On Monday, night fell,
the sky became pitch black,
like a huge blackboard. Suddenly,
a faint light appeared in front of my eyes. What is that?
Ah! That's the moon. (Does the moon really appear like this?) Today's moon is very round, and there are also sparse stars on the side (this word is not beautiful, it would be better to change it to a few stars hanging dotted, or there is a better description) ) There are several stars embedded in the ground, which look particularly bright and beautiful in the dark night sky.
On Saturday, night falls and the bright moon rises in the east (the moon has already risen here, which is inconsistent with the moon behind it), and we look far into the dark night sky. The moon appears again. Today, it is semicircular, like a small cradle, rocking the star baby, floating in the gorgeous Milky Way.
Another week passed, and the lovely figure in the night sky appeared again. The moon still comes so suddenly, but today, it is crescent-shaped, like a chrysanthemum petal blooming in the blue night sky. With the dancing stars, it can't help but dance in a circle. (This description is very good, using metaphors and personification, and it is relatively new.)
I love the moon because it gives me so much magic! (Modify to: It makes me think the sky is so magical.)