Every year the Lin'an Prefecture governor to the Zhejiang Court outside the review of the navy, hundreds of huge warships were arranged on both sides of the river, a moment of all the warships are sailing forward, a moment of separation; a moment of cohesion, the formation of five kinds of formations, and there are people on horseback juggling flags and javelins, dancing sword on the water, as if walking on the flat ground in general.
Suddenly yellow smoke rose up in all directions, and the figures could not be seen at all, and the sound of blasting in the water shook like the collapse of a mountain. After a while the smoke dissipated, the water is calm, can not see any big ship, only the maneuvers as enemy warships warships were burned by the fire, with the water waves and sank to the bottom of the sea.
Not only is it a kind of static and dynamic writing style, but it also paves the way for another unique water show below.
Painting a picture of the "naval maneuvers" is absolutely correct, and our language teacher was particularly careful.
1, from the magnitude of the scene, the number of people watching the tide.
2, to write the high memory of the tide runner.
3, write the competition is fierce and exciting, the tide of skillful.
This is all my own thinking, the literary style is good, the language teacher seems to have spoken.
"Tide" in the text, the author not only use metaphor, description, set off and other methods to directly depict the tide surging, thunderous situation and prestige, but also from the number of people watching the tide of the high tide, the enthusiasm of the high indirectly expressed the tide of the peculiar. This direct description and indirect support will be Qiantang autumn tide of the world's wonders, vivid image in front of the reader.
This short and concise essay praises the strange, majestic and spectacular tide of the Qiantang River, and expresses the author's sincere feelings of love for the motherland.