1. revise with revision symbols (for inconsistencies, repetitions of phrases, incorrect order of phrases, wrong words, reverse order of phrases, incorrect application of related words, and incorrect use of words
1 Diseased sentences are sentences with incomplete structure, unclear and unclear expression of meaning, and errors. The purpose of training in revising sick sentences is to recognize the mistakes that are easy to make when writing sentences, so that you can write fewer and no sick sentences, and express the meaning clearly and fluently.
The common sick sentences in this grade are as follows:
(1) Component mutilation: this kind of sentence lacks the necessary components and the meaning is incomplete. For example, "Sing loudly." Students know that a sentence can generally be divided into two parts, the first part says "who" or "what", and the second part says "what", "what" or "how", these two parts are the basic components of the sentence, one without the other.
(2) repetition of meaning: this sentence is the front of a meaning, and then repeat it again, the meaning is repeated. For example, "I corrected the incorrect misspelling." Here, "incorrect" and "misspelling" mean the same thing, and using them together makes them repetitive and redundant.
(3) improper use of words: this kind of sentence is due to a poor understanding of the meaning of the words, the use of the wrong near-synonyms, resulting in the words do not mean, in violation of the laws of sentence structure. For example, "The students enthusiastically welcomed the new teacher." The word "enthusiastic" means enthusiastic, interested, and willing to do one's best, and it is obviously inappropriate to use it in front of "welcome".
(4) Reversed word order: word order is the order in which words are arranged in a sentence, and this order reflects the position of the words in the structure of the sentence. Each word has its specific position in the language structure, leaving its own position, it is guilty of improper word order. For example, "This year's wheat harvest is expected to grow well." Wheat grows favorably, in order to harvest in the hope, the word order reversed is not in line with the objective law.
2. Steps for revising sick sentences.
(1) read the original sentence to clarify the meaning. First of all, you should read the sentence carefully and figure out the main meaning it wants to express.
(2) Find the cause of the disease and determine the disease. Find out the cause of the sick sentence around the main meaning of the sentence and figure out which type of sick sentence it belongs to.
(3) To correct the cause of the disease, revise the sentence. After figuring out the cause of the disease, you have to think of what to delete, what to add, and what to replace for the problem of the sentence, and then do your hands to change the sentence.
(4) Double-check and complete the exercise. Read the revised sentences to see if they are correct and if they retain the original meaning of the sentences.
3. Methods of revising sick sentences.
(1) The main thing in revising a sentence with mutilated components is to understand which part is missing. For example, "Let out a song." This sentence is missing the basic component "who", so the sentence expresses the meaning is not clear, the way to modify is to fill in this part, can be changed to: "The students sang loudly."
(2)The main thing is to understand which part of the meaning is repeated redundantly. For example, "I corrected the incorrect misspelling." Obviously "incorrect" repeats the meaning of "misspelled", the way to modify the "incorrect" or "misspelled" is to remove one, keep the other. The way to change it is to remove one of the "incorrect" or "misspelled" and keep the other one, which becomes: "I corrected the incorrect word." Or: "I corrected the misspelled word."
(3) The main thing in revising a sentence with incorrect words is to find out which word is used incorrectly and the nature of the error (wrong near-synonyms, improper use of scope, improper word combinations). For example, "Xiaogang loves time very much." "爱护" means: cherish and protect, used in front of the "time" is not appropriate, can be changed to "爱惜" (meaning because of the importance of not spoiling), become: "Xiaogang cherishes time very much."
(4) Revise the sentences with the word order reversed, the main thing is to find out which word is in the wrong place, such as: "We discussed and listened to the principal's report." After reading the sentence, you can find that discussing the report and then listening to the report is not in the order of things, it must be listening to the report and then discussing the report, which becomes: "We listened to and discussed the principal's report
Teaching Primary School Students to Modify Sentences
Modifying Sentences is an important element of sentence practice, and it is also a frequently occurring problem in the language test paper. By revising sick sentences, it can make us realize what is a correct sentence and what is a wrong sentence. In this way, not only can we improve our ability to analyze and judge, but also lay a good foundation for revising our own compositions.
The key to modifying sick sentences is to find out the cause of the disease, to find the cause of the disease, in order to "prescribe the right medicine". There are several common sentence problems of primary school students: ① incomplete sentences; ② inappropriate collocation; ③ confusing word order; ④ inconsistency; ⑤ repetitive and verbose; ⑥ irrationality and so on.
