Seeing the full moon used to glory, complete and flawless, that a string moon but with the silence of the wisdom of the vacancy, so that the lonely people to see the true meaning of life.
Viewed all the vast ocean, no end, that a trickle of small streams, but with the spirit and timeless small, so that the thinker to explore the mystery of life.
Knowing all the hustle and bustle of the red dust, congestion and prosperity, that an empty mountain but with a calm and refreshing silence, so that the recluse epiphany of the universe of the deep meaning.
After that, the life of the retreat to the incomplete vacancy appeared, in the congestion in the opening of the silence, in the completion of the blank left.
Tea: lead to calm on the heart
Westerners like coffee, strong and heavy. The kind of black like iron, flooded with mechanical and metallic luster. A fine sip, so that the mouth full of bitterness, strong refreshing effect and dense water vapor, penetrating and leave no gap to seize your thoughts, wrapped around your nerves, like a bully, at once occupy all the space. That's why Westerners like to take risks, to open up and to possess.
Tea, born in the valley above the shady slopes, infiltrated with the gentle wind and rain, absorbing the moonlight and starlight of the quiet, dense with the mountain if not wild dew, the bones are permeated with a share of tranquility. And then fine picking young leaves, fine hand development, until late at night, the crescent moon like a hook, a pot of zisha, a pot of hot water, high and low slow on, slowly brewing, but also not in a hurry, waiting for the vapor gradually dispersed, and then a person to carefully taste the tongue of a quiet, vaguely feel that a touch of fragrance melted the moon mountain feelings: into a blank of thought, so good tea drinkers of the Orient, quiet and wise, everyone is a philosopher, all are I'm a thinker.
Being a person like drinking tea, with a slight indifference, a wandering fragrance, to give thoughts to life with more space can be calm and comfortable, calm and unhurried.
Painting: a blank to attract love
A piece of leaf, Picasso will paint it in the sunlight those clear veins, Gauguin will be silent to portray the leaves in the sunshine shadow, Van Gogh will be paranoid with a large block of color to smear the leaves of the life of the sadness and the death of the madness. Whoever it was, they were too specific, too focused on the appearance of those things, in other words, they were too complete.
The Chinese painter, on the other hand, would paint those lonesome mountains on a long roll of rice paper, in a large blank space, and then there is only a lonely leaf, resting helplessly in a large blank space, just like it floats alone in the world. There are poor depictions to show infinite feelings. In this case, the blankness, a simple but profound form, takes up this important task, utilizing the carrier of nothingness but fullness to burden a heavenly, overflowing world of love.
This is the choice of the wise.
Perhaps the human heart is like a painting, sometimes a little bit of blankness to hide a big world, and insight into the world of people, in the epiphany of the blankness of the piece.
People: empty from the heart
The so-called a flower a world a bird a paradise.
The origin of the world is also hidden in that tiny and incomplete piece.
The Buddha showed his disciples the flower, and all of them were puzzled, but only Gautama joined his hands and said, "Amitabha Buddha, I have come to an epiphany. The final successor to the Buddha's great work, this is the wisdom of man, in the incomplete blank, a glimpse of the true meaning of the earth.
People like this, when the tightly guarded a blank, empty in the heart, will be completely free, the meaning of life is also revealed.
When we dance alone in a blank slate, we quietly realize that we are having a complete world.
Review
It's a beautiful piece of writing that reveals the author's talent, and the whole article is somewhat aesthetic. But if the article is limited to this, then the line will lack a soul of life, rare is the center of the article shows a strong tension, will be "the unity of man and heaven" philosophical concepts throughout, the article's gorgeous and exquisite become a style of writing.
2. The moon out of the green clouds, the wind of the book snow
(Beijing 2008 college entrance examination full marks essay)
Dedication to the diligent practice of calligraphy has been five springs and autumns, he walked from the study to the courtyard, and from the courtyard back to the study, the courtyard, I do not know when the wind blew through the spring, the willow branches have been quietly draw out the tender green buds.
He clutched a piece of paper in his hand, on which was a freshly written character "大".
The ink was freshly ground, rounded and black; the character was written with five points of strength and five points of softness, and seemed to be full of the spirit of heaven and earth, injecting all the colors of spring into it.
Dedicated to once again appreciate that character in his hand, finally took a long breath, raised his head and chest, and knocked on his father's door full of spring.
Xi Zhi scrutinized his son's character, and without saying a word, he lifted his pen on the desk, moistened the ink a little, and put a heavy emphasis under the character "大".
