After reading a book, an article or watching a TV series or listening to a song, all or part of them will leave a deep impression on you, move you, and also make you think of many, many things you have heard, seen and experienced. When reading, often from the other side of the association to many people and things in life, so as to produce quite a lot of feelings, associations and experience, this is the feeling after reading, record these feelings of the article is after reading.
Second, how to choose the bibliography?
Select the books you are interested in, some people like to choose to understand a truth or learn the spirit of the characters in the article; some people like to choose to write the scenery. Which articles are more suitable for elementary school students to write after reading? I think it is better to choose fables, fairy tales and philosophical articles. Because these kinds of articles are profound, contain deep educational significance, the reason is hidden in the article, it is easy to extract the center.
Three, how to set the title?
After reading the title of the general have a positive, vice two. The main title to write the point of view, sub-title to write what books read.
After reading the book can be simply summarized in three paragraphs.
The first part, by reading and lead to a sense.
This part is like a hat or quote, explaining clearly read what the book, what feelings. This part of the general to be concise, open the door, do not go around in circles. Just generalize the feelings can be.
The second part, the specific feeling process.
We read books and newspapers and movies are visual dramas, etc. There is a process, and our feelings are also in the process of accepting little by little. This second part is about that process.
Writing method should be used while the narrative method, the narrative is to describe the books and newspapers read movie and television drama of the touching plot, talk is to express our feelings. To have a hierarchical order to push the feeling step by step to the top. Narrative is a brief description, grasp the main points, do not copy the original. Discussion should be true and appropriate, so as to touching. This is actually the thesis statement part of the essay.
The third part, the feelings into their own real life.
The purpose of feeling is to guide our practical action, otherwise feeling is meaningless. This part is to combine the feeling with real life and put the feeling into practice. Compare what you do in real life with the people or things that move you in books, newspapers, movies and TV dramas, find out the differences, and suggest ways to improve or make suggestions. This is actually the conclusion part of the argumentative essay.
Introduction of the main content as long as the cause of the article, through, the results of the narrative clearly, to grasp the truth of the article to introduce can be. However, when you write your feelings, you should write examples of what you have encountered in your own life in response to the truths illustrated in the article; you can also write your own feelings in response to one or more key words in the article; and you can also write your own thoughts based on certain meaningful sentences in the article. It is suggested that you can try to use some famous quotes, proverbs, idioms or successful experiences of celebrities when you write after reading the article, which will make your article richer and more convincing. To combine your own feelings, things (preferably one each from yourself and others) and then add associations.
Remind you of a common problem: some students choose the article is not suitable for writing after reading, after reading because there is not much feeling to write, in order to make up the word count on the content of the introduction of very detailed. Therefore, beforehand must first choose a good article.
After reading is a relatively special style of writing, if you give it categorized, it should be divided into the argumentative essay. For elementary school students, thesis is too difficult to hold, after reading is much simpler than thesis. After reading is after you read a book or an article, write your feelings.
How to write a good after-reading essay
One, read the whole text
Only after mastering the whole text, can we talk about writing after-reading essays, can't we? This, especially the essence of the paragraph, to focus on more than a few times to read. Second, to understand the author, as well as the author's writing style, the background of writing this article.
Second, grasp the purpose and background of writing
Why did the author write this article? What kind of environment was he in? What kind of thought and meaning did he want to express through the article? After straightening out these questions, the after-reading is almost brewed
Third, what do you get from reading this article?
Reading the article is only the way and method, the purpose of reading is not simply to appreciate, one of the important purpose of reading is, after reading, what do you have to gain? After enjoying the article, what do you feel? How will it help you in real life? Summarize this part, you can complete the after-reading.
How to write after reading
After reading, it is an article written according to one's own feelings after reading a certain work (if it is written after watching a certain movie or drama, it is called "after-view", which is of the same nature as "after-reading"). "The nature of the same), belongs to the category of argumentative essays, but is different from the general argumentative essays. General argumentative essay, the requirements of a clear point of view, typical arguments, argumentation; and the most prominent feature of the "reading" and "feeling" of the close combination.
