Small Stone Pool Note
Liu Zongyuan
From the hill westward a hundred and twenty paces, across the bamboo, heard the sound of the water, such as the sound of the ringing of peyhuan, the heart of the music. Cutting bamboo to take the road, down to see the small pool, the water is especially fresh and new. The whole stone for the bottom, near the shore, roll the bottom of the stone to out, for him, for the island, for the Evidence, for the rock. Green trees, green vines, Mengluo shaking embellishments, and different phases of the whisker.
The fish in the pool can be a hundred or so heads, all if the empty swim without any dependence. The sunlight is clear, the shadow cloth on the stone, motionless; Beginning of the far away, to and from the open and close. It seems to be happy with the swimmers. Its shoreline is different from each other, can not know its source.
Sitting on the pool, surrounded by bamboo trees on all sides, no one in the world, miserable God cold bones, quiet and profound. To its realm is too clear, can not live for a long time, is remembered and go.
Tourists: Wu Wuling, Gong Gu, Yu Di Zongxuan. The person who is subordinate to and from, Cui's two young students: said forgive self, said Feng Yi.
This ancient text uses the move to change the scenery, the author in the move to change to lead us to enjoy a variety of different scenery, with a strong sense of dynamic picture. From the hill to Huangzhu, from Huangzhu to hear the sound of water, and then by the sound of water to the small pool, about the discovery of the small pool of the process, full of suspense and explore the interest, and gradually unfolded in front of people a wonderful picture.
2. Briefly describe the concept and basic usage of "changing scenery" and examples
Changing scenery is one of the most common writing techniques used in travelogues.
It refers to the unfixed point of view (i.e., foothold and observation point), according to the location of the transfer and a certain point of view, the different things seen in the narrative and description down. Both the point of view and the object to be described and illustrated are shifting.
The use of "step by step" technique must be based on the foothold of the spatial changes in order to explain clearly, often spatial order and chronological order, on this basis around the center of the integrated use of narration, description, lyricism, illustration of the mode of expression, so that written into the travelogue is clear, focused, vivid language, and strong infectious power. Infectious force is strong. Example of the appreciation of the city of Europe to win the title novel, chic.
The word "roaming" is written in a subtle way. I have long heard that there is a European city in Wuxi, coupled with a lot of publicity in the news media, so I would like to take the opportunity of this social study, to the long-awaited European city to go back in style.
Just get off the car did not walk a few steps, there is a tall Roman-style building into my eyes, the original is the famous Temple of Zeus. On the iron-gray walls are bas-reliefs of the gods of Greek mythology.
Just see them all cold face, not smiling, plus cylindrical marble columns, the whole temple is full of a solemn, solemn atmosphere, but also a touch of mystery. Shengjing a: write "Temple of Zeus" solemn, solemn When I was still immersed in the solemn atmosphere just now, in front of me is clear, standing in the temple on the stone steps, dozens of different styles, small and large and patchwork of European buildings as far as the eye can see, it seems to be the center of the European city has arrived.
Walking down the high stone steps, first came to the "musical fountain". Closer to see the pool in a large blue wave, a dozen bronze cast statues lifelike, but also different forms.
Among them are both full-faced beard, hold the cheeks of the old man in thought, but also physical fitness, ready to fight the soldiers, but also no lack of physical curvature of the young girl. And in the center of the pool is the mermaid in the fairy tale, holding a vase, held high in the air ...... just when I appreciate this beautiful statue, the music suddenly, only to see the mermaid hands held high in the vase first sprayed a two-meter-high water column.
Then, the water column will continue to come out of the pool. This one water column as if by an invisible conductor command, and the beat of the music, sometimes ups and downs, sometimes left and right twist.
These water columns form a beautiful and variable pattern, and then look at the water that still stands statue, static in the movement, movement in the quiet. I was once again impressed by this exquisite art, and y admire the intelligence and wisdom of mankind.
