In the Siberian snow plains there is an animal called the white sable, the white sable is very much in love with their own a pure white, beautiful feathers, in any case, do not want to tarnish.
So the hunters seized the white sable this weakness, in its nest around a circle of coal dust, so that the white sable is often caught; the white sable did not therefore change their habits, still year after year to guard their pure white, beautiful feathers. Requirements for a comprehensive understanding of the material, but you can choose a side, an angle to conceptualize the composition.
Autonomous determination of the intention, determine the issue; do not detach from the implication of the material composition, do not set work, not plagiarized. Analyze the material - from the main content of the material, the white sable obsessed with their own good clean, love beautiful nature is certainly right, but it "in any case are not willing to tarnish", but beyond the development of things, "the degree of
This kind of obsession, holding on to the habits of the disabled, hand in hand can be imagined. We then use the linkage and development of vision, biological evolution has been millions of years, from the body shape, appearance to thinking, habits, have changed dramatically.
The white marten, as a species, is in a desperate situation, but still stubborn, and its future is really not good. The precise meaning of this material should be: adaptability.
In the process of examining the question, we used the "degree" point of view, the point of view of linkage and development, so that the analysis of the material of scientific and profound, to avoid errors and superficiality. Therefore, the essay from the "adaptability" point of view to talk about the subject, from both sides to talk about of course, from the persistent point of view can only say also meet the requirements.
Look at the general class of three kinds: one is to praise the white sable, two is to analyze and evaluate in two, three is to criticize the white sable.
Legend has it that deep in the snowy mountains of Tibet there is an animal called the snowy mountain sable, locally known as the snowy mountain sable. This animal and now people raise the size of the pet dog, but the whole body snow white, spotless, white pure pure, running fast in the snow, but is not going to jump, can only stick to the surface of the snow running, this white sable all day long to the snow for food, hungry, thirsty to sweet snow grains to fill up the hunger, never eat miscellaneous, the only non-snow food is the Tianshan Mountain Snow Lotus, so the local hunters know that such a truth! "Where there is snow lotus, there is basically a white sable, and where there is a white sable, there is definitely a snow lotus!"
This white sable body pure as white, body without miscellaneous hair, even the blood is white, because of the reason for eating snow lotus, legend has it that this white sable has the divine effect of bringing back the dead, especially white sable's white blood is more prolonged life, beauty effect of the face, according to legend, if someone has a heavenly destiny to get the live white sable's blood diet, can resist a hundred diseases, prolong life.
But this white sable has a biggest drawback: the biggest drawback is that it is most afraid of tarnishing its purity, it can be in order to retain their own purity would rather be arrested than willing to pollute its valuable pure white fur. This gives the hunters a chance, many hunters are with a bag of carbon ash on the mountain, if they find the white sable, they will use the carbon ash will be surrounded by the white sable, the white sable see the black lines of carbon ash, as if touching the high-voltage lines like rather die than dip. The hunters will easily surround the white sable in the circle of carbon ash.
But the white sable also has a great quality: it would rather die than give in. If the white sable feels like it is going to be laid, it will lie down in the snow, and it will die in as little as 3-5 seconds, and it is said that the medical aspect of the present is unable to explain why it will die so quickly and immediately. And when a white marten dies, its blood immediately coagulates and cannot flow. There would be little value in a trapper catching a dead white marten.
Unless someone is very, very fast and catches the white marten instantly, there is a chance to get the value of the white marten's blood, but this chance is very, very hard.
So in Tibet, it seems that I haven't heard of that person actually catching a live white sable, maybe maybe it's a legend.
I heard this legend, my thoughts solidified, feel as if there is something inside the blocked, a white sable, but also in order to maintain their purity, and would rather give up life. A white sable can still give up its life in order to maintain its purity, while a human being's reputation can live? The white sable in order to be able to preserve their own innocence and would rather die, and how many people for the sake of the interests of the tolerance of Qu?
People's faith, but not as good as the sable? It reminds me of Yu Qian's "to leave a clean slate in the family", and Wen Tianxiang's "to leave a clean slate", and Qu Yuan's "the world is turbid, but I am the only one who is clean".
