After the deep call, the whole world was shrouded in the shadow of snow-white flowers.
The sun is shining, the mountains are stretching, and clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered and flew, and at the same time turned into countless floating points.
Such an afternoon full of white flowers always feels deja vu, and always feels that it is an aggregation that can be put into any kind of time and space. It can be put into the Book of Songs, Chu Ci, classicism and post-impressionism at the same time-in any beautiful record of mankind, there should be such an afternoon and such an early summer.
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This passage depicts the beautiful scenery of tung flowers with vivid and beautiful brushstrokes, which integrates vision and hearing and is full of vitality and movement. The author compares the prosperous and blooming scene to a flowing river and sunlight to alcohol and honey, which makes this scene beautiful. The last sentence is strengthened, which makes people feel the vitality of tung flowers in full bloom, as if the whole hillside is covered with tung flowers, and the tension of life is infinitely extended.
The author's imagination is full of romantic dreams.
2 Excerpted from Autumn Rain by Zhang Ailing.
Rain, like silver-gray sticky spider silk, weaves a soft web, covering the whole autumn world. The world is dark, like the roof covered with spider webs in an old house. The gray clouds piled up in the sky are like white powder peeling off the roof. Under the cover of this old roof, everything looks extremely dull. Pomegranate, mulberry and garden are green. The delicate daffodils planted outside the dormitory wall hung their heads with tears in their eyes and lamented their poor luck there. Only after two sunny days, they met such a moldy and steaming rainy day. Only the sweet-scented osmanthus in the corner, whose branches are dotted with several precious golden buds, is carefully hidden under the green oval leaves, revealing a little hope of new life budding.
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Sometimes I don't like Zhang Ailing's writing so much, just like this autumn rain, others will write warm breath, but she writes dark and gloomy, and the brush strokes alone make people feel cold and chilling.
But perhaps this is the charm of Zhang Ailing's writing. It is flashy and dark, but it is so real that it can detect the deepest things in people's hearts. This article uses meticulous pen, only metaphor and personification to make autumn rain vivid, with a dull and lonely color. For this article, it is full of gray, melancholy, gloom and loneliness, an absurd life and the only budding hope.
From the first snow in Zhang Xiaofeng.
Now, as the sun rises, the fog gradually dissipates. vilen is green and looks soft, which makes me feel that even if I accidentally fall from this mountain, I won't scratch a piece of skin. You'll get bounced twice at most, and get a green color that can't be washed out. And the river around the foot of the mountain is also green, which is another kind of green and bright, like mixed with oil. No matter where you start, you can't open a crack, which makes people feel that even if you cut down two floors, its green color will not fade. In addition, my screen window is green, extremely light green, and it is really as ethereal as the gauze skirt of ancient beauty under the irradiation of sunlight. You think, how can my heart not be full of vitality when I write to you on such a green morning?
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The author fully mobilized his vision and touch, and wrote the green in spring. Metaphors are used in many places, and the images are vivid. I like this passage because it is very warm after reading it. Where does this warmth come from? I think it comes from those warm words, "bright", "rich and depressed" and "vibrant", which are more poetic and beautiful because they are written for children. The author's green seems to be
4 Excerpted from Zhang Xiaofeng's Autumn in Autumn.
At that time, I was in Nanjing, and I just started to remember some fragmentary things. There are often beautiful villages in this painting. I quietly walked away from the adults and sat alone on the grass. The plane leaves began to fall and fall, and many mysterious aesthetic feelings fell into my heart together. I suddenly became confused, and my little heart could hardly bear the excitement. This is how I picked up a fallen leaf in confusion. The leaves are yellowish brown. Like a boat carrying a dream, and there are two beautiful phoenix trees beside the boat for a long time. Every time there is a gust of wind, I will shuttle through the rain of fallen leaves and pick up the plane trees all over the ground. There must be one or two buttonwood trees sprouting on that meadow that I didn't pick up, right? Twenty years later, I seem to hear the distant west wind and the rustling of leaves in the wind. I can also see those boats carrying dreams, sailing on the grassland, sailing in the hope of a seed.
