Moonlight on the Lotus Pond begins with a simple sentence. In order to relieve my depression, I walked to the quiet lotus pond by moonlight. "Uneasy heart" is the emotional clue of the full text, which endows the lotus pond and moonlight with different colors and creates specific conditions for lyric writing in the future. In the faint moonlight, I feel like a "free man" alone in the lotus pond world. So wandering in the lotus pond, intoxicated by the moonlight, a beautiful moonlight painting of the lotus pond is presented to the readers. The author first gives a bird's eye view of the panoramic view of the lotus pond under the moon, giving a general impression, and then writes it in layers from top to bottom. Lotus leaves in the field are as beautiful as dancers' skirts; Lotus is dotted with various postures, such as shining stars and milky pearls; The breeze sends fragrance, the leaves move and the flowers quiver, and the water is affectionate. In this painting, the author is not satisfied with the static description of the objective scenery, but the combination of static and dynamic, vividly conveying the vitality of the lotus pond. Then the writer focuses on the beauty of moonlight. Light is elusive, but writers use scenery to create a fascinating and intoxicating artistic conception. Flowing moonlight pours on flowers and leaves, such as "thin blue fog" and "veiled dream" There are both real and imaginary writing methods, which show the lotus's wandering posture in the hazy moonlight. In order to enhance the moonlight effect, the author tries to imitate the moon's projection, such as the "shadow" of uneven bushes and the "sparse and beautiful shadow of curved willow", and these "shadows" are like "painted on lotus leaves", where light and shadow are interlaced, and trees on the shore are connected with lotus flowers in the pond, deliberately writing moonlight, but the harmonious melody of light and shadow is not forgotten everywhere in the lotus pond. Finally, I wrote about the lotus pond around. The willow is covered with thick ink, and I write down the scene under the moon. The treetops face the distant mountains, and the lights in the tree crevices and the drums of cicadas and frogs are touched and dyed at will, only to add vitality, and the silence and sound reflect the tranquility of the lotus pond in the shade. The author enjoyed the fragrant moonlight for a while, and immediately felt heavy pressure when he returned to reality, and his heart became more and more restless. At the end of the article, the author's thoughts on the ancient scenery of picking lotus in Jiangnan are written. Although it is not in reality, with the help of association, it enlarges the picture of the lotus pond, which is more fresh and elegant, and at the same time expresses the author's yearning and pursuit for a better and free life.
The artistic achievements of Moonlight on the Lotus Pond are various. First of all, the article pursues a poetic beauty. The author mobilizes all artistic techniques to create a realm of poetic and picturesque scenery. What is poetic in the works is the beauty of moonlight in the lotus pond. From time to time, the author takes the lotus pond as the main scene, moonlight as the background, combines dynamic and static, and uses vivid metaphors and synaesthesia techniques to describe the boundless scenery of the lotus pond in the moonlight from far and near, from inside to outside. The author sometimes uses the moonlight as the main scene and the lotus pond as the background, and skillfully uses the truth and reality to outline the moonlight style of the whole lotus pond in the shade. The author tries to explore the poetry contained in nature, so that the sound, light, color and taste are full of charm, which is as charming as the moonlight in the lotus pond. This writing method of setting off feelings with scenes and blending scenes not only makes the works poetic, but also makes them interesting and beautiful.
Ingenious conception and layout are another remarkable feature of Moonlight on the Lotus Pond. The mood of writing at the beginning of the work is quite restless, which is the origin of the lyric clues of the work. The article takes "I" as the main line and the behavior of the characters as the clue. The lyrical process of the full text is gradually deepened with the author's steps and line of sight. In writing, the lotus pond and moonlight are the center, and the surrounding background is appropriately dyed. The layout is clear and distinct, the details are appropriate, the density is alternating, and it stretches naturally.
The language of Zhu Ziqing's prose is elegant, beautiful, novel and natural. The moonlight in the lotus pond keeps this color. Zhu Ziqing pays great attention to the tempering of language, portraying his mood with light pen and light spoken language, and expressing his feelings. The use of verbs and reduplications in Moonlight on the Lotus Pond not only accurately and vividly renders and strengthens the meaning of the poem, but also has clear rhythm and harmonious rhythm. Rich in musical beauty.