Late look, time, behavior, that is, the view seen at night on the mountain.
With Huang Xiangshi Zhuzi, that is, with Huang Xiangshi these people.
Together the translation is:
The evening and Huang Xiangshi and a group of other people, watching the scenery on Yuexiu Peak.
Attached is a commentary on the poem.
Yuexiu Peak, or Yuexiu Mountain, is in Yuexiu Park in the northern part of present-day Guangzhou. The famous attractions on the mountain, such as the Yue Wang Terrace, the Song and Dance Gondola, and the Zhen Hai Building (a five-story building), etc., were extremely attractive to those who had the chronic disease of smoky haze and the gypsum blindness of springs and gypsums. Tan Jingzhao and poet Huang Xiangshi (Huang Peifang, the word Xiangshi, and Tan Jingzhao, Zhang Weiping, known as the three sons of Guangdong East), climbed to the top of Yuexiu Mountain, in the twilight, far away, only to feel the sallow heart, reverie. This seven ji, with crisp language, bright and cheerful tone, expresses this pleasant feeling of the poet on the Yangcheng Jiangshan.
The green mountains on the river, that is, the poet stopped Yuexiu Peak; the river outside the mountains, Guide to the country's first large river Pearl River. Yuexiu Peak is only a few miles away from the Pearl River that flows from its south, and although the mountain and the river are not close at hand, they are all within sight. Such a distance constitutes an effective aesthetic span. Within this span, the verdant and lush Yuexiu Mountain stands above the Pearl River; the Pearl River, with its vast waves, flows horizontally beyond the Yuexiu Mountain, and the mountains and the water are picturesque and very interesting.
The "distant sails" sentence further writes on the mountain to the river to look out and see: the distant river is dotted with sailing fishing boats. The description of this distant scene, with a wide perspective and a broad view, not only illustrates the content of the word "look" in the title, but also hints at the meaning of "evening" and contrasts the height of Yuexiu Peak.
Only on the mountain and the river itself, only write the "evening look" static (return boat too far, motion and static is not clear), express the twilight of the city of Yangcheng ethereal and vivid charisma. In order to seek the effect of ethereal and flowing rhyme, the poet chose to suddenly present in front of the eyes of a picture: "the old crane flying south across the sky". This scene has a tense, dynamic, and the scene written in the last two lines is different from the static and dynamic, which is interesting, and can pull the poem. In ancient times, Guangzhou was full of cranes, and those who wrote about the scenery of Yangcheng often used cranes in their poems. For example, the poem "Po Mountain" by Lai Min-table of the Ming Dynasty: "Purple gas and two dragons are straight, and the blue sky is crossed by a crane." Tan Jingzhao's "old crane" is not a fiction, but an opportunity to trigger the poet's inspiration and energize the poem.
Inspired, the poet chanted the most enjoyable line: "I brought the sound of the bell to the sea building". Haibang, Haibang Temple, a famous ancient temple in Guangzhou, on the south bank of the Pearl River, and the north bank of the Yuexiu Mountain, that is, today's Haibang Park. The old crane flew from north to south in the direction of Haibang Temple, and the poet believed that it could bring the sound of bells on the mountain to Haibang Temple. In fact, the sound of the bell in the evening on Yuexiu Peak cannot be carried by the old crane. To say "carry" is a special rhetorical device. It writes the invisible sound waves as visible movements, and writes the imagined idea as a factual existence, creating a surprising and intriguing effect.
These four lines of the poem do not use much ink, but in the four lines, the beginning and the end are well organized. The first line is chic, the second line is skillful, the third line is abrupt, and the fourth line is meaningful, which vividly describes the freshness and timelessness of the evening view of Yuexiu Peak.