I. Improper order
1. Improper location of ingredients The Nanchang Eighty-first Uprising Memorial Hall displays many kinds of things Zhou Enlai used in those years. (Jiangxi Volume, Question 6, Item A) The sentence should be "many kinds of" to "things" before the direct restriction of "things".
2. Inappropriate placement of clauses The combination of strong and powerful production of the play, so that people not only see the overall progress of Chinese opera, but also see the Chinese opera in the modernization of the issue of a welcome step. (Beijing Volume, Question 5, Item D) The sentence "People have not only seen ...... but also ......" is a compound sentence with a progressive relationship, so it should be " The overall progress of Chinese opera" should be interchanged with "a welcome step in the modernization of Chinese opera" to show the progression from the local to the overall level.
2. improper collocation
1. improper subject-verb collocation Since the birth of the Beijing University Film Festival in 1993, more than one million people have participated in the viewing of films. (National Volume I, Question 3, Item A) The subject of the sentence "1 million people" and the predicate "participate in the observation" do not go well together, and the sentence can be changed to read: "More than 1 million people have participated in the observation of the films. "
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2. The verb (介)宾 collocation is not appropriate Nursing women may suffer from iodine deficiency if they only rely on the iodine content of the supplements they take, and if they don't add iodine-containing foods in a timely manner, it may lead to brain and nerve damage or mental retardation in their babies. （The verb "to take" in the sentence does not go well with the object "iodine content", and should be changed from "iodine content" to "iodine content". ".
3. subject-object collocation inappropriate Comrade Li Mingde during his tenure as battalion commander and regimental commander, has repeatedly been named an advanced training unit and a model unit of logistical support. (National Volume III, Question 4, Item B) ① sentence subject "Comrade Li Mingde" and the object "advanced training units and logistical support model units" collocation is not appropriate, the first sentence can be changed to "Comrade Li Mingde served as the battalion commander, regiment leader during the battalion and regiment". The first sentence can be changed to read "Comrade Li Mingde served as battalion commander, regiment commander during the battalion and regiment".
4. one side and two sides of the improper collocation of the implementation of the scientific concept of development, to build a harmonious society and promote sustainable economic development is of great significance. (National Volume Ⅰ, Question 3, Item C) The first part of the sentence deals with both affirmative and negative aspects, while the second part of the sentence only deals with affirmative ("build, promote") aspects. "can".
Third, component mutilation or redundancy
1. component mutilation (1) subject mutilation In this work, it doesn't give people much positive encouragement and positive revelation, on the contrary, some of the plots have quite a lot of negative effects. （The prepositional structure "in ......" in the sentence conceals the subject "this work", so "in ......" should be deleted. The prepositional structure "in ......" obscures the subject "the work". （The opinion of legal experts is that the consumers smashed the goods in public only to humiliate them or to express their dissatisfaction. (National Volume III, Question 4, Item D) The verb "humiliate" in the sentence lacks an object, which should be followed by "business", "operator" and other objects.
2. Component redundancy If the "idle" things I manage can bring even a little bit of happiness and joy to the people, I am also very happy, very happy. (National Volume III, Question 4, Item C) This sentence is a hypothetical compound sentence, and the word "when" in the first clause destroys the structural integrity of the sentence, so it should be deleted.
Four, structural confusion Seven-color waterfalls, located in Shangri-La County, Niru Village, deep in the mountains, a highland snow-melt river called "Niru River" and the steep peaks of this world of wonders. (Beijing Volume, Question 5, Item A) The first half of the sentence is "waterfalls", and the second half of the statement is "rivers and peaks", the second half of the sentence can be changed to "this world wonders are created by a river called the Niru River". This wondrous sight is created by a highland snow-melting river called the Nyiru River and steep mountain peaks".
V. Uncertainty of meaning
1. The water on the mountain is so valuable that we leave it for those who come at night. (Tianjin Volume, Question 4, Item C) The phrase "come at night" means "come at night" if it is broken into "come at night"; if it is broken into "come at night", it means "come at night"; if it is broken into "come at night", it means "come at night"; if it is broken into "come at night", it means "come at night". If you break it into "come up", it means "come up the mountain late", and you can change "late" to "late" or "after". "
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2. words with multiple meanings This time out of the competition, I must persuade the teacher to go with you, so that you will not be too nervous, you can play better. (Jiangsu Volume, Question 4, Item B) If "and" in the sentence is understood as a conjunction, the object of "persuasion" is "the teacher and you"; if it is a preposition, the object of "persuasion" is "the teacher and you"; if it is a preposition, the object of "persuasion" is "the teacher and you". If it is a preposition, the object of "persuasion" is only the "teacher" one person.
3. Relationships Multiple He rides his motorcycle every day from the east to the west of the city, from the south to the north of the city, and collects, drop by drop, the discarded photographic fluids from more than 180 hospitals, photo studios, publishing houses, and other organizations. （The phrase "more than 180" in the sentence can be restricted to either "hospitals" or "hospitals, photo studios and publishing houses". "More than 180" can be transferred to "units".
