and we will have a purpose when we write.
How to observe it?1, to have a clear purpose. For example, when we look at the scenery, we can seize the trees, flowers and plants to observe, because plants and trees are the most common scenery in our lives, in the observation can be in accordance with the roots, stems, branches, leaves, flowers and fruits to carry out, will be careful to observe these, you can understand the way of growth of flowers, plants and trees, it is relatively simple to write.
2, the world's scenery is very different, the order of observation of the scenery will not be fixed. What order to observe, according to the characteristics of the thing itself and the angle of observation.
There are three kinds of observation order: ① spatial order. As "this is a pool of deep green spring water.
Surrounded by not too neatly inlaid stones, stones on a layer of black and green moss. If you step on it, you will slip.
The quietly opening flowers weave a simple wreath for Pearl Spring." (ii) Chronologically.
"Beautiful Little Hingganling" is written according to the change of seasons. ③ According to from the whole to the local or from the local to the whole, seize the characteristic places to observe.
At the beginning of this semester, I assigned students a composition of "looking for spring". Just started school, the weather is still very cold, but we can still feel the breath of spring.
So I led the students to the campus, the pond, the ridge "looking" for spring. The first thing that caught our eyes was the green trees around the pond, and the green black grass, these green plants are like a green wreath for the pond.
Then look close, a group of ducks in the water beat the waves, sometimes chasing and playing, sometimes open wings in the water flying. The water is clear and transparent, and the water creatures are swimming freely under the water and so on.
Students through careful observation, with the teacher in the order of guidance, students write up to be comfortable. (D), seize the characteristics of the scenery to write.
After observing, it is important to promptly and accurately record what you see, especially the characteristics of the scenery. The so-called characteristics are the things you see are different from other things.
For example: a description of the text "Lotus" "Lotus has already bloomed a lot. The leaves of the lotus are crowded, like a big turquoise disk.
White lotus flowers emerge between these large disks. Some of them have only unfolded two or three petals.
Some of the petals have all unfolded, revealing small yellow rosettes. Some of them are still blooming, and look so full that they are about to burst."
This is the first time I've seen a lotus flower in the world, and I've never seen one.
This paragraph writes a variety of beautiful lotus posture, emphasizing the different characteristics of the lotus growth, "two or three pieces", "full" reflects the contrast between the size of the degree of flowering; "some of the ...... some ...... some ......" shows that there are many postures of lotus flowers. Such a description of the reader to leave a deep impression, which is the characteristics of the lotus.
However, the scenery of different places, the same place in different seasons, also has different characteristics, if we observe the scenery from multiple angles or with changing eyes, even if it is a very ordinary scenery, morning and evening will show different characteristics, far, near, left and right, the impression obtained is not the same. This is the characteristics of the scenery.
(e), seize the order of the scenery to write. Expression should be layered, and the narrative should be in order.
The hierarchy is the order of the content of the article, that is, the order of expression. In the student essay to pay attention to the logical order within the paragraphs, the articulation between the paragraphs.
The common order of expression is the order of time, the order of development of things, the order of spatial transfer and the order of the characteristics of things. For example, when describing the characteristics of the four seasons of the scenery, we can use in accordance with the chronological order, using the structure of the first general and then divided, and capture the scenery from multiple perspectives most of all.
2. 8th grade How to write a scene of the composition of a profoundCatch a point, deep excavation." To write an essay, go straight to the essence through observation. From it, find out what is the most contemporary and universal. Such as the recent occurrence, others are not commonly used, or their own personal experience of the material. Fully reflect the new people and new things, new ideas, new style. Give the reader a sense of freshness and sense of the times. That is: the mouth of the article cut to be small. "Injury to its ten fingers as well as a broken finger", 600 words of the article, the cut into the mouth is small, the narrative characters and events less, it is easy to write the characters and events penetrating, vivid.
Such as: "maturity" ----- only write a boy's maturity can be. Recount that he endured several blows of bad luck, finally strong; the main idea: strong in the face of bad luck is a kind of maturity.
"Maturity" has many connotations, such as tolerance, humility, good treatment of others, strong ---- only write a point in the text, without regard to the rest, can be written thoroughly.
The end of the text should have a nod to the lyrics and discussion.
A, "love" and "talk" to "narrative" as the basis for deepening the need to serve the content of the narrative, to do so with feeling.
