Li Qingzhao, the god of beauty in my heart?
Yidu candidates?
everyone has a beautiful god he loves. The beautiful god in my heart is you-?
No one has ever seen your photo. You didn't leave a photo at that time, but in my heart, you are more beautiful than Xi Shi and Zhao Jun, and The Story Of Diu Sim and Guifei, who are ashamed of flowers when the moon is closed. Your beauty is unique and irreplaceable! Your beauty intoxicates me and is my eternal pursuit! ?
With the dawn, I approached you after thousands of years ...?
I have gone through the loneliness of "cherishing spring, urging flowers to rain", the youth of "dew is thick and flowers are thin, sweat is thin and clothes are light and thorough", the amorous feelings of "embroidered hibiscus smiles, and the duck with flying treasure is lined with fragrant cheeks", the loneliness of "locking the window in a cold day, phoenix trees should hate frost at night" and the sadness of "it is better to share it with others". You learned a lot, but you didn't care about your words, and you learned nothing. At that time, you were undoubtedly a strange flower on the branch. The chilly autumn wind devastated you, but you were unwilling to fall to the ground. You still stubbornly stood on the branch, blooming to your heart's content, overflowing with unique fragrance, and never languished. Your talent and stubbornness make you lonely, and your peerless loneliness makes you cold and beautiful! ?
You came to us in a boat with deep sadness and melancholy eyes. You are thinner than a yellow flower. Thousands of years of wind and rain have faded away, and the glass is prosperous and precipitated, and your tears are weak with sadness. Home, can't go back; Heart, there is nowhere to return; The night is too long, condensed into frost, and the pale meniscus hooks the past, which makes this loneliness blend into light wine, making it the most difficult for you to rest until "looking for it, it is cold and clear, and it is sad and miserable." Your life is surrounded by this melancholy. How can you say "worry" about your family, your family, your feelings and your country? ! ?
In the face of much ado about nothing, in the face of broken fragrance and residual wine, in the face of green, fat, red and thin, there is no fellow traveler, no acquaintance, and only a glass of turbid wine clears the sorrow. How deep is that sorrow? There is nothing the grasshopper boat can do. Since it can't be carried, it will turn into salty tears with loneliness, dripping in the memory of Zhao Mingcheng, dripping in the continuous thoughts of hating the country's enemies. ?
Li Qingzhao, the beautiful god in my heart, is my eternal pursuit. You stand on the top of the mountain, sucking the spirit of heaven and earth and the essence of the sun and the moon. You won't be lonely. You came to us through time and space with your whole body shining. I firmly believe that in the new era, there are still women who are gentle and blue-hearted under your spiritual inspiration. Aileen inherited your firmness and determination, Sanmao inherited your boldness and freedom, Zhang Xiaoxian inherited your sharpness and thoroughness, and Shu Ting inherited your sweet and independent love ...?
Li Qingzhao, the beauty in my heart, is my eternal pursuit. You held up a lonely lamp, lit up a lonely journey, and danced a perfect solo with that peerless loneliness, like a swaying flower, guarding that prosperous and empty city in Chinese history.
A famous teacher refers to Tianjin
A composition rich in cultural colors and historical details can show the profound thoughts of the candidates, arouse the passion in the candidates' chests, stimulate the readers' appreciation of aesthetics, and make the marking teacher feel the profound cultural accumulation of the candidates. Because of this, this kind of cultural composition has been favored and won high marks repeatedly.
1. inject historical details to increase a heavy sense of history.
excerpt: At Gaixia on the banks of Wujiang River, you bid farewell to Yu Ji and pushed your war horse off the bamboo raft. You recall that you personally led 8, children in Jiangdong to destroy the Qin Dynasty, you recall the battle of burning your bridges, and you recall that you did not listen to your father's advice at the Hongmen banquet and killed Liu Bang, which led to the siege of Gaixia today. You hate Liu Bang's meanness. Embattled on all sides, you ruined the great ambition of the overlord of the place of Xi. In a tidal wave of killing, you cut down several soldiers of the Han army and watched your BMW cross the river. You are full of remorse, carrying a sword to your neck, and pouring blood into the sky! The water of Wujiang River, the water full of emotion, the water mixed with love and hate! (27 Binzhou perfect composition "Let the water stay in my heart forever")
[eyebrows fly] The little author Miao integrates historical details into the text. The author's understanding of historical details is profound, and he skillfully incorporates the historical details of "elegy under the note", from which he finds the function and significance of water. Historical details are thought-provoking, history enlightens, pay attention to historical details, extract cultural genes from the blood bank of history, and let people feel the beauty of historical details in your articles.