4. Uncertainty of reference Today, the teacher praised himself again at the class meeting, but I think I still need to continue to work hard. (National Volume Ⅱ, question 4, item B) The sentence "himself" can refer to both the speaker and the "teacher"
Six, illogical
The Municipal Commission of Education requires that the living supplies and bedding in the student apartments of the schools are purchased by the students themselves. (Nationwide Volume I, Question 3, Item B) The sentence "daily necessities" includes "bedding", and by connecting it with "and", the logical error of juxtaposing a major concept with a minor one is made. Although the test questions on analyzing and modifying sick sentences in the college entrance examination have been changing every year, the propositional ideas and basic patterns have not changed. From the scope of the examination, the identification of sick sentences are examined every year, and the modification of sick sentences is examined from time to time. In terms of the characteristics of the test questions, the questions on recognizing sick sentences are usually found in the single choice questions in Volume I, and the questions on modifying sick sentences are usually found in Volume II. From the source of sick sentences, the sick sentences selected in the test questions are generally representative of the common speech defects that people often find in language communication. From the structure of the test questions, each question from different aspects of the test sentence recognition and modification ability, the same kind of disease in the same question generally do not appear twice at the same time.
Selected Test Questions
1. The following sentences in the absence of speech defects is ( ) A ．The "knowledge economy" revolution with network technology as an important support has greatly changed our production, lifestyle and accelerated social civilization. B．The lights of the mountain city will be changed from "bright" to "beautiful", and the goal of making the lights "move" is being implemented. C．Reading an article is often aimed at sifting and extracting valuable information, or drawing ideas, or collecting arguments, or feeling the emotions of the article. D．We successfully solved the problem according to the ideas prompted by the teacher.
2. The sentence in the following sentences without a speech defect is ( ) A. Dazu stone carving ticket price is not high, very unfavorable to the protection of cultural relics, and can not effectively use the price leverage to control the overloaded passenger flow. B． The dialectic of life is both complementary and opposite, the whiter things are the more likely to show up stained black stains, the more likely to be stained by black stains. C．Money corrupts some artists, inducing them to give up their aesthetic ideals, erode their artistic personality, and become spiritual wage laborers, which inevitably undermines the social value of their works. D．After graduating from college, he worked in various jobs and finally became the deputy general manager of the Pudong Real Estate Exhibition and Sales Center.
3. The one of the following sentences that has no speech defects is ( ) A. The development of science forces the anti-science people to put on the mask of pseudo-science to oppose science. B． Narrative writing expresses the theme through the description of characters and events, and it expresses the author's thoughts and feelings mainly through images. C． The latest wave-shaped toothbrush can penetrate up to one-third deeper into the crevices of the teeth than ordinary flat toothbrushes. D．After the Jiajing of the Ming Dynasty, the world trend is deteriorating, corruption is regarded as normal, and honesty is ridiculed, therefore, when officials leave office, people often use the weight of the eunuch bag to judge the size of their ability.
4. The following paragraph is not coherent because of the inconsistency of the topic, please make some changes in the appropriate places to make the meaning coherent. However, some people nowadays adopt a blind attitude, without analyzing and distinguishing between right and wrong, and regard all foreign cultures as treasures, some of which schools and creative methods are regarded by some people as overseas wonders, and they even worship them with all their hearts and souls. Answer:
5. Identify two errors in language presentation in the following text and correct them.
At the 2005 Spring Festival Gala, the audience was amazed by the performance of "Thousand Hands of Goddess of Mercy" led by Tai Lihua and performed by 21 deaf-mutes. Under the superb stage lighting and background music, the actors' colorful performances mesmerized thousands of spectators on stage. These deaf and mute people not only with beautiful dance, but also with tenacity and persistent pursuit of life y shocked people.
参考答案： 1. C. A component mutilation, should be added at the end of the "the process of". B collocation is not appropriate, will be "goal" to "plan". D improper order. D. The word "smoothly" should modify the phrase "to solve" instead of "in accordance with".
2. B. A inappropriate order, will be "very unfavorable to the protection of cultural relics" and "can not effectively use price leverage to control the overloaded passenger flow". C in the subject of the mutilation, the first, second and third sentences of the subject is "The first, second and third sentences of the subject is "money", while the fourth clause of the subject of the mutilation. D sentence miscellaneous, should be changed to: "Finally in the Pudong real estate exhibition center as deputy general manager.
3. D. A is illogical. B. The lack of predicate, add "is" before "by". "C "as much as one-third" is not clear, whether it is on the basis of the original or the final result.
4. The subject of the original topic is "some people", so the phrase "some of these genres and methods of creation are used by some people" should be replaced by "even some of these genres and methods of creation are used by some people". ".
5. Examples of error correction: The first is 'superb stage lighting and background music' should be changed to 'brilliant stage lighting and wonderful background music. The second place is 'colorful performance' changed to 'exquisite performance'.