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This passage expresses the love for buttonwood leaves with beautiful brushstrokes. The onomatopoeic words of "Sasha Vujacic" are vivid and vivid, making readers guess the scene. "Mysterious beauty" describes the characteristics of phoenix tree in autumn. Indus leaves are mysterious and beautiful in the author's eyes, which is very infectious. The shape of the phoenix tree is vividly described by metaphor. The author described the color and shape of buttonwood. At the same time, compare the leaves to a boat with a side. On the ship's side is a buttonwood tree, which fascinates everyone who looks at it and wants to see this beautiful buttonwood tree. The author is imaginative and vividly shows the beauty of autumn.
Tea caves are built by mountains and rivers. On the side near the mountain, the wall climbs up the mountain like a long snake. On the water side, there is a place to set up a dock by the river outside the city, and a small covered boat is moored in the bay. When the boat went down, it took tung oil, green salt and dyed seeds. I went up with cotton yarn and cloth groceries and seafood. Every pier has a river street running through it, and more than half of the houses are on the ground. After the water gradually entered the street, people on the river street used long ladders, one on the eaves and the other on the wall. Everyone scolded and shouted, took bags, bedclothes and rice jars, went into the city from the ladder, and then went out from the city gate when the water receded. If the water comes particularly violently in a certain year, one place and two places on the diaojiao building along the river are washed away by the flood, and everyone is watching from the city.
-Shen Congwen's Border Town
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Good landscape writing should be concise and full of descriptive power. You can't find gorgeous words in Shen Congwen's pen, but you can clearly feel the outline of the scenery from such brushstrokes. "The wall is like a long snake, climbing up the mountain", and the unspeakable taste complements the faint breath of the article. The twinkling stars in the sky are like gems embedded in a black screen, so close to us! Black mountain peaks stand in front of us like giants. The surrounding mountains surround the valley like a well. There are several fires up and down, and comrades who wake up from the cold are whispering around the fire. In addition, there is silence. The ears are unpredictable, the distance is extremely close, and the extremely heavy ones are finely cut, such as spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, such as wild horses rushing to the plain, such as mountain springs whimpering. Like a raging wave. (Lu Lao Shan Jie) Enjoy what you see first, and compare all three kinds of scenery. Stars are compared to "gems decorated on black curtains", peaks are compared to "giants standing in front of you" and valleys are compared to "a well". After writing and listening, the sound is difficult to write, and the metaphor is very intuitive: "Like a silkworm chewing mulberry leaves, like a wild horse in the plain. what is the purpose? In order to set off the optimism of the Red Army soldiers, even if you don't go out in Peiping, you have to rent a rafter to live in the sea of people in the imperial city. Get up in the morning and sit in the yard with a bowl of strong tea. You can also see the high green sky and hear pigeons flying in the blue world. From under the leaves of Sophora japonica, count a little bit of sunshine leaking to the east, or on the broken waist. Nature can also feel autumn. (Yu Dafu's Autumn in the Old Capital) Appreciating this is like a landscape painting. The most prominent feature is that the author has grasped the characteristic scenery and the characteristics of the old capital autumn scenery. In any case, a detailed description of "high blue sky" or "blue flowers like morning glory" is vivid and lifelike, rendering a quiet atmosphere and achieving the same goal. It was so cold that I woke up, and the endless momentum made people feel difficult to breathe. My heart was cold and my eyes were sour. However, to appreciate the realm of "clouds, when I look back, just behind me, fog, when I enter them, they are gone", I still have to come to China. Taiwan Province Province is very humid, which is the most confusing mood. -Appreciation of Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to the Cold Rain": This sentence uses overlapping words to show the beauty of the rhyme and snow.
It rained heavily, and the heavy thoughts hit three red oil-paper umbrellas, making them lively and dense, corresponding to the clang of streams and flowing water in their mouths. Looking from the umbrella, the hillside in the rain is in full bloom. In the green thatch, beside the green trees, the lush wild flowers are as red as flames, and the dense seedlings are spread in the rice fields, with the north wind behind them.
