The Moonlight in the Lotus Pond Teaching Design

I. Introduction of the new lesson:

We learned Zhou Dunyi's "Love Lotus" in the beginning of the school, and the lotus in the eyes of the author is high and pure, simple and dignified. "out of the mud without dyeing", "Maundy and not demon" these two sentences to experience. I don't know how the students see the lotus? Have you ever admired a lotus flower under the moonlight? Have you ever felt that the lotus leaves under the moonlight is like a group of dancers, and the lotus is like a pearl, like a star, like a beauty just out of the bath?

Today we will study Zhu Ziqing's "Moonlight in a Lotus Pond", enjoy the moonlight in the pond, the moonlight in the lotus, and experience the author's mood at that time. Look at the author through the description of the lotus pond, there is no reflection of the "Love Lotus" in the dirt, cleanliness and self-centeredness.

Second, solve the problem

The lotus pond, referring to the lotus pond in the Tsinghua Garden of Tsinghua University in Beijing, where Mr. Zhu Ziqing was teaching at the time, is the specific place depicted in this article. The night, on the other hand, points to the time, a night with the moon.

Third, the writing background

Zhu Ziqing in his youth had participated in the "May Fourth" movement, aspired to the October Revolution in Russia, and later joined the struggle against the Beiyang Warlords. 1927 Chiang Kai-shek defected from the revolution, the Chinese revolution was at a low ebb, Chiang Kai-shek, Wang Jingwei's fascist atrocities provoked the Chinese **** The fascist atrocities of Chiang Kai-shek and Wang Jingwei aroused the resistance of the Chinese party members and the revolutionary people, and at the same time aroused the dissatisfaction and condemnation of a part of the upright intellectuals. Zhu Ziqing was a writer with a sense of justice. He was dissatisfied with the bloody massacre of the reactionaries, but because of the limitations of the class, did not have the courage to face up to the bloody reality, can only use a negative attitude to express dissatisfaction and resistance, and write this article.

Fourth, the interpretation of the text

Through the preview, students can give the text divided into levels? Can you tell the reason for the division?

The whole text is divided into three main parts:

The first part (1): the reason for the moonlit night walk in the lotus pond.

The second part (2~6): the quiet charm of the lotus pond.

The third part (7~8): the beauty of the lotus pond and the moonlight evokes thoughts of home.

Analyzing the text: in the process of analyzing, students pay attention to find out the clues of the author's writing.

The first part (1)

1. What is the reason for "quite unsettled"? Was there a conflict in the family?

After the failure of the Revolution in 1927, the author, faced with the dark reality, hoped to revolt, but did not have the courage to face up to the bloody reality, and hoped to be relieved but could not be relieved of the contradictory feelings.

Not the contradictions at home, "wife in the house patting the leap child, humming sleep song in a daze", here you can clearly see the child peacefully who, his wife humming sleep song, everything is very quiet, very cozy; in the "bring the door out" in the "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring", "bring". The word "bring" in "bring the door out" means to gently close the door from behind, and to keep the environment quiet by moving gently and casually. If there is a conflict, closing the door is not so light, reflecting the author's concern for the family.

2, the second sentence can be seen in the author hopes to vent their feelings of bitterness, so that their mood can be calm. The author remembered the lotus pond, to the following tour of the lotus pond buried the ambush.

3. "The moon gradually rose, the laughter of the children on the road outside the wall, has been inaudible; wife in the house patting the leap, humming a sleep song in a daze" This sentence from the "has been inaudible" and" This sentence from the "no longer heard" and "wife in the house, patting the leap, humming sleep song in a daze" reflects the tranquility of the environment, but also reflects the author's "quite unsettled", prompting the author to hope that with the help of the tranquil environment, and to get the tranquility of the heart.

Summary of this paragraph in the "day by day, gradually, confused, quietly" this writing superimposed words, resulting in a rhythmic beauty in the prolongation of the voice, semantics and emotion is also endless, memorable.

This paragraph has a sentence is the whole text of the eye. Meaning: "eye of the text" is to reveal the whole of the main idea of the pen, but also the organization of the prose structure of the key clues, is the focus of the artistic conception of the prose.

Which sentence is the eye of the text? ---- The heart is quite unsettled these days.

The second part (2-6) of the moonlight in the lotus pond (the main body of the essay)

What clues does this part follow? Try to organize it.