"Read", refers to the beginning of the article to explain what people read what article, what feeling point; "feeling", is in the "read" on the basis of their own feelings through association. Write after reading, generally use two forms: one is the side of reading (account of the content of the readings) while feeling; the second is the first statement after reading feeling. In principle, the form of the first statement of the reading after the feeling is better to grasp, suitable for students who are learning to write after reading to choose. To write a good after reading, in addition to mastering the above basic knowledge of the genre, but also must grasp the following writing steps:
First, to study the original. Only study the original text, in order to have a deeper and more comprehensive understanding of the content of the original main idea and grasp, in order to be able to have a feeling from it. This is the basis for writing a good after-reading.
Secondly, to establish the point of feeling. Both the theoretical basis of the article or the central thesis, but also to write an article "to start", must not be sloppy. Selected this "starting point", the article will be written as if the opening of the floodgates of the water, a diarrhea out, so that the article is completed in one fell swoop, before and after through. Not only touch themselves, but also touch others. Otherwise, in the beginning of the article will give their own artificial obstacles, so that the article can not be expressed smoothly. A text, a book, a film and television, a play, the content is simple and complex, there are more and less clues, the characters have the main and secondary, the point of view has a deep and shallow, to write after reading can not be everything. So, how to establish a sense of hair point? The method is very simple. We study a work, will certainly be inspired, some sense, and we are inspired by the biggest, the deepest sense of that point (or points), can be established as a "sense of development". For example: to write a person-based narrative essay, the point of inspiration is often the most prominent character spirit, character and other characteristics, the most valuable speech action.
Third, reading and feeling. Narrative reading, including the source of the article read, the title and the author of the explanation, with concise words about the article content and general feelings, but also put forward a clear sense of the point, there is also the beginning of the reading of the work of writing background. The purpose is to make the reader understand the origin of this article, to send what feeling. These explanations are essential, otherwise, the reader will not understand your "sense" from what. Sense, is in the statement of the reading and feeling on the basis of the hair point, develop association and derivation, contact with the actual play, which is the main part of the article. The principle of association and derivation is to focus on the sense of the point, to have a close connection with the original material. The content of the connection and the actuality of the necessary analysis, argument or lyricism, so that the "feeling" will be profound. This is also the main method to develop the main part of the reading. In addition, in the process of arguing the sense of hair point, we should pay attention to the two kinds of arguments are closely integrated, one is the material of the original text of the reading, and the second is derived from the reality of the association of the material, the lack of one, and should be natural and harmonious.
Fourth, the end of the reading, the end can summarize the center, summarize the whole text, or raise questions, opinions, thought-provoking. "There is no fixed rules". The content determines the form. According to different types of after-reading can be used in different forms of conclusion.
Example text
Reading the "Army God" feeling
Today, I read the "Army God" this text, y moved by the iron will of General Liu Bocheng.
The text "Military God" mainly writes about Liu Bocheng's refusal to use anesthesia when he was treating his injured eye in Chongqing, which shows Liu Bocheng's will of iron and steel, and expresses the author's feelings of admiration and praise for General Liu Bocheng.
When I read "the patient did not say a word, his hands tightly grasp the white sheet underneath, the back of the hand green root bulging, sweating like rain. He is more and more hard, the brand-new white sheet was actually scratched," when I thought of General Liu Bocheng at that time to endure how much pain, I and General Liu Bocheng compared to the abyss of difference. Once, the water boiled, my mother asked me to put the water into the kettle, accidentally splashed water on my hands, I was so painful that I threw the kettle out of the side, crying and asking my mother to help me apply medicine. General Liu Bocheng did not use anesthetic for his operation and did not say a word, while I cried and cried when I was scalded by the water. After reading this text, I realized how small I am!
And the text says that Dr. Walker operated for General Liu Bocheng, he not only did not scream but also has been counting the number of knives, clearly know that Dr. Walker cut seventy-two knives! What a strong will ah! Once on the way home from school, two cars were running together. "With a bang, one car was knocked out of the road, and the other car was lying on the road. Suddenly, the door of the car that had been knocked out of one side opened, and the driver came out of it with difficulty, only to see that his head was bleeding, and his white clothes were all stained red. But he insisted on walking to the side of the road, while using his cell phone to call the police and ask for help from the pedestrians next to him until the ambulance arrived. Everyone around him was touched by his strong will. If that person were me, I would have been speechless with pain, where would I have thought of calling the police for help?
