Listening to the rain
Four hundred and eighty temples in the south, how many buildings in the smoke and rain. --Du Mu
I like to be alone at night to listen to the sound of the rain, the rain is the spirit of nature, I think. Open the lamp, yellow light sprinkled with a piece of warmth, soak a cup of fragrant tea, taste carefully, quietly listen to ......
Open the window, the fresh aroma of the soil with the pattering sound of the rain drifted into the, heh, only to be able to appreciate the unspeakable, unspeakable cozy, I want to be three points Yi An's euphony, three points of the boldness of the Dongpo, three points of the Jain Qing's I want to three Yi An's elegance, three Dong Po's boldness, three Jieqing's indifference, a section of Nalan's mind, to make up ten cozy and then listen to the natural sound of rain.
Spring rain is fine, make people cozy, she is fresh and not charming, small and no loss of strength, she is always fine talk, talk about the spring of the remote and warm. Summer rain of the bold let a person pain, she is like a world of amazing masterpieces of beauty, suddenly mountains and rivers, suddenly a cascade of water, suddenly Chongshan Nayang, suddenly the sea swallowed the flow, let a person enjoy the most. Autumn rain is miserable and grievous people love and pity, she is suddenly singing, suddenly as the clouds and water, and suddenly want to say. Winter rain is no longer reserved, but she is dignified and elegant. Listening to the rain of the four seasons do not feel the emotion of the mirror, the sea of change.
Rain is spiritual, she seems to follow the human will, "with the wind into the night, silent". The rain is also gentle, do not see "wet apricot rain, blowing face not cold willow wind". The rain is still beautiful, "the rain on the sky street is as wet as crisp, the color of the grass is close but no." Whenever the summer and cold easy section, always feel the world is dangerous, red dust rolling, so it will be more yearning for that "green Ruo hat, green Demoiselle, the wind and rain do not have to return."
The cup of tea has been exhausted, not willing to pour another cup. Miao Yu said: "A cup for the product, two cups will become a thirst quenching stupid."
The wind is strong, the rain is intellectual.
The wind is art, the rain is almost philosophical.
I like to listen to the sound of rain alone at night, listening to the melody of nature, "Once the sea is difficult to water, in addition to the witch mountain is not cloud." She makes me think constantly, which is like a white cloud, floating over my mind, making it peaceful and lofty.
Mortals more than one point of the world will be more than one point of wit, more than one point of wit will be less than one point of elegance. I'd rather have a little less wit and a little more elegance. I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do that, but I'm going to be able to do it," he said.
Late at night, picking a lamp to listen to the rain, the shape of the heart, do not feel smile.
2. There are also rhetorical and scenic descriptions of the beginning and end of each of the 20Beginning: the breeze blew, the leaves of the tree swayed ......
Ending: the breeze blew, the leaves of the tree swayed, just as this with some astringent taste of life ... ...
Beginning: There are mountains with thousands of colors, and water with clear and transparent water.
End: What a beautiful ah! It showed me the wonders of nature.
Beginning: the local ray of sunshine should be the first flowers budding, spring came quietly, when the first sound of Zen from far and near, summer came quietly, a local maple leaf slowly falling, fall came quietly, a local mountain village in silver, winter came quietly.
Conclusion: white clouds floating in the blue sky, the painter that a touching picture, that is the white clouds to feed its gratitude to the blue sky. Only with a grateful heart, the world will be brilliant.
The beginning of the spring is unconsciously come, she left, but also quietly. Neither fall like the fall of so many yellow leaves, "the boundless fall of trees under the Xiaoxiao", creating a full day of momentum; not like winter, a burst of rotten snow, a burst of freezing rain.
Ending Make your youth shine, enjoy the beauty of youth, that is the greatest joy of life
Beginning Memory of the autumn field in the South is colorful: this side of a touch of purple, over there is a piece of yellow, yellow and purple is also dotted with emerald green.
End I looked at the sycamore and acacia trees, the yellow leaves were swept up by the wind, swirling in the air, and there are small yellow flowers trembling in the wind, this scene is most likely to evoke people's thoughts of autumn, and for me as well.
