Beginning: flowers bloom easy to see and fall hard to find, each flower is fighting for that beautiful moment, hugely through the thin sunlight. I finally realized that blossoms also have a sound ......
Middle: FYI: you can write about picking up a bunch of flowers, (briefly describe the delicate form of the flowers) planted in the soil, but gradually withered, and threw it into the lawn. (This is a suspense) but after a few days to see but found that the flowers stand up, but also grew bright green leaves. （I was blown away by the way the flowers stood up in the sunlight.
A few weeks later, I found the flowers grew buds, very beautiful, I then squatted down to look carefully, found that the petals gradually stretching open, I was once again shocked to hear the sound of the flowers blooming (detailing the description of the flowers blooming)
Conclusion: every flower has its own voice, that is the traces of the struggle to never give up.
Missing the lost past is to better meet the marvelous future.
I miss my childhood playmates. I miss our innocent quarrels on the way out of school, shouting nicknames to each other with gusto, and teaching each other the art of riding bicycles with glee. I miss the study of my older neighbor's house, where I used to sit next to him, gently lifting the book in front of me and flipping through the stacks of novelty illustrations at a glance.
I miss the time when we were just a bunch of little monkey kids having fun. A group of ponytailed schoolgirls tirelessly repeated jumping to play rubber bands inherent in the road; a small black boy in spite of the red sun, holding a large with their own clothes wrapped in crystal clear glass balls, from home a jumping out of the house, from time to time you can hear a burst of beads collide with the crisp sound; one, two, three wooden man, partners play the hilarious game; pull the
I miss the early summer sultry, thunderstorms, bare feet, head over the lotus leaves, rushed home in a panic; down to the ground to cut rice, hurt his hands, shouting for help of the nervous; the pond play, fell into the water of the naughty.
I miss and desk together under the night self-study, go home together, facing the wind, laughing and joking; I miss every night accompanied by my sun, moon and stars; I miss the military training that time the night of the carnival; I miss the naivety of the lovely roommates; I miss the class of the fruit of the joke told by the inane.
Looking forward to the curtain falling from the sky every night, I was excited to fold these into stars and hang them carefully. And I look forward to this curtain rising early, so that my stars can quickly decorate the sky.
Whenever the stars twinkle, I will remember this wonderful memory, perhaps also they are saying to me not to forget them! Oh!
What I miss! I move forward thoughtfully!
2. Suspenseful essay opening storyA sea of people, rubbing shoulders, encountered in the beautiful rain port, the name is not important, it is just a synonym, touching is the moment of the throbbing ...... rain, gently and aimlessly floating, weaving a piece of hazy green veil, wrapped in a slim alley.
The rainy alley is quiet, sparsely floating over a few flower-like umbrellas. 2: In the big house of life, there are millions of emotional doors, open them, we will get joy, sorrow, courage, frustration.
Think: From this beginning, what is the topic covered in this article? What is the method it uses? What are the topics covered in the following section? Clear: the topic of this paper should be "door". It adopts the "straight to the point, open the door" method.
The content of the following article are the door of joy, the door of sadness, the door of courage, the door of frustration and so on. 3: The pursuit of life, like a boat on the water, only to raise the two sails: believe in yourself and listen to others, we can enter and exit freely, to arrive at the other side of the victory.
4: Everything must not be obsessive. Everything can not be too obsessive.
5: Survival is oil, salt, wood, rice, soy, vinegar and tea. Life is the piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, song, dance and flower.
Survival is just to live, life is not just to survive.
Perfection is beautiful, and the residual regret is sometimes beautiful. 7: The lush green grass in the mountains, the golden ears of the fields, the fresh red carp in the ponds, and the black eagles soaring high in the sky, these colorful lives in the embellishment of nature.
Human beings, as the spirit of nature, should also enrich the world with a colorful life. 8: When you meet the setback, what will you do? Perhaps, you will choose to escape, find a sheltered harbor; perhaps, you will choose to cry, with tears to clean the heartbroken; perhaps, you will choose to ask for help ...... 9: the old saying: Suo things in the dark room, Mo Liang in the fire; Suo Road in the world, Mo Liang in the sincere.
Zeng Zi killed a pig for a "letter" word, Kong Ming accepted the "trust" for a "sincere" word; because of the "integrity" word, a hundred years of the "integrity" word. Because of the word "honesty", a hundred years old store to customers, Liu Bang's three chapters of the law to be a thousand years to be passed on as a beautiful story. 10: Actors say, life is like a play; singers say, life is like a dream; hobby travelers say, life is like a trip; like to dream people say, life is like a dream; I say, life is a challenge.