The white sable on the Siberian plateau, even if it is caught by hunters and pays the price of life, it still wants to maintain its own pure white, belonging to the cleanliness of the snowy plateau in the mountains.
Why is it that such a weak creature would rather die than be defiled? Is it for the sake of external beauty? Is it for the dignity of life? Or for ...... But is it worth it?
The three lukes who chanted "with the sky and the earth, and the sun and the moon, and the light" firmly said that it was worth it. Even though his hair was loose and he had a dry face, his eyes clearly showed the light of the sun and the moon. Even though he was relegated to exile and ill-fated, he still cared about the people who were in dire straits, and he still had to search up and down. I would rather be buried in the belly of a river fish than to see the flag of Qin flying over Chu, or to hear the song of Qin resounding in the capital of Chu. Even if you are awake with the pain and loneliness of wakefulness and sadness, you have to stay awake, even if the world is muddy, you have to stay pure, because you can't use your body to detect the dirt of things, and you can't use the whiteness of the world to be tainted by the world. So Miluo's heart of the river bloomed a pure white lotus, can be seen from afar not to play, out of the mud but not be tainted.
When the dragon boat light slip, rice dumplings fragrant, you read the thousands of years ago that the legend of temperament? Of course it's worth it, because it's a defense of the dignity of life.
Who recited the "life since ancient times who have not died, to take the heart of the sweat of the green" and is remembered by history. Who chanted "do not point to the South refused to rest" and was revered by the people. He has also been afraid of, nine deaths who can not be afraid; He has also been sentimental about the world of floating rain Ping; He has also wandered in fear of the beach said fear, zero Ding Ocean sigh zero Ding. But he did not give up, trying every possible way to break free from the enemy, many times to escape; but he did not bow his head, Yuan Shizu personally persuade to surrender so what, my life has long belonged to that broken dynasty, even if the death of so what, my blood also want to splash in the flag of the homeland, my soul also want to return to the homeland of the hot land. Since I chose to stay in the history books still fear what, sentimental what, wandering what. Take it, my life! But please leave my pure white my poetry, my dignity my love.
When you turn to history again, when you turn to the "Guidebook", you read that poem about the festival of fame? The lines are deep, knocking the hymn of national dignity perseverance.
So even if you give your life, you have to spill your blood, such as the white sable of the Siberian snowfield, such as Qu Ping, such as Wen Tianxiang, to maintain that pure white symbol.
4. Essay on the description of the white sableIn the Siberian snow plains there is an animal called the white sable, the white sable is very much in love with their own a pure white, beautiful feathers, in any case are not willing to tarnish. So the hunters seize the white sable this weakness, in its nest around a circle sprinkled with coal dust, so that the white sable is often captured; the white sable did not change their habits, still year after year to guard their pure white, beautiful feathers.
Requirements for a comprehensive understanding of the material, but can choose a side, an angle to conceptualize the composition. Autonomous determination of intention, determine the problem; do not detach from the implication of the material composition, do not set work, not plagiarized.
Analyze the material - from the main content of the material, the white sable obsessed with their own good clean, beautiful nature is certainly right, but it "in any case are not willing to defile", but beyond the development of things. "Degree", even when the hunters with their own wisdom, the use of the white sable this weakness will capture it, the white sable "did not change their habits, still year after year to protect their pure white, beautiful fur," which is tantamount to obsession into stubbornness. This kind of obsession, holding on to the habits of the handicapped, it is also conceivable that the hands are captured. We then look at the connection and development, biological evolution has been millions of years, from the body shape, appearance to thinking, habits, have changed dramatically. The future of the white marten, as a species, is not good as it is in a desperate situation, but it is still stubborn. From this we can see that the accurate intention of this material should be: change. In the review process, we used the "degree" point of view, linkage and development point of view, so that the analysis of the material scientific and profound, to avoid errors and superficiality.
Therefore, the essay from the "alternative" point of view to talk about the meaning of the topic, from both sides to talk about of course, from the persistent point of view can only say also meet the requirements.
There are three broad categories of views: one is to praise the white sable, the other is to analyze and evaluate in two, and the third is to criticize the white sable.
