Although autumn is not as spring as the hundreds of flowers competing, fragrant and pleasant; not as vibrant as summer; and not as beautiful as winter. However, autumn is always colorful and most beautiful in my mind. Autumn is red, the maple tree leaves only in the fall will blush, far away, like the sunrise as red as autumn. I strolled down the street as if I had come to heaven on earth.
A gust of wind blew, maple leaves like a dancing butterfly left the embrace of the tree mother. They lie quietly on the ground, laying a red elegant carpet for the earth. Another wind blew, the leaves on the ground like a dreamy dove wanting to fly to the broad blue sky. Autumn is here, those beautiful and delicate flowers are too fragile to withstand the cold, have to hide, only the chrysanthemums stand up to the wind, proud of the frost and blossom, they open warmly, open the beautiful, a thousand forms, colorful. There are yellow, purple, countless. They are full of fragrance, smell the aroma of chrysanthemums, so that all the troubles dissipate. Autumn osmanthus fragrance, golden October, golden flowers in a group, a cluster, bloom full of branches, the petals, although only the size of a grain of rice, but the five young petals are like a jade carefully carved out, so small and exquisite! Its flavor was refreshing and intoxicating. They were blown down to the ground by the wind, and they were so delicate that no one could bear to step on them.
Autumn is a rainy season. The rain in the fall is like a fine needle like a cow's hair, it is much gentler than the rain in the summer, it washes everything, it nourishes the soul, the rain falls on the roof, playing a beautiful music. The car drove through the rain, splashing a small splash, such as the deep ripples in the depths of my heart. It cleanses our hearts. Autumn is colorful and it is the winner of the seasons. In short, a thousand words converge into one sentence; 'I love the colorful autumn'.
篇二：第七级优秀写景作文：黄昏Dusk came, and the evening sunlight, like a flame, burned up and burned half of the sky, and the air at this time was especially clear.
After a while, the sky gradually darkened, around the quiet, has not heard the daytime noisy and noisy noise. Sunset to the earth coated with a layer of golden afterglow. The setting sun slowly drilled into the thin layer of clouds, instantly colored the only white sky left in the west. The golden sunset reflected on the clear river surface, flashing with ten thousand points of golden light. At this time, not only the water surface, the sky, the land is also covered by the golden sunshine, at this time the birds flying through the air also put on a beautiful golden-colored clothes; and I, all over the body is also wrapped in a golden-colored bathrobe.
The distant east, there is a bright blue light dare not hover at the edge of the horizon, unwilling to exit the stage of the sky. At this time the sky is beautiful, not the sea as a flavor is washed light blue, there is no cloudy day when too much crowded together clouds, only all kinds of dreamy splendor. Those constantly evolving colors, a wave of impact on my mind, the great beauty of the silent, I forget to appreciate the dream world, I do not know where to be.
Gradually, the surrounding scenery more and more fuzzy:
The roadside flowers, grass and then the evening wind gradually fell asleep. The river is also no longer jumping, put away the temperament, quietly flowing.
Eventually, the last of the golden afterglow was swallowed by the earth, and the gray-blue curtain slowly descended. Then, gradually darker and darker. Finally turned gray-black. Night - the unstoppable descent.
Part III: Writing Scenery Essay_________________________ The Beauty of the Scenery
Composition guide: to write a good essay on writing scenery, you should pay attention to the following aspects:
First, go deep into the field, observe carefully, and accumulate materials.
As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." To write a good description of the scenery of the article, we must learn to observe, usually accumulate material. In the specific exercise, if you intend to write a particular scene, never by imagination, you should go into the field, careful observation, accumulation of writing materials. Common observation order:
(a), choose a good angle, fixed-point observation.
(b), step by step.
(c), seize the characteristics of the description of the object to observe. If you can't catch the characteristics when observing, the article you write will be uniform and can't infect the readers. Therefore, whether it is writing about the splendor of the spring flowers, or writing about the quiet beauty of the autumn leaves, is to write about the waves of the river and the sea, or write about the gurgling of the river, should be carefully observed to grasp their characteristics, to understand the whole picture of the scene, around a center to write. In addition, some scenery should be compared and contrasted at the same time, in order to find out what is different about this thing. For example, the observation of leaves, if not contrast, only staring at a kind of leaves, you will think that green is its biggest feature, but a ratio you will find that the pine leaves such as needles, willow leaves such as eyebrows, maple leaves like duck paws, which is their real characteristics.
