Everyone has an unforgettable childhood, and those interesting past events are just as brilliant as the stars in the sky, exuding a fascinating luster from time to time. These interesting past events often appear in my mind, so that I still can not forget.
Childhood is childish and ridiculous. I remember that time, my mother because something is not at home, it is about to meal time, but I do not know how to cook, I thought: if I wash the dishes, my mother will not cook faster? I thought, "Wouldn't it be faster if I washed the dishes?" So I came up with a brilliant idea: Didn't my mom usually use the washing machine to wash her clothes? Why can't I use the washing machine to do the dishes? It must be faster and less laborious. So I dumped the pot of vegetables that my mom was going to cook into the washing machine. However, I was still a little bit not very good at using it, but I still understood the scale, so I just turned all the buttons on the washing machine to the maximum, and the washing machine started, and I had a burst of ecstasy in my heart: "It's so easy to start, it's really a piece of cake!" Then I burst out laughing again. After a while, the washing machine stopped, "Hey, what's going on, why are the dishes all broken?" I got a little anxious and immediately called my mom, "Mom, I'm using the washing machine to wash the dishes, why are they all broken?" "Ouch! My baby, the washing machine can only wash clothes, of course the dishes will be broken." Mom said to me in a serious tone.
Childhood was again childish and selfish. I remember one day, my family came to the guests, mom cut the watermelon ready to receive guests, I went to the kitchen to see, "Wow, so much watermelon!" My mouth can not help but slowly flow out, really "suspected that the Milky Way fell nine days", I secretly the tip of the watermelon are bitten into the "crescent" shape, I thought: "I have bitten the tip of this who will still eat? " Mom came to the kitchen, laughed and said to me, "Eating the tip of the watermelon will kill you." I was surprised and hurriedly said to my mom, "No way, will I die if I eat the tip of the watermelon?" Mom picked me up, "You, it's all because of gluttony!" I laughed wryly.
Ah, childhood unforgettable, childhood happy ...... childhood everything everything, are y engraved in my mind, accompanied by my childish heart soaring, accompanied by my strong growth.
Teacher comments: The work is vivid and interesting, through two things depicted the small author of an innocent, childish childhood. The whole text is cleverly conceived, structured, imaginative, humorous language, flexible ideas, between the lines are jumping with the child's innocent heart, reflecting the child's humorous and witty interest in children, after reading let people feel the author of the childhood of the beautiful yearning and attachment. The whole exercise echoes the first and last, the end of the point of the center.
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