1. Use a combination of points and aspects to describe an event scene (no less than 400 words)
The atmosphere in the classroom became heavy and depressing. When the school bell rang, the classroom suddenly fell into Amidst the noise, students gathered in small groups, some taking photos, recording the classrooms where we had classes together, the blackboard newspapers we made together, and the classmates who had been together for more than a year. Some are laughing and playing around, hiding their unhappiness deep in their hearts, and remaining as happy as before, leaving their happiness in the final moments of separation. Some held hands and whispered some parting words. They were reluctant to leave their friends and the class to separate. As they talked, they couldn't help but have tears in their eyes.
My colleague was writing, and I saw her trembling slightly and muttering. She was writing very quickly. The handwriting was not as neat as before, but it was filled with emotion and parting. Reluctantly, I patted her shoulder and smiled at her. She turned around and smiled at me. I found that there was no sadness in that smile, but tacit understanding and encouragement.
Suddenly the lights went out and singing came. The noisy classroom fell silent. We all looked up at the podium. It was the monitor playing a song using multimedia, it was "Friends"! We were all moved by this familiar song. During the song, the monitor told us in an affectionate voice: This song accompanied us through the first New Year together and won the first prize in the singing competition. this poem. . . . As he spoke, the monitor couldn't go on. There was a sound of sobbing in the classroom, and everything in the past came to mind in the tears. In the darkness, the classmates looked at the big screen quietly and sang along, "Friends walk together for life, those days will no longer exist..." At this time, there was a sudden sound, and Qin Yi, who was sitting next to me, Mingda cried. He didn't know how long he had been accumulating tears. At the moment when the song sounded, he could no longer hold back, and big drops of tears fell down. But he was still humming the melody of "Friends" in his mouth. There was a sea of ??tears in the classroom.
569 2. About the 400-word composition combining point and face.
Combining point and face when writing a composition, whether it is recording people or narrating, it is inseparable from the description of the scene.
Writing a good scene can exaggerate an atmosphere, set off the spiritual quality of the characters, and explore the deeper meaning of things. The article "Ten Miles of Long Street to Farewell the Prime Minister" (see Lesson 13 of Volume 7 of the People's Education Press textbook) describes how people in the capital spontaneously gathered on Chang'an Street to bid farewell to the Prime Minister. The scene was very touching.
The scene description uses a combination of points and surfaces. The sky was gray, overcast and cold.
The sidewalks on both sides of Chang'an Street were crowded with men, women, and children. The road is so long and there are so many people that you can't see the end to the east and the end to the west.
People had black gauze wrapped around their arms, white flowers on their chests, and their eyes were looking at the direction where Premier Zhou's hearse was coming. An old lady with silver hair, leaning on a cane with both hands and leaning against an acacia tree, waited anxiously and patiently.
A young couple, the husband holding their little daughter, and the wife leading their six or seven-year-old son, squeezed off the sidewalk and leaned forward to look around. A group of people in red scarves with tears on their faces, holding each other's shoulders, standing on tiptoe, looking, looking... Here, there is a very touching description of the scenes on both sides of the sidewalk of Chang'an Street. The whole scene is described first, which exaggerates a gloomy and depressing atmosphere. atmosphere.
Then there are specific descriptions: an old woman "leaning on crutches with both hands"; a young couple "leaning forward and looking"; a group of red scarves with "tears on their faces"... This is the point. Combined, it painted a touching farewell picture, expressing people's infinite nostalgia for the Prime Minister. When students write essays, especially essays about sports competitions and practical activities, they usually use the method of combining points and faces to describe the scene. Please take a look at Cao Li's "Growing Carrots" (fragment) below. The game begins. The students in the audience were eager to try.
After a while, the "soil" on the stage formed a wall of people. You were next to me, and I was next to you. Everyone was in high spirits.
Some looked back from time to time to see who had won the jackpot; some pretended to be calm; and some winked and told others that they had planted "carrots" on their hands.
You see, Xiao Xian described the entire scene here, "The 'soil' on the stage formed a human wall," which created a high-spirited atmosphere. Then Xiaoyou started writing from the dots: some "looked back", some "pretended to be calm", and some "winked", which made people feel a kind of "exuberant" with different postures! This combination of dots and noodles creates a very childlike atmosphere for the "performance" of the "Growing Carrots" game! , on our campus, every time you turn around or change your perspective, you will see different scenery before your eyes: quiet and lively teaching buildings, lush fir forests, colorful and well-proportioned flower beds, and pleasing plastics. Runway exercises... And my favorite corner of her is the place surrounded by teaching buildings and affectionately called "Siheyuan" by our teachers and students.