Beginning In the morning, when I woke up, the winter fog was thick. After the fog dispersed, immediately appeared a wondrous scene, the pine needles, condensed with a thick white frost, like a tree of white chrysanthemums; that deciduous tree branches wrapped in snow, like a strain of alabaster carving of the tree; weeping willows, silver silk fluttering, the bushes have become white coral bushes, a thousand shapes and forms, it is a bewildering, in a trance and the fairy tale world
The end of the winter, very cold. To be honest, I don't want it to come, but when it comes, I have a different feeling. Ah, I love winter, because, winter, "the wind knows the test", I love its character. And "when winter comes, will spring be far away?"
Beginning Some people love the fragrant spring, some people love the fruitful fall, some people love the snowflakes flying winter. I love the colorful summer.
End Summer, a hot. The season of noise. In the endless green grass, a wildflower now and then, they are like a group of colorful dresses wearing nymphs, in the sea game, dragonflies and butterflies come in pairs, circling in the grass, in the flowers between the feet. The dragonflies landed on the tips of the grass, like dolls sleeping in a cradle, swaying with the breeze. Butterflies dance among the flowers as if they were competing with wildflowers. In this garden-like meadow, groups of children are catching dragonflies, pouncing on butterflies and picking wildflowers. A burst of happy laughter echoed in the grass, making the grass more noisy. At a glance, this is another piece of blue, red, yellow, pink dotted with various colors of the "carpet". This time the "carpet" pattern is constantly changing, mesmerizing.
3. This is my essay 600 words (opening and closing scene description) more rhetorical descriptionIn the ocean, I am a grain of sand.
I, hidden in a sea of people. I have neither a soft body, nor bright eyes, but I have an enterprising heart, a watery dream, a lofty ideal, I firmly believe that the belly has poetry from China.
I, unwilling to go with the flow. In the "unchosen road" Frost had written: "The yellow woods are divided into two roads, but unfortunately I can not go at the same time to wade." "And I chose the less traveled one, which henceforth determined the path of my life." By only melting into the masses I became solidly ordinary. I am unwilling to go down the same old vulgar path of others and live the same vulgar life as others. While stealing glances at others, I also deny myself.
I do not want to go with the flow. In the "unchosen road" Frost had written: "The yellow woods are divided into two paths, but unfortunately I can not go at the same time to wade." "And I chose the less traveled one, which henceforth determined the path of my life." By only melting into the masses I became solidly ordinary. I am unwilling to go down the same old vulgar path of others and live the same vulgar life as others. While stealing glances at others, I also deny myself.
I, humor and tolerance. I have never liked to see others full of anger, I think the others laugh is the most beautiful scenery in the world. So every day, I become a happy fruit, as far as possible to bring them joy. "Wider than the earth is the ocean, wider than the ocean is the sky, wider than the sky is the human heart." Tolerance makes the narrow mind to accommodate a hundred rivers, so I treat other people's faults, I all pay a smile.
I, to be myself. Old Mr. Qi Baishi once said; "Learning my life, like my death." Can not go out of the framework of the former, nature will not have their own heaven and earth. When the popular bubble novels, I feel then in the waste of time, when the popular network game, I feel that is in the waste of youth. To be yourself, see the real me, take out twelve points of confidence, tell yourself: "I am me, why with him the same?!" Throw off those artificial pomp and circumstance carving, light up their own trump card, the pursuit of their own personality, do my own, the best!
I, aggressive. I am a small grain of sand, but not willing to lag behind, a lifetime of mediocrity. I would like to be the chief of life, do a grain of immortal pearl tears. The road is long, I will be up and down. I aspire toward the tower of art, the top of culture, the cause of the building, the edge of the celebration, not to live up to this flourishing era, leaving a line of solid and steady footprints, the beauty and love sprinkled on the earth ......
This is me, I am in the prime of life, I am full of vigor.
This is me, humor and tolerance, not willing to lag behind me.
Hope to adopt
4. There are platitudes, similes, metaphors, describing the beautiful beginning of the autumn sceneAutumn is in the fields. The rice in the field is ripe and yellow, as if it were a big piece of gold.