Seeing that his father did not make any comment, Xianzhi was puzzled and had to cross the inner hall and knock on his mother's door.
"My son has been practicing calligraphy for several years, and there is only one thing that resembles Xizhi."
.........
Unconsciously, the willow branch grows so long that you can reach out and touch its green color.
The characters were written with six points of strength and four points of softness. The fire in Xianzhi's heart raced upward; he could not bear his father's silence, his mother's fallacious praise; he stayed in his study all day and all night; the nearby pool had long since become a saucepan, and the broken pens alone were piled three feet high.
He believed he had perfected his handwriting this time.
Xi Zhi still didn't say a word, and heaved a little.
Mother continued to marvel, her approval still resting on that point.
......
The geese were returning south, the wind was sweeping away the leaves, and the willows, though green, seemed a little haggard.
The characters are written with four points of robustness and six points of softness. Xianzhi's right hand has a thick layer of calluses, his heart is burning with fire, hanging wrist pen, use all the energy to write this eyebrow, swallowing the mountains and rivers of the "big" word.
Xi Zhi still did not say a word, heavy emphasis on a point.
Mother continued to marvel, her approving gaze still fixed on the dot.
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Snowflakes were flying, the fire was red, and before I knew it another five years had passed.
Dedication of the hand is still waving the brush, but he is no longer writing that "big", he wrote "its shape, as if the shock, like a swimming dragon. ...... as if Ruoxi if the green clouds of the cover of the moon, shaking Ruoxi if the flow of the wind back to the snow ......"
Five points of Thucydides, five points of softness and charm, and there is a lot of dashing and cheerful.
Xi Zhi looked up and scrutinized his seventh son. He remembered that when Xianzhi was practicing calligraphy as a child, he had tugged at his pen from behind and failed to pull it, and at that time he had predicted that "this son would be famous in the future", but he did not expect that his prediction would come true today.
Xi Zhi said thoughtfully, "Good, very good!"
Instead of raising his hand into the air, Xianzhi's hand hung down and served respectfully.
If it had been five years ago, Xianzhi might have triumphantly exclaimed his achievement; now, at last, he understood the distance between himself and calligraphy.
Master Teacher Comment
This article with the help of imagination conceptualization into a text, made up the story of Wang Xizhi implies the meaning of the title, can be said to be open-minded, comprehension ability is very strong, unique imaginative, smooth language, constitutes a unique innovative sense of this article, stand out among the many candidates; a few fragments of the ShunLian together into a piece of thinking, thinking about jumping, full of dynamics.
Language expression appears to be accurate, Wang Xizhi's psychological activities and language portrayal is more successful, it is a rare good paper.
3. Dreams dance in reality
Looking up at the starry sky, that seems to have no flaws in the stars shining in the Milky Way, which brings us unlimited reverie, that does not stain the dust of the starry night sky, how many people fly a beautiful dream! Fly on the stars of the people know, there like the earth, there is dust and slag, so they lost the desire for fantasy. Although we can not indulge in their own fantasies, but also can not let the free flight of thought annihilated in the ruthless reality.
Ruan Ji saw the world's bad luck and the head of a close friend, through drunkenness to escape reality, his life has been in the escape, escape, escape, but ultimately because of a "for Zheng Chong to the King of Jin paper" was spurned. Jikang, on the other hand, lived completely in reality, refused to make any compromise to life, and eventually became extinct with a song "Guangling San". In fact, life by Ruan Ji's drunkenness one step forward is Jikang's "Guangling San", life with Jikang's "Guangling San" one step back is Ruan Ji's drunkenness, the situation of those who have the same path is so different. If the two are to the middle of a step, the fantasy and reality and a little neutralization, perhaps will not end up with the living hidden into the psychedelic, the dead into the dome, only to leave the descendants of endless frustration.
How can we make people who look up to the stars understand the reality, and how can we make people who fly up to the stars keep their dreams?
In that era when everyone complained, Mr. Shen Congwen saw the cruelty of reality, but still wrote that small town in the south of the Yangtze River as a paradise with beautiful mountains, water and people. Reality didn't annihilate his hope for life, and he viewed society and his own life with the most primitive emotions and a heart of gold. He did not indulge in his own fantasies, nor did he let reality numb his mind.
Mr. Zhang Yunhe is also a wise old man, she has experienced great wealth and prosperity in her life, but also experienced the war, ten years of catastrophe, but she will always keep a set of compassionate feelings, a child's heart that never grows old. Her compassionate feelings make her face reality and overcome it, while her childlike heart that never ages makes her never give up the right to fantasize in any difficult situation.