Modify sick sentences to grasp a principle: both to change through, but also to try not to change the original meaning. Generally speaking, the revision of sick sentences can be divided into four steps: ① read the original sentence; ② analyze the cause of the disease; ③ pen modification, ④ change after the check. There are six ways to modify sick sentences.
1 Supplementary components method
Supplementary components method, that is, to the incomplete sentence to add the necessary components, so that the sentence is written complete method. Incomplete sentences are mainly missing the main components, i.e. subject, predicate and object. What exactly is missing needs to be carefully analyzed. Usually, the subject is positioned in the front, the predicate in the center, and the object in the back (without an object, the predicate is in the back). Because the sentence is not only the main component composition, there are certain additional components, so the first to find the main component, and then do what is missing to fill in what.
Example: we prepare for the National Day this year.
According to the requirements of the method of additional components, to change the incomplete sentence first to find out the main components, and then see what is missing, and fill in the appropriate ones. By analyzing this example sentence, there are subject and predicate, and "prepare" is a verb acting as a predicate component, "prepare" what? Lack of object component account, can be supplemented with "wonderful program" and so on.
2 Adjustment with the method
Adjustment with the method, that is, to the words with the wrong words to adjust the words, so that the sentence is written in a smooth way. Certain words can't be matched with each other in meaning, or are not in accordance with the language habit, if they are matched, they will cause a sick sentence. Frequently occurring sick sentences are: subject and predicate do not go well together, verb and object do not go well together. When revising, it is usually enough to adjust one word. Which one should be adjusted depends on the content.
Example: At the gala, Li Li sang a beautiful song.
In this example sentence, the words "singing" and "singing voice" do not go together. What was sung was just the song, and singing refers to the sound of a song, just like the sound of a bird or a machine. This is the verb and object collocation improper sentence, modify, "singing" replaced by "songs", etc. can be.
3 Rationalize the word order method
Rationalize the word order method, that is, to the word order confusion of the sentence to rationalize the word order, so that the sentence becomes smooth method. In most cases, the word order of a sentence is fixed. When the word order changes, the meaning of the sentence will change, and even cause speech defects. Therefore, the order of the words must be in accordance with the usual language habits, can not be arbitrarily reversed.
Example, the bird's melodious song was intoxicated by him.
Reading this sentence, we feel that the meaning is unclear. If "song" is the subject, it doesn't make sense to say that the song was intoxicated by him. Then, who should be "intoxicated"? Analyzing the meaning of the sentence, it should be "he". What intoxicated him? Of course, it was "the beautiful song of the birds". Therefore, the whole sentence should read: he was intoxicated by the birds' beautiful song.
4 Unraveling Contradictions
Unraveling contradictions refers to the method of unraveling the contradictions in a sentence to unify the meaning of a sentence before and after it is expressed. A sentence should be consistent with the preamble and the postamble, and with the facts. Otherwise, there will be inconsistency and factual inconsistency. According to the analysis, the emergence of this kind of speech defects is mainly the result of not observing things carefully and not thinking carefully.
Example: The whole class went to the movies, and Zhang Jun was the only one who remained in the classroom to do his homework.
The first half of this sentence says that "the whole class" went to the movie, but the second half says that "Zhang Jun" stayed in the classroom. The first half of the sentence says "the whole class" went, but the second half says "Zhang Jun" stayed in the classroom. Perhaps the person who wrote this sentence was consciously trying to emphasize the fact that "Zhang Jun" did not go, but in any case, the contradiction in the sentence exists objectively. If it is really for the sake of emphasis, we might as well correct it this way: the rest of the class went to the movies, and Zhang Jun was the only one who stayed in the classroom to do his homework.
5 Deletion and Simplification Method
The deletion and simplification method refers to the method of decongesting sick sentences with repetitive meanings or redundant components, so as to make the sentences concise and clear. Repetition is mostly caused by the deliberate piling up of words. The words used in the sentence are repeated, giving the impression that it is wordy, like a snake, superfluous. When revising, just choose one of the repetitive parts.
Example, I can't help but laugh out loud.
The word "can't help" in the example sentence means to be unable to stop, so it is repetitive when it is put in the same sentence as "can't help". The sentence could read: I couldn't help laughing out loud.