B. To stick to the title of the essay, point and reveal the center of the article.
C. The language should be concise, implicit, deep and profound.
D. The center of expression is positive, moving people with emotion and inspiring ****.
3. How to write a good travelogue essay - language version of the eighth grade (on) the first unit of writing training synchronous tutoringwriting guide travelogue essay for us to paint a picture like a poem, so that we can enjoy the beauty of nature in reading.
So, how can we write such articles? First, the narrative should have clues. When you write a travel article, you have to explain the process of the tour clearly, which requires a clue.
This clue is the order of writing, commonly used time order and place conversion order. Time order is based on their own whereabouts, according to the scene of the order of appearance of the description.
Specific methods: in the depiction of scenery, we have to write the location of the scenery, orientation, pay attention to the order of the scene: from far and near, from top to bottom, from the whole to the local ...... so that readers are clear about the whereabouts of your tour. Second, write the scene to have focus.
Travelogue articles, describing the scenery is essential. Tour, there will be a lot of beauty into your eyes, but in the article can not be scattered all over the sky, there must be focused, which requires to choose those who let their hearts touch the scenery to write, to be detailed, to have a close-up "lens", and the other can be a one-off, or even do not write.
From this to do highlight, the main and secondary clear, detailed and appropriate. Third, the scene and feelings to cut.
Ancient cloud: "mountaineering is full of love in the mountains, the sea is overflowing in the sea". Therefore, write a travelogue, in addition to remembering the "tour", but also pay attention to the "feelings".
There is a scene, the scene is blended, in order to move the reader, so that readers can appreciate the beauty of the time, and the author's emotions produce **** song. In the lyric, we must be feeling, must be true, can not be rigid, resulting in the disconnection of the scene; more can not be "no disease ***", so that people have a sense of disgust.
In addition, after we write the scene, you can also introduce the cultural connotations of the scene (if any), which can enhance the connotation of the article. Fourth, the language should be skillful.
First of all, write a travelogue to choose the language of expression, mainly description, through the description of the scenery to express feelings; as for the narrative, we can pass over, or not to narrate; but we want to timely lyrical, argumentative, which is often the eye-catching pen of the article. Secondly, the simple description, easy to enter the misunderstanding of the flat narrative, so we should accurately use metaphors, similes, platitudes and other rhetoric, so that the expression is more graphic, more intimate, so that the article is more vivid, more attractive.
In short, as long as the students in the usual more observation, more accumulation, more practice, writing level will continue to improve.
There, a mysterious natural landscape awaited me ...... strolling on the path paved with big green stones, the previous dry heat had disappeared without a trace in the cool mountain air. I was surrounded by exotic green, surrounded by ancient trees everywhere, sometimes there are a few tall tortoise-backed bamboo perched under the ancient trees, the sunlight from the gap between the leaves sprinkled, was broken into spots of light.
I was intoxicated, immersed in this mountain scenery, I breathed in the moist air around me, and my heart was crystal clear. In front of the path came the sound of overlapping water, as if a long and mysterious Jiangnan silk bamboo.
Crossing a small bridge, then turn a corner, in front of the eyes suddenly clear. Lift your head, eyes full of amazement, is it the seven fairies weaving snow silk from the sky? A white train from the mountain and down, the mountain face boulders protruding, after some sharp impact, the jade belt will be broken into countless splashes.
In the refraction of the sun, splashing water, crystal and more mango, from a distance, like a small lovely pear flowers, rain like flurry. The fluttering of the mischievous water beads kissed my cheeks, ruffled my hair, attached to my skin.
I also opened my arms, water beads will abruptly drill into my arms, but no longer find it not. I felt refreshed, as if every cell of my body had been cleansed.
This is the Gudong Waterfall - the sacred turtle drinking stream.
This is the Gudong Waterfall - the Tortoise Drinking Stream. Although I did not see any tortoise, this jade belt carved by nature has really made me fall in love with it.
Walking along the stone road a little further, there is another magical brush of nature - the scholar exhibition scroll. Clear mountain springs from the dense forest out of the lead out, gently and smoothly down the mountain, in the mountains, the mountain springs along the road to unfold, like a hard study for many years of scholars, calmly unfolding the gold list of the examination paper.
Through the clear water, I clearly see the roots and dead leaves dipped in the sand and gravel, and occasionally one or two small gray and black fish will go to visit, in its Tao Tao self-cleaning. Seeing this leisurely and contented little fish, I also feel a long time away from the ease and tranquility of leisure.
