Essay Question
In life, strange things appear all the time, how to face strange things, different people have different attitudes and practices, naturally, the result is often different
Contact with the experience and understanding of life and "strangeness", write an essay.
Contact the experience and understanding of life with the "strange", write an essay, make up your own topic, set your own style, not less than 800 words
A few points of doubt
u 1, the college entrance examination is whether the topic of the examination essay?
o Not necessarily out of the proposition essay is still the most likely but it is possible to test the form of the question of the topic of the essay, or meaning to point to the only clear 2 to the material composition
u 2, leaving the introduction of writing is not out of the question?
o The introduction only plays a role in prompting the essay did not write to the introduction to the prompt part, but there are tightly linked to the topic or the title, are in line with the meaning of the essay
u 3, did not write their own personal experience and understanding, is not off-topic?
o There is no such thing, write out the thesis, as long as it is their own inner thoughts, feelings, even with the help of the ancients to argue, are also in line with
u 4, the title of the self-proposed need to pay attention to what?
o First of all, do not forget to write the title Secondly, the title should reflect the theme to attract the reader again, the title can not be too long
a doubt
o Why do we usually think normally, to write an essay to become "irrational", "crooked" a lot? "A lot of? Out of body?
o Composition is just a textual expression of our daily thinking everyone is doing things to persuade others every day, writing an argumentative essay is that you turn the voice into words to persuade others, but it is a different form, not essentially different So, there is no need to have a fear of composition, do not be born to slice the composition of the correlation between the life of the essay, and then write some nonsense, there is no logic of speech
o Writing
On the writing of thinking: thinking of intention; thinking of argumentation
Breakthrough thinking
I, how to open the thinking of intention?
u 1, clear concept
o Clearly the topic (topic) concept is the premise of opening the mind, otherwise not even a tiny bit of fallacy for some of the more abstract, multi-meaning of the topic, it is best to be able to interpret their own interpretation of the text, refinement
o Strange frustration; strange opportunities; strange thinking; strange predicaments; strange Sudan red, lean meat extract, gutter oil; Strange minds; strange honesty; strange love; strange caution; strange heart ......
o Strange is not equal to indifference
u 2, with the help of the introduction to expand the thinking
u 3, what are some of the other ways we can open our minds?
o When you get an essay question, what do you think first?
o The so-called "add information", "reverse thinking", "dialectical thinking" and so on how to operate? Why can't you think of anything on the test?
n The simplest and most direct: similarity, related associations
o Strangers, unfamiliar things, quotes and sayings about strangers, proverbs, stories, movies, literature
n Opposite associations
o Familiarity, "There is no scenery in a familiar place". --Homeopathic thought - Is there any scenery in unfamiliar places? Why?
o Familiar strangers
n Adding information method (subject-predicate-object-dative-complementary)
o Strange phone calls; strange places (homesickness)
o Treating strangers kindly; not to be indifferent strangers; rejecting prejudice against strangers;
o How to face strangers (timidity, positive face...). ...)
n Dialectical thinking:
o (Thinking in two, i.e., seeing both the good and the bad side of things)
n Counterintuitive thinking:
o A strange hometown; a strange father (strange because of what, and ultimately boils down to familiarity)... ...
II. How can we make our reasoning more convincing?
u Argumentative thinking:
o 1, the logic should be accurate
o 2, the theme should be clear
o 3, the language should be dialectical
o 4, horizontal and vertical comparison
o 5, taboos:
o Taboo:
o Taboo after the example a "visible", no analysis. "
o Taboo of stealing the theme;
o Taboo of constant repetition, dry and tasteless;
o Taboo of trite examples;
o Taboo of childish language
Three, from the existence of the problem of reexamining the loopholes in our thinking
u 1, the review of the topic is not accurate enough
o The original meaning of "strange" is: rusty, unfamiliar but many students on the "strange" understanding is not accurate enough to grasp the "strange" the most essential connotation, all have not seen, have not met have things are categorized as "strange" category, so that the "strange" as a big basket, what are loaded into the article selection is not typical, in fact, the root cause of the "strange" examination of the topic Inaccurate
o "strange" word implied meaning should be relative to the "familiar" strange, for example: with the life of the change of circumstances, career change and faced with the unfamiliar environment; life encountered by strange people; unknown fields ...... These unfamiliar things are to be understood, adapted, explored, changed, and finally become unfamiliar from unfamiliar
o Many students have not pushed the potential meaning of the word "unfamiliar", so that all things that have nothing to do with them are categorized as "unfamiliar".