Reading the article "Military God", I y realize that people are born in the world, will always encounter difficulties and setbacks, as long as we have a strong will like General Liu Bocheng, calmly face, difficulties and setbacks will certainly be overcome.
Reading the "Emperor's New Clothes" feeling
Today I read the "Emperor's New Clothes" this story, he came from the children familiar with the "Grimm Fairy Tales".
This article tells the story of the emperor who loved to wear new clothes. One day two swindlers came along, claiming that the clothes they wove were not only beautiful, but could also tell which ministers were benighted or incompetent. In order to show that they were smart, the competent ministers pretended to see them. The emperor gave the crooks a favor and went out wearing the 'clothes'. The people boasted about the emperor's new clothes, but the words of a child made the emperor realize that he had been deceived.
After reading this fairy tale, I couldn't help but ask myself, as the king of a country, how could he be cheated? There is no doubt that it is all because of vanity, the people of the world. Ministers and even the emperor are willing to be cheated by others, also feel comfortable to cheat others. The cheaters succeeded because they saw the weakness in people's hearts - they were willing to be used by others just to satisfy their poor vanity.
In fact, vanity is innate, but a child's heart is simple, and as it grows up, vanity becomes deeper and deeper. After reading the fairy tale, I want to remind people to keep a sincere heart. Don't give up your sincere heart for the sake of vanity. Give up that sincere heart.
Think about yourself. Seeing others take out the very expensive yo-yo play really envious, afraid of parents do not agree to buy, can only watch others play, but really buy and feel that other people's better, always feel that can never satisfy their own vanity.
When I read the article, I understand the vanity is never satisfied, to learn to control their own vanity, mending is not too late, from today onwards I want to be a contented person.
Read the "Fishing Revelation"
After reading the text "Fishing Revelation", the heart can not be calm for a long time.
The text is mainly about the author and his father fishing on the island, in only two hours left from the time of bass fishing, the author caught a big, beautiful and fat bass, he was excited and pleased. But my father looked at the time and told me to put the bass back in the lake. "I had to reluctantly say goodbye to the big bass. However, this incident has benefited me a lot, because this is a wealth of life that money can not buy.
This text reminds me of an incident. That time, because a boy playing in the school corridor, in the action of the long jump, the pocket suddenly ran out of five dollars, he did not realize, the class. I picked up the five dollars and thought triumphantly, "That's a lot of money for me! I could buy fifty lollipops or fifty pencils with it, and my stationery box would be full! But then I wondered, would I be happy with this five dollars? I don't know what encouraged me to quickly return the money to the boy. Although I never saw the boy again, and I never received a word of praise, I was, however, proud of what I had done.
Nowadays, society is colorful and dazzling. As long as you restrain yourself, you will not be tempted by material wealth. One has to be rigorously trained from an early age to acquire the courage and strength to practice morality.
Reading "Father and Son in the Earthquake"
If your son has been buried by the ruins of a school that used to be full of children's laughter, will you keep digging to save your own child? If your life was in danger at any moment, would you let someone else get out first? It was in "Father and Son in the Earthquake" that I found the answer.
I read this text three times in one sitting. The article is about a young father who went to his son's former school and kept digging in the case of extreme grief over the loss of his child. In the process of digging, the parents of the child kept coming here, crying out in pain, "My son!" "My daughter!" After shouting, they left in despair. There were also many kind-hearted people who came to advise him, but they were all rejected by him. However, this father had only one thought in his mind: my son is waiting for me! After he kept digging for 38 hours, he heard his child's voice and finally opened an exit to save his son and his son's 14 classmates, expressing how responsible this father was for his son! And how selfless this son was again when his son let his classmates get out first when their lives were in danger at any moment!