Scenery two: write "musical fountain" vivid. When I still look back fondly at the musical fountain, I do not realize that we have come to the "Arc de Triomphe".
Looking at the great building standing in front of me, caressing the words engraved on it, I can not help but think of two hundred years ago, France **** and the founder of the country Napoleon triumph in Paris, the people holding flowers to welcome him. At this time, and then look up at the Arc de Triomphe on the relief of the god of war Ares, thought: only Napoleon - the then "god of war", can enjoy this great honor.
Scenery three: write "Arc de Triomphe" reminiscent of Napoleon's triumph in Paris. Through the "Arc de Triomphe", I came to the magical colors of the British Stonehenge, to the distant towering Acropolis left a picture, but also excited to pass the horror of the Devil's Town and the beautiful Russian Garden ...... write a few spots in a rich and exotic attractions. After passing through a variety of exotic attractions, and finally came to the "European Street".
This is a real exposition of universal architecture, the Netherlands, Britain, Switzerland, Spain, France, all kinds of buildings. The most memorable is the sculpture of Cupid in the center of the street.
The little angel's eyes gazed downward, and it seemed to be ready to open the bow and arrow to fulfill the world's lovers. People will not let go of such a good opportunity.
"Click, click, click, click, click", the landscape of Europe City has been forever in the memory. Winning Scene 4: Write Europe Street.
Focus on writing the Cupid sculpture. Europa City is indeed unforgettable, not only because of its charm, but also because it is a witness to the cultural exchange between East and West.
The point at the end of the article, pointing out the significance. Example comments This is a very successful travelogue, the following two points are worth emulating: First, the idea is clever.
The beginning of the introduction of the "European City" is the CCTV location in Wuxi. The main part of the skillful use of the "step by step" technique, the "European City" one by one, the end of the lyrical, argumentative point of significance.
The second is to seize the characteristics, the use of a variety of techniques, multi-angle of the scene to describe, or detailed, or abbreviated, detailed: spilling; abbreviated: dragonfly water, or metaphor, or anthropomorphism, or prose, vividly depicted the "European City" of the winning scene. The first thing you need to do is to introduce me to the Five Abbot Plains. Friends, do you like to listen to the story of "Three Kingdoms"? If so, then you must know my "five zhangyuan" name - I am in Baoji City, Shaanxi Province, Qishan County territory, is the year Zhuge Liang Tun military attack Wei, and later died of the place.
Are you eager to travel to me? Now, let me first briefly introduce myself. Less than two hours by car from the city, you can come to me.
The first thing that comes into your eyes is the steep slope, on top of which there is a curved path like a white silken belt, winding its way through the verdant cypress forests and finally landing in front of you. At its end, there is a spring with three teacup-thick streams of clear water spouting out of a green stone-built fountain.
Don't underestimate this spring, it was the place where the Shu army took water back then. If you really come to visit me, I will treat you to a few sips of my "Shu army water", so that it will help you to climb to the top of the mountain.
In my top, sitting south to north there is a rectangular layout of the building complex, that is, "Zhuge Liang Temple". Walked into the temple door written with "Han lonely loyal" "West Shu wise prime minister" "Nanyang pure Confucian" twelve strong and powerful words, look around, you will be for the temple wall corners have the millstone thick ancient acacia trees and marveled at the temple. The temple is a great place for the ancient trees of the temple wall.
These four ancient acacia trees are still lush and green despite their age. Sometimes I can't believe that they are so resilient.
The first large hall you enter is called the Hall of Dedication. The walls on both sides of the Hall of Dedication are *** inlaid with forty large, two-foot-square slabs of lapis lazuli with inscriptions on them, small like fists, large like buckets, in a staggered pattern.
3. Shifting scene writing methodShifting scene method is not fixed footholds and observation points, while walking while watching, to see the different scenes in order to describe down.
Its main performance:
(1) the whereabouts of the account clearly
(2) into the mountains to capture the characteristics of the deep sea of forest to write. In this way, the author takes his own whereabouts as a clue to show the appearance of many kinds of scenery at different times, so that the reader can feel a dynamic beauty and overall beauty.