Yasunari Kawabata's shallow sentence, "At four o'clock in the morning, when I saw the begonias, I didn't sleep," instantly touched many hearts, which is the most perfect combination of dream and reality. Let those worldly things fall apart in a moment, so how many in the reality of the numbness of the heart to get the warmth of it.
Face reality, but not committed to reality, maintain fantasy, but not indulge in fantasy, so that the dream in reality to go to a sound dance!
4. Butterfly
(2008 Shandong Volume)
Who does not look forward to the dawn of the bloom of the splendor of a season of glory?
Who doesn't crave the glory of a garden full of flowers in the hedgerow?
Who does not dream of the reed reed's double life and double breath envious of the brimming lake?
Who does not appreciate the butterfly's delicate and light dance, moving melody under the twirls, and who realized the butterfly's anxieties, waiting, near the cocoon of the impatience of mania, as if a leap and give birth to a gentle knife in the cage, however, that can not keep a season of solemn butterfly, in the cocoon of the period did not come to the moment in advance of the scenery of the scenery, the broken wing of the broken wings, no touching of the no touching of the mutilated body of the pregnant a year of I'm not sure I can resist the flamboyance of the season, but I'm not sure I can resist the flamboyance of the season.
I feel a great deal of grief and great sadness for the disabled butterflies. They hunched over the unsound body crawling, want to drink the dew on the grass leaves, weak yellowing grass leaves have no green reflection, the remnants of the butterfly did not feel the coolness of the dew, it is unbearable to bear the weight of this life of the broken branch. Butterfly butterfly, grass and leaves still know that the last wind of the end of spring will end their own childhood, began to enter the youth before this mitzvah, why so dynamic you can not wait a few moments, flash out of their own full of enchanting, and in exchange for this life of great remorse.
You need to wait, the grass needs to wait, waiting to feed the birds need to wait, the greatest spirits need to wait, waiting is not standing still, waiting is not sitting alone, but for life to put on a more beautiful garland, for life to put on a more beautiful coat. Waiting is not a long time to stare, waiting is not late to return to the stupid, in waiting for us to refine the mind, forging a hard wall, to protect their delicate spiritual world. Waiting is not like the flowers in the greenhouse, in the humid and warm flower room at ease, can never go out of the warmth of one degree higher than the palm of the hand. This kind of waiting of the flower of pity is like the stars in the sky, forever living in the Milky Way galaxy, where they live in style, but once they fall, they will be as dull as a waste rock, losing the moistness of the past. Such an empty waiting and that early breakthrough of the cocoon of the butterfly is the same.
Butterflies do not regret? Want to go back to the hard work of the past, although now I think that the hard work of the past is how insufficient. If you go back to that once watery years, I know you are going to hold on to that short season of hesitation. When spring and summer come, when the garden is full of fragrance, the sunshine bathes the earth, the rain cleanses the grass stems, the clouds cover the sun, and the birds sing in company. And butterflies will be the most beautiful dancers in the garden, fluttering until the autumn leaves into piles, your silent soul will still not wither!
The grass is green since spring, waiting for that early spring, mid-spring or twilight spring, let spring light up your colorful life, with the heart's expectations, embracing the true, we will have butterfly change when the beauty of the face, surprised the whole world face.
Master Teacher's Comment
This article is innovative. The whole article reflects the characteristics of beautiful picture, moving language and distinctive literary image.
The picture is beautiful. The author organizes the material around the title "butterfly change", the main object of the image of beauty. "Butterfly" is a traditional aesthetic image in the culture of the Chinese people. From "Zhuangzhou dream of butterflies" to "butterfly dream", to the "Butterfly" in "Liangzhu", its literary imagery is rich and colorful. In the author's pen against the "spring grass from the green", from a point of view interpretation of its meaning, that is, we must wait, patiently waiting for the cocoon period to come, in order to obtain their own beautiful.
The literary image is clear. In this article, the author depicts the mindset and behavior of the "butterfly's anxiety", the result of which is "broken wings" and "residual touch", due to the lack of the necessary waiting, "in exchange for a great regret in this life. The result is "broken wings" and "broken touches", and the lack of the necessary wait "is exchanged for a great regret in this life". It shows that only when we hold on to our true nature, we "will be able to have the butterfly transformed into a beautiful face that will amaze the face of the whole world".