My heart was pounding as I read. The father sacrificed his own life to save his son, and the son let his classmates out of danger first to save them. This is really an amazing pair of father and son ah! If the father had only come to the ruins and cried out in despair, "My son!" Then his son and his 14 classmates would have to sleep underground; if the son had gone up first in fear of death, then his 14 classmates might have ascended to heaven. If everyone could be like this marvelous father and son, thousands of children might be saved. I remember when I was a child, I only knew how to ask adults to buy me toys without regard to the heavy difficulties of adults, and there was nothing the adults could do about it, so they had to buy it for me. Since I read "Father and Son in the Earthquake", I would never do what I did as a child.
If we can use the spirit of that father and son in the article in our study and life, we will surely rise up every day and become useful to our country.
This is written by a fourth-grader who is not very good at writing articles
The Ramblings of a Blue Wind Chime is a composition book. It's edited by Sunshine Sister Mei-Jin Wu.
This composition book mainly has: essays, Sunshine Sister's comments, and the introduction of the young author. My favorite is the review of the sunshine sister. Because the reviews let me know, how to write a good essay? To read more books, more use of idioms, the composition should have four elements: time, character, place and the development of things; how to master the order of writing essays? Write scenery: from far to near, write people: from rough to detailed. And so on.
For example, "Inspiration comes from life, if there is no personal experience, the young author certainly can not write such an immersive text." "Loved the writing, detailed, proper, descriptive and evocative."
I learned that a great ending equals the finishing touch. I think it is also very important to train thinking skills to write good essays, and the best way to exercise thinking skills is to learn math.
Knowing these important knowledge of writing essays, I must put them to good use in writing essays.
Essays or should write their own, count well read, must be able to write their own feelings, give you a few reference articles.
1. After reading:
Reading The Ugly Duckling
Today, I read the book The Ugly Duckling, which says that the ugly duckling was born because of its ugly appearance, and the people and its companions did not like it. In the cold winter, the ugly duckling suffered a lot in the forest, it relied on its own efforts to finally fly, and became a beautiful, free flying swan in the blue sky!
Looking at the story of The Ugly Duckling, I realized one thing: no matter what you do, you should not be afraid of being stupid, as long as you put your heart and soul into it, you will surely succeed. I think that the ugly duckling became a swan by his own efforts.
I am still small, I have to learn a lot of things, I have to cheer myself up, must have self-confidence! I also want to be like the ugly duckling, rely on their own efforts, to the other side of the shore of success.
After reading "A Fool Buys Shoes"
Today I read "A Fool Buys Shoes", which is about the following: In ancient times, there was a man in the state of Zheng, whose shoes were worn out, and he wanted to go to a shoe store to buy a new pair of shoes. He first measured the length of his feet with a straw at home and then walked to buy shoes. When he came to the shoe store, he realized that he had forgotten to bring the straw to measure his shoes, so he walked home to get them without thinking. It was a long way to go, and when he ran to the shoe store with the straw, it was already closed. The people next to him saw it and made fun of him, laughing at him for preferring to trust the size rather than his own footwear.
After reading this story, I thought the man was too stupid to be smart. The man had already arrived at the shoe store, and wouldn't he know whether they fit or not if he tried them on with his feet? Why did he still go this far to get the size? At the same time, through this story also let me know some truths: we can't be too dull when we do things, and we should know how to be flexible when encountering unexpected situations. At the same time, can not be too superstitious rules and regulations, regardless of the objective reality will not be successful!
2. Write about people
Amazing people
In a person's life, there will always be some people who give themselves a deep impression, worthy of admiration, worthy of learning. The person I admire is my grandmother.
Grandma is an old woman in her sixties. There is always a kind smile on her wrinkled face. Grandma has been engaged in driving since she was a teenager. She worked for years and years and never had a word of complaint.
Spring and winter come and go, year after year, Grandma has been working quietly in this small carport for dozens of years. She never wanted too much pay, just like a cow for people to give love.
When she was in her forties, she retired. Although grandma didn't earn a lot of money, she wasn't dissatisfied, but said, "It is my wish to help people, I don't ask for a lot of money." I looked at my grandmother's kindly smiling face and stood in awe. I thought: I want to learn from my grandmother.
