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Essay Title: I got the championship
Key? Words: Elementary School Fifth Grade 500 Words
Word Count: 500 Words Essay
This article is suitable for: Elementary School Fifth Grade
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This is a 500-word essay on Elementary School Fifth Grade, entitled: "I Got the Championship". In the evening of April 23rd, I took a bus to Zhenjiang, Jiangsu Province with the students of "Leen" because we were going to participate in the "2010 East China Friendly Cities Sports Dance Open Competition" held there the next day. Along the way, we talked and laughed without any fear of leaving mom and dad for the first time. The next morning there was no competition for me, so I had to wait quietly in the audience. I watched a lot of performances in the morning, they danced very well and benefited me a lot. I was even more impressed by the performances of those senior groups. Finally it was my turn to go on stage and I was confident. After the rumba, I felt pretty good. In the second match, I played "cha-cha-cha-cha", which is my strong point. After a smooth competition, it was time for the combinations. I was out of breath after the three combinations, so I really need to lose some weight!
The results of the competition were not bad: I got a bronze medal in the rumba, I got a gold medal in the cha-cha-cha, and I got a silver medal in the triathlon combination. Although the record is not very brilliant, but there is a gold medal, let me comfort a lot. "One minute on the stage, ten years of work off the stage."
This sentence let me once again y appreciate. Master comment: This is a pretty good essay oh. The small author began to focus on the theme, for the following to make the pad, and then recounted some of the items of their own competition, and finally explain the results of the competition. The composition is clearly organized, the center of the expression is clear, for the age of the author, this essay is already great. What is remarkable is that the small author in the process of describing the appropriate citation of some idioms, to add color to the composition, can learn to use this point is very good Oh, it is worthwhile for everyone to learn. In addition, the small author also describes the process is also very focused on some of the delicate psychological description, making the composition more specific, vivid, these are very good Oh, worthy of praise. (Scholastic China Special Teachers: Ms. Shao Xilian)2010-5-2 15:43:00