o There are also some serious deviations from the theme of the essay, for example: a random list of characters (moving Chinese characters), write from that person to learn some kind of quality; with the unfamiliar close to you and me ......
u 2.
o First of all, it is reflected in the point of view of the refinement is not accurate enough, the overall direction of this article should be written to treat the unfamiliar attitudes, practices, for example: adaptation, communication, courage, curiosity, exploration ...... but many candidates write is unremitting, perseverance, tolerance, self-confidence, optimism. ...... Such intention is broad, general, lack of relevance, in fact, has wandered away from the topic
o Secondly, it is reflected in the composition of the composition of the intention of the angle is more or less the same, not many personalized and profound intention
o In addition, the depth of the point of view of the excavation is not enough, did not write the treatment of the "strange".
o In addition, the depth of the point of view is not enough to dig, did not write a treatment of the "strange" results, meaning, stay on the surface of the list of facts
u 3, the angle of intention is not concentrated
o intention of multi-angle, "strange" object is too general, the environment, the person, the knowledge of an article from multiple angles, no
o Example 1, sub-argument 1: In the face of strangers, we must hold the attitude of helpfulness;
o Sub-argument 2: In the face of strange chains, we must hold the attitude of perseverance;
o Sub-argument 3: In the face of strange fashions, we must hold the attitude of taste
o Example 2, sub-argument 1: Treating strangers in a humble manner;
o Example 2, sub-argument 3: In the face of strange fashions, we must hold the attitude of taste
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o sub-point 2: treat strangers with an attitude of difference;
o sub-point 3: treat strangers with deep love
u 4, the idea is not rigorous enough
o The template "three paragraph" essay is greatly reduced this time, a few simple superimposition of material composition is also a lot less. Composition is also a lot less, but the lack of strict logic between paragraphs and paragraphs, not rigorous enough, some of the composition of the ideas are more chaotic, so that the teacher can see the assessment is very difficult
u 5, the material is the same or atypical
o material to follow the phenomenon of the more serious, for example: Thomas Edison, Liu Wei, Liu Xiang, Sima Qian, Su Shi, Tao Yuanming, Helen Keller, LinShuHao, WuJuPing, Alimu, ChenXianMei, Xiaoyueyue ...... impressive, novel material is not much
o In addition, the material is not typical, for example, write Sima Qian suffered a blow to the face of the unfamiliar, this phenomenon is mainly related to the examination of the topic is not allowed to
u 6, sets of work
n (1) the whole text of the set of work
o Example 1 just The beginning and end of the point to the "strange", the body of the part completely unrelated to the "strange", no point, the subject
o Example 2 when the disaster came, to use the strength of perseverance to fight against it;
o When the happiness comes, to face it with a calm attitude;
o When the happiness comes, to face it with a calm attitude.
o When success comes, accept it with a normal heart
n (2) Sub-argument sets
o Example 1 Frustration is a kind of strange;
o Success is a kind of strange;
o The road of life is a kind of strange
o Example 2 To treat the strange, have courage
o To treat the strange, be Persistence;
o Treat strangers, be optimistic
1 No. 1 (57 points)
A hidden door
Ten thousand years ago, the primitive forest lightning knocked down the trees and gave birth to a blazing fire human ancestors apes sat and watched for a long time, and eventually went up and tried, burned, and tried again and again... ...Eventually, human beings understood and mastered the fire
Fire for the primitive man is completely foreign, and ultimately the two can be close and familiar because, unfamiliarity does not mean that a wall of determination, but only a hidden door
Faced with the strange things this hidden door, at least to pass on to the ancestors of mankind, sit and watch the flames thinking about a sense of curiosity! "Curiosity is a philosopher must have the most qualities" unfamiliar things with unseen angles standing on the plains of knowledge, if there is no trace of curiosity, turn a blind eye, the door in front of you and do not know, or see the door is hidden but no curiosity about things behind the door of the spirit of discovery, all the future is laughter and empty talk Lu Yu since his birth that is, Zen masters adopted, but the strange world outside the door of the Buddha's curiosity from time to time. He was curious about the strange world outside the Buddha's door, he was curious about the strange books in the hands of private students; curious about the strange attire of the Wazi Hooker he saw the hidden door, curious about what a strange world after the period when the "Tea Sutra" came out, when Lu Yu became synonymous with the saint of tea, he or he was also secretly grateful, fortunately, there was a curiosity about the unfamiliarity of the original, or else the Buddha's door how can be out of so much knowledge of the tea saints?