My teacher
She has a pair of eyebrows curved like a sickle, a pair of big watery eyes, a mouth that can talk very well, and a head of long, spirited hair that is black and shiny ...... She is my dance teacher, Mr. Wang. I have been receiving education from Ms. Wang since I was in the first grade!
Teacher Wang is an internship student, don't look at her as a student, her dance skills can be strong!
Remember that time: our school had a competition (dance), this difficult thing can be most of the teachers overwhelmed, the school let Ms. Wang to take charge. Mr. Wang slowly walked towards the podium and said to everyone, "I will be responsible for this dance and not let you down!" Only the applause from the stage was like thunder, and the students seemed to say, "Teacher, we believe in you, you will not let everyone down!"
The dance training began, the first class, Mr. Wang taught us to practice the basic skills of dance: down the fork, down the waist can be a lot of students. Only to see Mr. Wang said to everyone: "should first press the legs!" Students have put their legs on the handle bar, but after that, they still can't get down. Mr. Wang went down in three strokes, and the students' eyes were about to 'fall out'! After practicing hard, we came first in the competition! Other schools had to admire us!
When we returned to school, the students praised Mr. Wang!
Mr. Wang you're really a good teacher for me! I want to want you to learn!
3. Writing Scenery
The Beautiful Big Wild Goose Pagoda
On a sunny Sunday, our family went to the beautiful Big Wild Goose Pagoda.
The musical fountain in the north square of the Big Wild Goose Pagoda spewed out water like flowers blooming with the pleasant music, and I wondered where these "blooming flowers" were coming from. I carefully observed the pool, it turned out that these "blooming flowers" is like "eyes" like a hole in the ground out. Fountains like a step, layer after layer, to the top, there is a waterfall, waterfalls behind a wall, behind the wall is the majestic Big Wild Goose Pagoda. The height of the Big Wild Goose Pagoda is more than 64.5 meters, the tower is a square cone, simple shape, majestic, is China's Buddhist architectural art can not be captured masterpiece.
The east side of the Big Wild Goose Pagoda has a beautiful creek, the breeze blew, ripples striped, like a windy dragon accompanied by jumping sunshine, accompanied by my heart in the chase, in the play, if the next big rain, this beautiful creek began to dance.
4. Diary
Happy Day
This morning I went to the Children's Palace to learn calligraphy, and along the way there were many birds as if to show me the way. When I arrived at the Children's Palace, I taught my calligraphy homework to my teacher, who corrected a few mistakes and told me to pay attention to them when I write next time.
In the afternoon, I went to the Children's Palace to learn Latin dance, and the teacher taught me a few moves that I think I mastered well. I felt quite tired today, but I was still happy because I learned something new.
5. Write objects
Stationery box
I have a delicate and beloved stationery box. It was given to me by my mother when I started school, and I treasure it very much. My stationery box is made of cloth, 19 centimeters long, 5 centimeters wide, 3 centimeters high, it is a rectangle. Take out the stationery box, the first thing that caught my eye is the exquisite pattern on the lid: Mickey Mouse is playing bumper cars with Goofy, attracting many small animals to see the fun. Mickey Mouse and the draft also play very happy. Pull open the zipper, you can appreciate the scenery below, inside the cloth to the simple and practical in a longer grid, the ruler is resting his eyes! To its right are pencils and ballpoint pen brothers. In the upper right corner of the grid, eraser little brother is lying there to do sweet dreams! In the lower right corner, the pencil sharpener will serve me at any time, and they get along well together!!! Don't look at them, they don't say a word. When I want to use them, they are very enthusiastic. When I want to do my homework, as soon as I open the stationery box, the pencil will step forward to help me finish my homework. When I want to draw a straight line, the ruler pops up and helps me draw the line straight. When I accidentally write my homework wrong, the eraser will even give itself up to help me correct my mistakes. When the pen doesn't write well . , the pencil sharpener will open the door and help me sharpen my pencil. Stationery box has always accompanied my growth, is my good helper, I will always cherish you, love you.