(I hope these examples are helpful).
3. essay clever suspense a beginningHalfway up the mountainside in a straw hut, flashing out dim light. The two brothers are sitting in the house. The older brother is in his third year of high school in the county, with excellent grades, and will be going to college next year; the younger brother is in his second year of junior high school. Father died three years ago. Outside the home, all by the mother alone, a long overload of labor, mother sick in bed, no one at home to work, the two brothers decided to stay at home, the other continue to go to school.
For a long time, there was no sound in the house. A gust of wind blew, the cloth curtain on the door hunted, and the fire kept jumping.
"Brother, you go and study, I will stay at home." The younger brother said to his brother. The elder brother did not answer. When he looked at his yellow-faced brother, his heart ached. Is it possible for him to go to study and let his weak brother labor at home? Brother walked over and stroked his brother's head, "Listen to brother's words, you people are still young, it is the time to study, brother stay at home, you go to study in peace." "No, brother, you will soon be promoted to school, you go to study, home work I slowly do."
"Brother," "brother," the two brothers hugged each other tightly, each other hear each other's heartbeat. Tears, silent flow ......
The brothers who could not convince anyone, and finally had to draw lots to decide.
The younger brother found paper and pen, leaning over the table to write, brother staring out of the dark night outside the house out of mind.
"Brother, you grab it first." Brother turned around, hesitated to stare for a moment, and grabbed a ball of paper from the table that read, "Go to school."
The younger brother looked at his brother and said, "Brother, your lot is for school, I'll labor at home, you go read." ......
The brother stared at the piece of paper in his hand, his heart fluttered, his brother is still so small, labor at home, it will tire him out. No, should let the younger brother to study. He turned around and saw that his brother was no longer in the house.
Brother bowed his head and pondered for a moment, seemed to suddenly understand what, from the paper basket to find his brother's ball of paper, unfolded a look, it is also written "school". All of a sudden, the older brother understood everything. In order to let the brother to go first catch, their own on ......
Looking at the hands of a piece of crumpled paper, brother eyes flashing tears, hands, in the trembling, violently, the brother turned around, shouted: "brother ...... "rushed toward the thick night outside the house.
Brief comment: This is a sad, tearful article, the author first wrote the background of the family, in order to promote the development of the plot to make a good pad, and then through the vivid description of language and action, portrayed the brother took great pains to "cheat" in the lots, the end of the riddle. The end of the riddle is solved. The true feelings of the flow, received a good effect
Brother, dark skin, thick arms like a sturdy ox; brother, coarse voice, disheveled hair, like a horse, like a horse; brother, silent, early morning, like a donkey pulling the mill. It is said that the brother is picked up, because the brother is a as long as there is food
As long as there is food
can work as hard as livestock, he is the only labor force in the family.
The wind gently crossed the side, came the sound of brother gasping for breath, the wheat waves fluttering brother's drops of sweat, in the sun, like a pearl, flying up and sinking into the boundless waves of wheat.
Brother really picked up? In the boundless black night I asked the still twinkling stars, maybe they know brother is not from the mother's belly out. Think of my mother, remember I asked her brother is not picked up, she secretly wiped tears look, think of the mother looked at the brother of the kind of heartache and helpless look, think of ...... I think brother is not picked up it! The stars are speechless, only boundless thoughts melted in the boundless darkness.
However, finally one day, a car picked up ...... not brother, but I ......
The whole village were stunned, the mother's thin body like a piece of white paper can not withstand kneading reclined on the threshold, silver hair caught a few
Brother, I think of brother, I defiantly broke away from the warm hands of my biological parents, rushed to the wheat field. In the sunlight brother's dark face rolled with beads of water, is it tears? Or was it sweat? I stood on the ridge and let the tears flood in my eyes, but no longer able to call out the heavy "brother!"
Brother, looking at me with a silly smile, said: "Go back, have time to spend more time with our mother, she sacrificed a lot for you."
Mother, mother sacrificed a lot for me, yes, mother sacrificed her own son, in order for me to pick up the baby, in order for me to sit in a spacious classroom today, mother turned brother into a livestock in the family.
Countless days, my mother gave me a bowl of fragrant rice, but to the brother stuffed a hard nest, I said to my mother: "This is not fair!" I said to her, "That's not fair!" She just smiled and said, "You need to go to school to get nutritious."
Originally, I now realize that the fate of my brother and I was arranged by my mother, in the end, my brother and my mother, or I and my mother, why did my mother do this? At this moment we party understand that there is another thing in this world that is greater than mother's love.