Second, to do the "mood in the scene".
The so-called "feelings in the scene" is to send their feelings on the description of the scene. There is no emotional color of the scene is just a pale "shell" is not vital. In the description of the scenery, not only to write out the beauty of the scenery, but also to write out their true feelings, so that the characteristics of the scenery and their feelings naturally blend, all in one. So that the article can be written out of the scene contains feelings, feelings in the scene, scene blending, give a person a strong infectious force. For example: in the "rain" a lesson, the author describes: "under the sun, the mountains and forests of the color levels are so many that it is almost difficult to identify, there are dark green, emerald green, light green, golden, and there is also a general fire of red. In the rain, all the colors melted into a watery, tender green that was dazzlingly green and transparent. This fresh green flowed through the rain and mist, flowing into my eyes and into my heart." This passage describes the most charming color of the mountains and forests in the rain - "green", and the use of two "flow into" reflects two levels: this "green The use of two "flow into" reflects two levels: the "green" is not only seen by the eyes, but also felt with the heart, highlighting the "green" in the rain, the kind of unforgettable beauty. Through the description of the beauty of the color of the mountain rain, expressed the author's love of the mountain rain.
Third, to the combination of static and dynamic, to move against the static, constituting a perfect whole.
Static description, to draw the appearance of the scene, connotation, color and charm; dynamic description, to things. Action, sound, demeanor for detailed depiction, to achieve the effect of the scene of the God, vivid, vivid. In the writing of the scene, the static description and dynamic description of the organic combination, so that the scene has both static beauty, but also dynamic beauty, in order to y infect the reader. For example: in the "first snow" class wrote: "The snow fell the whole night. In the morning, the sky cleared, the sun came out. Push open the door and look, ho! What a big snow! Mountains, trees, houses, all covered with a thick layer of snow, thousands of miles of rivers and mountains into a world of powder. Fallen all the leaves of the willow tree, hung with furry, shiny silver bars; winter and summer green pine trees and cypress trees, piled up with fluffy, heavy snowballs. A gust of wind blew, the branches of the trees gently shook, the silver bars and snowballs rustling down, the jade-like snowflakes fluttering with the wind, reflecting the morning sun, showing a colorful rainbow." This fragment of the description of the author on the use of a combination of static and dynamic method to write the beauty of the snow.
Fourth, combined with the actual, the development of association.
Most of the scenery is static, if only to portray their appearance, it will appear dry, empty; if they are sprinkled with imagery "living agent", the scenery will immediately show the vitality of life. For example: in writing, when you wrote "lotus leaves swaying in the wind", followed by the thought of "as if the beautiful girl dancing." This way, the lotus leaves are close to the reader. When you see a bundle of rice imagined that they are like a girl with a braid so give life to the scenery, the scenery is compared to a living character image of the descriptive techniques, make the article more vivid image. In addition to the metaphor, you can also use anthropomorphism, hyperbole, prose and other rhetorical devices, the appropriate use of rhetorical devices can make the scene description more detailed, vivid, fascinating, giving people the enjoyment of beauty.
Fifth, the narrative is organized and clear.
When writing an essay, pay attention to a certain order to write, should be based on the need, or in chronological order, or in spatial order to write. In this way, it will make the article clear, the theme is prominent, not cluttered. At the same time, to write a good scene, but also have a rich vocabulary, vocabulary is not rich and then the beautiful scenery can not be depicted.
Model: The beauty of the sub-mountain
We took the car to the front of the True Ru Zen Temple, where we got out of the car, and then into the True Ru Zen Temple to burn incense and worship the Buddha, hiking along the mountain highway towards the tour of the sub-mountain.
Come to the foot of Yuzi Mountain, only to see Yuzi Mountain pulling up the sky, rolling. The pines and cypresses surround the entire mountain. A burst of crisp birdsong comes to your ears from time to time.
A rugged and bumpy mountain road interspersed in the woods, we are along the path towards the summit. The road was lined with large, lush, verdant trees. The trees on both sides of the road intertwined with each other, and even the hot sun was shaded, very cool. Along the way, birds and flowers, and sometimes there are a few colorful butterflies flying over the head.