5. Essay Read the following material, according to the requirements to write an article of not less than 800 wordsStrategy Interpretation of the material: (1) the material in the white sable in any case are not willing to tarnish their own pure white hair, even if the life-threatening, but also still year after year to guard, this body can be said to be a symbol of the person's noble character of pure white.
According to this, you can think of: adhere to the integrity, adhere to the self (true self), adhere to the original color, cleanliness, persistence and so on. (2) from the main content of the material, the white sable obsessed with their own good clean, beautiful nature is certainly true, but it "in any case are not willing to defile", but beyond the development of things "degree", and even when the hunter with their own wisdom, the use of white sable Even when the hunter in his wisdom, using the white sable to capture it, the white sable "did not change their habits, still year after year to protect their own pure white, beautiful fur," which is the same as the obsession into a stubborn.
This kind of obsession, holding on to the habits of the defective, hand in hand can be imagined. According to this, the intention can be: to face themselves, learn to adapt, learn to change themselves in time.
(3) If the white sable can do not only guard the pure white, but also timely change themselves, can be said to be a wise move. The ideas are: perseverance and adaptability, persistence and adaptability, etc.
From the hunter's point of view to examine the question, not quite in line with the intention of the proposer. If you want to analyze from the hunter's point of view, the hunter is good at finding the white marten's weaknesses, and sprinkle a circle of coal dust around its nest, so that the white marten is often tied up.
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6. According to the following material, write a composition of not less than 800 words in the Siberian snow plains there is aStrategy
Testimony analysis: this material is a fable, can be from the following angles to the intention:
From the point of view of the white sable analysis, (1) the material of the white sable is not willing to defile their own in any case a pure white feathers, even if it is dangerous to the life, but also still guarded year after year, this body of pure white can be said to be a symbol of noble character. Accordingly, you can make up your mind for: sticking to the integrity, sticking to the self (true self), sticking to the original color, cleanliness, persistence and so on.
(2) The white sable would rather die than guarding the pure white, beautiful, so to speak, "would rather be broken for the jade, not for the tile", but became a hunter to capture its weakness. Therefore, sometimes one's own strengths may become fatal weaknesses. Accordingly, the intention can be: to face up to themselves, learn to adapt, learn to change themselves at the right time, and so on.
(3) If the white sable can do both guard the pure white and change itself in time, it can be said to be a wise move. The ideas are: perseverance and adaptability, persistence and adaptability, and so on.
It can also be analyzed from the hunter's point of view, the hunter is good at finding the white sable's weaknesses, and sprinkle a circle of coal dust around its nest, so that the white sable is often captured. Can stand for: looking for each other's weaknesses, towards success, etc..
First-class essay: 54 points floating around. Sincere feelings, deep theme, well conceived; bright and healthy views, reasoned arguments; clear narrative, strong storytelling, image rich in features.
Second essay: 48 points floating around. True and believable, the theme is relatively profound, rigorous structure; clear and healthy viewpoints, there is a process of argumentation, the material is a little stale; the narrative is complete, with a certain degree of storytelling.
Third-class essay: about 42 points. Basically true, the theme is established, relatively complete; pile up materials, can not argue the point of view well, the argument is single and empty.
Fourth-class essay: 36 points or less. One of the rhetoric radical, 10 points; only the title, 3 points; only one or two hundred words, only the beginning, or because of scribbling illegible article, 18-24 points; word count close to the requirements, but the article statement is not smooth enough and so on, or plagiarized text, can give 28-32 points. Running article with merit, 36 points.
Comment: Since "analyzing the material" is a key part of the material composition, so you can use the following reading method:
① Discovery method. Mainly used in the meaning of obvious, clear center of the material. The goal of the discovery, one is the center of the material sentence, the second is the title on the center of the prompt, the third is the material on the center of the prompt. Discovered these elements, we have found a breakthrough according to the idea.
② set up the idea. Mainly used in the material that has a head without a tail or a tail without a head, such as the material of the sequel. The content of the conception, or with the material reasonably connected to the plot, or with the material reasonably connected to the exposition. The process of envisioning is the diffusion of thinking, so pay attention to the rationality of the diffusion.