The branches on the left side of the body, a scene of emerald curtains hanging in the two black wet edge, full of glittering dazzling white. The waterfall flower lapping the water, but the sound is not very big, like a moving little song, but can not use human instruments to imitate any of the notes.
The breeze whisked up, flat in the waterfall under the dark green pool will ripple layers of blue waves, like a dancing girl wrinkled val skirt, gently fiddling. I can't help it, carefully put my feet into the pool, a cool swept over my whole body, I feel relaxed and happy, tired also by this pollution-free mountain spring away.
Some of the trees around the pool will also be their own arms coiled into the pool, and visitors **** enjoy the refreshing water of the pool. Under the trees, there are also some written on the brown wooden boards carved in gold poetry also for this beautiful beautiful scenery added a few points of flavor.
The Gudong Waterfall is not as magnificent as the De Tian Waterfall, nor is it as majestic as the Hukou Waterfall, but her spiritually pure water washes my soul and soothes my fatigue. ...... (The author is a student at the Guilin Dezhi Foreign Language School, and the instructor/Zhouping) Teachers' comments After reading this exercise, it gives a feeling of freshness in addition to refreshing or refreshing. The use of language is refreshing.
From the cool, moist air to the strange green, from the snow silk to the white practice, from the clear to the spirit of the net ...... words refreshing, refreshing, pleasant to the mind. Describe refreshing.
The use of a variety of rhetoric, the scenery depicted in a delicate and not plain, such as the water flowers compared to the pear, so that people from the crystal world savor the softness of the sheep; detailed and appropriate, put and go, such as a large number of ink and ink to write the water, and the lining of the scene trees, fish and so on is as good as gold. The idea is refreshing.
First of all, with the cicadas dry day to create an environment that makes people anxious, and then a turn of the pen, it will be gurgling water to create a cool world, so that people's ears and eyes clear. The feeling is refreshing.
This travelogue, not only let the little author's body and mind by the baptism of cool, at the same time let the reader also with the heart without mixed. It was only late at night that there was the sound of waterfowl flying and singing in the reeds; during the day they were tightly hidden in their nests to escape the artillery fire. The reeds still bore upward so fiercely that the goal seemed to be the sky.
Function: illuminate the environmental atmosphere, highlighting the environment is sinister, explain the background, for the latter description of human behavior to make a pad. More prominent the old man's heroic behavior. The effort to grow taller reeds vividly shows that in the brutal war years, the people of Baiyangdian are unyielding, tenacious survival posture. Symbolizing the will and strength of the people of Baiyangdian." Tough" shows the hatred of anti-Japanese soldiers and civilians to the Japanese invaders." Drill" shows the anti-Japanese people's firm beliefs and unyielding spirit.
"Enemy" "artillery", pointing out the atmosphere of the environment, and "the stars are also like dipping in the water", like "to drop down the like", rendering the precipitation of crystal clear water, stars reflected in the precipitation of water, with the gentle breeze ripples, making the stars also shimmering up, thus giving a person "to drip down" illusion. Such a beautiful natural environment is so pleasing to the eye! However, the enemy occupied a large part of our land, and around this beautiful reed pond, the enemy's gun emplacements stood in a row, blockading and monitoring this revolutionary base. During the day, the place is dead silent, even the waterfowl also "tightly hid to the nest to hide", only late at night, you can hear them "flying and singing sound". Between the lines, reveals how distinctive feelings of love and hate! Next, write "reeds are still so hard to drill", the people of Baiyangdian in the cruel war environment of the tenacious survival of the posture baked out, full of will and power. This description of the scene is very rich in real life, the reader to a specific environment and atmosphere, naturally became the back story of the padding, art into the scene, the deep feelings of the author.
② moonlight and windy night, people's eyes again sharp some, you can see a small boat from the reed pond out, in the precipitation, like a reed leaf, running to the southeast.
Function: the use of metaphorical techniques, the boat is compared to a reed leaf, highlighting the characteristics of the boat light and fast, the old man propped up the boat skillful and the whereabouts of God.
③ curved downward moon, floating in the sky like water.
Function: Scenic description, written in poetic language of the brightness of the night.
④ The moon has set, and there is some soughing wind in the reed pond after midnight.