6 Reasonableness
Reasonableness refers to the method of reconceptualizing a sentence that doesn't make sense, so that it makes sense. It is also called logical confusion, which is caused by insufficient knowledge of the thing itself. When revising such sentences, we must first understand the thing and grasp its essence, that is, the re-knowledge of our method, and then make the sentence clear.
Example, the garden is planted with tomatoes, watermelons, cucumbers, lentils, eggplants, apples and other kinds of vegetables.
The sentence emphasizes that the list is a variety of vegetables. What are vegetables? Watermelon and apples? These two things are, in fact, in the fruit category, and it would not make sense to put them in the vegetable category. When revising, you can either remove the two things or keep them (as needed). A sentence using the latter modification would read: The field is planted with a variety of vegetables such as tomatoes, lentils, cucumbers, eggplants, and watermelons and apples.
Exercises in Revising Sentences for Primary School Students
1. The hall was filled with spectators watching the show.
2. The campus was full of white, red, yellow and other colorful flowers.
3. I stood on the playground and looked carefully at the students practicing their bodies.
4. Our class won the first place in the competition, and the joy of victory appeared in everyone's heart.
5. At the group discussion, everyone spoke fiercely.
6, said in unison, "In favor!"
7, Under the teacher's education, he clarified his attitude to study.
8, I love to read extracurricular books such as "Little Bee", "Little Stream" and "Learning Newspaper for Primary School Students"
9, After the reform and opening up, people's lives are getting richer and richer.
10. The spring scenery is very beautiful to me.
11. The teacher asked the students to make clear the purpose of study and learning attitude.
12, You must must be serious and responsible.
13, Mr. Li was very strict with us in class.
14, after the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have significantly improved.
15, When I handed over the cup of tea, my mother's face showed a pleasant mood.
16. Xiao Ming's sister has been recognized as a "good student" for three years in a row.
17. We came to the park to see the beautiful scene.
19. His language homework is basically all finished.
20, Something that happened just over two years ago came to my mind.
23, I'm sure it's probably going to snow tomorrow.
24, Everyone must be good at hygiene.
25, The river looked whiter as it was reflected in the clouds.
26, The fall of Fragrant Hill is a desirable place.
27, The museum displays newly unearthed artifacts from three thousand years ago.
28, this semester is the last year of my elementary school learning life.
29. Grandpa often tells us interesting stories about the past.
30、Brother likes playing basketball and soccer most.
31、The Spring Festival, which I hope for day and night, has finally come.
32、After the reform and opening up, China's economic construction has been carried out rapidly.
33, We have to develop a good way of thinking while reading.
34, we have to play the glorious tradition of the old generation of revolutionaries.
35、It is my duty today, and I cleaned the classroom cleanly and neatly.
36, I took my pen, ruler, eraser and stationery to the teaching competition.
37, He did all the all the exercises assigned by the teacher.
38, Every time the teacher asks a question he is always the first to speak first.
39, we have to develop a love of cleanliness and hygiene from childhood.
40, our school asked the PLA uncle often make a report.
41, We must build the great task of the four modernizations.
42, the blind girl saw someone come in, and quickly stood up to give up her seat.
43. It is a bad style for people to say and do things differently.
44, Wang Lei's action of sacrificing himself to save his life touched the people around him.
45, Despite the bad weather, we always arrive at school on time.
46, the comedy program began, a smiling face gazed at the stage.
47, I am determined to try to overcome the bad bad habits in learning.
48. Mr. Liu was honored to be named "special teacher".
49. She was wearing a white scarf and a red dress.
50, Spitting is an uncivilized habit.
Modify Sentences Exercises and Answers
1. It was a happy, pleasant and joyful class meeting. 修改：去掉 "愉快、欢乐"
2、The teacher suddenly slowed down gradually. Modify: remove "gradually" or "suddenly"
3. After this outing, the investigation was very inspiring to everyone. Modify: remove "after"
4. Copernicus dared to criticize and had the courage to doubt the authoritative doctrines that were not in line with reality but had been regarded as inviolable. Modify: will "dare to criticize" and "have the courage to doubt":
5, in order to avoid similar accidents in the future, we must improve the safety system as soon as possible.