In the middle of the courtyard, there is a tall pine tree, like a green pagoda. It's so high, it's almost the same as our classroom on the fourth floor! The bark of the tree feels bumpy and uneven, full of traces of the vicissitudes of time.
There is a dark green furry "carpet" under its feet, and the grass is surrounded by grass and looking up at it, as if nestling in its father's arms. To the left of the pine tree is the most exciting dripping pool.
The dripping pool is built next to the east teaching building. The wall it is leaning on is a stone wall made of special decorative materials. It is green and gray in color, with concave and convex bumps. A few bright flowers in the diagonal upper corners make it lively! There is a hole under the stone wall, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the east teaching building.
From time to time, many first-grade children put their heads in and retracted curiously. Below the hole is a pool.
The pool is surrounded by pebbles of various colors and cement. There are aquatic plants in the pond! There are also various goldfish: red hydrangea, pink and white pearls, colorful dragon eyes... Look, the one that swims the fastest and the most naughty is my beloved "little butterfly", and she is swimming with her again. Her friends are playing hide and seek! There are several stone tables and chairs to the right of the pine tree.
The top is always clean! Why? Because we all like to sit there and read books and play games! get out of class is over and the place is in a state of excitement. Class is here, and the little fish must also be listening to the sound of reading... A corner of the campus, why doesn't your beauty make me love my campus more? ! 2. An unforgettable tug-of-war. The years are like rapids, constantly washing away my memory. Many things have been blurred, but deep in my heart, there is one thing that has always been unforgettable for me.
I remember it was last fall. In the composition class, the teacher organized a tug-of-war competition in order to let us exercise our bodies, cultivate our sentiments, and cultivate our observation skills. The teacher divided us into two teams, one was the Tigers and the other was the Eagles.
I was assigned to the Eagles. The two teams are equally strong and refuse to give in to each other. The students are all heroic and hold their heads high. A tit-for-tat competition is about to begin.
With the teacher's whistle, the game started. The players on both sides held the rope tightly. They kicked their feet on the ground one by one, leaned back, and tried their best to pull the rope in their own direction.
The red ribbon in the middle of the rope moved towards the Tigers for a while, and then moved to the Eagles for a while, without giving way to each other. The cheerleaders from both sides also shouted in unison and kept beating drums to cheer for their team.
My hands turned red, but the rope still didn’t move, and the two sides entered a stalemate. At this time, all our team members were red-eyed. Some people’s faces were red from suppressing it. Some people were baring their teeth and grinning and shouting. Some people were holding the rope tightly with both hands and pushing hard towards themselves. Pull in the direction.
In the end, our team tried its best. With the shouts of the cheerleaders, the red silk suddenly moved to our side, and our Eagles won. In the next two games, our team took advantage of the victory and won consecutively, and finally we won.
This tug-of-war made me understand the power of unity and inspired me to build up the confidence to overcome difficulties on the road to the future. I will never forget this tug-of-war. 3. A combination of 400 words for the sports meeting essay
Today is the scorching sun, and the hot sun is shining on the earth. It is also the annual parent-child sports meeting of our school. Everyone is very happy because they can play with their children. Mom and dad worked together to win glory for their respective groups.
Arrive
We arrived at the sports center where we were going. The students entered the venue in an orderly manner under the leadership of the teacher. Our class The students were all in high spirits and had only one wish in their hearts: I hope that this sports meeting can win the first place in the whole year. The opening ceremony of the sports meeting began. The principal said on the radio: "Classmates, teachers , Parents, hello, this year’s annual parent-child sports meeting has started now! "All the students in the school were wearing neat school uniforms,
lined up neatly, and walked in the square team on the sports field, chanting The slogan of our class is particularly powerful: "1234, 1234! Four, five, four, five! Can be civilized and military, first and first! It must be me
It belongs to me! "After the cube team ceremony ended, the intense sports meeting began!
Today’s sports meeting has a variety of events, including long rope jumping for parents, relay competitions between parents and children over obstacles, and long-distance running ranging from 60 to 800 meters.