The road (2-3 paragraphs) - the lotus pond in the moonlight (4 paragraphs) - the moonlight on the lotus pond (5 paragraphs) - around the lotus pond ( (6 paragraphs)

The second paragraph

1. What are the characteristics of the path? What techniques does the author use in this paragraph to describe the path?

Twists and turns, seclusion, many trees, loneliness are the characteristics of the path, twists and turns and many trees constitute the important conditions of seclusion, seclusion leads to loneliness.

The author uses the technique of contrast to describe. In the daytime (less people walk) and the night (more lonely) contrast; no moonlight (gloomy) and light moonlight (very good) contrast.

2. Why does the author use the technique of contrast to set off the moonlit path? The author said, "This path is seldom traveled, and with many trees, it looks gloomy, but when there is a moonlit night, it is very good", isn't it?

This is related to the artistic expression of the prose, the author through the contrast will be more seemingly that night's tranquility and their own inner loneliness. The last two sentences more through the contrast, more apparent in the special environment of the special atmosphere, special mood, "light moonlight" has a sense of haze, this atmosphere of the previous gloomy cold atmosphere to dispel, more reflective of the author's mood at that time.

3. What superlatives did the author use to describe the scene? What is the tone of the scenery? What kind of mood is revealed?

luxuriant, gloomy, pale; pale, hazy feeling; the author here did not use a warm, exciting tone, highlighting his faint sadness.

The third paragraph The author's feelings when he went to the lotus pond.

1. What is the difference in expression if the word "pace" is replaced by "walk"?

If you think, if you feel, walking slowly, unhurriedly, slowly, orderly footsteps, "pacing" of these properties, better reflect the following "heaven and earth seems to be my", the author is enjoying the free world, in a leisurely, transcendent, and the author is not a free world, in a leisurely, transcendent, and the author is enjoying the free world. The world, in the leisurely, transcendent, faint three sorrows in the hidden. If you replace the word "go", you will lack the charm of the integration of the scene.

2. Connect with the context to understand how the "usual self" is? And what is it like to be yourself now?

The ordinary self is bitter, uncertain, want to escape and difficult to transcend; we can see from the following, he is now a free man.

3, from now on the author began to change, this paragraph which sentence best reflects the author's mood has changed, and get temporary relief?

"What must be done in the daytime, what must be said, can now be ignored."

Here the author with the help of a quiet path, quiet pond, began to exclude boredom, uncertainty. The color of the moon is pale, walking alone on the pond, seems to have entered "another world". In this world, "I can think of anything, and I can think of nothing." The author has become a "free man".

Is the author really a "free man"?

The author here writes in a very transcendent way, and it should be said that this is what the author desires in his heart but cannot achieve in reality. The more transcendent and free, the more the author's misery in reality, the author and free man in reality.

4. "This is the beauty of being alone" responds to the above sentence, "I love to be lively, but also love to be calm; I love to live in a group, but also love to be alone. The "love of solitude".

5, "This is the beauty of solitude, and I'll take advantage of the boundless lotus and moonlight."

From light sorrow to light joy, the author's mood began to melt into the lotus pond.

To summarize this paragraph, the author's mood begins to be relieved, from light sorrow to light joy.

The fourth paragraph of the lotus pond in the moonlight

1. "Miyan" - full of vision, full of eyes. "Tian Tian"-many, continuous.

2. In the second sentence, a simile is used, the dancer's skirt. Similar to the natural spread of the leaves, this metaphor is "multilateral", that is, it not only expresses the "lotus" noble, but also conveys its symbol, elegant, holy, ethereal, dynamic, cool and other charms, so that the leaves produce a sense of movement, so that people have a sense of immersion, so that the characteristics of things more feeling, make things more distinctive and specific characteristics.

"Pavilion" echoes which word?

With the "high" echo, because the leaves out of the water is very high, in order to clearly see the leaves stretching, the author will be associated with the dancer's skirt.

3, "layers" - high and low.

4. "In the middle of the layers of leaves, sporadically dotted with some white flowers, some slinking open, some shyly dozing" Which rhetorical device is used in this sentence?

Anthropomorphism; anthropomorphism can be used in response to the above "dancer", the lotus stem like a dancer, leaves like a dancer's skirt, and the flowers will be like a dancer's face, so that the whole image of the dancer vividly expressed.

5, "as a grain of pearl, and as a star in the blue sky, and as a beauty just out of the bath", this sentence uses a metaphorical rhetorical device, why the lotus flower is compared to a grain of pearl, the stars in the blue sky, just out of the bath of the beauty?