The use of the method of changing scenery, should pay attention to the following points:
① trail clues a consistent, clear coming and going. Because the owner of the trail is mostly the author himself, so it is generally appropriate to use the first person. So the article to "I" travel as a clue to write, will not be cluttered.
② change of foothold must be clearly explained. Move and change the scene must be consistent, never beyond the foothold to depict the scene. That is to say, with the protagonist of the "step", constantly changing footholds, what "footholds", there should be what "object of observation".
③ To form and spirit. Form, refers to the external appearance; God, refers to the essential features. Description of both can not only seek "shape" like, but also can not have "God" no "shape", shape and God, like "God" The main, as far as possible to highlight the uniqueness of the object being described. Therefore, the "step by step" is by no means a naturalistic tour of the landscape, must be written out of the author's unique feelings.
④ Coarse and fine to combine. The rough outline and detailed description should be dialectically united, so that people have a generalized outline impression of the object being described, but also to be able to specifically perceive the situation of the scene in detail, in order to have a more comprehensive understanding of the object of the description.
⑤ Real and imaginary writing should be combined in a dialectical way. The first thing you need to do is to get a good understanding of the situation, and then you can make a decision on how to proceed.
4. On the "step by step" essayA Sunday morning, the golden wind, the busy city is still immersed in the quiet dawn, I came with my family to the nearby Fuxing Park for a walk.
Into the park gate, the first eye is full of yellow leaves, tall French sycamore, lost the green leaves in the past, the shade of the ramp of the elegance of the show a few points of the dashing and thin to, reminiscent of the old man full of hobbling steps. Trees from time to time falling pieces of yellow leaves, hovering with the wind, "from the sky", scattered in the lawn, ponds, paths, to the beautiful garden landscape painted a layer of mottled color.
Inside the garden, the large open lawn, shallow grass flat, full of autumn, in the morning light, like a large carpet of golden color. All around the tall cedars, green leaves, lush, make people feel infinite vitality.
Along the walking path, everywhere you look in the flower beds, flowers in full bloom, the scenery is delightful. A string of red like a burning flame, open; white chrysanthemums like ivory on the exquisite crafts, flowers, large, clear and clean, set in a string of red around the red, red and white rely on each other, reflecting each other, it is really beautiful!
Walking to the lotus pond, I do not feel attracted by the pattern of leaves in the pool, varying shades of yellow leaves, floating in the pool when the sinking, some of the lone floating on the water, like a flat boat in the lake, some three or five pieces of the pool together, blown by the wind when the time to be away from the wind, there is a split, in front of the human eye to visualize a puppy, kitten, high-rise buildings, mountains, and other fuzzy image to. An autumn wind blew, the pool sparkling ripples, they will run together to the side of the pond, nothing like it. Only snuggled in the corner of the pond water leaves, let the wind blow, always maintain a fixed shape.
We walked out of the garden in the endless into the garden morning exercise of the elderly side, and by this time, surrounded by a brilliant fall sun.
5. Step by step to change the scene of a small exercise 50 wordsToday, I went with my father and mother to one of the gardens in Suzhou, "the Humble Administrator's Garden", the first reflected in front of me is "the Humble Administrator's Garden" three big words, the Humble Administrator's Garden is an outstanding representative of the Chinese gardens, but also the largest classical gardens in Suzhou, covering an area of about 1.5 square kilometers. The Humble Administrator's Garden is an outstanding representative of Chinese gardens and the largest classical garden in Suzhou, covering an area of 78 acres. It was built in 1509, the fourth year of Zhengde in the Ming Dynasty, and has a history of nearly 500 years. The garden is divided into three parts: east, center and west, and the residential part is built into the Suzhou Museum. Cai trade scene is elegant and beautiful, reflecting the Ming Dynasty garden far away from the Ming Thayer, simple and natural art style
Into the garden in front of me is a refreshing picture, there is bright sunshine, beautiful flowers, bridges, running water, and people are happy.