Autumn is in the woods, the leaves of all kinds of trees are yellow, one by one, falling on the pond and the ground.
Autumn is in the garden. Chrysanthemums blossom in the garden, red, yellow, green, white, orange ......
Autumn is in the orchard, where apples, oranges, bananas and other fruits are ripe.
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Autumn is like a lovely child, waving with a paintbrush and putting new clothes on the leaves.
Autumn is like a young girl in her flowering season, the clear sky is like her pure and beautiful heart.
Autumn is like a strong young man, holding up the blue sky with his arms and opening up new paths for us.
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Autumn lets us experience the bleakness of 'since ancient times, autumn is sad and lonely';
Autumn lets us experience the sadness of 'the boundless falling trees under the Xiaoxiao Xiao';
Autumn lets us experience the sparseness of 'the autumn sky and geese are far away from the blue sky';
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Autumn is like a mother's hand that caresses our face,
Autumn is like a story that tells us a story that tells us a story that tells us a story of the future. Autumn is like a story that tells of the harvest,
Autumn is like a doll that has just woken up, full of spirit!
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Autumn is like a middle-aged man who is over the age of puzzlement, who is full of prosperity, rich and wise;
Autumn is like the God of color, who makes nature colorful;
Autumn is like the God of joy, who brings the joy of the harvest to the people.
Autumn like a selfless heart, through endless wind and rain, but shattered the gold;
Autumn like the old and strong general, through the long years, but left behind an endless number of great achievements;
Autumn like the mountain warrior, waved goodbye to the past weathered, but saved the seeds of the world
Autumn girl unconsciously came to the The first time she came, she was constantly busy. She gave the sorghum smeared red "face"; to the corn put on the orange-red "skirt"; to the rice put on a golden "suit". A burst of autumn wind blew, rice hastily bent over, like in the autumn girl thank you.
The autumn girl came to the forest, a piece of yellow leaves like a butterfly flying in the air. Only the leaves of the pine trees and cypress trees were green, and they stood straight and majestic on the hillside.
The autumn girl came to the orchard again. The fruit in the orchard is ripe, the grapevine is full of bunches of purple and red big grapes, they cover each other's body, the sun came out, irradiated in the grapes is like a transparent purple jewel. Orange tree, a golden yellow orange, let a person see can not help but want to bite. If you peel off the orange peel, you can see a petal of orange like a bend of the moon at the time of the loss of the moon,
The wind is so soft, the water is so smooth, the sky is so blue, people are so active. Autumn in my hometown is like this, and it is not similar to spring. The fall in your hometown is much warmer than the winter in your hometown, and the fall in your hometown is even cooler than the summer.
4 hometown of the falling leaves, which has no sadness, now the falling leaves of foreign lands, just countless frustration, in the bottom of the heart, the occasional emergence of the point of thought and comfort, is the face of this silent destruction, will will be a nirvana as a fire, or is a transmutation of life.
5 yellow flowers light and elegant, white flowers noble, fuchsia flowers warm and deep, splash, the autumn wind is blooming.
6 I like, I like the red leaves like fire in the fall, because the fall can be picnic hiking in the countryside. Autumn brings people the good news of harvest, the joy of harvest hangs on people's faces. I like, I like the cold rain knocking on the window of the autumn, because the autumn rain is so thoughtful. The colorful autumn leaves people with beautiful dreams.
Autumn is not as spring as a hundred flowers, fragrant and pleasant; not as summer as so many little creatures singing; not as beautiful as winter. However, it is the most beautiful in my heart.
Although autumn is not as gorgeous as spring, it has a color that is one of the best in the world - red. The maple leaves only blush when they meet the fall, and from a distance, they look as red as the sunset, coloring the mountains red. When the wind blew, the maple leaves floated down like red snow. So that people come to enjoy.
Although there are not as many little creatures in the fall as in the summer, the landscape of the fall leaves can be much more beautiful than them. When the wind blew up, the leaves fell with the wind, but also when the sound, as if in a loud voice to tell everyone: "Who says there is no butterfly in the fall? Am I not? How about it, beautiful!"
