Are you still dancing square dance recently?

Nowadays, in many cities, square dance is becoming more and more popular in China. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have doubts about this problem.

To be honest, most people agree to square dance, which is a green way to keep fit. Besides, it saves money. But at the same time, others are very opposed to square dancing. They believe that the happiness of these dancers is based on the pain of others, who have to endure noisy music and noise. Their quiet life was broken, and they were angry with the dancers and even clashed with them.

In my opinion, as long as dancers care about the needs of others, square dance will certainly benefit the whole society. What's more, our government should invest more money to build some designated ones? People's entertainment center.

Test analysis: This article is a material composition, the material is very simple, and it is easy for students to master the writing requirements and writing purposes. Candidates must carefully examine the questions before writing. First of all, they should pay attention to the tense of the article. The requirement is to describe the theme of the square dance, so they should use the simple present tense. But this article must use the third person. Furthermore, we should pay attention to the cohesion of sentences and improve the grade of composition.

Explain that the highlights in the text use very good phrases and sentences, which adds a lot of color to the article, such as casting doubts, opposing and using compound structures. It also uses the appositive clause guided by that, considers the application of present participle and the conditional adverbial clause guided by so long as. And pay attention to the cohesion of sentences, such as: to be honest, the best, what else, and so on.