Modify: remove "avoid" or "no longer"
6. His kind words+ and kind face surfaced in my eyes at times.
Edit: Add "ringing in my ears" after "words":
7. Increasing quality is an imperative of language teaching reform.
Modify: "increase" to "improve"
8, the win or lose of this ball game is not only related to the team's reputation, but to the honor of the school.
Edit: "rather" was changed to "and"
9. Watching this exhibition made me have a lot of feelings. 修改：去掉 "使"
10、Only socialism can save China. Modify: change "on" to "only"
11. After the incident, the class teacher studied with the class committee and decided to have an education on this issue.
Revision: "this problem" was changed to "classmates"
Part II
1. The uncle of the People's Liberation Army shot down five enemy planes and three warships.
2. Complacency is a hindrance to learning.
3. These are artifacts unearthed in the Tang Dynasty.
4, All of them were impressed by watching the drama.
5. The park has two new rides built with British aid.
6. I reckon he must have got this question wrong.
7, He ran into the classroom with great gusto and announced the good news that he was going on a spring trip tomorrow.
8.Listening to the report made us know a lot of things.
9. In winter, the cold wind whistled and shivered.
10, even if you are a genius, but the same can not be separated from the teacher's training and education.
11, the author of "Grassland" was written by Lao She.
12, adhere to the diary, the writing ability will be rapidly improved and expanded.
13, This kind of unloving labor and arbitrary waste is shameful.
14, we need to enhance the confidence and methods to overcome difficulties.
15、The cock of dawn is the signal to get up.
16. We have to correct our shortcomings and mistakes seriously.
17、More good books can enrich and improve our knowledge.
18, Language Learning for Primary School Students and China Youth Daily are my favorite newspapers to read.
19, young pioneers should love the motherland and public **** property.
20. No difficulties of any kind can frighten young pioneers with strong wills. tu
21. Listening to the report, I was educated.
22．The early rice is ripe and the fields look like a green carpet.
23．I couldn't help laughing.
24．I often see Xiao Ming working out in the morning sometimes.
25．The pioneers have to fulfill the revolutionary tradition.
26．Because Lao She loves flowers and keeps many of them.
27．Summer in Xiaoxinganling is a beautiful place.
28．I saw the movie "Shining Red Star" yesterday.
Answers:
1．The uncle of the People's Liberation Army shot down five enemy planes.
2. Complacency is an obstacle to learning.
3. These are artifacts from the Tang Dynasty.
4, This TV series, left a deep impression on me.
5. There are two new rides in the park.
6. I reckon he got this question wrong.
7, He ran into the classroom and cheerfully announced the good news that he was going on a spring trip tomorrow.
8, This report has taught us a lot of things.
9. In winter, the cold wind blows and shivers.
10, Even if you are a genius, you can't be separated from your teacher's training and education all the same.
11. The author of "Grassland" is Lao She.
12. If you keep a diary, your writing ability will improve rapidly.
13, This kind of behavior of not cherishing the fruits of labor and wasting it arbitrarily is shameful.
14, we need to enhance the confidence to overcome difficulties.
15、The rooster's dawn is a signal to get up.
16. We have to correct our shortcomings and mistakes seriously.
17、More good books can enrich our knowledge.
18、My favorite newspapers to read are Language Learning for Primary School Students and China Youth Daily.
19, young pioneers should love the motherland and care for public **** property.
20, no difficulty can frighten the strong-willed young pioneers.
21. Listening to the report, was educated.
22．The early rice is ripe, and the fields look like a golden carpet.
23．I couldn't help laughing.
24．I often see Xiao Ming exercising in the morning.
25．The pioneers have to give play to the revolutionary tradition.
26．Because Lao She loves flowers, she keeps many flowers.
27．The Xiaoxinganling is a beautiful place in summer.
28．I watched the movie "The Shining Red Star" yesterday.
Examples:
I. Component mutilation: the sentence is incomplete.
Example: After reading Two Poems of Revolutionary Martyrs, I was y educated. (Missing "who")
Correction: After reading Two Poems of Revolutionary Martyrs, we were y educated.
Two, improper collocation:
Example: Suzhou in spring is the most beautiful season of the year. (You can't say "Suzhou is the season".)
Correction: Suzhou's spring is the most beautiful season of the year. （
Three inconsistencies:
Example: I have basically finished all my homework. ("Basically" and "all" contradict each other, either one or the other)
Revise: I have basically finished my homework.