Although the fall is not like the winter has white clothes, but its orange clothes are not bad! And it's much warmer than the white clothes of winter.
Autumn, is the high blue sky, without a trace of dust, let the heart fly; autumn, is the distant golden fields, rice fragrance, the joy of harvest;
Autumn, is the clear blue sky, the north flying geese, bring the happiness of the creek; autumn, is the dance, flapping golden wings of the fallen leaves.
Simile: Autumn is like a beautiful picture, full of poetry; Autumn is like a gift from God to mankind, overflowing with the joy of the harvest; Autumn is like a fishing boat returning from the sea, full of people's joy.
Anaphora: I like the autumn frost stained red like fire maple leaves, because in the fall you can watch the golden rice paddies bending and smiling, and we picnic hiking in the countryside.
5. to rhetorical devices beginning ending essay 20 kinds of 20 wordsThe writing of the essay is a thing that needs to be practiced, want to get a high score in the essay in the midterm examination usual practice is even more important. We all know that the middle school admission essay correction teacher's correction habits, so write a good beginning is the same as you have got a good essay for the middle school admission test. Here we will give you to write the beginning of the essay with rhetorical devices.
Beginning with a prose sentence, the sentence is neat, powerful, and promotes the appreciation of reading. The first thing you need to do is to make sure that you have a good idea of what you're talking about.
Such as: if I were a bird, I would remember the nest at birth; if I were a sapling, I can't forget the land that nourishes me; if I were a river, the snowy plateau has become my memory of the brand ......
This paragraph can be used as a composition of the beginning of the introduction of their own unforgettable hometown.
And these sentences are the skills we have learned in the previous lectures, after learning imitation sentences we have been able to flexibly imitate good sentences, and these good sentences can not only be used in the middle of the composition to serve as the main body of the composition, to become our highlights; but also can be used in the beginning as a kind of backdrop. Even though the bird, the sapling, and the river and lake are not the things we are going to narrate, their characteristic - the difficulty of parting with the source - can be used for me as a like-for-like comparison of my hometown. My feelings for my hometown are the same as theirs, which makes the abstract, unspeakable emotions vivid, and gives our beginning a different look, much richer than "I miss my hometown".
The beginning of the essay with a metaphor, the text can be expressed in the individual things than, can be a variety of things than, can also be the text of the overall image of the molded, hosted than, the metaphor used in the beginning of the article, the image, vivid, and highlight the characteristics of the article theme.
Such as the beginning of the Chinese stone arch bridge: "The stone arch bridge has a curved hole, like a rainbow."
Another example is "Chinese is our mother tongue, the most beautiful language in our hearts. It is the most beautiful language in our hearts. It is calligraphy without the need for color; it is rhyme without the need for music. From the oracle bone script to the small seal script to the official script to the regular script to the running script, the Chinese language all the way, from the tolerance of all the temperament, condensed into a square of Chinese characters, together with the Chinese nation formed the Chinese nation this heavy history."
Stone bridge and Chinese characters are not life of the still life, with the metaphorical sentences on these things give life and vitality, colorful rainbow, rhyme are the best things in our hearts, and stone bridge, Chinese characters are them, respectively, can not help but that our hearts and minds also with these words become wet and soft!
Giving life and emotion to things is the essence of rhetorical devices, the beginning of writing an essay with rhetorical devices. You can also impress the essay correction teacher's heart, then so what is your essay afraid of? So in class to practice the use of rhetorical methods.
6. Landscape description of the beginning of the metaphorAs if a pot of water on the stove in the gradual bubbling, bubbling and finally boiled," with a visual effect, should be combined with the first sentence of the opening to highlight the summer "intense, passionate, hasty" characteristics. Originally, these "characteristics" are abstract, here with a metaphor, the abstraction into a concrete.
"The light green smoke on the forest belt also condensed into a long wall of diaphanous color", which is a metaphor for this thing, with people used to see the "long wall" metaphor "green smoke", more intuitive.