It is like a stream of Dingdong spring water, nourishing my heart, like a bunch of warm sunshine, give me the strength to move forward, I would like to ask Mother, I am more important than her son? Perhaps it is not necessary, because the mother is so think, this is the mother of this
4. essay, the most attractive beginning (so set up suspense style)"The text is like looking at the mountains do not like flat!" It's human nature to love the new, to hate the old, and to be curious. So, how to make the beginning of the essay more suspense, so that the plot is swaying, ups and downs, and produce the artistic effect of the heart-stopping, in order to quickly stimulate the reader's interest in reading?
First, clip a wonderful clip
A successful TV and movie director, often the most wonderful, the most thrilling, the most *** clip or *** put in the beginning, as a means of attracting the audience to increase the ratings of film and television drama, many writers are the same. We write essays, we must also have the most exciting content in the beginning of the consciousness, and strive to make a wonderful beginning to quickly catch the reader's eye. Look at the full score essay "" Polar "challenge" in the beginning:
"Come on! Stand still! Third from the right, fingers to the seams of your pants!" "You - stand out, come out and stand still not good, just stand for me for an afternoon! Do you hear me?" The instructor was lecturing fiercely to the boys in front of me. Then look at those boys, usually always high head, to the girls is even more fierce, and at this time, all become sheep.
As thunderous roar, harsh criticism, stark contrast, only three or two sentences, quickly glued to the reader, so that the reader can not stop, only obediently read on.
Second, put forward a topic of thought
This is the most mundane and the most suspenseful beginning of the essay. If you raise the issue of the value of thinking, can produce a strong visual impact, open the reader's mind, the same can produce a great artistic charm, so that people can not stop. Please see the full score essay "my season I do" in the beginning:
Flowering season youth, can set aside the domination of parents, my season I do, my land I do?
With this millennium problem, I traveled through the time and space tunnel, floating to the Spring and Autumn and Warring States, I want to knock Confucius , knock Qu Yuan, see how they answer this ancient problem.
The article began with a serious question, three words left the suspense, at the same time, the text also gives people a sense of heaviness.
Third, light up an important object
Many articles cleverly choose a clue throughout the text, this clue can be a person, can be a thing, can also be a thing. If at the beginning of the article, let the person, thing or thing with a few points "mystery" or a few points "weird" shine, the same can make people fascinated. Please see the full points of the composition "that scene, I can not forget" wonderful beginning:
"Extra, extra, Lin Li in Wenchuan sister letter, there is a bunch of photos it!
The quiet noon was broken. The voice is naturally sharp, plus she deliberately pinched up her voice, and transported enough gas, it is particularly shocking. A few boys, plus a few "wild girls" have long been unable to hold back, a group of "crazy" rushed out to grab the letter. Even a few guys who slept particularly well also fuzzy eyes shouted: "What's the matter? What is it? I'm not sure if you're going to be able to do that.
You must also be dragged by the mysterious letter, eager to know what is inside? Accompanied by the reader's conjecture, the article is so suspenseful all the way to unfold, tightly involved in the reader's eyes.
Fourth, create a typical environment
Each story happens, the unfolding of the need for an environment, if the beginning of the article, the story directly to the scene carefully depicted, or carefully create a bleak or beautiful or quiet atmosphere, skillfully put the reader in the environment, can also produce a great attraction. Please see the full score essay "that scene, I can not forget" the beginning:
The piercing cold wind whistling blowing, from time to time to me, and occasionally there will be naughty little snowflakes fall, like dancing. Walking on the road , I thought, outside the business of the father should be home, right?
"Bone-chilling wind", "naughty little snowflakes", the beginning of only two sentences, to create a cold, quiet atmosphere, fascinating.
And then look at the full score essay "Wujiang Water Overlord love" at the beginning:
The surging waves of the water of the Wujiang River is still clearly discernible, it keeps tumbling, and keeps telling people that endless overlord love ......
Xiangjun's power to pull the mountains, the lonely water can not help but grass luxuriant, Gaixia, although the defeat of the Wei You in, why I'm not sure why I'm so upset, but I'm not sure why I'm upset.
At the beginning of the article, it renders a sad and desolate atmosphere, which skillfully puts the readers in the distant ancient battlefield, like hearing its sound, like seeing its scene.
In short, there are a lot of ways to start the essay, how can just one glance to firmly attract the reader is the most important thing. Students should be in the case of the ability to choose the composition genre, structure and the main expression of the beginning of the form, and strive to cause the reader's reading interest in the first time.
5. suspenseful beginning to write a stranger's love for meStranger's love for me Caring is like flowers, different flowers have different colors and aromas, and caring has different forms of expression.