Curious about the hidden door is not enough, but also the same ancestors that dare to go up to the courage of the empty look at the door of a lifetime, curious about the strange side of a lifetime, holding the "wall swing wall outside the road" fantasy giggle, why not drum up the courage to go up and push open the hidden door? In the face of an unfamiliar field of science, Mendel summoned the courage to take the first step of the law of heredity; Darwin summoned the courage to say goodbye to his hometown, with the sailor set sail on the unknown journey; Levon Hook summoned the courage to use more than a dozen years of time to polish the lenses, and enter the strange world of microorganisms unfamiliar and not scary, the hidden door does not have a threatening strength, but the courage to stride towards the unfamiliar is invaluable, and thus there is also the greatness and sadness of Tolstoy. The greatness and sadness of Tolstoy, hesitation of a lifetime, and ultimately at the end of his life pushed open the hidden door between the classes, in his sympathy for a lifetime of strange people in the world of the lower classes to close the eyes of the deep and bleak
The hidden door was pushed open, the unfamiliar world unfolded in front of you, can you still be like the ancestors in general, try, and then try again, until the defense (discernment) of the good and bad, so that the unfamiliar things for their own use? Many people, however, can not heroin, ecstasy ...... drugs of the strange world was opened, how many young people deep into it, can not be extricated? Summon the courage to push open the bribe this hidden door, how many once good officials can not recognize the good and bad and deep into it, and ultimately degenerate? Strange things are good and bad, strange world of the unknown, can be curious, the courage to explore, but also necessary to identify the good and bad, for their own use, the door can be closed, shallow taste can be withdrawn, good and evil must be identified clearly test, and then test, until the identification of the good and bad, the strange world, everything depends on you
Boundless understanding of the square stood on a hidden door, find it, doubt it, push open the hidden door, there is a completely strange world. There is a completely strange world over there
Your world
Review
This article uses the figurative expression of pushing open the hidden door and entering the strange world throughout the whole text, supplemented by the words of the originator of mankind, "Trying, trying again ...... "Philosophy contained in a concise and accurate interpretation of the "how to enter a strange world" the center of the article main body of the three paragraphs, involving "curiosity", "courage ", "recognize the good and bad" to the topic and well thought out article argumentative, persuasive, detailed treatment of the appropriate language flaws, such as "unfamiliar does not represent a wall of determination, but only separated by a hidden door", "empty look at the door of a lifetime, curious about the strange side of a lifetime", "the boundless square of knowledge stands a hidden door" such as condensed philosophical verse
Scoring content 24, expression 23, development 10, total score 57
No. 2 (55 points)
Facing the unfamiliar
"Seeing the fisherman, he was frightened and asked where he had come from." The people in the Peach Orchard chose to be frightened in the face of the unfamiliar; "Laughing at the question of where the guest came from," the children playing in the village chose to be relaxed in the face of the unfamiliar. How about you? What kind of attitude will you take to deal with the strangeness that appears in your life from time to time?