This is a metaphor for the other thing.
"Like the waves of the sea surging a ship", this is a metaphor for the "highway car", they are traveling in the wheat waves, so that people hallucinate, like a "ship". The idea is that it is a metaphor for the speed and majesty of the ship.
Look at the anthropomorphic sentence:
"The grass on the hillside has grown into a dense thick hair", is the author's imagination, vivid image.
"The bee and butterfly are gone", "dance" is imagination, using the anthropomorphic writing style, imagine its beautiful dance, very vivid.
"The sorghum and corn that held a trumpet tube towards the sky, the melon seedlings creeping on the ground", write two crops with two images of the action, like describing people, very interesting.
"At this time they ...... to the end of the fall for the final sprint", these crops "vigorous vigor" was relatively abstract, here with the human running Sprint to describe, the abstraction into the image.
7. Rhetorical good beginning and good ending essayBeginning: "A chopstick is easy to fold, ten chopsticks hold into a group (classic article, share with you!)." . This is not bad, in the face of great difficulties, the power of the individual is small, insignificant, and many many individuals gathered into a collective, in order to form a strong force, and ultimately win the victory
Ending: Uncle Lei Feng once said: a drop of water can only be put into the sea, in order to never dry up. Yes? ∫ Huan plate Si drag Chu bad buzz? Lies? If you leave the collective sea, will be nothing. The power of the collective is great!
Collective wisdom
Beginning: none
Ending: as the saying goes: "Three ignorant cobblers, top a Zhu Geliang ." Collective wisdom is so powerful ah!
Helping people happy
Beginning: helping people happy, helping people happy is a virtue, helping people is a sign of sublimation of personality.
End: Helping people brings us close together and makes us like family. I am willing to continue to help those who need help, so that our lives are full of colorful sunshine!
Cherish
Beginning: Mr. Zhu Ziqing wrote in the article "When eating, time flows away from the edge of the bowl; when drinking, time flows away from the water; when sleeping, time flows away from the feet. This can not be touched, can not catch the time, it is silent and hurriedly away". Knowing how to cherish, life is a kind of eternity.
Conclusion: We are often touched, is to know, cherish. Knowing how to cherish, the sun will be sprinkled all over the soul, knowing how to cherish, the evening wind will brush the soul, let our hearts so warm, so peaceful. Cherish it, cherish what you have and what you don't have, the soil of the heart can't grow a big tree, we can also have the desire for the blue sky.
Broad-minded
Beginning: Hugo said: "Wider than the land is the ocean, wider than the ocean is the sky, wider than the sky is the human heart.
Conclusion: The heart is a person's wings, the heart of the world is as big as the world
Skill Analysis:
8. Using the technique of contrasting to set off to write an essay Beginning is the description of the sceneThe beginning of the essay (Shunde Teaching and Research Office) Jia Baoyu commented on the Grand View Garden, he said an insightful sentence: all the beauty must be "natural reasoning, get natural interest", and the beauty of the garden. The first is that it is not a good idea to have a good time, but it is a good idea to have a good time.
Millions of candidates across the country to compete in the college entrance examination essay to be outstanding, but also can not be separated from a "reason" and "interesting".
A single look at the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel happy and inspired. We've categorized some of them for you, so maybe you can learn from them too.
First, the first look at the opening of the opening of the most taboo is a pen to give people the feeling of being off-topic, it tells the teacher straight to the author did not examine the meaning of the question, essay scoring will be greatly discounted. See the beginning of the 2004 Guangdong college entrance examination several essays.
Example 1, "Remembering by language and communication": "Watching flowers blossom and clouds roll in and out. The bright sunshine of early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green dress of summer shows the harvest of autumn; the fruit of golden autumn shows the depression of winter.
Four seasons, fall and winter, the natural world of all things each interpretation of the wonderful. If you don't have the baptism of winter, how can you expect the hope of early spring? Our human society is also like the natural world, without the language connection, without the **** the same way of life, how can the world into a whole, build bridges of communication? This is a poor opening metaphor, and the earlier part of the analogy does not build on the similarities very well.