Function: to emphasize the old man's blame for the girl's injury and his sorrow. The sound of the wind is like the old man's unsettled heart.
⑤ The next day, at noon, was very sultry. A round of red sun on the day, and a layer of smoke floating on the water.
Function: pointing out the sultry weather, for the later writing ghosts bathing ambush, promote the development of the storyline.
⑥ water precipitation in the absence of a shadow, only a white silk like water birds, but also to avoid the ghosts to fly north, fell to the big lotus leaves under the rest of the cool to go.
Function: metaphorical sentence, the scene contrasts the brutality of the Japanese army.
⑦ The water here is as flat as a mirror, as clear as the blue sky, and the elongated water plants float gently under the water.
Function: bad situation description, for the writing of the enemy in the plan to pave the way.
⑧ There, the tender reed flowers, a spread of purple velvet, is spreading in the wind.
Effect: This sentence is a description of the natural environment. On the surface seems to be detached from the specific struggle environment, in fact, that is not, that is the old man put the cabinet to death is a kind of relaxed, happy emotions sprouted inside.
I hope this helps!
5. eighth grade language book in the reeds and flowers in the description of the scene what roleThis novel's characterization and environmental description are very distinctive. The characters are distinctive and a bit legendary, such as the beginning of the article first write the environment of the vicious, and then write the performance of the old man, and the end of the article part of the old man's determination to write into an incredible "big words", and then write the hero behavior of his surprise victory. Stubborn personality, strange plot, full of legendary interest.
1. The environmental description is poetic, full of the atmosphere of the water town, elegant and timeless.
2. The description of the scenery is very rich in the sense of life, leading the reader to a specific environment and atmosphere, very naturally become the back story of the pad, art into the scenery, sent the author's deep feelings.
3. To accentuate the mood of the old man.
6. The beginning and end of the composition of the writing scene (a good point to be concise and beautiful, not long-winded
Beginning 1, contrasting the general starting style.
Example: Some people love the peach blossoms, some people love the peonies, but I love the chrysanthemums. 2, lyrics, famous lines in general.
Example 1: "There is no flower, there is no tree high, I am a small grass that no one knows ......" Whenever I hear this familiar melody, I seem to see the silent, selfless grass. Example 2 People say, "The return of the five mountains do not look at the mountains, the return of the yellow mountains do not look at the mountains."
In October of autumn, I came to the dream of Mount Huangshan. 3, open the door to the general start.
Example 1: My family has a pot of daffodils, elegant and pure, the whole family loves it. Example 2: As soon as you walk into the campus you will see a big tree - the sycamore tree.
Listen to the teacher said it is more than 100 years old, really like a weathered old grandfather ah! I love the sycamore tree. Example 3: My hometown is in Rudong by the South Yellow Sea, which Emperor Qianlong called "the world's first fresh".
There is a beautiful landscape, rich in produce. 4, suspenseful.
Example 1: turnip greens, each love. Do you know why I especially like the sycamore tree? Example 2: Where is this? It is as if I have become a stranger in my hometown.
Back then, there weren't such beautiful flowers and plants, clear river water, and trees covering the sky ......5, stimulating interesting style. Example 1: Dear friend, you must love peaches.
This sweet and sour peach is the specialty of our hometown, welcome to our hometown. Example 2: "Thousands of threads, ten thousand threads, invisible when drilled into the water."
Little friend, guess what this is? Yes, this is my favorite rain.6. Lyrical.
Example: I saw the sea for the first time, the sky is so blue, the sea is so broad. I would like to sing a song, said my pleasant ah.7, anthropomorphism lyrical.
Example: ah! Spring girl is here, the earth everything is laughing. Spring, what a charming scenery.
8, inverted memory. Example: The fluttering reeds in the fall of my hometown have always been in my mind, and I can't get rid of them.
1, lyrical ending: example: ah! Snowflakes, you bring people the beauty of white and elegant. Snowflakes! I wish all people's character is as clear as you.
2, summarize. Example: oleander has such toughness, and can cause me so many fantasies, I love oleander.
3, lyrics, verse style. Example 1: After seeing this mountain and this water, it is really "Boat on the blue wave, people in the painting."
Example 2: "You come out of the mud without dyeing, the whole body dedication a trace of no regrets. Ah! ...... "This character of the lotus flower has aroused the appreciation of many people.
4, associative praise. Example: I praise the plum blossom alone in the cold, but also praise the chastity, simplicity and purity of the people.