Out of human nature, you will probably flee in fear, burying your head in the comfort of their own familiar world such as the long frustration, chu maniac in the collapse of the world to hide in the mountains to go back to the old days, such as Cao Cao in the river locks even the ship to create the illusion of land, such as Zhang Eileen in the changing winds and clouds at the time of the isolated corner of the writing of the capitalist love of the city ...... in the The vagaries of the world only familiar to bring their own sense of security, so that they can rely on the inertia of the past to live on, people are always reluctant to change, because the strange implies unknown dangers their choices are not wrong, just confined to the familiar world, life can not be renewed, can not be broadened only to be greedy for a stable life, there will not be a colorful colorful
Then, why not learn from Sam Mao! The yellow sands rolling in the sky, the majesty of the desert, the long river sunset round the distant, the sound of camel bells, the Sahara's ruggedness for the beautiful island born in her is how unfamiliar! The local natives plundered the 10-year-old bride, borrowing things always smiling and relying on not return, their barbarism and how much she had brought the shock to the well-read and well-mannered! However, she looked fondly at the strange land, the whole heart to her, the white camel skull has become her precious treasure, simple villagers have any disease to find her healing, once sentimental woman will be transformed into a tough camel thorns, and the desert was once a stranger so complementary to her acceptance of the strange, adapt to and then into, to become a marvelous woman to marvel at, admire and envy of the sensitivity of the woman delicate and The experience of facing the unfamiliar has given her life an extra dimension, allowing her to travel in the vastness of the sky without any constraints The unfamiliar is a door to a new world, step out bravely and God will give you back a rich life
However, there is another realm on top of this one, and that is to respond to all changes in the dashing of the "no change", not to be bound by the rules of the desert. "It's not about sticking to the familiar and not knowing how to adapt, but about penetrating the unfamiliar and familiar with the **** nature, with the ordinary law of the world, the world of change, a good grasp of the situation and ease of use Deng Ya-ping retired from practicing English, from scratch into the world of another language However, she said: "I memorized every word and imagined that I snapped a wicket! "She overcame her physical deficiencies with the perseverance of the year, climbed the mountain of English, the accumulation of little by little, never give up the perseverance, this is to overcome the difficult academic Deng Yaping insisted on this idea, cited a three, in front of the unfamiliar field of invincible now stand on the podium of the Olympic Committee of the her, how calm and relaxed! If you can find the familiarity that lurks behind the unfamiliarity, you can easily adapt to it
Murong said, "Life is a flowing river," and how many unfamiliar shoals and eddies there are! Let us face the unfamiliar with a calm heart, embrace the unfamiliar with a happy heart, and write a dashing chapter of life!
Review
The chapter and verse of the thesis is one of the highlights of this article, the beginning of the classic scenarios introduced from the beginning to cause thinking; the end of the quotes, aphorisms call for the conclusion of the main body of the layered approach, the first pointed out that in the face of the unfamiliar, people may out of nature, choose to escape; the second pointed out that not to "open their arms to embrace the unfamiliar world, to broaden the life of the new situation"; the end pointed out that the more comfortable face the unfamiliar, people may out of nature, choose to escape. Situation"; the end pointed out that a higher level of realm is to "unchanged to meet all changes" to face the unfamiliar the whole text shows the thinking about life language expression also has brightness, the second paragraph of the prose examples, clear and rich; the third paragraph of the language with a rich sense of the situation to narrate the arguments, infectious throughout the writing beautiful, but the main body of the third level of clarity of expression of ideas can also be used. The clarity of the presentation of the ideas can be strengthened, the implications of the argument than the last two layers
Scoring content 22, expression 23, development 10, total score of 55
Essay No. 3 (52 points)
Be the first to eat crabs
How were crabs discovered in the first place? How did it become a delicacy for humans? The first person to meet a crab must be fearful and curious about this strange creature, while the first person to eat it is indeed remarkable. In the face of the world's strangeness and the unknown, are you willing to try it? As Mr. Lu Xun said, be the first to eat crabs!
"I'm sure some people have eaten spiders before, but they're not good," said Mr. Lu Xun, who went on to say, "Do you dare to eat spiders? I'm afraid that most people will answer "not dare" If you are afraid of every unfamiliar thing, how can you explore it y and become familiar with it?