Why? Language and communication is the relationship between the premise and the result, and "green dress" and "harvest", "fruit" and "depressed "Where does such a relationship exist? In particular, the rhetorical question "If you have not been baptized by the harsh winter, how can you look forward to the hope of the early spring" is not close to the topic. Example 2 Mindful Interaction: The trees never sneer at the weakness of the grass, but the grass, though weak, adds to the green of the grassland; the peonies never sneer at the simplicity of the wildflowers, and the wildflowers, though simple, bring infinite vitality to the earth.
The reason why big trees and grass, peony and wildflowers can harmonize **** place, because they have **** the same language, with each other's communication, with the heart interaction." Again, this opening is far-fetched in leaning toward the topic without finding similarities.
Example 3, "Language and Communication": "Language is a blade of grass, communication is a green shade; language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a sea of flowers." This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as the relationship between the individual and the whole, again without understanding the connection between the two.
These three examples are to increase the elegance of writing through the metaphorical way to cut into the topic of writing, which is also the usual writing style of many candidates. If the candidate does not have an accurate grasp of the topic's meaning, and goes off on a tangent at the beginning, the score will be seriously affected.
The following example illustrates the role of language in a more accurate and visual way. Example 4 "Communication begins with language": "Language is a bridge, communicating between this shore and the other; language is a waterfall, communicating between streams and deep pools; language is a rainbow, communicating between the sky and the earth.
Communication can only be successful if the language is accurately expressed. If the language is wrong, then it may cause unforeseen consequences.
So how can language be accurately expressed to facilitate successful communication?" Therefore, the opening paragraph is written well, the core problem is still in the review; review of the subject breaks the subject, first seek accuracy, and then seek image. Here are many ways to introduce the opening.
1, quoted quotes ① ask what is the love of the world, straight to teach people life and death. Yuan Haoqian is indeed good at asking questions and very good at asking questions.
His question can be called a question for the ages. How many years, how many people wandering in this question, and how many people in the cost of a huge price to make the final answer to life.
But the words of each family are as different as the face of each person. Xishi said, "Love is a tool.
......" ("Ask what is love in the world") ② In a medieval church, a holy man began his speech, "I am a holy man because I have seen through money, and what is mine is everyone's. " It is a long time and a snap of the fingers.
In a prison at the time of the interregnum, a thief begins his life's monologue, "I became a thief because I saw through the money, and what's mine for everyone is mine." (The Saint and the Thief) ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere, for our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery."
Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I would like to say, "Answers are everywhere, and for our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are perplexed by the problem of not understanding or wandering in the choice of multiple solutions to the intersection, how to go has become the heart of the mystery, often indecisive, left and right chaotic leaning, at this time, there is a need to change the angle of consideration, which will give you more opportunities for success.
("Rotate this kaleidoscope") 2, clever use of the letter format ① respected grandfather Confucius: Hello! I am one of your ordinary children and grandchildren, thousands of years after the courage to write to bother you, not only in order to send you reverent greetings, but also with a few difficult questions eagerly waiting for your guidance. (A Letter to Confucius) ② Abominable standard answer: See you, I am really righteous indignation.
So, driven by the flame of anger, I wrote this letter to denounce you. The answers are colorful, but you have to wear the hat of "standard".
You know, because of the word "standard", there have been countless tragedies. Here are your three major sins: ...... ("A letter to the "standard answer") 3, borrowed chapter and verse novel writing style ① "said that the world situation will be divided for a long time, and a long time will be divided."
When the era of the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu and Wu no longer existed, the great river went east, the waves poured out the heroes of the past. And the heir of Shu, Ah Dou also became "happy not to think of Shu", the world has become the world of "Sima".
("Three Kingdoms Heroes Meeting") ② Liangshan Po's gathering hall is now brightly lit and bustling with people. One hundred single eight good men are all gathered here, and all of them are quarreling.
What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liangshan Po recently to select the tiger hero. This honorary title on the evaluation will be great, who evaluated on the evaluation can sit on the second chair of the Liangshan Po.
So it caused all the good men to gather here and argue.