The lotus flowers in the moonlight are white and bright, and are "dotted with sporadic", similar to the "grain" of the "pearl"; the white flowers are "dotted with", "dotted with", "dotted with", "dotted with", "dotted with", "dotted with", "dotted with", and "dotted with", "dotted with". The white flowers are "dotted" in the "middle of the layers of leaves" and twinkle faintly in the green bushes, similar to the "stars" in the "blue sky"; the lotus flowers are "dotted" in the "middle of the layers of leaves" and twinkle faintly in the green bushes, similar to the "stars" in the "blue sky". "similar; lotus is "curly", "shy" and is white and bright, its demeanor and color are similar to the beauty just out of the bath.

! Above the author through the leaves, flowers, depicted the beauty of the form of the lotus pond, the following we will appreciate the dynamic beauty of the lotus pond.

6, point to understand the "breeze, sent a wisp of fragrance, as if the distant high building of the remote song." This sentence compares the "fragrance" to "a distant song on a high building", where the author used several senses?

The fragrance is the sense of smell, the distant singing is the sense of hearing. The song is a soft and fluttering, and the fragrance of the lotus is sporadic and persistent. These two feelings have similarities, the sense of smell to feel the fragrance from the sense of hearing to feel, taste, so that people produce another specific image of the fragrance, change the perspective of appreciation, resulting in the transfer of feeling.

This feeling transcends its own limitations, and to understand the impression of belonging to another feeling, that is, the method of transforming a sensible image into another sensible image, we call it "generalized feeling". So the author of this sentence at the same time the use of the rhetorical device of empathy.

7. "At this time, the leaves and flowers also had a tremor, like a flash of lightning, and suddenly passed over the lotus pond." In the "trembling, lightning, flash, in a flash, through" and other words, subtle and subtle to write out the breeze over a moment, the overall shape of the pond, often unnoticed dynamics. This is the author of careful observation, the subtlety of the word.

8, "a condensed blue wave marks", it gives people a kind of boat sailing left behind the traces of the feeling, the author expressed vividly.

9. "Pulse of water" how to understand?

This describes the water without sound, as if deep feelings, showing the static beauty of the water.

"Leaves but more see the style", because the quiet water more contrast, the dynamic posture of the beauty of the leaves.

Summary from the form, dynamic, static multiple angles to reflect the beauty of the lotus pond.

Homework: 1, analyze the changes in the author's feelings in paragraphs 5 to 8.

2. Analyze the role of the author of paragraphs 7 to 8 in writing about the old customs of Jiangnan

Lesson 2:

Paragraph 5: The Moonlight on the Lotus Pond

There are three verbs in this paragraph that are used in a very graphic and vivid way, so that everything is full of motion. "diarrhea", "float", and "wash".

1. In the first sentence, the moonlight cascades down on the leaves and flowers, can you change "cascade" to "shine"?

In the first sentence, "the moonlight is like running water", when you see the word "shine", you will not think of running water, and the word "cascade" evokes people's imagination of running water, and skillfully written. Moonlight flow of gentle mood, static into motion, there is a sense of movement from top to bottom and three-dimensional, which has a quiet strength of beauty. The word "shine" does not show this effect, only dull, flat.

2, if the "floating" replaced with "floating" in the expression of what is the difference?

"Floating" depicts the green mist and leaf flowers both close to each other to reflect each other and if that is the sense of hierarchy and dynamism, but also can be depicted in the green mist seems to be moving and static, seems to be static and moving the soft and implicit state; "floating" although with the "thin" echoed. Thin" echo, but both "floating" will be "scattered", will "escape", although there is a gentle state and no implicit static posthumous beauty, and "Fog" is "green" because the fog close to the field, dense leaves and become, floating high and far away, there is no "green" feeling.

3, "leaves and flowers as if washed in buttermilk; but also like a dream with a light veil" in the "buttermilk", "a dream with a light veil", responding to the second paragraph. The pale moonlight casts the leaves and flowers in a kind of misty poetry, and shows the author's faint joy. The use of the word "wash" rightfully connects the leaves and flowers with the pale moonlight and the thin light mist, and the "thin light mist" becomes "buttermilk", "light".

4, "Although it is a full moon, there is a layer of light clouds in the sky, so it can not shine; but I think this is precisely to the advantage - sleep soundly is not rare, the nap also has a different flavor", this line once again emphasizes the light moonlight, everything appears to be The author said "it is precisely to the benefit" because such a view is exactly in line with the author but the light mood of joy.