Steep uneven mountain road is really not good, we hold the trunk of the tree, hold each other's hands before climbing to the mountainside. Finally climbed to the top of the mountain, but we were so tired that we could not wait to lie down on the ground, but soon attracted by the fascinating scenery. Looking from the top of the mountain, the distance is covered with turquoise grass, as if a soft green blanket spread on the ground. Golden rapeseed flowers are dotted on this green blanket. The yellow and green intertwined, looks really beautiful ah!
Time flies! We haven't enjoyed the beauty of this place enough, we are going home. We walked down the mountain with great reluctance.
Good words and phrases and paragraphs: bright / elegant / withered / budding / buds bloom / flowers bloom / group of flowers / flowers spread / colorful / flowers / fragrance / purple thousand red / overgrown / unusual climate / exotic flowers and grasses / branches and leaves / clean and upright / proudly standing / green trees / trees / lush green / green pines and cypresses / green and red / sweet and sour Delicious / frost and snow / in full swing / scattered / greasy green / breaking out of the ground / dense layers / heavy
1. The blooming flowers, not like a beautiful and lovely face?
2. In the sunshine, the pink peach blossoms give off a burst of fragrance and look both soft and colorful.
3. Yingshanhong bloomed, full of red mountains, like a cluster of burning flame, spectacular.
4. The trumpet flower's leaves are turquoise and green, thick and dense, and from a distance, it looks like a green cloth hanging in the air.
5. Ah, the petunias are in bloom. The hexagonal flower, like a small wine glass, looks more conspicuous and eye-catching in the sunlight.
6. The breeze, the green lotus leaves undulate with the wind, like a dancer swinging her beautiful long skirt.
7. Its oval leaves and beautiful flowers are nodding and smiling in the golden sunlight, as if welcoming you.
8. And look at the stream, the tufts of tender green grass, like soft ribbons, a moment in the water lightly curled floating, a moment and then stretch out, more beautiful than the painting.
9. The fir trees are verdant and upright, some of them are standing, some of them are disjointed, and some of them are old.
10. We walked into the woods, only to see that the leaves of the pine trees were still green, and there were many pine balls hanging on the pine branches, emitting a burst of fragrance.
11. "May Day" is here, the plantain grows taller, and the flower branch grows more. In the middle of a tree grew to more than two feet high, its stem thick and strong, standing; leaf long and broad, green with white. Around the eight trees clustered around the largest one in the center, like a group of stars holding the moon. Each has five or six leaves of different sizes. The largest leaf is forty centimeters long and twenty centimeters wide. (Capturing the leaves of the plantain to write, making a deep impression.)
12. You see, it is densely branched and leafy, from a distance like a strong pine in a large bonsai; close up, its main trunk has grown to more than two feet high, divided into countless branches. The shape of the Milan leaves, similar to the park planted holly, a bit like an oval, there is a small groove in the center is not deep or shallow. These leaves, some fat thick green, some delicate verdant, all shining bright. The flowers of the Milan are very peculiar, like grapes in bunches, and in the center of a young green main branch, about an inch long, and the branch is divided into countless twigs. Each branch has a small yellow ball, like a grain of rice. This is probably where the name "Milan" comes from! (When writing about plants and trees, you can't help but write about the leaves, the flowers, and the branches. These are the most distinctive features of plants. Think about it, is not every plant has its own characteristics?)
13. Plum blossoms grow in winter, no matter how cold the weather is, it still blooms with beautiful petals. No wonder many painters and poets are enamored by it. I like the plum blossom, not only because it has graceful flowers, but also because it has a fearless spirit, open proudly against the cold wind. I can't help but think of a poem written by Comrade Chen Yi in praise of the plum blossom: "When winter arrives, all the flowers have been cut off. The red plum does not yield, the tree stands up to the wind and snow." (The author is not only writing about plum blossoms, but also thinking about the spirit of plum blossoms and one of Chen Yi's poems. This poem is also from writing about flowers to writing about the spirit of flowers. (This kind of writing should be learned.)
14. Whenever the sun rises, the sunflower slowly blooms its petals, like a child just waking up. And when the sun goes down, it slowly tightens its petals together, as if it were a doll that has fallen asleep.
