The first section is mainly about scenery, with the background next to the lotus pond. Summer dusk, drizzle, sunlight refraction, forming a rainbow, frogs suddenly, red-violet spewing flames, pictures sound, color, light, very three-dimensional lotus pond in the drizzle at dusk, with a scene and atmosphere full of business, enthusiasm and joy, because a teenager is waiting for a "little lover" here. When people are happy, the scenery is full of joy.
The second part takes love as the theme, showing young people's love for girls. However, the poet skillfully used the technique of empathy. He takes pictures of people, writes scenes with feelings, and writes scenes with feelings, avoiding the emptiness of love and the similarity of scenes. In the eyes of teenagers, I feel that "every lotus flower is like you", which makes his infatuation rely on it and appear vivid and true.
The third paragraph of the poem is a teenager's inner monologue: "Eternity, instant, instant, eternity/waiting for you, waiting for you outside time/within time, in an instant, in eternity". According to Wang Guowei, these lines are "as soon as you say them", which is very consistent with the character and mentality of the characters. The so-called "within time" and "outside time", according to Yu Guangzhong's own explanation, "this is about how teenagers feel about time waiting for their little lovers.
In other words, the young man feels that time passes slowly because he is eager to wait for the' little lover', which is called' within time'; Little Lover missed the appointment, and the young man waited for a long time and didn't see her. This is the so-called' untimely'. "Other sections in the poem have also achieved the blending of scenes, feelings and stories, and the language is subtle and euphemistic, which makes the work form a beautiful and elegant female artistic conception.
The artistic charm of this poem is also related to the poet's successful use of repeated stacking. For example, the word "waiting for you" appears three times in the poem, "in the rain", "in an instant" and "eternity" are also three times, and "you are here" is four times. Some are repeated continuously, some are repeated at intervals, and some are repeated from beginning to end.
Repetition, if used well and interspersed properly, can emphasize a certain meaning and highlight a certain feeling, so that readers can get a deep impression and have a harmonious and happy feeling. This poem is about waiting for a lover in the rain. We tried to recite, and the teenager seemed to be muttering, "Waiting for you, in the rain", thus getting a glimpse of his pious psychology; In the sound of "... coming", I seem to see "little lover" coming from far and near, curled up with a smiling face. ...
This poem has the ethereal realm of oriental classical beauty, and at the same time, from the arrangement of the poem, it fully embodies the poet's deliberate pursuit of the architectural beauty of modern metrical poems. However, Yu Guangzhong did not abandon "modernity" while returning to tradition. What he seeks is a kind of "modernity" with profound traditional background, or a kind of "classicism" baptized by "modernity".
His modern consciousness attaches importance to the defamiliarization of poetic images and metaphors, which embodies the poet's unique observation and understanding of some thoughts with the flavor of the times in modern life. Poetry uses modern techniques such as monologue and synaesthesia to integrate modern people's feelings with classical beauty, and modern poetry with ancient sayings, so that poetry has reached a pure and exquisite realm.
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Waiting for you in the rain is a love poem written by modern poet Yu Guangzhong in 1962. This poem describes a teenager's anxious and complicated mentality of waiting for a beautiful and innocent girl in the rain, and his feelings are sincere and warm. The style of the whole poem is uneven, meaning frustration, soft and graceful rhyme, beautiful and elegant language, especially the psychological description is more detailed and moving.
/kloc-in the summer of 0/962, the poet suddenly wrote a series of 30 poems, advocating "neoclassicism". The fourth poem in the series "Waiting for You in the Rain", written on1May 27, 962, is included in Lotus Collection, which is the representative work of Yu Guangzhong's love poems. However, the significance of these poems is not limited to the pure theme of love, but contains a way of expressing love choices and a philosophical thinking that sublimates from love and transforms it into the traditional spirit of China.
Yu Guangzhong, a native of Yongchun County, Quanzhou City, Fujian Province, was born in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province on June 1928, 10/2. He studied at Moling Road Primary School (formerly Cuibaxiang Primary School), joined the Foreign Languages Department of Jinling University (later transferred to Xiamen University) on June 1948, and moved with his parents. 1952 graduated. 1953 founded "Blue Star" Poetry Society with Qin Zihao and Zhong Dingwen. Later, he went to the United States for further study and obtained a master's degree in art from the University of Iowa.
After returning to Taiwan Province, he became a professor at National Normal University, National Chengda University, National Taiwan Province University and Chinese University of Hong Kong. He is currently the Dean of Art College of Sun Yat-sen University in Taiwan. 20 12 April, 84-year-old Yu Guangzhong was employed as a "resident poet" in Peking University. The track of the change of writing style can basically be said to be a trend of the whole poetry circle in Taiwan Province Province for more than 30 years, that is, westernization first and then regression.
The main poems are Nostalgia, White Jade and Bitter Melon, Waiting for You in the Rain, etc. His poetry collections include Linghe, Death of a Stone Chamber, Selected Poems of Yu Guangzhong, etc. The collection of poetics includes the poet's realm, poetry creation and appreciation.
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Baidu encyclopedia-waiting for you in the rain