Whether you are in school or into society, we must have come into contact with the essay, the essay is the transition from internal to external speech, that is, from the compressed brief, they can understand the language, to carry out, with a standardized grammatical structure, can be understood by others in the form of external language. Do you know how to write a standardized essay? The following is the national volume one language essay I have organized for you.
Title
According to a recent survey of international students coming to China, the keywords of China that they are more concerned about are: One Belt, One Road, pandas, square dance, Chinese food, the Great Wall, **** enjoy the bicycle, Peking Opera, air pollution, and beautiful countryside, Food safety, high-speed rail, mobile payment.
Please choose two or three key words from them to present China as you know it, and write an article to help foreign young people read and understand China. Requirements: choose a good keywords, so that they form an organic connection; choose a good angle, clear style, make up your own title; do not set work, not plagiarized; not less than 800 words.
Comment
An open task-driven essay
As a language teacher who actually sat in the college entrance examination room as a candidate, I was struck by how brightly I felt when I saw the essay question on the national volume 1 of the new curriculum standard - it was really an open task-driven essay with The first thing I'd like to say is that I'm not sure how much I'm going to be able to do this.
First of all, open.
First of all, each of the 12 "Chinese keywords" given in the material has a relatively rich symbolism. The Great Wall, for example, can be used to talk about past history as well as the spirit of the nation. Chinese cuisine, for example, can talk about both food culture and the Chinese people's love of life behind the food. So, every word has a deeper meaning that can be explored.
Second, these words are not limited to the positive level. Like air pollution, food safety, etc., they also show the inadequacy of contemporary China. Therefore, presenting the social status quo realistically, not overdoing it, and not being squeamish about it, is also one of the manifestations of openness.
Once again, these words with different meanings, both positive and negative, can be linked together to produce a myriad of writing ideas. Candidates can write from ancient to modern, from shallow to deep, from negative to positive and so on, as long as there is an organic connection between the words, it is a reasonable way.
And then there is the task.
First, choose "two or three" keywords, no more, no less. And there must be an organic connection between them, not a hammer in the east and a stick in the west, the main part of the article is written into several large pieces of each other.
Secondly, to understand that the audience of the article is foreign youth, then how to obviously reflect this, it is worth considering. It seems that writing a letter to a foreign youth is the most understandable and clear way to present it.
You have to cross the desert, so you are not free; but you can choose the way to cross the desert, so you are free again - this is the new curriculum standard national 1 volume essay questions that I have seen, gives us constraints, but gives infinite possibilities.
Sample Essay 1:
International Friends:
Exhibit letter like a meeting.
Brilliant civilization for thousands of years, great China to guests. Contemporary China is welcoming every international friend with an open and inclusive attitude. Today, I heard that you are eager to learn about China, should be our country Confucius words: "have friends from afar, not happy?" Here, please allow me to be a guide for the time being, with three things as a mirror, a peephole in the tube, for you to show my China's past, present and future.
The Great Wall as a rearview mirror, review the past, so that we do not forget where we came from yesterday. From Shanhaiguan to Jiayuguan Pass, from Bohai to Longxi, from the waves to the wind and sand, standing on top of the Great Wall, it is our national spirit. "But make the Dragon City flying generals, do not teach Hu Ma Du Yinshan." Under Wang Changling's Qin Yue Han Guan, there is our `determination to protect our country. "The only way to defend the country is to cultivate virtue and pacify the people; if the people are happy, the state will be peaceful and the border will be fortified." In the reason why Emperor Kangxi did not rebuild the Great Wall, there is our people-oriented compassion. "Sibling rivalry is a threat to the outside world." In the Battle of the Great Wall, where China **** united against Japan, there was our unity in seeking common ground while reserving differences. *** Dengcheng Que, I hope you can see the inheritance and development of the national spirit, see where we came from yesterday.
*** Enjoy the bike as a microscope, look at the reality, let us reflect on today's behavior. No one in this world is perfect, and neither is contemporary China. Walking through the streets, you can see *** enjoy bicycle everywhere, is a reflection of this. Sweeping the code to ride, parked according to the place, pay on time, protect the car, as contemporary poet Guo Xiaochuan said, "I hope that every time I remember, I don't feel guilty about my life." I think these civilized cycling citizens can look down without guilt. But at the same time, there are also a few people who deface numbers, add locks privately, and vandalize bicycles, which is exactly what Mr. Qian Liqun called "exquisite egoists". These are the people we need to educate when we build a civilized society. We are not perfect, but we are always striving for it. *** Pedal bike, I hope you can see the glitter and lack of civilization, to see our behavior today.