15. In early summer, the gorgonian usually grows to about one meter high, with thin stems, always in a cluster. Its leaves are large and round, roughly like lotus leaves, but much larger. The surface of the leaf is not smooth, like a toad with a pimple, but not ugly. This may be its charm! Look, the growth is so prosperous! The leaves are so crowded that they cover the entire pond. ("Spread out" is a good word to write the large and many leaves of the gorgonian.)
16. The leaves quietly drilled out of the petiole, at first, small and tender, yellow, and then light green. After the rain, the light green color lined with small drops of ice-clear water, the beauty is screaming! By the time they grow palm-sized, they become dark green, a leaf like a small green umbrella, covering the entire melon shed. (The process of writing about the leaves from small to large is written successfully. Find out how the author describes the process of growing leaves.)
17, the hot summer is over, melons and fruits everywhere in the fall came, all kinds of fruits are beginning to ripen, sand dates are also slowly ripe. Its color changes from green to yellow, from yellow to red, from a distance, the tree seems to be burning a small fire point. After the fruit is ripe, a string of red jujube, like an upside-down golden bell like hanging down, as if in the passer-by people boast about their beauty. The shape of the sand dates are round, like a red coral beads; there are oblong, like a piece of ruby, who see also can not help but want to pick a string to taste.
18, when the north wind whistling, mountains and rivers full of silver, winter came. The hard-working winter girl for the wheat seedlings covered with a thick quilt, for the earth to lay a silver thick carpet, small friends in the silver world of snowball fights, snowman, carefree running, laughing, and enjoying the game.
19, the distant mountains rolling, high and low, staggered, how can not let a person marvel at nature's ingenious work.
20, when the tender green grass from the ground to look at the world: when the willow buds put on new clothes; when the little swallows standing on the wire "twitter twitter" played the first movement of spring when the spring girl came. She came to visit long-lost friends, bringing them precious gifts --- spring breeze, spring rain. She made the spring more beautiful, more vibrant.
21, and the Jade Dragon Snow Mountain, the same "pure", is the shade of the small waterfall. However, and she is different from the small waterfall more than a part of the soft leaking and that uninhibited spontaneity, just and soft. Waterfall clear and transparent, she rubbed into the warmth of the sun, reflecting the sun's glare, her incessant beating with a beating heart, passionate, exuberant. She, "out of knots"-splashing the water droplets away; she, "ink in big places"-without stinting, the Spill youthful vigor; she, "unique" - in the form of a flowing life through the spring and fall, through her "cardamom years"
22, nature! She is ever-changing, she is like a never solved mathematical problems, profound; she is like an artist, the world of all things dressed in graceful; occasionally she also seems to be a temperamental person, a gentle, a gloomy, a grumpy. Nature gives us endless happiness, her charm is also endless. 18, from a close look at the woods are very lush, dense leaves blocked the brilliant sunlight, like a sea of green. Small flowers decorate the tender green grass, like a smile. The river is crystal clear, like a blue ribbon. The grass on the other side of the river is more energetic and angry, one by one, energetic and head high, and as if in the river said: "Thank you for every day with us, so that we are no longer lonely and lonely.
23, beautiful nature is like a beautiful song, melodious and lyrical; beautiful nature is like a magical pen, there are digging endless novelty; beautiful nature is like a poem, I have to write endless love.
24, more beautiful under the blue sky. Looking far away, is a rolling super-volatile peaks, like a group of soldiers defending the country as hand in hand in the prairie. Nearby a large tree is like a green giant standing on the ground to appreciate the scenery here. Colorful flowers compete with each other to open, dotted with turquoise lawn, which is how beautiful.
25, the mountains are so lofty and towering, how many people want to that peak to see the beautiful scenery ah! But to get to the top of that peak, you have to pass the test of the mountains, it is a spiritual tester, it contains the sand and gravel of the countries, it is so steep. It is so rugged that it only lets those who are not afraid of hardship and have tenacity to go to the top of the mountain for sightseeing; and those who are halfway up the mountain will never see the beautiful view from the top.
