Please write an essay on my mom and add an outline after you write it Thank you 500 words or so

My mother

The greatest love in the world is a mother's love. A mother's heart is pure and supreme. Every mother, has a most devout love.

My mother has a head of black shiny short hair, she has a willow leaf eyebrows, a pair of big eyes and a not too small mouth, a pair of glasses on top of a high nose. Mom is not only dedicated to her work, but also particularly concerned about my studies, life and other aspects.

On weekdays I live in my grandmother's house, and I can only see my mom on Saturdays and Sundays. Every Sunday after I finished writing the composition assigned by the teacher, my mom would always read it carefully and concentrate on revising the sentences with me. After correcting the essay, my mom would find some similar essays for me, and while reading them, she would explain to me which parts of the essay were worth learning from, and then combine them with my essays, which parts were well-written, and which parts were not well-written.

Mom not only cares about my studies, but also cares about my life.

I remember one day, the sky was fluttering with goose feather snow, in a short while, the whole city turned into a sea of snow, snow paradise, snow world. On that day, my milk teeth have not fallen out, but the permanent teeth have grown out, my mother had to take me to pull out the milk teeth, I do not want to go because of the fear of pain, but also with my mother argued for a long time, my mother finally pulled me hard to go to the hospital. Along the way, I have not been talking to my mom, but also take a snowball to hit my mom. I thought to myself: Mom is really insensitive, why do you have to let me come out to pull out my tooth in such a cold day? If I don't pull it out, it will fall out by itself. When I got to the hospital, the doctor gave me anesthesia and pulled out my baby tooth without any pain. Later, I realized my mother's hard work. My mom said, "If you pull out your baby teeth, your permanent teeth will grow in neatly. If you don't pull out your baby teeth, your new permanent teeth will grow crooked, and you won't look good when you come back to smile!" I was able to get all my baby teeth in the middle of the row below me extracted, so my permanent teeth grew in neatly, and I was able to smile without any constraints, which made me very happy.

Mom is like a hard-working gardener, who has worked tirelessly to cultivate me. Mom for me to worry for me toiling, constantly encouraging me, just hope that one day, I can become ordinary in the ordinary people. In a word, it is hard to measure the effort and love my mom has put into me. I want to study hard and honor my mother.

Outline:

I. General Writing--Mother's love is great.

II. Sub-writing - how mother's love is great.

1, mom's appearance description.

2. Mom's concern for my studies.

3. Mom's concern for my life.

3. A general description of my mother's love and my gratitude.

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