Or: I have done all my homework.
Four, semantic repetition:
Example: I must correct the bad shortcomings. ("bad" is repeated with "shortcomings")
Correction: I must correct my shortcomings.
V. Illogical:
Example: the shelves of the store were full of grapes, apples, pears and fruit.
("Fruit" includes "grapes, apples, pears", etc.)
Correct: The store's shelves were full of grapes, apples, and pears.
Or: The store's shelves were full of fruit.
Sixth, the word order is reversed:
Example: He accomplished the difficult task again and again. ("Again and again" should qualify "accomplished")
Correction: He accomplished the difficult task again and again.
Seven, inappropriate description:
Example: After Mr. Wang finished telling the story, a mountain of applause rang out in the classroom.
(The classroom could not have been filled with "mountains and seas" of applause.)
Correction: After Mr. Wang finished his story, the classroom was filled with warm applause.
VIII. Unknown references:
Example: The teacher criticized Xiaoming and Xiaodong and told him to write a review.
(In front of "Xiaoming" and "Xiaodong", followed by "asked him", who is it?)
Correction: The teacher criticized Xiao Ming and Xiao Dong and told them to write a review.
I. Classification Exercises
Missing Part:
1. After six months of hard work, finally caught up.
2. Honorably became a member of the Chinese ****production party.
3．Everyone did happily in the playground.
4．We are responsible for building the socialist motherland.
5．Finished the homework assigned by the teacher.
6．Block after block of tall buildings were built.
7．Lei Feng's wholeheartedly serving the people will always inspire us.
8．The teacher and we did the eagle catching chickens in the playground.
(2) Misuse of words
1．After everyone's efforts, our academic performance increased greatly.
2．The bridge is not only hard but also beautiful.
3．We warmly celebrate the fact that Xiaohong has been honored as a "three-good" team member.
4. The weatherman insisted on checking the weather every day.
5. We must adhere to the glorious revolutionary tradition.
6．We must correct the purpose of study and clarify the attitude to study.
7．Class is in session, and Mr. Xu gave many interesting examples and stories.
8．We have developed a culture of washing our hands before and after meals.
9．When you make a mistake, you should be determined to improve.
10．The kind face of the teacher and his kind teaching are echoing in my ears at all times.
11．Sister's favorite thing is to watch dance and music.
12. The saw was discovered by Lu Ban.
Repeat
1．About fifty or so people, attended the meeting.
2. There are more than a thousand students in our school.
3 My brother was carrying a beautiful, beautiful bouquet of flowers.
4 I'm not afraid of these bad people.
5 Colorful colored flags fluttered in the air in the wind.
6. He is the most laborious labor activist in our class.
7．I have other plans.
8．The square was crowded with many workers and peasants from all over the country.
Word Order Errors
1．He took a thick wad of yuan out of his satchel.
2. Huang Jiguang gave his honorable life
2. Mom was only seen reading a book under the lamp.
3．Grandpa lived a frugal life.
4．Summer in the rural areas of Jiangnan is the busiest season of the year for farming.
5．We should carry forward and inherit the glorious tradition of hard work.
Unreasonable
1．My math workbook is all done, and there is only one calculation left to do.
2. I can conclude that the good deed was probably done by Chen Hong of our class.
3．There were almost no failures in my class in the final exam.
4．The gala was attended by workers, peasants, the People's Liberation Army, students, schoolchildren and cadres.
5．The teacher praised me, and my face turned red, and I was like a big apple.
6．The soldiers braved the heavy rain and muddy paths to advance.
7．The students' homework was basically all handed in.
8．Dark clouds and heavy rain poured down from mid-air.
2. Comprehensive Exercise: Revise on the Original Sentence
1. The mood of the students was higher than ever in this activity.
2, Yang Yang said he had grasped the skills of the puzzle.
