I still remember the scene under the moon: on August 15th of that year, the round moon gave off soft moonlight. A few thin gray clouds lingered in the soft moonlight, and the river that had been running all day calmed down. The moon is reflected on the river. When the evening breeze blows, the waves sparkle like a piece of pure white jade or a ribbon studded with precious stones. There was a kind and gentle smile on my mother's round face, and she quietly watched me playing in the moonlight. The moonlight is faint and I admire it peacefully. Yes, next to it is another field that has just been harvested. In this land, I was most afraid of writing essays when I was in elementary school, but now, we have to solve such problems
We have planted radishes and rice. I have touched snails in the rice fields. I piled the firewood so high. After closing the table, I sat cross-legged under the moonlight and looked at the shadows of the trees. Now the moon has risen, and the yard is like a silver blanket plated by moonlight. Oh, friends, let's go to the yard! Didn't you say that when night comes, everyone will have a long chat in the pavilion in the yard? Do we have bright moonlight shining on us?
What "I" saw and thought: In the sixth paragraph of the text, "I" saw the repaired village road, the fish jumping out of the water, and the heavy ears of rice, like a silver blanket. Similar rice fields etc. "I" smelled the sweet aroma of the fruit, and I heard the singing of autumn insects, the flapping of night birds' wings, the splashing of fish jumping out of the water, and the gurgling of ditch water. "I" thought of spring, when "we" were planting rapeseed and rice in our own land, "I" was still looking for rabbit grass in the field, blowing dandelions all over the sky, etc.
Material selection:
This small practice is to write about a scene under the moon. Combined with the description of the scene under the moon in the text, recall the most unforgettable scene that happened under the moon and write it down. The first thing we may think of is family affection, and pictures like this will appear before our eyes: on the path, my mother stretched out her arms to welcome me as a toddler; on a moonlit night, my father was playing on my back; on a moonlit night, my grandma taught me to count the stars in the sky. ... When describing, you can express your emotions while describing the scene, or you can write the scene first and then express your emotions, blending your emotions into the scenery. In this way, the emotions and scenery blend naturally, and you can write a good article.
How to write:
1. When writing this scene, make it clear that the time is night, and mention the unique scenery under the moon in the text, so that people can understand at a glance that you are in Write about the scene under the moon at night.
2. The text describes the beautiful scenery under the moon that "I" saw when walking on the moon with my grandma, expressing the deep affection between "me" and my grandma, and how we walked on the moon. The joyful mood of the moment achieves the blend of emotion and scenery.
3. When describing the scenery under the moon, the text uses rhetorical techniques such as parallelism and metaphor to exaggerate the atmosphere, make the depicted scenery more vivid and contagious, and express the author's feelings.
4. When the author wrote about the moon, he used verbs appropriately, such as the word "flow" in "the thin stream, flowing with the fragrance of grass and wild flowers, and the moonlight" gave the original meaning Sweet, joyful emotions are attached to natural objects without emotion.
Write snippets.
Every moonlit night in late summer and early autumn, my mother likes to take me for a walk on the road beside the river in the park. The sparkling river shines with dazzling silver light under the street lights, making it even more beautiful. The crickets were like holding a concert, singing bursts of sweet songs. The willow trees on the shore are like majestic soldiers guarding the river. Gradually, we came to the center of the square in the park, and saw a tall rockery standing in the square like a giant. The moonlight illuminated the beautiful flower bed next to it, and also illuminated the tall osmanthus tree. Under the blowing of the evening breeze, the sweet-scented osmanthus exudes a refreshing fragrance, which is intoxicating. At this time, the laughter of adults and children came from around the square. Some of them were dancing, some were playing chess, and some were playing. Skateboarding... is so exciting! Everything is integrated in this beautiful moonlit night.