Most
The exciting event is the obstacle relay competition between parents and children. As soon as Teacher Tang’s gunshot rang out, the competition started. I saw Wei Liangyu from our class holding the baton tightly, crossing the obstacles, and passing the baton to the next person. A parent, the cheerleaders of our class were also cheering on. The students were shouting one after another, and the competition was going on nervously. Suddenly, a parent lost his center of gravity because he was running too fast and fell to the ground. 'No, what should I do? Can the game continue?
’ The students on the side were stunned. They saw that the parent was not discouraged. He endured the pain and continued to compete. Come on! come on! The students shouted louder, the game is over! Our classmates and parents worked hard to achieve
second place.
Sweat and smiles flowed on their faces, and honor spread in everyone's hearts. Although this time Everyone was very tired at the sports meeting, but everyone was very high-spirited. 4. Description of the scene of combining points and noodles
Pure hand beating, oh~
Listen, the deafening sound of gongs and drums, straight up Yunxiao; Look, the common people are full of joy and joy. What brings people together? What makes people ecstatic? It turns out that the founding ceremony of the Republic of China is being held.
This is Tiananmen Square on October 1, 1949, as described for us in the article "The Founding Ceremony of the People's Republic of China". This is a sacred day. Chinese people from all over the country gather in Tiananmen Square. The five-star red flag is raised here for the first time. The national anthem of the Republic of China is sung here for the first time. The mighty army accepts it for the first time. The review of the motherland!
There is such a description in "The Founding Ceremony": "During the two and a half hours of review, the square kept cheering and applauding, one *** after another. The crowd was almost exhausted. I cried hoarsely, my palms were numb from the slaps, and I still felt that I could not express the joy and excitement in my heart. "From these descriptions, I seemed to feel that the common people who had been exploited by feudal landlords and devastated by war had to stand up. They were extremely excited after liberation; it was as if they could see the expectation and desire for a happy life on their faces, and their joy and excitement were beyond words.
Purely hand-made, oh~ 5. Combine the dots with beautiful sentences
1. The water birds that suddenly rise up, or the fish that accidentally jumps into the water, will take pictures of the mountains and the village. The beautiful shadow reflected in the water made her tremble like a drunk.
2. The bright moon shines among the pines, and the clear spring rocks flow upstream.
3. The sun is shining brightly, and the shadows are spread on the rocks, motionless; they are far away, coming and going, as if enjoying themselves with tourists.
4. The shadow of the fish was reflected on the bottom of the stone, motionless; suddenly, it swam away in the distance again, coming and going briskly (excerpt from "Little Rock Pond")
5. Thousands of miles of ice, thousands of miles of snow drifting
6. The fog is about to stop, and the apes and birds are chirping. The sunset is about to fade, and the scales are sinking and jumping.
7. Not to mention the green vegetable beds, smooth stone well fences, tall honey locust trees, and purple mulberries; not to mention the cicadas singing in the trees, and the fat wasps lying on the cauliflowers, nimble. Called the Son of Heaven (Skylark), he suddenly jumped straight into the sky from the grass. The surrounding short mud wall alone was endless fun.
8. Needless to say, the elegant and wealthy peonies, the beautiful and pure lilies, the lively and lovely Smurfs, and the noble and elegant Clivia, but an elegant and fragrant forget-me-not can make people intoxicated.
9. Not to mention the emerald green mountains, vigorous pines and cypresses, floating white clouds, and azure sky, nor the nightingales singing gracefully, the sparrows chirping and playing, and the beautiful butterflies dancing in the wind. Just an inconspicuous grass is enough to make people feel refreshed. It is so green, so strong, standing proudly against the biting cold wind. The sunflowers look up at the sun; the bright flowers make me pick them. It’s so beautiful to put at home!
10. Not to mention the green nameplate, the smooth floor, the tall doctor, and the purple-red lips of the nurse; not to mention the long-tongued Zhang San seeing a doctor in Room 1 of the outpatient clinic, and the obese Li Si getting an injection in the injection room , the thin Wang Wu suddenly dropped the infusion bottle on the ground. Li Mazi was shocked by the cost of treatment alone.
11. Not to mention the world-famous Terracotta Warriors and Horses of Qin Shihuang, the ancient city wall of Xi'an with its antique green bricks and green tiles, the Bell and Drum Tower with morning bells and evening drums, the quiet and beautiful Xingqing Palace, the solemn history museum and The Lishan Beacon Tower plays host to the princes, and the famous Bingjian Pavilion, Big Wild Goose Pagoda and Small Wild Goose Pagoda are used for the Xi'an Incident. The forest of steles alone makes me deeply moved. The word "tiger" written in one stroke is majestic; the reliefs of the Six Horses of Zhaoling, the six BMWs of Emperor Taizong Li Shimin of the Tang Dynasty, were broken into pieces by bandits from the Eight-Power Allied Forces and cannot be restored. Not to mention the steepness of Huashan Mountain in Xiyue, the scenery of Huaqing Pool is unique here. However, what I miss most is not the two thousand years of history and culture of the ancient city of Xi'an, but the snacks in Xi'an.