(Zhou Libo, "Zhang")
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This description is really vivid, with different movements, shades, density, both hearing and vision, as well as distance and height. The author organically interweaves several loose azaleas on the hillside with dense seedlings in the field. In order to add vitality to the picture, the author uses a series of dynamic descriptions of "windy", "capsizing" and "shaking waves" to make the original silence like velvet, thatch green, small trees green, and seedlings like dark green carpets, swaying into light green silk with the wind. In this green ocean, several clusters of azaleas as bright as flames are carefully decorated, which is refreshing and full of spring.
Looking south from the pavilion, I saw dozens of buildings springing up on both sides of Zhengyangmen, adding a brand-new style to this ancient city. Looking east, everything looks softer and more transparent in the sun; Looking west, the White Pagoda on Nagong Island experienced a small disaster caused by the earthquake, holding its head high in the blue sky and pure as jade. Looking back at the north, the drum tower and the bell tower behind it are now quietly dormant there, but people will inevitably think about how the morning bell and the evening drum have marked the lonely rhythm of daily life for hundreds of years; Behind the Bell and Drum Tower, the Yan Mountains lying across the sky are blue, just like the barrier of this ancient city.
Appreciation: Based on Wan Chunting, the author clearly changes the four observation directions, in which "looking" and "seeing" are used to express the distance of the scenery in a measured way. In addition, the Yanshan pulse behind the Bell and Drum Tower is written from far to near, and the scenery combination is patchy and clear.
Autumn of Yu Dafu's Old Capital
In Peiping, even if you don't go out, you will rent a shabby house to live in the sea of people in the imperial capital. Get up in the morning and sit in the yard with a bowl of strong tea. You can also see the high green sky and hear pigeons flying in the blue world. From the bottom of Sophora japonica leaves, count the leaked sunshine to the east, or in the broken waist, quietly face the morning glory.
Appreciation: It's like a landscape painting. The most prominent feature is that the author has grasped the unique scenery and features of the old capital autumn scenery. In any case, describing the "high blue sky" or "blue flowers of morning glory" in detail is vivid and lifelike, rendering a quiet atmosphere and reaching an implicit artistic conception.
Tianshan scenery in Bi Ye
Seen from a distance, Tianshan Mountain is beautiful and colorful. Long-term snow hangs high on Yunfeng, like the pearl crown of Uygur girls dancing in groups, shining with silver light; Colorful mountains, like a proud peacock, are gorgeous and charming.
Appreciation: This is a distant picture. The author points out the characteristics of Tianshan Mountain in color and shape by using two metaphors of "crown of pearl" and "complacent". Coupled with the description of words such as "wrapped in white" and "gorgeous and charming", the whole picture is filled with a happy and peaceful atmosphere.
Romantic June
Pessimists are defeated by themselves first and then by life; An optimist conquers himself before conquering life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future. An optimistic person has suffered a lot and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible. In the eyes of optimists, the impossible may become possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From excellent people, it is not difficult to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows.
Walking across the wooden bridge, through the soldier-dodging hole, a group of monkeys are watching the peak. The surrounding peaks are like monkeys with different postures, either naive or stubborn, or embarrassed or angry, as if welcoming tourists from afar. They are naturally solidified phonology and the philosophical heritage of Yang Zhe Mountain's original interest. -It is reported that Zhang Sanfeng spent his life here after living in seclusion. Zhang Sanfeng is a Taoist immortal, and there are many relics here. For example, he flew on the cliff with his fingers.
(Ren Baojian's trip to Yang Zhe)
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Taking the transfer of scenic spots as a clue, the author connects the beautiful scenery of Yang Zheshan with scenic spots and historical sites in the order of tourism, and makes appropriate details of many scenic spots, some of which are colorful, some of which are brushed aside, and legends are added to add interest.
Birds can start measuring the sky again. Some are responsible for measuring the blue of the sky, some are responsible for measuring the transparency of the sky, and some are responsible for measuring the height and depth of the sky with those wings. But not all birds are good mathematicians. They chattered and counted, and finally dared not publish the statistics.
-Zhang Xiaofeng's Nostalgia in Spring.
Appreciation: Zhang Xiaofeng's personification makes my heart beat. I think of the spring at home and the picture of birds soaring in the sky. The author compares birds to bad mathematicians, measuring the sky. This magical imagination impressed us all and wrote about the liveliness and agility of birds and the beauty of spring, which shows the author's love for spring.
