Ask for ten revised sentences and ten sentence conversions (30 points)

1. The hall was filled with spectators watching the show.

2, The campus was full of white, red, yellow and other colorful flowers.

3. I stood on the playground and watched carefully the students practicing their bodies.

4. Our class won the first place in the competition, and everyone's heart showed the joy of victory.

5. At the group discussion, everyone spoke fiercely.

6. In unison, they said, "In favor!"

7. Under the teacher's education, he clarified his attitude to study.

8, I love reading extracurricular books such as "Little Bee", "Little Stream" and "Learning Newspaper for Primary School Students"

9, After the reform and opening up, people's lives are getting richer and stronger.

10、The scenery in spring is very beautiful to me.

11. The teacher asked the students to make clear the purpose of study and the attitude to study.

12, You must must be serious and responsible.

13, Mr. Li was very strict with us in class.

14, after the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have significantly improved.

15, When I handed over the cup of tea, my mother's face showed a pleasant mood.

16. Xiao Ming's sister has been honored as a "good student" for three years in a row.

17. We came to the park to see the beautiful scene.

18. Mr. Li is very strict with us in class.

19、His language homework is basically all finished.

20, My mind drifted back to something that happened just over two years ago.

21, After the implementation of quality education, the quantity and quality of our extracurricular reading have significantly improved.

22, When I handed a cup of tea, my mother's face was overflowing with pleasure.

23, I'm sure it's probably going to snow tomorrow.

24、Everyone must pay attention to the good habit of hygiene.

25、The river looked whiter as it was reflected in the clouds.

26、Autumn in Fragrant Hill is a desirable place.

27, The museum displays newly unearthed artifacts from three thousand years ago.

28、This semester is the last year of my elementary school life.

29、Grandpa often told us interesting stories about the past.

30、Brother likes playing basketball and soccer most.

31、The Spring Festival, which I hoped for day and night, has finally come.

32、After the reform and opening up, China's economic construction has been carried out rapidly.

33, We have to develop a good way of thinking while reading.

34、We have to give full play to the glorious tradition of the old revolutionaries.

35、It was my duty today and I cleaned the classroom clean and neat.

36、I took my pen, ruler, eraser and stationery to the teaching competition.

37, He did all the all the exercises assigned by the teacher.

38, Every time the teacher asks a question he is always the first to speak first.

39, we have to develop a love of cleanliness and hygiene from childhood.

40、Our school invites uncle of the People's Liberation Army to make a report often.

41, We must build the great task of the four modernizations.

42、When the blind girl saw someone coming in, she quickly stood up to give up her seat.

43, It is a bad style for people to speak and act differently.

44, Wang Lei's action of sacrificing himself to save others touched the people around him.

45、Despite the bad weather, we always arrive at school on time.

46、The comedy program began, and a smiling face gazed at the stage.

47、I am determined to try to overcome my bad habits in studying.

48. Mr. Liu was honored to be named "special teacher".

49. She was wearing a white scarf and a red dress.

50, The person who spits on the ground is an uncivilized habit.

I. The word order is reversed.

1. The language is of special interest to me.

2.I gave two new and old sweaters to the children in the disaster area.

3.This y interesting idea was imprinted on my heart.

4.We had a discussion and listened to the report of the old Red Army.

5.The British and French forces invaded Beijing and burned and looted the Yuanmingyuan.

Second, the words are not used properly.

1. Dark clouds and heavy rain poured down from the sky together.

2. Huang Jiguang not only died a heroic death, but he will always live in our hearts.

3.From that piece of amber, we can deduce the details of the story that happened a long time ago.

4.I won honor for my school in the district sports meet.

5.Having a good attitude to study is the key to improving academic performance.

6.We should inherit and carry forward the revolutionary cause of the older generation.

7.The hills resounded with exciting passwords.

8.On June 1, students came to school for the celebration in their new colorful clothes and red scarves.

Three, the components are mutilated.

1.Every elementary school student should pay attention to the good habit of listening in class.

2.The king of Qi Wei was won.

3.The teacher told about Kong Fan Sen's rescue of Tibetan orphans.

4.The deeds of Qiu Shaoyun, the war hero, inspire us.

5.There was a brief silence on the battlefield.

6.After the popularization of law education, the consciousness of the masses has been generally raised.

4. The reference is not clear.

1.The teacher called Wang Hong and Xiaomin to him and said to her, "Be active in class."

2.Li went to school with Xiaohua and she found a wallet on the way.

3.Zhang Wen and Wang Qin agreed to do their homework together in their own house.

4. Wang Jing and Pan Ying agreed that she would play badminton at her house on Saturday afternoon.

5.This exquisite lantern will be given as a gift to the guest with the highest score today.

5. Inconsistency.

1.The teacher answered the students' questions in detail but briefly.

2. In the spring, the rice fields were full of vegetables, watermelons and rice.

3.Last Sunday, when we had a break, our whole class visited Beihai Park.

4.Ming has a cold and had a high fever all night yesterday.

6. Repeat the words.

1.The mountain village is full of fruit trees.

2. Our whole school and the principal took part in the tug-of-war.

3.I have a very red bright red scarf.

4.On the night of the Mid-Autumn Festival, I looked at the moon in the sky and the stars in the sky.

5. In spring, green trees were planted on both sides of the road. At the "June 1" party, our class performed a recreational program and a chorus.

7. Logical confusion.

(I) Improper categorization.

1. The kindergarten often gives us fruits such as cantaloupe, watermelon, apples and tomatoes.

2. The school's gymnasium is full of sports equipment such as soccer balls, volleyballs, basketballs and globes.

3. Grandma's house has many chickens, ducks, geese, cows, horses and other poultry.

4. Yesterday, there were workers, peasants, schoolchildren, the People's Liberation Army and young people attending the National Day Celebration.

(ii) The structure is confusing.

1.My hometown is Zhongshan, Guangdong.

2. Our population is the largest in the world.

3.It is a very bad style for people to be inconsistent in their words and deeds.

4."Sunrise over the Sea" was written by Bakin.

VIII. Comprehensive Exercise: Modify Sentences.

1.The old worker was on the road to help the traffic police keep the traffic in order.

2. The sight and aroma of ripening fruit can be seen everywhere in the fields in autumn.

3.This year, our teacher Wang was honored with the title of "advanced class teacher of the city".

4. I guess he must be a sixth-grader.

5. Xiao Liang's shoulders were weighed down by the heavy bag of rice.

6.It was very educational to read the book.

7.The alarm clock on the table went round and another hour passed.

8.Lushan Falls, Daming Lake and Baotu are the three most famous places in Jinan.

9.Swimmers break world record after world record.

10.Through the help of my teacher, I was able to correct my shortcomings.

11.There are a ruler and a pen on the table, this is hers and that is his.

12.We adopted and discussed the squadron program.