5, the following is through the tree to describe the moonlight.

Shrubs - the uneven dappled black shadow willow - sparse shadow

Here used the technique of contrast to describe the moonlight.

6, "but also like painting on the lotus leaves" in the "painting" shows that the tree shadows of the staggered, thick and thin harmony is just right, like from the hand of a famous painter, but also let the reader easier to associate and imagine the lotus pond moonlight poetic.

6, the last sentence with what rhetorical device? Why did the author make such an association?

The use of metaphor and empathy (visual and auditory call). The light and shadow are uneven and cross each other, like the high and low notes in a famous song. But the harmony of the famous song, light and shadow into one, the lotus pond and the moon into one, the state of mind and the physical scenery into one, the whole world as one, like a dream, like a dream, like a poem like a picture, everything is melted into the famous song. The author's heart is still a light joy.

Summary of the author from the front and side to describe the moonlight on the lotus pond.

The sixth paragraph The author's sight extends from the inside of the lotus pond to the surroundings of the pond.

1. "Near and far, high and low are all trees", "heavily surrounded", write the number of trees, and have a hierarchy, and the previous "secluded".

2, the following author from the tree color, tree posture and treetops on the distant mountains to write trees, although written in a hazy mood beauty, but here began to vaguely express the dark, somber tone. We can see this in these words, "gloomy," "smoky," and "vague."

3, the last two sentences, from "one or two points of street lights, listless" these weak street lights associated with "thirsty sleeper's eyes", the author skillfully the description of the scene back to the description of people. The author above is immersed in a quiet, but now the lively sound of cicadas and frogs broke the surrounding quiet environment, their voices disturbed the lotus pond and the author's transcendent, quiet realm, so that the author out of the "other world" is no longer "free people! "and return to loneliness, finally issued a" lively is theirs, I have nothing "sigh. We can see here that the author's mood again from the light joy to light sadness.

4. What is the function of the two "leakage" words used in the text?

Borrowing moonlight and light to set off the grayness of the surroundings, showing the author's mood at that time.

Summarize that from this paragraph onwards, the author's mood changed again, from light joy to light sorrow.

The second part focuses on the beautiful scenery of the lotus pond. There are sketches, fine descriptions, rendering, setting off, flexible, well-organized. In particular, the use of language is accurate and vivid, with charm, revealing the author's light joy and light sadness and bitterness.

The third part (7-8) of the old customs of Jiangnan caused by homesickness.

1, why would the author "suddenly remembered to pick lotus things"?

"Quite unsettled". The mood in the dreamlike lotus pond shore did not get discharged, the author touched the feelings, by the scene in front of the scene associated with the scene of lotus picking in Jiangnan, would like to rely on the ancient lotus picking scene and nostalgia for his hometown to relieve. (The author's hometown in Jiangnan)

2, face the author depicted the specifics of Jiangnan lotus picking. The author said it was a season of "lively" and "flirtatious", and quoted Emperor Liang Yuan Di's "Lotus Picking Fugue" to describe the scene of "playfulness" at that time.

Collecting Lotus Fugue translation: beautiful young man, beautiful girl, heart to heart to pick lotus. The first boat head to turn around, handing over cups frequently laugh to love. The paddleboard gently shakes the water grass tightly tripping, the bow slightly moving duckweed before separating. The girl's figure is so slender, her white silk shirt is tied around her waist. It is hard to separate the love, love and reluctance to return to the head. The end of spring and the beginning of summer is a good season, the leaves are tender and the flowers are blooming. The water is so soft, but I am afraid that the water droplets will splash my body and make my clothes wet. I'm not sure how much I'm going to be able to do, but I'm going to be able to do it, and I'm going to be able to do it.

3, picking lotus scene in the author's mind and is "another world", another "what can think, what can not think" of the world, the author has not been infected by this scene? Which sentence in the article can show that?

No. "Unfortunately, now we have long been unable to enjoy it," still "the hustle and bustle is theirs, I have nothing", the author once again exclaimed.

4, "West Island Song" is used to describe the pain of a young woman missing her lover, but the author borrowed to express what feelings? Which sentence in the article can show?

To express the author's homesickness can be seen from "this in the end makes me miss Jiangnan".