Walked through the Tianquan Pavilion to listen to the rain, as if in the rain hit Basho, quietly listen to the rain of love. And then walked through the rain Pavilion to the Jia Shi Pavilion ...... we are completely intoxicated in this charming scenery, here in the garden in the garden, pavilion in the pavilion, as if never finished, it is really "endless doubt, dark flowers and a village." Gradually the sun is about to set, I reluctantly left the Humble Administrator's Garden, embarked on the journey home.
6. step by step to write a paragraph (50 words)You look at yourself, feel free to copy a paragraph into my hometown is a good place, recently in the bustling city center and built a picturesque riverfront square.
It and the ancient Zhongbai a store away from each other, east of the majestic Drum Tower Bridge, south across the Dongcheng River, ribbon like stretching into the distance, surrounded by trees, flowers. This has become a good place for Taizhou people to spend time and play.
One day, and the wind is pleasant, I hold my mother's hand tightly, stepping on the summer evening afterglow, excited to come to the long-awaited Riverfront Square. Once in the square, only to see people come and go, people are smiling.
Along the stone paved path forward, all the way to the fragrance of the flowers, dragonflies flying, look around, only to see a group of red unknown flowers swaying in the wind, such as a smear of sunset in the sky slowly moving, only dragonflies in the bushes shuttle, and some of the total disregard for the outside world, quietly standing in the flowers, as if listening to the flowers of the whispers. Immediately next to the children's world, a group of children playing slide, swinging, hanging bar ...... all smiles, laughter continues to come, let a person feel endless free.
Squeezed through the group of children, it came to the square's main center. I saw a tall white sail high up, like a large tent in the wind gently swaying, the sail around the set with a little light, flashing, hidden, such as the illusion of a general, the sailboat gathered a large number of people, I squeezed into the crowd, I saw a young man wearing ice skates, with the music like a small swallow in the light flying, sometimes high up a foot, open arms, such as the roc spread its wings; and then Bend low, swooping, such as a tiger downhill; sometimes to an air inverted, such as a small monkey fishing for the moon, around the applause, applause, I can not help but follow the shout up: "good, good."
I reluctantly left the center of the square, straight to the south. There, too, the songs were loud and clear, and the crowd was loud and clear.
Look around, only to see the lights, countless water columns scurrying to the sky, and suddenly into a variety of shapes, such as treacherous peaks, such as a curved arch bridge, such as a giant ball of crystal, such as a hanging pearl curtains, the music is gradually low, the columns of water have become quiet, slowly lowering, contraction, and then into an identical blooming autumn chrysanthemums, the water droplets also gradually fall into the lake, a little bit of swirling Open up, the light shines on it, although it is night, but clearly see the bottom of the lake water plants, swimming fish swaying delicate body playful, playful. At this time, I would like to become a water plant, a fish and they play together, but I can not, I had to bend down, pulled up his hands, hold up the water to drink a mouthful, ah, so cool! Glacier Square water gurgling into the heart, so I can not forget.
I can not help but love this beautiful scenery.
I can't help but fall in love with this beautiful landscape.
The most common method of writing traveler's essays is to change the scenery with a change in the trail and a change of scenery. That is to say, in order to the change of the trail and the transformation of the scenery, from a different foothold in the description of the scenery of the writing method.
Above is the concept
Below is absolutely my own writing, with personality guarantee
We came to the park in the lotus pond. Lotus flowers bloom, dragonflies fly, small fish swim in the pool. The whole is a complete indirect brush painting. After the lotus pond, is a rockery, abrupt rocks, jagged silhouette, from a distance, is a pocket version of Mount Tai. Next to the rockery is a small garden. Here I saw my favorite colorful butterflies. Fluttering and dancing, but also mischievous fly to my cheeks, and thought I had flowers on my face. But at this moment, my face really smiled into a flower