If you're afraid to eat a spider, I'm afraid you'll be mistaken for a dragon, and I'm afraid you'll be mistaken for a caterpillar, and I'm afraid you'll be mistaken for a dragon! In "Qian Zhi Donkey", a lion was scared in front of a donkey because he had never seen one before, isn't it ridiculous? And then the lion was not afraid of the donkey, and returned to its mighty form had heard that when the tomato was discovered, it was regarded as a highly poisonous "wolf fruit", whose delicious flavor has been unknown until one person finally overcame his inner fear and bravely tasted a bite of it, the fruit was able to get rid of the infamy of unfamiliar things, overcoming the fear of his heart, right? Dare to taste the fresh, will harvest unexpected surprises such as the writer Zhang Xiaofeng said: "the gift of life, the original is only given to those who are willing to taste"
Unfortunately, there are also people who are not afraid of unfamiliar things themselves, but others fear of the feelings of the fabrication of an "impossible! "Go your own way" spirit is admired by the same face of unfamiliar e-commerce, other people laugh at Ma Yun's fight, but Ma Yun is committed to this unknown field, and ultimately to Alibaba Kingdom to drive the e-commerce swept the tide of the world we may not be able to stand the pressure of other people's evaluation, but the face of the unfamiliar things, before no one dares to taste. No one dares to taste before, all the evaluation and theory can only be regarded as a guess only when you can withstand the eyes of the common questioning, you may be able to verify all the conjecture
The world of strange things is certainly more, but there are always people who can not restrain the curiosity of the heart and go to find out in the end Since this is the case, why do not we become the "first to eat crabs people! "The first time I've seen this, I've seen the first time I've seen the first thing I've seen. Maybe we can not only discover the freshness of "crabs", but also change the world and cause a trend
Review
The article's center is clear, the title is loud and powerful author is good at analyzing and reasoning, especially "Unfortunately, there are also people who are not afraid of unfamiliar things themselves, but others who are not afraid of the strange things themselves. Fear of a "impossible" net, trapped their own hands, legs," a paragraph to further analyze the deeper causes of fear of the unfamiliar, the article reflects a clear hierarchy of ideas the full text of the argument is appropriate, but the degree of richness is not enough, the depth of the shallow, the content of the slightly thin such as the third paragraph Write eat tomatoes content and eat crabs repeat
Scoring content 21, expression 22, development 9, total score of 52
No. 4 essay (48 points)
Whisk away the dust of indifference
Strange as a bright red rose, the surface of the thorns, so that you dare not easily to touch it, but the beauty of its mesmerizing many people are reluctant to touch the unfamiliar, but when you brush off the dust of indifference, the dust of indifference will not be able to touch it. But when you brush off the dust of indifference to contact it, but there are unexpected gains, therefore, we should abandon indifference, the courage to contact new things
With the way of love to reject indifference, so that the seeds of warmth spread all over the human world "Xiaoyueyue" event after the report, immediately aroused a high degree of concern in all walks of life if the people who passed by at the time, can be the If the people passing by at that time, can dig out the love of the heart, rather than indifference to walk by, a life may be saved because the victim has nothing to do with us, we can find a reasonable explanation for our indifference so that they put themselves at risk? Indifference is not a lack of love, love in the depths of everyone's heart, but because too long to show an attitude of indifference, indifference to cover up the letter in our hearts of love we should look for back to that hidden in the heart of the love, and only in this way, indifference to be disappeared
With the warmth of the way to reject the indifference, friendly and mutual aid to the spread of virtues Wuhan City, not long ago, there was a bicycle theft, the victim is a Japanese tourist, the tourist through a Japanese tourist, the victim is a Japanese tourist, the victim is a Japanese tourist, the victim is a Japanese tourist, the victim is a Japanese tourist. is a Japanese tourist, the tourist through the police to seek help, and netizens through the microblogging of each other to help the tourists eventually bicycle to retrieve, the case although it seems insignificant, but the people of Wuhan through the microblogging of the crazy forwarding of this behavior, but from the side of the citizens of the enthusiasm of the heart, perhaps many people learned that the victim is a Japanese tourist, will shout: "I don't know what you're talking about," he said. "I don't know what you're talking about," he said. "I don't know what you're talking about," he said, "I don't know what you're talking about," he said.