26, nature is so beautiful! Sky blue, clouds white, like a kind mother's arms holding a few cute and lively dolls, let people linger, look around, a mountain rolling, as if a huge dragon coiled in the blue sky, in the green mountains, the blue sky appears to be extraordinarily bright and clean. Standing in the mountains looking down, patches of forest as a piece of jasper inlaid in the earth.
27, spring, vibrant, a variety of plants were awakened by the spring, the trees are full of tender green buds, grass stretched out, drilling out of the soil, swallows from the south to fly back, all the way to enjoy the charming scenery of spring. Under the warm sun, we are free to fly a kite, really "grass on the warbler flying February day, brush the embankment willow drunk spring smoke" ah!
28, near the big tree branches and leaves. The grass leaves are fat and beautiful. The small flowers are very colorful. A gust of wind blew, flowers, grass, trees, wood, together played a "forest symphony", a butterfly with the "symphony" danced it.
29, when the autumn mother is busy for the number of golden clothes, autumn is here. A cool wind blew, the leaves have fallen, like butterflies dancing: the red apple, yellow and orange persimmons, bright crystal grapes, heavy rice ears, holding a big belly of corn, as well as farmers uncle face overflowing with joy, constructed a picture of how good it looks, so that we can fully feel when the sweet autumn autumn, autumn, the fragrance of the beauty of autumn.
30, the river is crystal clear, in the blue sky and white clouds nephew reflection, looks like a beautiful blue silk, quietly lying in the embrace of the earth. A group of small fish swim over the top of the water, the mirror-like surface of the water suddenly rippled a ripple.
31, into the nature, as if into a dream yellow colorful world. She is colorful, colorful. It is so wonderful, so harmonious, so magnificent, and so lovely. I desire to go into nature, because I love it; love its spring, summer, autumn and winter, love its beautiful scenery, beautiful emotions, beautiful language. Come on let me take you into nature.
Writing the beginning of the article:
1, contrast the total start. Example: Some people love the peach blossom, some people love the peony flower, but I love the chrysanthemum flower.
2, lyrics, famous lines in general. Example 1: "There is no flower, no tree high, I am a small grass that no one knows ......" Whenever I hear this familiar melody, I seem to see the silent, selfless dedication of the grass. Example 2 People say: "Five mountains return not to see the mountains, Huangshan return not to see the mountains." In October of autumn, I came to the dream of Mount Huangshan.
3, open the door to the general start. Example 1: My family has a pot of daffodils, elegant and pure, the whole family loves it. Example 2: As soon as you walk into the campus, you will see a big tree - the sycamore tree. I heard the teacher say it is more than 100 years old, it is like an old grandpa who has been through a lot of changes! I love the sycamore tree. Example 3: My hometown is in Rudong by the South Yellow Sea, which Emperor Qianlong called "the first freshness in the world". The scenery there is beautiful and rich in produce.
4, lyrical. Example: I saw the sea for the first time, the sky is so blue, the sea's bosom is so broad. I would like to sing a song to express my pleasant ah!
5, anthropomorphic lyric. Example: ah! Spring girl came, the earth everything is laughing. Spring, what a charming scenery.
6, inverted memory. Example: The reed flakes that flutter in the sky in the fall of my hometown have always been in my mind, and I can't get rid of them.
The end of the article:
1, lyrical: Example: Ah! Snowflakes, you bring people the beauty of white and elegant. Snowflakes! I wish all people's character is as clear and clean as you.
2, summarize. Example: the oleander has such toughness, and can cause me so many fantasies, I love oleander.
3, lyrics, verse style. Example 1: Look at this mountain and this water, really "boat on the blue waves, people in the painting." Example 2: "You come out of the mud without staining, the whole body dedication a trace of no regrets. Ah! ...... "This character of the lotus caused how many people appreciate.
4, association praise style. Example: I praise the plum blossom alone in the cold, but also praise the chastity, simplicity and purity of the people.
5. Example: Looking at this tall selfless sycamore tree in front of me, when can I be like it?
6, natural mood. Example: The setting sun offered the last trace of afterglow and left with a smile. However, tomorrow the sunrise will rise again ......
7, looking back style. Example: Every now and then I look back fondly for a few moments, not paying attention, almost fell a somersault. The persimmon forest in my hometown is so tempting.
8, natural summary. Example: Several years have passed, I grew up, oleander also grew tall. Looking at the white beautiful oleander, I love it more than before.