The language is beautiful and moving. Just take the beginning of the article as an example, such as "Who does not look forward to the dawn of the bloom of the splendor of a season of glory? Who is not thirsty for the hedge flower color to win the glory of the garden? Who does not dream of reed reed double life double breath envious of the brimming lake?" The three sentences form a cluster of prose, which both summarizes the whole text and lifts up the following, and at the same time is catchy and poetic to read. (Zhu Qinghe)?
5. A Demoiselle in the Smoke and Rain Letting the River Flat
(2008 Gao Kao Fujian Volume)
The passage of time has washed away the old traces, leaving behind only a slight indifference to the blandness and sadness. By the Pu water, you fluttered away, leaving only the jaws and sighs of the Chu ambassador.
Or like the taste of sweet and sweet, or love also bitter and sweet stimulation, who is like you - Zhuangzi, indifferent to everything, and the Road to become one, only sticking to the light of innocence.
When a kind of beauty, the beauty of people at a loss, but also have to dance with their hands and feet; when a kind of blandness, so light that people have no way to taste, but also have to sigh and cherish, praise and appreciation.
You are willing to be indifferent, happy in the bland, self-satisfaction in the bland, only want to be free in the dream butterfly, only want to hover with the roc floating in the sky and the earth, do not want to be tired of the country, do not want to be involved in the world, you are as sweet as the light and fragrant mineral spring water, give a person to the desperate, give a person to the serenity and tranquillity of a person, give a person to be free of the outside world, I want to touch your lapel, but in the fingertips touch the I want to touch your lapel, but at my fingertips, I touched the clear and clear, cool and soft spring water, this is what it tastes like.
However, I can't get rid of that sweet temptation, can't forget that bitter or sweet flavor, so I have to look at the time when I have no way to go, look at your eyes that are calm as water, crystal clear to the extreme, long and far away, look off the road to the end of the world.
I thought you were lonely, but you told me "gentleman's friendship is as light as water" friendship, Huizi's departure did not change your howl this kind of, it turns out that you have long seen through the life and death, see through the red dust. Why praise your plain, I have long been poor words.
Remembering the past, the prosperous competition. You are still free to swim in the world, penetrate the nature of the infinite. The world is just your subjective product, you even understand the joy of the river fish, the butterfly dance of pleasure, the mantis of the negative, swaying and go, shuttle in the mire, why care about the power of the struggle, who said that you have to bear the weight of the life can not bear.
The dense, the moon can be picked up, you in the wind and night alone in the watch that the moon, so that the white moon will not be lost when people are resting on their laurels - only because you have a plain heart to chase. The world laughed at you crazy, you indifferent eyes but deterred people speechless, suddenly realized that your light spring-like philosophy is so deep, but you have long drifted away.
Only a glimpse of you, but a glimpse of a bland and far-reaching attitude in the world, light, light, never for the domination of all things, I only free in the Maundy outside the cicada shedding drag, I just want to hold the bright moon and long end. A straw raincoat on the river, a piece of onyx.
Teach me how to trace your pace, the beauty of the essence of nothing to do; teach me how to touch your lapel, that plain and transcendent attitude.
This is you, isn't it? Pale as a spring, your paranoid pursuit, the fluttering piece of onyx by the spring, an ethereal song for you.
Master teacher comments
This article adopts the cultural prose writing method, the author through the time and space tunnels, into the historical arena, in the second person tone, and China's representative of ancient Taoism - Zhuang Zi straight talk. First take Zhuang Zi's "indifferent to everything" "would like to be free in the dream of butterflies, only wish to follow the hovering roc floating in the sky and the earth," transcendence of the external world of inertia of thought and sentiment, and their own unwillingness to bland, lonely, and restless, painful inner world as a comparison and It is virtualized into a dramatic scene of seeking advice from Zhuangzi when we have no way out. The absurdity shows the real life pursuit of value orientation exploration, reflecting the contemporary secondary school students on the rich inner feelings and noble character building.?
In addition to the profoundness of the intention of this article, in the line, structure and language and text expression, there are worthy of learning and learning. The author in the road design, clever conversion of space and time, a moment up and down thousands of years, so that their thoughts drifted back to history, and Zhuangzi dialogue, and the exchange of gods and men; a moment to turn the reins of thought, carrying the philosopher Zhuangzi came to the present day, so as to explore the world of people. The language is poetic, with many rhetorical devices and vivid images. For example, "you are just like the sweet, light and fragrant mineral water, giving people a chance to survive, giving people peace and quiet, giving people to transcend the external world", the rhetoric of simile and prose set, highly praised Zhuang Zi's willingness to be indifferent to the essence of the idea of the plain. (Zhu Qinghe)
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