There was once a stranger whose love and care made me unforgettable. On Saturday I helped my mom buy some wine from the supermarket in front of the neighborhood.
When I went home, I thought how can I open the door with my hands free holding these wines? All the way to worry, almost home, I was moping, strangers give me love care is like flowers, different flowers have different colors and aroma, care also has different forms of expression. There was once a stranger whose care was unforgettable to me.
Saturday I helped my mother to the neighborhood entrance supermarket to buy some wine. When I went home, I thought how can I open the door with these wines in my arms? All the way to worry, almost home, I was sullen, do not know what to do.
"Come in" suddenly a voice into my ears, only to see the entrance to my building there is a person is pulling open the door, waiting for me. My heart was racing and I immediately quickened my pace.
"Don't rush, take your time." He said again.
As I got closer, I started sizing him up, he didn't seem to be my neighbor, he appeared to be around 70 years old, wearing a suit and a pair of shiny, clean leather shoes. He could be visiting a close friend, he could be visiting a late bloomer, he could be ...... "What's up? Come in?" A gentle voice interrupted my imagination.
I came back to my senses and hastily said, "Thank you!" In the elevator, he saw that my hands were full of things, so he took the initiative to ask me, "What floor are you going to?" "17" I replied. He immediately pressed it for me, "Thank you!" I was busy saying to.
Look carefully, and found that he has a lot of white hair, a lot of wrinkles, and his hands are a little shaky. At this time I felt a shame that I have never felt before.
Ask yourself in your daily life, can I take the initiative to reach out to others when they need it? The answer is definitely "no", and sometimes you may not even notice if someone else needs help. He is a role model for me to learn, so that I understand that as long as there is a heart an unintentional action can help others, so that he (she) feel the presence of care.
Care is everywhere, sometimes just an action, sometimes just a greeting, sometimes just a smile ...... Let us give each other more care, the world will become more warm and beautiful.
6. suspenseful essay opening storyA sea of people, rubbing shoulders, encountered in the beautiful rain port, the name is not important, it is just a synonym, touching is the moment of the throbbing ...... rain, gently and aimlessly floating, weaving a piece of hazy green veil, wrapped in a slim alley.
The rainy alley is quiet, sparsely floating over a few flower-like umbrellas. 2: In the big house of life, there are millions of emotional doors, open them, we will get joy, sorrow, courage, frustration.
Think: From this beginning, what is the topic covered in this article? What is the method it uses? What are the topics covered in the following section? Clear: the topic of this article should be "door". It adopts the "straight to the point, open the door" method.
The content of the following article are the door of joy, the door of sadness, the door of courage, the door of frustration and so on. 3: The pursuit of life, like a boat on the water, only to raise the two sails: believe in yourself and listen to others, we can enter and exit freely, to arrive at the other side of the victory.
4: Everything must not be obsessive. Everything can not be too obsessive.
5: Survival is oil, salt, wood, rice, soy, vinegar and tea. Life is the piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, song, dance and flower.
Survival is just to live, life is not just to survive.
Perfection is beautiful, and the residual regret is sometimes beautiful. 7: The lush green grass in the mountains, the golden ears of the fields, the fresh red carp in the ponds, and the black eagles soaring high in the sky, these colorful lives in the embellishment of nature.
Human beings, as the spirit of nature, should also enrich the world with a colorful life. 8: When you meet the setback, what will you do? Perhaps, you will choose to escape, find a sheltered harbor; perhaps, you will choose to cry, with tears to clean the heartbroken; perhaps, you will choose to ask for help ...... 9: the old saying: Suo things in the dark room, Mo Liang in the fire; Suo Road in the world, Mo Liang in the sincere.
Zeng Zi killed a pig for a "letter" word, Kong Ming accepted the "trust" for a "sincere" word; because of the "integrity" word, a hundred years of the "integrity" word. Because of the word "honesty", a hundred years old store to customers, Liu Bang's three chapters of the law to be a thousand years to be passed on as a beautiful story. 10: Actors say, life is like a play; singers say, life is like a dream; hobby travelers say, life is like a trip; like to dream people say, life is like a dream; I say, life is a challenge.
(I hope these examples are helpful).