The high-speed rail for the telescope, looking to the future, so that we recognize where to go tomorrow. The wind and lightning, through the gorges and valleys, high-speed rail, is the representative of science and technology. And if China wants to face the future with a more robust posture, it is about to focus on the development of science and technology. In fact, not only high-speed rail, please try to see, manned spaceflight, deep-sea submergence, network interconnection, are not our country is focusing on the development of science and technology, exploration and has achieved outstanding results. Science and technology are the long quill and big wings for the future, which help our Chinese nation to go up to the sky and enter the earth, and break the clouds and waves. *** By taking the high-speed rail, I hope you can see the development of science and technology and take off, and see where we are going tomorrow.
As I speak, I am suddenly reminded of Ai Qing's poem: "Why do I always have tears in my eyes, because I am y in love with this land? You may not be able to understand the tears of pride and love in the eyes of the children of China, but I hope you can see in my introduction that China has been, is, and will be a part of the ocean. With the national spirit as the bone, spiritual civilization as the soul, science and technology as the sword, reviewing the past, looking at the reality, looking forward to the future, this is the Great Wall, **** enjoy the bicycle and high-speed rail brought China, but also I am y attached to - the great beauty of China.
Fan essay two:
Mr. Donald:
Hello!
Seeing the words is like meeting, you are amazed at the rapid development of China. Now, as your tour guide in China, let me introduce China to you with three key words:
First, the Great Wall: There is an old Chinese saying: "It is not a good man who does not go to the Great Wall". The Great Wall, one of the eight wonders of the world, is a cultural treasure dedicated to the world by the wisdom and sweat of the industrious and brave Chinese nation. It was first built during the Qin Dynasty, and is said to have been constructed by Emperor Qin Shi Huang in order to resist the invasion of nomads from the north. It was later expanded through successive dynasties to reach a scale of 10,000 miles, and is therefore called the Great Wall of 10,000 Miles. It is also said to be the only earthly structure that astronauts can see from outer space. This makes every child of China feel proud, but the Great Wall, revered by the Chinese people, not only because of its own majestic, stretches for 10,000 miles; more importantly, it is a symbol of the Chinese people's strong and unyielding spirit. If you are a Chinese speaker, you must have heard of this idiom: "All will become one city". China is a peace-loving country, but if our beautiful motherland suffers from danger, all the children of China, will use their own flesh and blood to build a new Great Wall, which is the Great Wall left us a valuable spiritual heritage.
Second, beautiful countryside: If the Great Wall is the symbol of ancient China, then beautiful countryside is the epitome of modern China. When it comes to modernization, your mind may present the grandeur of the Empire State Building and the hustle and bustle of Times Square. Indeed, it is very modern. But, while this may be your modernization, it is by no means the entirety of China's modernization. Confucius, a Chinese thinker 2,000 years ago, once said, "Gentlemen are peaceful but different." We are on a path of modernization with Chinese characteristics. The Chinese characteristics here include the construction of beautiful villages. As you know, there are more than 800 million farmers in China. The vast majority of them live in the countryside, and to build the countryside well is to work for the welfare of the greatest number of Chinese people. This is from the material level, but from the spiritual level, the countryside is the homeland of the Chinese people's soul and the root of their culture. In the process of global urbanization, more and more people from the countryside to the city, but in the middle of the night when the dream wakes up, but can not find the childhood that clear brook, can not see the village of the big hug thick acacia tree, can not listen to grandpa shaking a fan to talk about the distant legend ...... Therefore, we want to modernize the gold and silver mountains, but also want to be beautiful countryside of the The first thing you need to do is to get a good deal of money and a good deal of money. You came to China's first station, rushed to see the town of Wuzhen, is the representative of the beautiful countryside.
Third, the Belt and Road: the first two are China's world, "One Belt, One Road" proposed, highlighting China as a part of the world, the responsibility borne. The Bible says: "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you". China puts forward this idea, is the hope and the world together *** with the development, *** with prosperity.
Well, that's all I have to say. I hope you love the "world of China", and I hope you can publicize the "world of China"
Here's to you
Salute!