5. Example: Looking at this tall selfless sycamore tree in front of me, when can I be like it?6, natural context.
Example: The setting sun offered the last trace of afterglow and left with a smile. However, tomorrow the sunrise will rise again ......7, reminiscent of the style.
Example: From time to time, I look back fondly for a few glances, not paying attention, almost fell a somersault. The persimmon forest in my hometown is so tempting.
8, natural summary. Example: Several years have passed, I grew up, the oleander also grew taller.
Looking at the white showy oleander, I love it more than before. Essay basic requirements mnemonic article center must be clear, thought and feeling to be healthy.
The plan is to have a number in mind, be sure to outline in advance. It is very important to seize the key, do not write into a running account.
Open the door to the main topic, clean and do not bring "soup". The first thing you need to do is to get a good idea of what you want to do, and then you can do it.
Organized and hierarchical, cluttered and unlike.
The most important thing to do is to pay attention to the words and phrases, and firmly oppose the eight-legged accent.
Proofreading citations should be serious, to find out the source of writing details. The first and the last are to be remembered, and the main theme is to be emphasized.
The title should be written in four spaces, and each paragraph should be double-spaced. The first and the second are the same, but the second is the same.
Don't panic, read it a few times. The first thing you need to do is to make sure that you have a good idea of what you want to do, and that you have a good idea of what you want to do.
The beginning and the end of the article all sorts of Beginning: one is to explain the motivation for writing; two is to reveal the content of the whole article; three is to open the door to the topic; four is the use of brilliant examples; five is to explain the background of the writing; six is to quote the myths and legends; seven is to carry on the discussion of the lyrical; eight is to quote the language of the celebrities; nine is to carry on the description of the scene; ten is to put forward the question to start after. Ending: one is the outline of the conclusion; the second is to start the next question pointing; three is to stop the pen sharp; four is from the other to turn the pen; five is not yet finished enticing people to think; six is intentionally repeated to play the brand; seven is to ask themselves to ask people to identify right and wrong; eight is to quote the classics aftertaste; nine is to send out the call to galvanize the fighting spirit; ten is the big lyrical sense of meaning is far and deep.
The mnemonics of landscape composition The most interesting thing about landscape composition is that it uses metaphors to express emotions; different features of the landscape are different, and it is important to remember to seize the features. The time change vertical thinking, place change horizontal association.
The scene in the scene is interesting, the scene has feelings of the article fresh. The most common, describing the scene to catch the characteristics; four seasons is most commonly used, spring, summer, fall and winter is the focus.
Fixed-point scenic order, time change layered points; static dynamic contrast writing, color and shape associations change. Moving point to write the scene is to visit, the location of the full account of the changes; the first and last echo is the most important, structural integrity is a.
The association is the most commonly used.
Associative writing is the most fun, clever association fun unlimited; perspective changes to write scenery, spatial orientation should be prominent; experience writing to novel, unique feeling is not general; classification association detailed writing, writing is the focus of interesting. Anthropomorphism creates a sense of fondness, imaginative association and paragraph; landscape fairy tale fun, detailed description of the new story.
Writing the scene more rhetorical method, beautiful language everyone boasts; the first and last echo structure new, the scene of love love to be true. The first and last of these is a new structure, and the second is a new one, and the second is a new one.
What is it? This refers to the scene when the scene is depicted, the scene in front of the heart has moved, there is a feeling, then in praise of the scene to express out. Such as "green campus" article, the author depicted the campus seasons green, suddenly associated with the classroom sitting in the students, the future of the motherland is not also a green seedling? Not also glowing with vitality? So take advantage of the situation, the future of the motherland made a good idea.
It should be said that some of the scenery and sent out by the feelings of the deepening of the theme of this article is very helpful. The old saying goes, "The emotions are moving and the words are coming out".
It means that the article expresses the author's inner feelings, the flow is the true feelings, only when our hearts are full of feelings, write out the article will be vivid, infected people. The writing of the article, writing is the scene, the lyric is the feelings, their own feelings, their own feelings into the depicted scenery, the scene.
7. writing scenery essay good beginning and ending selected from thatThis morning, I and our class lined up to fight for food. After we finished our meals, we each ate our meals with great relish.
