| Example: Life doesn't end Life doesn't end when Lady Luck sprinkles the seeds of echinacea on the smooth path of life; life doesn't end when the storm whips the lucky flowers wildly; life doesn't end when the last leaf falls... ... --Title He gazed at the sky, at the tree outside his window that was thick but only had a few leaves left. It was said that the tree was hollowed out on the inside by worms, leaving only an outer layer of bark. However, the tree was old enough to die, so it was nothing to be sorry about. The weather is also getting cooler and cooler, and the autumn wind is blowing coolly on the trees, accelerating the speed of the leaves falling. Everything on the earth changed, from green to yellow, vibrant to dying. The autumn wind blew on the old man's charred face, not without a feeling of depression. The old man was over sixty years old, and unfortunately, he had been determined by the doctors to be terminally ill. He would not allow the doctors to hide anything about his condition. When he knew that he was about to leave this world, he began to gaze at a big tree, and he used to say, "When the last leaf comes, I will leave this world with him." From that day on, he did nothing but eat and sleep, and just gazed blankly at the great tree as it fell its leaves. Every time a leaf fell, he would sigh, "Hey, I have one less day ......" Then there was just one leaf left, and he gazed at it every day, saying to himself, "When this leaf falls I will leave this world with it, soon, soon ......" A painter knew of this, and he painted a leaf, and it was green and exactly like the real one. Sneaking this fake leaf up while the old man slept. When the old man woke up from his sleep, he realized that the leaf had turned green, a lovely green, a dazzling green, a green that filled one's body with strength. The old man stepped out of his room and scrutinized the great tree, a leaf that seemed to have magic in it. He approached the tree, put his hand on the branch, his eyes lit up, and a big smile appeared on his face: "It's alive! It's alive again! I out to feel his pulse, he is not willing to perish, it is like the fall challenge, to fight for life! Although it only has one leaf left, his life is not over!" Everyone thought the dying man was crazy. He used to tea and dine all day long, sitting in the house every day dull and full of sorrow. And now he would be the first to buy fresh fruits from the bazaar, raise a few birds at home, listen to the radio, move his muscles, and sometimes hum a couple of Peking Operas. What remains unchanged is that he still has to gaze at a big tree, gaze at a piece of green leaves. It is as if the green leaves are in a race for life. Once, the old man went to the hospital to check his health, the doctor was both surprised and excited to look at him: "Miracle ah! What a miracle! You have completely recovered from your illness!" The old man returned home happily, tapped the tree vigorously, and accidentally, gusted this green leaf down. The old man picked it up and looked at it and smiled. He clutched the green leaf in his hand and looked at the tree and said, "Old man, as long as there is hope in our hearts, our lives are not over!" |
| Test Analysis: This question can be written directly on an event, so-and-so thing "does not end", to express the matter of the heart, the event of the people concerned, care. Can choose their own daily life around the small things, such as "Dad quit smoking action did not end", but to make the article has a higher intention, can be a major event as a material, such as writing "towards the rescue of the country's cruise ship did not end", write about their understanding of the situation To make the essay more meaningful, you can use a major event as material, such as "The rescue of the Korean cruise ship is not over", write about your own knowledge of the situation, and express your concern. A better way to write is to virtual instead of real, a thing has in fact ended, but you think it is not the end, such as the "Malaysia Airlines incident", can not find the wreckage of the aircraft, since the rescue behavior is over, but you can also say that "did not end", from the significance of the event to select a Angle, such as "the call of life does not end", to express respect for life, care for life, do not forget the theme of life lost. If you do not grasp the significance of such a major theme, write your own observations of life around you, you can also write on the ground on behalf of the virtual, such as "youth does not end", write about those old people who dance in the square, describing the scene and their image, the performance of the old people's mental outlook, to celebrate their love of life to the love of life, is also not lost! The idea is to write about the old people who dance in the square. |