With a cautious attitude to deal with unfamiliar things, to help others against being blackmailed, this kind of incident now made a fuss, people sigh: "good intentions to help it seems that it should also be implemented under the premise of prudence" Is it necessary to take out a cell phone to shoot the whole process to prevent being blackmailed when we want to help others? Perhaps not, but cautious thinking is essential, therefore, cautious, in order to minimize the harm caused by strange events
Indifference is like a merciless carving knife, constantly make our hearts doubly battered let us look for that true self, refuse to indifference, with the warmth of others to put an end to the indifference
Comments: This article closely linked " Strange", put forward the face of "strange" should have the practice, the material combined with reality, a sense of the times analysis is also more thorough language expression is clear and fluent, but the lack of literary grace
Rating: 22206
5 No. (46 points)
Beat the strange
Beat the strange
In the life of the world, the world is not the same as the world's most important thing. p>
Life, any unfamiliar things will happen around us, get the math paper after I always keep trembling, only because I am afraid of those strange math problems and afraid of this, I always work hard to learn math, and strive to get a good grade, just like them
I firmly believe that with hard work can beat the strange problems, and ultimately achieve success
He is not afraid of strange history grades all the way to the top of the list of the most important things in the history of the world. Not afraid of the unfamiliar history score of the department's first genius to give up the liberal arts to choose his very strange science to study Mr. Qian Weichang this bold decision to make many tutors are sorry and do not understand the unfamiliar physics problems in front of him when he trembled like I did it? But I do not know even if the trembling is also a moment, he will lift the pen desperately there calculations, he has to go through their own unremitting efforts to overcome these unfamiliar questions, he firmly believe that with their own efforts to defeat the strange, and ultimately succeed in his defeat of the strange spirit worthy of our learning, worthy of our experience
He is also not afraid of the strange was originally a high jumper on the field of sports, suddenly When you turn to the project of hurdles, Liu Xiang, you are how uncomfortable ah? The unfamiliar hurdles program how do you treat? Just imagine you in the track and field in the sweat of the body will not be able to help but marvel at your persistence and hard work when teammates rest you are still facing those unfamiliar hurdles keep practicing, only because you firmly believe that you can use their own strength to defeat these strange, and ultimately achieve brilliant success your defeat of the spirit of the unfamiliar y convinced all the people in China you will be proud of you, learn your kind of spirit to defeat the unfamiliar, only because you can defeat the spirit of the unfamiliar. beat the unfamiliar spirit, just because you are an example of their success
She is also more unafraid of the unfamiliar early twenties to come to a strange country, with their own sweat and hard work in this piece of land in South Korea to leave a little bit of their own traces of Song Xi, this sunny girl with their own hard work and perseverance to overcome the unfamiliar language and habits of life, she has long become a good sister in the eyes of her teammates, will do a good job cooking good! Mom she has been living in South Korea with the attitude of not fearing the strange, just because she has the kind of spirit to defeat the strange, so that all the fans only remember her smile, we will all pity her that way she is our role model, her kind of spirit to defeat the strange y rooted in my heart
In fact, the strange is not scary, the valuable thing is that you look at the attitude of it, just like they do not fear the strange, vowing to Defeat the spirit of the strange planted in our hearts, then success is really not far from us
Rating: 1920746
Comments: This article on the understanding of the strange is accurate, the point of view is clear, "do not fear the strange, with the effort to defeat the strange," the idea is clear, the selected material is more typical but the shortcomings are the material analysis is not deep enough to penetrate. The analysis of the material is not deep enough, did not dig out the face of strange things how to overcome the problem, so that the process of strange into not strange In addition, the whole text does not reflect the author's deep understanding of the strange, the content of the material to analyze the main, did not highlight the author's own thinking, the lack of depth
6th (44 points)
Strangeness
The people of every thing is to have first encounter yet for the first time, we are often unfamiliar with what we see in front of us However, without the process of unfamiliarity, how can it be familiarized?