3. I recorded and watched a lecture on psychology on Educational Television.
4. I've done five of the six assignments, and I'm almost done with the last one.
5. This morning, my mother bought vegetables, fruits, cucumbers and beans from the market.
6. When everyone obeys the traffic rules, our safety and accidents are guaranteed.
7. We should protect the natural scenic spots like Li River, Tai Lake, Forbidden City and Beidaihe.
8. There are many strange and rare animals in the underwater world.
9. At the gala, Lili sang beautiful songs.
10. This semester, our school has launched a campaign to "become a little environmental protection guard".
11. The rally was attended by cadres, teachers, retired workers and gray-haired old people.
12. Students, young pioneers, workers, farmers, teachers and the People's Liberation Army took part in the performance.
13. After taking part in the activities of the extracurricular interest groups, our knowledge has improved a lot.
14. Our teacher Mr. Yang was honored with the title of "Outstanding Teacher of the Cross-Century".
15. The final competition for the first and second place was held today.
16. His writing has improved significantly.
17. The night of the Mid-Autumn Festival is sprinkled with bright moonlight.
18. He was tenacious and never easily accepted the opinions of others.
19, Mr. Xiao asked questions and answered them well.
20. The author of "Bird's Paradise" was written by Ba Jin.
21, Intestinal diseases and health can be avoided if we pay attention to dietary hygiene.
22. The subjects of music and physical education are interesting to us.
23. Xiao Qin has developed a love of labor since childhood.
24. He who is vain learns one as ten, and he who is proud learns ten as one.
25. The man who is bad to himself is a very bad man.
26. The teacher is as cunning as a fox.
27. Tonight the sky is full of stars and the moon is as full as a mirror, what a beautiful night scene!
28. The rice that is waiting to be harvested is full of grain and green, so lovely!
29. We have to fight against natural phenomena such as droughts, floods and earthquakes.
30. All the students responded positively to the "everyone's hands, greening the motherland".
31. My sister loves to watch dance and music.
32. About fifty people attended today's meeting.
33. The little weatherman insisted on examining the weather every day.
34. Inspired by the spirit of Lei Feng. Xiao Ming improved his shortcomings, often kept doing good deeds and was praised by his teacher.
35. On the morning of Children's Day, we sat proudly in the classroom for a celebration. Counselor first wished us a happy holiday, but also inspired us to continue to work hard and strive to be qualified graduates. Then, the program was performed, the most wonderful performance was based on the Russian writer Gorky wrote "Vanka" textbook play.
36. He was y moved by the beauty of Guilin's landscape.
37. Tonight, it is thundering and raining.
38. He clarified his attitude to study and corrected his purpose of study.
39, Li Dabo has long and consistently maintained a style of hard work and simplicity.
40. Beneficial birds like swallows, woodpeckers and frogs all specialize in eating pests.
41, our school organized the results of small inventions.
42. I was y educated after reading "There is only one Earth".
43. We traveled to Guilin this spring.
44. The Earth is one of the planets in the solar system.
45. There were a lot of people visiting the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Olympic Village and other monuments.
46, He saw a tall, stout, red-faced man in military uniform approaching.
47. I went to the store and bought fish, shrimp, salt, kelp and other aquatic products.
48, The sixth graders are the largest class in our school.
49. The Yangtze River nurtures the children of China with its sweet milk.
50, the bell rang, scrambled students to the playground activities.
51, sprint 50 meters final began, Li Dong first first to reach the finish line, got the championship first place.
52. I came to the beautiful campus with a happy mood and a brisk pace.
53. This last day of labor is the most meaningful one.
54. Through the squadron meeting, we have improved our knowledge of right and wrong.
55. Putting up spring couplets on the Spring Festival is a long-established custom in China's folklore.
56. The story of "The Cowherd and the Weaving Maiden" is very popular and widespread in folklore.
57, rain, as fine as fallen leaves, as light as the tip of a needle, densely to the earth.
58, Walking into the campus, I saw a lovely face and a burst of melodious singing.
59, On Sunday, we had a field day at school.
60, Grandpa's illness was treated precisely by the doctor and he soon recovered his health.
61, The action of the uncle of the civil police who sacrificed himself to save his life touched the people around him.
62. The Yellow River, the cradle of the Chinese nation, is one of the four major rivers in China.
63, we usually read more good books, can grow knowledge and writing.
64. Can't you get good grades if you don't study hard?
65, Today's climate is colder than yesterday's, he wore a sweater towel to school.
66, the sun at the beginning of the big as a car cover, and the middle of the day, it is like a disk, this is not for the far away from the big and close to the small?
67, the sun at the beginning of the Cangcang cool, and its sun in the middle of the day, such as Tang Tang, this is not for the far side of the hot and the near side of the cool?
68.