③ Generalization. Mainly used for the meaning of clear, but neither the center of the sentence, nor the prompt sentence of one or more materials, summarize the central meaning, the idea will have a foothold.
7.A model essay:
Clean spirit can be guarded
The ancient sages are all lonely,
but there are section of the person to leave his name.
--Title
I was shocked to hear that the white sable had been killed, and I felt a lot of emotion while sighing with my wrists. The white sable was slaughtered by greedy humans for defending its pure white, beautiful fur. I can not help but ask, its stupidity? Is it sad? --It can keep its integrity! It is because it is committed to keep the festival, only to be able to make the fur generation white, never change color, even if it is coveted by people, and why not make the festival of admiration it!
Looking at the ancient sages, they were all loyal and righteous. The ancient saying goes, "If you're not righteous and rich, you'll be like a floating cloud." Do not do injustice, get unjust wealth, change my white ambition, get rich and noble, this is a virtuous person for? No, a gentleman must be clean, ashamed of unrighteousness, and regard wealth and riches as a passing cloud. The gentleman is interested in, is the noble and proud sentiment, is that "wealth and prosperity is not my wish" calm. Only in this way is it worthy of being called the model of a gentleman, and it will be remembered for generations to come.
When Qu Yuan was wearing his hair and singing on the banks of the river, his fisherman father asked him, "This is not the first person to come to Sanlu, why did he come here?" Qu Yuan said, "I am the only one who is clear when the world is turbid, and I am the only one who is awake when everyone is drunk, and that is why I am here." The fisherman said, "The world is muddy, why don't you follow the current and raise the waves? Why don't you drink your own wine when everyone is drunk?" Lamenting his lack of knowledge, Qu Yuan said angrily, "Who is a gentleman who can be subjected to the wonders of the world in his own way?" Qu Yuan was a gentleman who preferred to be "buried in the belly of a river fish" rather than to change his ways and become a part of the world. It is only because of this that he has been loved and admired by people throughout the ages!
Mencius said, "The rich can not be obscene, the poor can not move, the mighty can not bend, this is called a great man! This is a great man, must be able to keep its clean will, quiet to cultivate the body, which is to give up a small profit and take the righteousness, is really admirable!
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Tao Yuanming not for five buckets of rice, gladly return to the garden, Dongli speechless, back to him a pot of dusk in late autumn; Li Bai angrily drink "can break the eyebrow folding things, so that I shall not be happy face! Categorically leave the officialdom; Wen Tianxiang "life since ancient times who have no death, to take the heart of the sweat of the blue" to fulfill a lifetime of fame; Tan Sitong "have the intention to kill the thief, no way back to heaven; death is good, fast and easy!" The heroism, leaving people unlimited memorial ......
Looking at the aspiring gentleman, none of them do not adhere to the temperament, give up their lives for righteousness; to see the results, none of them are not famous in history. We can follow the example of the Seven Sages of the Bamboo Grove, the Four Sages of Wuzhong, the bones of Jian'an, and sing of the greatness of the Chinese nation's righteousness, and sing of the beauty of the festival. Keeping the festival, so that the white sable is still beautiful; keeping the festival, so that the Chinese people's righteousness will live on!
Teacher comments
This article is rich in content. Read it catchy, see its solid language skills. The material grasp is more accurate, to "stick to" as the starting point, a wide range of quotes from the history of the personage material, greatly enhanced the persuasive power of the article. To "abide by the festival, so that China's righteousness will live forever" as a conclusion, quite a momentum. The reader is not only clear about the connotation of the "firm", but also allows the reader to realize the necessity of the "firm".
8. Composition "poor sable" how to writeGuardian of self
Perhaps some people will say that the white sable is a kind of stupid animal, can not distinguish between the feathers and the life of which is more important than the other, however, I have to say, the white sable is a kind of threat in the face of death, and still hold fast to the self of the beautiful elves, pure white feathers, for him, is not simply a kind of external beauty, but more a kind of pure inner symbols of flawless. The white feather is a symbol of inner purity and flawlessness.
