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How to write a good scene description collection
A scene is a scene. Writing a scene is writing a scene. In an article, you can write one scene or several scenes. When writing a scene, you should pay attention to the combination of points and aspects, and describe it in a comprehensive way. Write down what you see, hear and think about in detail. A scene is not an activity for one person, it is an activity involving many people. For example, if we want to write about a sports meeting, a get-together, a game event, a festival event, a flag-raising ceremony, etc., we need to write scenes. We can make full use of the sample essay "The Founding Ceremony of the People's Republic of China". You can choose a scene description in the "Founding Ceremony of the People's Republic of China" to read and comprehend it carefully, and see how the article "The Founding Ceremony of the People's Republic of China" describes the scene specifically and clearly. How to observe a scene? ------
Observe scenes and use different observation methods according to different scenes.
Observe activity scenes: be able to observe the entire process of complete activities in a certain order. Capture the exciting scenes in the event and observe them in detail. Observe the interesting details of the competition. When observing, you can pay attention to what you see, hear, and think. Capture key items or content during observation.
Observe festival scenes, market scenes, and labor scenes: When observing, pay attention to carefully observing the scenes of activities and the details of the events. When observing, not only look, but also listen and think carefully. Be active in association and imagination. Pay attention to the details of changes in people's movements and mood changes. Observe the situation methodically. When observing scenes, firstly, we must grasp the key scenes, and secondly, we must pay attention to the order of observation. You should pay attention to your own feelings, or changes in your own mental activities, changes in thoughts and emotions, etc.
To put it simply, you should pay attention to the following points when observing the scene:
1. Choose a good observation point so that you can observe the panoramic view of the scene.
2. Pay attention to the order of observation, from far to near, from left to right, or in the order of east, west, north, south, etc.
3. Pay attention to the typical characteristics to observe. The typical scenery that best highlights the characteristics of the scene must be carefully observed. 4. When observing the characteristics of the entire scene, don't forget to observe the changes in points. Do a little bit in the surface and use the points to lead the surface. Scene refers to a life picture centered on the activities of characters or nature and landscape at a certain time and place. Our lives are colorful. In school, on the way to school, in the market, shop or park, we can often see some meaningful or interesting scenes. As long as we carefully recall the entire process of these scenes, such as the environment and atmosphere of the scene, the performance and demeanor of the participants. Then choose one of the most impressive scenes as practice material. When composing, you should first determine what meaning the scene is centered around, that is, what center should be expressed. Only when the scene is written around the center will it be vivid and concrete, and people will have an immersive feeling after watching it. Let’s dissect an article -------
A few days ago, we studied a text called "The Founding Ceremony of the People's Republic of China". The greatest feature of the "Founding Ceremony" is that the process and scenes of the "Ceremony" activities are clearly written. Next, let's take a look at the two scenes of the "Founding Ceremony": Venue layout
①The venue is in Tiananmen Square. The square is T-shaped. (Point) ② To the north of the T-shaped cross is a river, with five white stone bridges erected side by side on the river; ③ To the north is the city wall, with the Tiananmen tower rising high in the center of the city wall. ④The T-shaped one extends straight to the south from the Chinese Gate. ⑤To the south of the intersection of three horizontal and one vertical, an electric flagpole stands in the field. ⑥The rostrum is located on the Tiananmen Gate Tower. ⑦Under the eaves of the city tower, eight red palace lanterns are hung on both sides. ⑧Leaning against the stone railings on the left and right sides of the tower, eight red flags fluttered in the wind. (Side) Mass parade scene
①The military parade is over and it is already evening. ②All the lanterns and torches in Tiananmen Square were lit, and 10,000 fireworks shot into the sky one after another. (Point) ③The colorful sparks in the sky formed colors, and the thousands of lights on the ground were all red. ④The mass demonstration started at this time.
⑤The parade set off in two directions: east and west. They held lights, danced with torches, and shouted "Long live the Communist Party of China!" "Long live the Communist Party of China!" "Long live the Central People's Government!" They Team after team walked in order and passed in front of the White Stone Bridge facing Tiananmen Square. They raised lanterns and torches and shouted "Long live Chairman Mao!"
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"Chairman Mao!" "Long live the people!" (face) ⑥Chairman Mao leaned forward in front of the rostrum on the tower and kept waving to the crowd, shouting "Long live the people!" (Point) Read these two words. paragraph, you should think clearly about the following questions:
(1) In these two scene description fragments, where is the "point" of writing the scene, and where is the "face" of writing the scene? (2) In what order should we write "face"? (Written in order of spatial orientation) (3) Find the transitional sentences from point to surface and appreciate the beauty of the sentences. (Connect the previous and the next, explain the tips) (4) Talk about the relationship between "point" and "face" in the description of the scene. (Write the points first and then the surface, from point to surface. The points are generalizations and transitional sentences, and the surface is the sentences of specific description.)
(5) Let’s talk about, in the description of the scene, what Yes? What are noodles?