My classmate also served a bowl full of rice, but he didn't take a bite. Just as he was trying to secretly dump the rice, I caught him. I said, "You can't even eat this much rice, so how can you study? Haven't you learned the poem 'Compassionate Farmer'? We shouldn't waste food, but learn to cherish it. If you still want to pour, then I'll go with you." After saying that, I ate by myself. After he heard what I said, he was also embarrassed and slowly ate his meal. I thought to myself, "So he's just trying to tease me so he's doing it on purpose. Before long, my meal was finished. "Don't you want to tease me, then I'll play along." I thought. So I made my way upright beside him to supervise his eating. When he finished eating, I looked at him and he looked at me and smiled in embarrassment. From then on, the two of us became good friends.
On the way home from school, I told my dad about it, and my dad praised me for being a warm-hearted child
8. Language 8th grade ancient poem Changgexing write a small composition about the scene"Changgexing" Han Lefu
Green garden sunflower. The sunrise dew is waiting for the sun to dry. The spring of the sun is a blessing to all things.
I am always afraid that the fall festival will come, K'ung-yellow, the leaves of China will decline. The first time I saw it, it was the first time I saw it, and it was the first time I saw it.
The young and the strong do not make an effort, the old and the sad.
Appreciation:
The poem starts with "sunflower in the garden", and then uses the analogy of water flowing to the sea to illustrate that time is like flowing water, and will never return. In the end, it advises people to cherish their youth and work hard, not to regret it when they are old. The poem is a metaphor for the sunflower and vegetable in the garden. "Green" is a metaphor for its luxuriant growth. In fact, under the sunshine and rain of the whole spring, everything is scrambling to grow. Why? Because they are all afraid that fall will come soon, and they know the truth that the autumn wind will wither the grass. Nature's rhythm of life is so, life is not so? If a person does not take advantage of the good times and work hard, let youth wasted, until old age regret is too late. This poem by the beauty of youth in front of me to think of life is easy to pass, to encourage young people to cherish the time, words of warning, urging people to rise.
Brief comment:
This is one of the most famous poems of the Han Dynasty. The poem uses a series of metaphors to illustrate that one should cherish time and work hard early. The first four lines of the poem depict to us a bright spring scene in which the green sunflower greens in the garden still have dew on them, and after the sunrise dries up the dew, the sunflower greens are bathed in a patch of sunlight again. Everything in the world is favored by nature's rain in the spring, glowing with incomparable brilliance. However, when fall comes, they all lose their bright luster and become yellow and decrepit. Everything has a change of prosperity and decline, people also have the process from youth to old age. Time is like the water of a great river, flowing eastward into the sea, never to return. If we don't cherish the time and work hard when we are young and strong, we will only be sad in vain when we are old
9. A description of a composition on the cell phone of the language in the first book of the 8th gradeFrom the time I entered the door of elementary school, I have attended many classes, including a lively language class, an interesting math class, and a mysterious science class. ...... One of the memorable ones is a language class the other day. "Ring! Bell 1 class *** rang, the students rushed into the classroom, sat in their seats, ready for class. Mr. Liu said: "Today's lesson
Language, composition, cell phone
From the door of the elementary school, I have been in many many classes, there are lively language classes, there are interesting math classes, there are also wonderful science classes ...... which I remember is a few days ago. A few days ago, I had a language class. "Ring! Bell 1 class *** rang, the students rushed into the classroom, sat in their seats, ready for class. Mr. Liu said: "Today's lesson
10. eight years of the next book language: small stone pool this article describes the scenery small stone pool this article describes the scenery"The pool fish can be a hundred or so head, all if the empty swim without dependence. Sunlight, shadow cloth on the stone, and not move; Er far away, to and from the open and closed. It seems to be happy with the swimmers." This is a very beautiful picture. The fish swimming in the water, not like in the water, but like in the air. The sun shines down and the shadows of the fish fall on the rocks at the bottom of the pool. Literally, the author is writing about the fish, but through the words, but we can not help but leave a deep impression of the clear water of the pool. This swimming fish and pool water reflect each other's writing style, received a very good artistic effect. Then, the author further describes the fish. First of all, the fish stayed motionless, suddenly, some fish darted to the distance, a moment to swim here, a moment to swim there, as if it was enjoying the pleasure with the swimmers. Read here, we can not help but from the swimming fish associated with the author's happy mood. This from the feelings into the scene, from the scene and the feelings of the writing method is this piece of prose is a prominent feature.