Guardian of the self, the white sable became a beautiful angel of the Siberian snowfield. Guardian of self, Su Wu has become an immortal monument on the North Sea, standing for thousands of years, inspiring ten thousand generations.
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Guarding oneself is not simply sticking to one's own personality and enforcing one's own life rules. Self-guardianship requires a kind of firm adherence to one's own beliefs in the face of difficulties, setbacks and even death. Guardianship of the self, so that you forget the confusion and fear of the night, bravely waiting for the dawn.
Self-guardian, so that you can overcome the stormy wind attack, confident to meet the wind and sunshine. The guardian of the self, so that the interpretation of life's splendor.
Analysis: this clip from the perspective of the white sable to seize the white sable "in the face of the threat of death, still hold fast to their own, pure white feathers, for him, is not a simple external beauty, but more of a symbol of inner purity and flawlessness." Thus, the idea is "guarding oneself needs a kind of perseverance and persistence in the face of difficulties, setbacks and even death, a kind of faith in one's own life." It is very suitable for the theme.
9. to white as the topic of writing 300 words essaywhite
green fresh and pleasant, red bright bright, purple elegant charming ------ too many too many colors fascinated me, but I only love only that simple lovely white.
White, pure, beautiful, sacred, elegant.
On the heart of the field, the dandelion bloom, floating all over the wilderness, carefree, free and easy. That is the symbol of freedom.
In the snow, the white snowflake's flying, fluttering, dancing, if the smoke, if the fog, if the flying fairy. That is the symbol of purity.
Looking at the sky full of dancing snowflakes, my vision gradually blurred, as if I heard the snowflakes fall when the light sound, a snowflake is a note, played into a song of heavenly music echoing in the ears.
White paper, let us splash ink, write youth. White clouds, let us endless reverie, happy mood.
I love white, although it is monotonous, although it is not as gorgeous as other colors, but I like it simple and holy inner beauty.
I love white, I love that kind of nature's purest color, it is the symbol of all the good, I love it!
I love white, it is the purest color in nature, it is the symbol of all good things, I love it. 10. 300-word essay on the topic of "white"
The world is inevitably filled with dazzling colors, but with the passage of time, they are no longer bright. Only the white, only quietly show their own unique color, seemingly ordinary, but will not be eroded by the sunshine out of the flaws. White, like a quality, he is absolutely different from the fickleness, I think, it represents a kind of toughness.
Helen Keller, although her world is dark. And it was dead. But her heart is full of light. Because she had a tough heart, endured the injustice of God to her, but never give in, she knew to rise to the occasion, knew that strong, do not give up is equal to half of the success. Finally, she was not only able to be self-reliant, but also wrote a page in the glorious history belonging to her. I think she is like that little bit of white, not to be forgotten in the light of day.
Khalkina, compared with Helen Keller is certainly lucky. But it is because of her beauty, her skillful and amazing performance made her suffer all kinds of unfair treatment. But she fought against all these injustices with a strong heart, she did not give up, and still proved her strength with her perfect performance, so that those who had played tricks had nothing to say. Although she finally said goodbye to the audience with a smile and left the arena with a smile on her face, she also left behind achievements in her favorite gymnastics career that will be hard for future generations to surpass. I think she is like that little bit of white, let time pass, but never fade.
When Van Gogh was poor and downtrodden to finish his life, his heart still has a beautiful sunflower, he is with a tough heart, defying the ridicule of others; when Paganini spent a hard time in prison, he can still use only one of the remaining strings to play a wonderful violin, he is with a tough heart, digging the beauty of the life in the drop; when Hans Christian Andersen was all over the place, he also finally used the ugly duckling to play the violin, but he was not able to do so.
I think, white is just as they have a tough heart, ordinary heart, at that time that impetuous, chasing fame and fortune in the era, quietly living, and when everything has become a passing cloud, they are still quietly there, just people can finally look for them, to feel their heart of an unchanged.
I think, everyone should be so, do not focus on the pursuit of great color, and ignore their own should have a tough, ordinary heart, in the confused world quietly keep their own a little bit of eternity unchanged white.