When the wind blows, maple leaves fall all over the city, and yellow rain falls next season. In autumn, people step on it and put it on their hair. It seems to float on their shoulders intentionally or unintentionally. Is it bright golden yellow and golden yellow? After the Mid-Autumn Festival and before Halloween, the autumn color is as thick as a layer.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Left Hand Palmprint"
Appreciation: This sentence uses figurative rhetoric, comparing fallen leaves to gold, which is vivid.
White illusory snow, cold and clear, endless momentum makes people feel difficult to breathe and their eyes ache. However, if you want to appreciate the realm of "clouds, when I look back, followed by me and mist, when I entered them, they disappeared", you still have to come to China. Taiwan Province Province is very humid, and the mood is the most ambiguous.
-Yu Guangzhong's "Listening to Cold Rain"
Appreciation: This sentence uses overlapping to express the phonological beauty of words and the Leng Yan and sadness of snow.
There was a breeze in Xu Lai, and the delicate peony suddenly fell all over the ground, covered with gorgeous petals. When the petals fall to the ground, they are still bright and dazzling, just like the feathers of a big bird on the altar, leaving with heroic lament. When the peony does not wither, it either shines on the branches or falls in the soil. It crosses withering and aging, dies from youth and disappears from beauty.
-Zhang Kangkang's "Peony Rejected"
Appreciation: This sentence uses a figurative rhetorical device, comparing fallen flowers to feathers, which shows the outstanding charm of peony.
It's raining quietly, with only a slight patter. The orange-red house, like an old monk dressed in bright robes, bowed his head and closed his eyes, accepting the baptism of the rain. The wet red brick exudes irritating pig blood, which is in sharp contrast with the green laurel leaves under the wall.
-Zhang Ailing "Autumn Rain" You asked me to find luxury.
Appreciation: this sentence compares the house to an old monk in figurative rhetoric, and writes about the calm and desolate house in the rain.
Time is like a sharp knife-if it is not used properly, it will carve deep lines on a beautiful face, so that vibrant youth will be worn away month after month and year after year; However, if used properly, it can carve an ordinary stone into a magnificent statue. Although Santa Maria Girls' School has a history of 50 years, it is still an ordinary white stone with only a little carving.
-Zhang ailing's "Wish"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and symbolism to write his own view of time. Time is a knife, and life depends on how well you grasp it.
I couldn't help walking over and holding a maple leaf. Wow, it's beautiful! Like a slap, bright red, bright red; Like a fan, flat; Like a blooming flower, it will never fade! Before I left, I picked up a green maple, which I will cherish forever. It is a symbol of youth, beauty and passion!
-"Autumn Leaves"
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor and parallelism to write the color, shape and posture of autumn leaves, showing the beauty of autumn leaves and autumn colors.
A few friends, drawing bamboo shadows by moonlight, you draw one, I draw one, the parameters are different, bright and dark, with a little taste of Chinese painting. Perhaps, art and beauty are contained in children's childish activities. Have you ever had a similar experience?
-Feng Zikai's Bamboo Shadow
Appreciation: a few strokes, writing scenes painted by several friends, humorous, concise and unique, full of the unique charm of Feng Zikai's works.
The sky is clear, the mountains stretch, and clusters of white flowers are like a flowing river. It seems that all life in the world should come by appointment. At this moment, in the sunshine as transparent as honey, they cheered and flew, and at the same time turned into countless floating points.
Appreciation: Use figurative rhetoric to compare flowers to rivers. The language is exquisite, beautiful and infectious, and the lines are full of love for tung flowers, which makes readers seem to see the beautiful scenery of tung flowers all over the mountains.
10 On New Year's Eve, an old man stood at the window. He looked up at the sky sadly, and the stars floated on the quiet lake like emerald lilies. The old man looked down at the ground again, and several lives more hopeless than himself were heading for their graves. On the way to that place, the old man has spent sixty years of cold and heat.
Appreciation: This sentence uses metaphor to describe the star very vividly, compares the star to a lily, highlights its cleanliness and purity, and compares the night sky to a lake, writing its calmness and beauty. However, under such beautiful scenery, I am going to die, which reflects my regret.