7. Write a weekly journal with a suspenseful beginning and an inspiring ending in 200 wordsLooking at the title, you must be asking: what is suspense? Let me take you through the clouds to see the sky, suspense essay . It turns out that the last semester of 05 years, I enrolled in the composition class, I today for the first time in class, can not help but have some questions, such as who is the teacher, in fact, know that this a problem, other problems will be solved, well, gossip, back to the main topic. To our class is Ms. Fang, she came up to the stage with a smile on her face, she does not like to open the door to the mountain, (such as classmates, this class today to learn ****). At the beginning, the teacher asked us, "Who knows I'm so happy today?" As a result, the classroom appeared in a temporary small talk, students are talking to each other, after 0.001 seconds, a few bold students have raised their hands, I think left and right can not figure out why. Ms. Fang called Zhu Sijie students, . "It should be Yoyo sister (Ms. Fang's daughter) won some kind of essay award ." After listening to a few students answered one after another, I have a little clue, I looked left and right, suddenly raised and fell, indecisive, one after another a few and raised their hands, I found out a few points of emphasis: "Teacher Fang is not for personal matters, usually students win awards, or yo-yo sister's business, after careful consideration, I finally raised my hand, Teacher Fang invited me, I came up with an idea, but the talk of the Who should I talk about? Many eyes looked at me, I could not speak a word. It was very embarrassing. Really two feet on both sides of the Yellow River, ready to cross the Yellow River, but do not know and do not want to go over the dilemma, do not know in and out, the heart is like fifteen buckets of water - seven up and eight down. Suddenly, a flash of light, finally a hammer - the best of both worlds, two birds with one stone, two birds with one stone. "It's our classmates who won the ** award, or you got a raise." This sentence is no less than dropping an atomic bomb on the class, the classroom is like a pot of boiling water - boiling . After a few seconds, Mr. Fang asked me what it was, but I kept my mouth shut. After a heated discussion, Mr. Fang said stop, but did not announce the correct answer. To know the success or failure, right or wrong, please listen to the next time to explain ....
8. Suspense essay opening I learned to be gratefulI learned to be grateful
Gratitude is everywhere in this world. Serve a cup of hot tea to a tired father, say a cordial greeting to a mother who has just come home, pour a cup of water for a hard-working teacher ...... These seem to be very small things, but they contain gratitude to others.
I should be most grateful to my father, who has given me so much help. In learning, he used different ways to encourage, motivate me, let me stand up bravely, strong forward; in the person, his long-winded teaching let me always unforgettable; in life, he cared about me in every way.
In learning, my father and others are not the same encouragement, motivate me. He did not encourage me in person, nor praise me in person, but not a word, not an action. And it's that kind of behavior from my dad that keeps me motivated. Some may ask why. I would like to answer, because there was a voice in my heart that kept saying, Go for it! Qin Bell, you must move forward, you must work hard, you must let your dad see your progress, let your dad encourage you, praise you, motivate you. And that's what gave me the motivation to move forward.
In life, my father did his best to create good conditions for me. He preferred his own body, carrying a heavy burden. He bought me a bicycle, electronic piano. What he gave me was endless joy, but what he gave himself was an endless burden.
I really hate myself, why only now understand the truth. Look at dad sometimes do things back, that a wound, a blood stain. I just can't help but cry, but I can't cry, I have to smile I have to let my dad see my innocent smiling face.
"A drop of water when the spring to repay" father in the study, life, do people on my help is endless, I should not let down his expectations, study hard, hard work, and in the future to repay my parents.
9. Give a few beginnings, descriptive, suspenseful, rhetorical and quoted as long as the beginning of acan refer to Zhu Ziqing's moonlight in Hegang pond 1. Metaphor: The thick and emerald scenery is simply a painting of green hills and green water The ground shoots up countless arrows, and thousands of waterfalls fall from the roof.
2. Simile: Peach trees, apricot trees, pear trees, you do not let me, I do not let you, are full of flowers to catch a trip. The cute little cat drew a little plum blossom on my manuscript paper. 3. hyperbole: The asphalt road melted in the sun, and even the bronze plaque in front of the store seemed to melt in the sun. She was drunk before she could even reach the end of the wine bottle.
4. prose: their quality is so pure and noble, their will is so tough and strong, their temperament is so simple and humble, their bosom is so beautiful and broad. The heart is a vast sky, which embraces everything in the world; the heart is a quiet lake, occasionally ripples; the heart is a snow-covered plain, which reflects a colorful world.
5. Ask: Why is the flower so red? First of all, there is its material basis. The first thing that I want to do is to make sure that I have the right to be able to do this. No one else, it turns out to be Damien.
6. Rhetorical question: What about me, don't I have something to blame? Could it be that I would not know?7. Repeatedly The valley echoes, he has just departed, he has just departed. In my back garden, I can see two trees outside the wall, one is a jujube tree, and the other is also a jujube tree 8. couplet Crossed head coldly, bent head willingly for children's ox.
The green mountains stretch across the northern part of the country, and the white water goes around the eastern part of the city.