In life, our first encounter with the first feeling of things are unfamiliar but behind the unfamiliarity, there are often different attitudes some are curious, some are afraid, and some have been determined to try to face the unfamiliar things of different attitudes to get the results are divided into two factions, so we have to be optimistic, natural attitude to face the unfamiliar
With good Nest, but do not know that they have not yet learned to fly after countless failures, curious about strange things birds have slowly familiarized themselves with the world, know how to eclipse, how to avoid natural enemies they have stepped into the journey of life, stepped out of the first step of success, and those timid young birds, can only be in the back of their brothers and sisters, "cuckoo! "
Optimism in the face of life's unfamiliar things will make people's lives more exciting
Every one of us who knows Helen Keller's story would think she was unfortunate, but she felt lucky to have a serious illness at a young age that caused Helen to lose her sight and her hearing, but luckily, she met a wonderful tutor and became familiar with the world under the tutor's patience. The teacher's patience to familiarize with things that were unfamiliar to the teacher through the physical teaching, Helen with an optimistic attitude to learn every kind of thing in the world, through continuous efforts, Helen recognized this colorful world she began to write works, and speeches around the world, and eventually became an influential writer optimism in the face of unfamiliar things, is Helen's success of the great magic weapon for the reason that this is also the case Helen showed her wonderful life
We can't retreat in the face of unfamiliar things
We are now sitting in the examination room, a few years later, we will have to devote ourselves to the society, we just started to face life alone, we will feel unfamiliar with a lot of things, for example, looking for a job. But when we face the unfamiliar things, we can't be full of fear of it, and we don't even have to do it without having the idea of retreating, if this is the case, we will never have a chance to get a job. If this is the case, we will never be able to achieve great things in the face of unfamiliar things, we have to be brave to move forward even if it is wrong, it can also be a warning, to avoid the future continue to be wrong only in the face of unfamiliar things do not retreat, we can be successful
Facing the unfamiliar things, the result of how it is, is often under our own control, so we have to be optimistic, natural attitude to face
Commentary: This article is more accurate understanding of the word "strange", can be argued from three aspects must be optimistic, natural attitude to strange things, there are natural phenomena, there are typical people, there are social phenomena, but this paper's point of view is not very clear, the certification of the lack of rigor, not enough to express the smoothness of this article rated as a second class of 44 points: content 19 form 18 development 7
This article is a good example of how we should be optimistic, natural attitude to strange things. p>
Essay No. 7 (43 points)
Don't be afraid of the unfamiliar
How many unfamiliar things have we faced in our lives to this day? From croaking to opening your eyes to the world, this colorful world is unfamiliar; from stepping into the classroom to see people of similar age, and now the people who are with you were also unfamiliar
Familiar things will become familiar one day, so don't panic, bravely face the unfamiliar
From the moment she was born, she was a deaf and mute and blind child
She couldn't see or hear where she was, she couldn't hear, she couldn't hear. She couldn't see or hear the world she was living in, and she became irritated by the fear of strangers. Later, she met her gentle and patient teacher, who took Helen Keller to the garden and showed her the world. When the water gently flowed through Helen's hands, and when Helen recognized water through the teacher's form of writing words on her hands, she felt immense joy at recognizing unfamiliar things, and she was always happy to recognize new things time and time again. Helen was always happy, she was not afraid to touch new things, on the contrary, she longed to know more things so that she could realize the beauty of the world
We will always feel the fear of the unknown to the unfamiliar things, because of the fear of us become annoyed if we choose to be far away from the unfamiliar because of the fear, we will lose the opportunity to know it, lose the opportunity to feel its beauty, and we will not be able to know it, and we will not be able to feel its beauty. If the fear of the distant, how can we see a broader and more colorful future
We are all familiar from the strange to the familiar, are not afraid to face the unfamiliar, only step by step to get mature, to get the development of how Magellan fear of the unfamiliar road ahead, there is how to find that the earth is round it? If Einstein was afraid of space and time, afraid of everything that he did not understand, how could he get the theory of relativity?
Don't be afraid of the unfamiliar, accept it, you will feel the special features of the unfamiliar; accept it, you will know that the past life of the past world is not perfect, you will drum up the courage to go after the distant future. To pursue the far we set sail from the strange to the other end of the familiar