Points to note when writing a good scene composition-------- To write a good scene, you should pay attention to the following aspects:
1. Be methodical. No matter whether the scene is big or small, the main thing they have in common is that there are many characters and complex events. Therefore, when writing a scene, you must have a clue and describe it in an orderly manner. If you write only one thing, it will not be as good as the rest, and it will not create a scene; it will be comprehensive and easy to be messy. Scene descriptions are generally organized into different types of character activities. It is a common method to arrange the order of articles based on the character's line of sight or the character's activities. 2. A bit facetious. Writing a scene is inseparable from the description of the people in the scene. There are many characters in the scene, do they all need to be written down? No, not to mention that a small narrative does not have a large capacity like a video camera, so even writing it all out would be meaningless. Because the theme of the article determines that the selection of materials is limited. It is impossible for everyone's words and actions to be related to the theme. Even if they are, there is still a problem of distance. In order to spend the least amount of pen and ink to express the center most prominently, we must select the activities of those people who are most closely related to the theme and the most representative ones to focus on, so that less can win more, and small things can make greater sense. Writing about an activity is also indispensable to describe the scene, which is the background of the activity. There are often one or two things at the center of the scene, which are related to the central idea of ??the entire article. Therefore, one or two things should be grasped in the description of the scene; write them well and carefully, and use them to highlight the atmosphere of the entire scene.
3. Write a good atmosphere. Many characters are on a specific occasion. Although their words and deeds vary from person to person, there must be one event that attracts everyone's attention and concern. Because of the overall atmosphere (either sad, happy, or sad) displayed by this event, Excellent, or angry, or orderly, or chaotic and noisy... it is what the author should focus on describing. Writing this atmosphere well is very important for writing a good scene.
(1) Understand. The excitement in the playground, the excitement in the market, and the excitement in the party reflect different emotions and thoughts. The "liveliness" in the playground is energetic, innocent and lively; the "liveliness" in the market is different. "It means economic prosperity and business; the "liveliness" at the party means joy, happiness, and intoxication. The author needs to choose the content of the scene description based on the difference in connotation of "liveliness".
(2) To Write about the development and changes of the atmosphere. In real life, the atmosphere of some scenes changes with the activities of events and characters. For example, there was a lot of noise in the classroom before class, but as soon as the teacher entered the classroom, the students fell into silence. It is a change. We have seen in some movies and TV shows that the atmosphere of some scenes changes greatly. The key to writing the changes in the atmosphere of the scene is to grasp the development process of the event and write the changes in the atmosphere of the scene as the event develops, otherwise it will not change. Make people confused. 4. Use a variety of methods and techniques to describe scenes. Scene description involves people and events, which means that scene description is closely related to character description and event narration.
Scene description serves to record events and write about people, and pure scene description does not exist. Therefore, we must pay attention to learning to highlight the scene through the portrait, language, and behavioral description of the characters, and pay attention to the impact of the occurrence and development of events on the scene description.
How to write a good scene composition-------
There are many ideas and methods for writing event scenes. Here I will introduce to you a commonly used method of quick ideation:
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Beginning→Activity →End
Beginning: This is the beginning of the article, referring to What is important is to explain a certain activity clearly. Directly explain the time, location, participants, content of the event, etc. You can also start with a highlight reel. The highlight here refers to a wonderful detail in the event, or a wonderful shot, or a tense moment. For example, if you want to write about a tug-of-war competition, you can start like this: "Come on! Come on!" The cheers come one after another. What is this about? It turned out that this was the final of a tug-of-war competition.
Starting this way is easier to arouse the reader's interest and can achieve a fascinating effect.
Activity process: This is the key paragraph of the article, which needs to be described in detail. It is very important to write this paragraph well. You can first explain the time, place, people, the cause of the event, etc. Then describe the process of the activity in detail. When describing the process of an activity, you should pay attention to the following points: First, capture the exciting and interesting details of the activity to describe it. Especially those tense and interesting details must be described in detail. The second is to pay attention to describing the scene of the event in detail. When writing about activities, you need to be somewhat thoughtful. The face here refers to the description of the scene. Some scenes had to be written. Because the game is not a matter of one person, the game must be conducted by both parties. It’s not easy to describe an event scene in too long, just focus on writing it well. For example, write about crowds of people, write about tension, write about joy, write about atmosphere, etc. You can’t cover everything. The third is to pay attention to writing the process of the activity completely. What happened before the activity, what happened during the activity, and what happened after the activity, it is very important to describe clearly step by step, layer by layer.
End: You can explain the end of the activity, you can also express your thoughts and feelings, and express your happiness in participating in the activity. If you start with a highlight clip, you can also end with a highlight clip to echo the beginning of the article. The echo here is not the repetition of language, but the echo of content. Look at the ending below: "Come on! Come on!" The cheers got louder and louder. Who is the champion? ...
Ending with a highlight reel shows that the game is still going on, leaving plenty of room for readers to imagine. At the same time, it can also make the structure of the article complete and rigorous.