12. I gave up resistance and quickly entered the drama. Only then did I bring back the feeling of being successfully hypnotized to share. The Promise is definitely a super exquisite stage play, not to mention the brilliance of the setting, the twists and turns of the plot, the imaginative movements of the Pegasus, and the profound touching. Not to mention the assassin falling from the branch, the fat king lying on the roof, and the nimble goddess. Suddenly I jumped straight from the fields to the clouds. Just the acting skills of several international big names around me were endless fun.
Note: 1-6 lists some poems and sentences that combine movement and stillness; 7-12 lists some paragraphs that combine point and surface. 6. Please describe the scene of the combination of dots and noodles
Charity Sale
The sky is as blue as the sea, and the clouds are arranged into huge smiling faces, as if to welcome the exciting people. charity sale.
Waiting and looking forward to it! Finally, when the charity sale arrived, I couldn't wait to pick up the money, walked to the playground as quickly as possible, and looked around.
Look! The originally quiet playground suddenly became lively and crowded, as if it had turned into a flea market. An eye-catching signboard "rose from the ground", and the shouts of sales flew into the ears, "Don't miss it when you pass by, it's sold at a cheap price, it's sold at a cheap price!" The students suddenly transformed into experienced salesmen and salesmen, " With your love and sincerity, the super value lottery has begun!” There were endless shouts on the playground.
Merchants also have their own tricks to attract customers! Look! Female students from Class 57 danced a Bai dance at the entrance of the "store", with smiles on their faces all the time. Their beautiful dance attracted many "customers" to come and watch.
Some shops sell toys and books, some sell school supplies, some sell accessories, and some sell unknown gadgets...
Everyone is so busy coming and going. Very happy. look! Several salesmen from Class 63 were riding on chairs, holding up several stuffed toys, dancing up and down in the air, their faces flushed, and shouting loudly: "Look, look, look! There is a lottery for buying toys and books." , buy one item and draw once, 100% win!” The little accountants are not far behind, recording the amount of money for each item in an orderly manner, and helping with sales from time to time. The students who purchased goods even came up with all kinds of strange tricks to purchase exquisite items. They searched around the playground, buying them at low prices and selling them at high prices. Ha ha! He really deserves the title of small businessman!
Ban’s shop was also crowded at this time. The big man Yang Pengkun held the book in both hands, waved it left and right in the air, and shouted: "Super value detective novel, 10 yuan a book!" Don't miss out on your good luck! Come and buy it!" As he spoke, he stood on tiptoes, his eyes widened, and his body swayed from side to side. Salesperson Pu Wenxuan was not idle either. He held the money he received in his left hand and handed the items to the customer with his right hand. He quickly changed the money and reported the amount to the classmate who was keeping accounts behind him: "Thank you for your patronage! Yes, 10 yuan!"
Just then, I also started a big search, "Well--start from my own store first!" I said to myself. The orange cover caught my eye. Oh, is this my favorite book "One Hundred Famous People Who Moved the World"? I suddenly shouted happily: "I want this book, Pu Wenxuan, and I will give you the money. You don't have to change it!"
Hours seemed to be running like water, so fast, the charity sale was over, and on the playground The peace of the past was restored. Although the pieces are small, they contain a love and a dedication; although the bits and pieces are small, they condense into huge power. This charity sale allowed us to buy many favorite items, and we also did our part and showed love for the arrival of our ethnic partners. 7. Four-character words with "face"
A thousand faces,
beyond recognition,
full of spring breeze,
flushed,
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Duplicity,
On all sides,
Looking at each other,
Besieged on all sides,
No change of expression,
Stand alone,
Cover all aspects,
Dove-shaped face,
Unkempt face,
Full of red face,
To change one's mind,
to show one's face,
to be arrogant,
to be hateful,
to be superficial,
to be open-minded ,
Full of tears,
Human face with animal heart,
Full of red face,
Selfless,
Oily head and pink noodles,
Beautiful from all sides,
Never met before,
Disgraced,
One-sided words,
Sallow and thin