The author from the ancient poems of the lotus picking depiction, and then back to the eyes, issued a "just do not see some of the shadow of the water, is not" the lack of. This is a very natural way to bring out this kind of homesickness, which makes me miss Jiangnan in the end. This kind of homesickness is exactly the author at that time facing the dark reality of bitter uncertainty, at a loss, want to transcend and want to struggle, and the face of the lotus pond, the author can not send their own sadness, and now borrowed homesickness to send. These contradictory feelings of the author at that time in the works of projection, expressed the author's inner inequality and longing for a bright and beautiful life.

5. "A fierce look up, do not realize that it is already their own door", shows that the author is intoxicated in the tranquility, very reluctant to return to reality.

The author returned home from the lotus pond, how is the mood?

The author returned to reality from his reverie, but the reality was still the same, the sadness was still the same, the heart was still not quiet, and what he had just seen and heard, what he thought was like a dream.

Summary of the author of the third part of the ingenious use of the "picking lotus fugue" and "West Island song" in the scene of picking lotus, contrasting their homesickness, more set off the author of the light of the sadness of the difficult to get rid of, "a fierce turn back" to return home, and then their mood to the downturn, everything back to reality, the author began to The first thing you need to do is to get a good understanding of what you are doing and how you are doing it.

Summarize the whole paper according to the author's travels, can lead to a clue. -Old customs of Jiangnan, going home

(Spatial clues - bright lines)

Are there any other clues?

At the beginning of the author's mood "quite uneasy", feel bitter, uncertain (a mood of a low tide); in the beginning of the slow walk on the path, the author shows a light sadness; because of the tranquility of the path, so that the author entered the dreamlike "another world "The author intentionally puts himself in an environment beyond reality, "This piece of heaven and earth seems to be mine;" "I feel that I am a free man;" "The things I must do and say during the day can now be ignored. to say, can now be ignored." Here the author's mood is transformed from light sorrow to light joy. Then, as the author's foothold changes, the mood also changes. The author is enjoying the lotus pond under the moonlight and the moonlight on the lotus pond, the light joy is even stronger (here is the climax of the author's mood), and after that, when the author sees the listless street lights around the lotus pond and the lively cicadas and frogs, it contrasts the author's bitterness and light sadness. Then, with the help of the old customs of Jiangnan and his homesickness, he relieved himself of his bitterness, but he was "unable to enjoy it", and finally returned home to the reality, and his mood was still "quite unsettled" (returning to the low point of his mood once again)

Export: dark line Sorrow - Homesickness - Unquiet

The structure is natural and rigorous. The scene is written in distinct and characteristic layers, and the hazy scenery is intermingled with faint joy and sorrow. It is also a good way to express emotions. The language is beautiful, condensed and evocative. The use of similes, associations, setting and other techniques to express the scene is extremely true and rich in flavor.

Board Design:

I (1) Reason: Quite unsettled Think of the lotus pond and bring the door

II (2-6) Moonlight in the lotus pond

Twisty, secluded, tree-laden, lonely

A light sadness The road During the daytime (less traveled) - - Night (more lonely) -Night (more lonely) Pair

No moonlight (gloomy) - light moonlight (very nice) Compare

Up Another world, free people

Wonderful, useful

Lotus Fields, layers (many)

Leaves Tall, pavilion (beautiful) Forms

The moonlight on the lotus pond is a beautiful sight, but it is also a beautiful sight. (beauty) shape

Moon lotus white (color) state

Color flower slinky, shy (state) beauty

Under the pearl, star (light)

The scent of the lotus elusive song motion

A faint joy of the lotus lotus lotus like a flash of lightening, a flash (fast) state

Pond wave, greenish-blue (color) beauty

The water of the lotus pulse (state)

From the perspective of the moon, the lotus is like flowing water, a stream of water

From the perspective of the pond, the mist: thin, like buttermilk, like a veil

From the perspective of the scene, the leaves and flowers: like a dream

From the perspective of the moon, the tree's shadow: a dark shadow, a shadow of a woman, side

From the perspective of the moon, the tree's shadow: dark, a shadow of a woman, side

From the perspective of the color, the light and the shadow: uneven, harmonious, like a famous song Famous Song Face

Trees: heavy, gloomy (somber)

Pale sadness Four Distant mountains: hidden

Week Lights: listless

Cicadas, frogs

Three (7-8) Old custom of Jiangnan Going home

Unquiet Picking Lotus in Jiangnan Thinking of the hometown Going back to reality