Letter of Gratitude
Pity my parents! In my growing up, you have given me two very different kinds of love, dad's love is like a mountain like the sea, mom's love is like a brook like a fine rain, and I will use a grateful heart to feel love and return love! ......
6. Letter
Letter of Gratitude
Dear Dad and Mom:
Hello! See this letter you must be very surprised, we spend time together what words are not good to say in person, have to write a letter? You all know that I am an introverted child, do not make good use of words to express their feelings, today let the geese to send a letter, say a word about my heart to your endless gratitude. The other day when I was reading, I found this sentence: "Only with a grateful heart can a person discover the beauty of the world." Yes, in the past twelve years, you have put so much effort and sweat into my development. The people I need to be most grateful to are you!
Mother's love and care for me reminds me of Du Fu's poem "The wind dives into the night and moistens things silently", yes, mother's love is just like this spring rain, although subtle but always timely and priceless. Every day my clothes, food, housing, transportation and learning, are inseparable from my mother's careful care. Mom, you are on time every day to pick me up, whether it is windy and rainy or hot and cold, you are always waiting for me at the intersection next to the school, and when it happens to change the weather will also give me to take a piece of clothing, and it is five years, wind and rain in the shadow of your anxious waiting y printed in my mind. In life, mom's love is not shocking but is a long stream of water, gently moisturizing the field of my heart sowing a seed of gratitude.
Compared with mom's love, dad's love is a bit "cool". Dad is not as meticulous and patient as mom, you are a special kind of love for me, this love is not easy to detect, in the harsh. Dad, you are a career-minded people, in order to the family busy, to provide me with good living conditions and learning conditions, but you did not work and ignore me, you have time to pay attention to cultivate a variety of my hobbies, fishing, swimming, cycling, badminton, chess ...... are with you to learn, where you I learned to be brave, strong, and to be a good person, I have learned to be brave, strong, and to be a good person. I learned to be brave, strong, to be a man of the sky and the earth.
Poor parents! In my growing up, you gave me two very different kinds of love, dad's love is like a mountain like the sea, mom's love is like a brook like rain, and I will use a grateful heart to feel the love, return the love!
To
Health!
All the best! Your son
August 11
7. Excellent Essay
The right way in and out is the only way to succeed
Some people say, "Successful people never give up, and those who give up never succeed!" Others say, "Giving up is a permanent relief; lighten up to succeed!" Here are two stories:
One is that "success comes from persistence". It is said that in the Second World War, the University of Oxford, England, invited Winston Churchill to come to the school for teachers and students to make speeches, Churchill here in his speech history is the shortest, but also one of the most popular speeches. He went on stage and said only one sentence, "The secret of my success has three: the first is Never give up! The second is Never, never give up! A warm and long-lasting applause broke out. "Never give up" means "never give up". "Never give up, never never never never give up" - this is not only the secret of Churchill's success, but also Churchill's lifelong vow, it is his "never give up hope" that supported his lifelong beliefs. It was his "never give up hope" that underpinned his life's beliefs and enabled him to achieve his final success ......
There is also a saying that "there is a kind of wisdom called renunciation". There was a young man who wanted to be better than others in everything, and he especially wanted to be a great scholar. However, many years passed and he made no progress in his studies. He was so distressed that he went to a master for advice. The guru said, "Let's climb a mountain, and when we get to the top you will know how to do it." There were many small, crystalline stones on that mountain that were very beautiful. Every time he saw a stone he liked, the guru made him put it in a bag, and soon he couldn't take it anymore. "Master, if I keep carrying them like this, I won't be able to walk anymore." "Yes, what should I do?" The master smiled slightly, "Yes, it's time to put it down. If I don't put it down, I won't be able to climb the mountain." The young man was stunned, suddenly felt a light in his heart, and immediately thanked the master. After that, he concentrated on his studies and eventually became a great scholar ......
Students, after reading the above two stories, have you understood anything? Yes, how do we understand the true meaning of success, and how do we get our own success? When should we insist and when should we give up?
There is only one answer, and that is to understand yourself, to see yourself clearly, to stick to it appropriately, and to give up at the right time. If you do this, then there will be success ahead of you, there will be flowers and applause ......