2. Infiltrate literary details to add flying literary talent.
excerpt: I bid farewell to classical literature, and now I am trying to find my own literature. I like Yu Qiuyu's writing, sincere and magnificent. The Traveler Boundless is a lofty ideal; The Millennium Courtyard is the background of a dynasty. Notes on Mountain Residence glows with wisdom; And "Cultural Journey" took me to pursue the culture of China, but also caused deep thinking: culture, history, is it really so difficult to find your way? I can't help singing with Mr. Yu! Thanks to Yu Qiuyu's literature, I gradually become rational from sensibility, and I hope I can become a thinker. (In 27, the perfect composition for the entrance examination in Ningde was "Thanks for Literature")
[The eyebrows fly] The little author expressed his poetry with clever language. This is a full-mark composition with flying literary talent. Candidates closely follow the writing of "Thank you for literature", and write "Thank you for Yu Qiuyu's literature" here, "Let me gradually become rational from sensibility", with free and flexible writing and clever insertion. Flexible quotation not only increases the poetry and charm of the language of the article, but also subtly shows the examinee's broad reading horizon, and also increases the solid foundation of the article, making it meaningful and infectious. Literary charm will always be as bright and bright as a seven-color rainbow, from which we can deeply feel the sincerity, richness and purity of literature and art.
3. Embedding folk customs to highlight the local charm of folk customs.
excerpt: when people mention Lanzhou, they will first praise Lamian Noodles, a beef in Lanzhou. Zhang Shu, a poet in the Qing Dynasty, once praised "Uncle Ma's Beef Noodles" like this: "Lamian Noodles is fragrant, but only Master Ma." All friends who come to Lanzhou should try this unique beef noodle. "One clear (soup), two white (radish), three green (coriander, garlic sprout), four red (chili pepper) and wuhuang (noodles)" are the five characteristics of beef noodles, and they are also the standards to measure the quality of beef noodles. Don't look at the dough. In the hands of Master Lamian Noodles, you can pull out more than ten kinds of noodles with different shapes, such as big width, wide width, leek leaves, two pillars, two thin, thin, capillary and a nest of silk, in a blink of an eye. Most people in Lanzhou don't pay much attention to gentleness when eating beef noodles. They squat on the spot, walk around and eat a bowl of noodles immediately. This also shows the characteristics of northerners-informal, bold and free and easy. (The Charm of Lanzhou in 27)
Beef Lamian Noodles in Lanzhou is a unique folk culture in Lanzhou. By introducing the five characteristics of Lanzhou beef Lamian Noodles, the shape of Lamian Noodles and the personality of noodle eaters, this paper expresses the author's admiration and praise for local folk culture. Taste attractive food, appreciate charming folk customs and appreciate the unique local folk customs, so that your article has regional characteristics and is full of personality.
Examples
Walking in the gallery of history (Hangzhou Full Score Composition in 25)
I was taken to a long corridor with moving pictures hanging on both sides. I took a step and looked at these colorful pictures.
In the first scene
In the crowded Roman square, the believers held torches and shouted at the top of their lungs, "Burn him! Burn him! " There is a cross in the center of the square, and a young man is tied to it. There are piles of firewood under his feet and his eyes are beating with flames.
"say it! The earth is the center of the universe! " A Christian in a black gown threatened him.
"no! The sun is the center! " Young people have no fear.
"ignite!" The black gown was in a rage and gave the order.
The flame burst into flames at the young people's feet, and the square was filled with cheers. The eyes of the young man in the fire are always firm, and he lives forever in the fire. He is Bruno, a man who sticks to the truth and adds a fiery landscape to history.
Act II
On the white hospital bed, a little girl struggled to turn over a book with a small stick. Because of paraplegia, she can only read in the mirror with difficulty, and the words are reversed, so she will keep crying. But she didn't complain, she persisted, and how many heartfelt smiles she showed for it. When she was sitting in a wheelchair, playing the accordion and singing "There is a piece of red flowers and green grass in front of my eyes", she already understood the true meaning of life.
Zhang Haidi, with a pale face, has added a colorful scene of life to history.
Act III
In the hot sun, an old man dressed as a farmer is busy in the field. Bow your head, bend over and stand up again. He repeated this series of actions over and over again, observing the rice plants. Suddenly, his eyes lit up and a smile was written on his face: "Found it! There you are! I've been looking for you for ten years, and today I finally found it! " With that, he bent down and carefully dug up the rice plant by roots. I was ecstatic and ran to the distant house with it. He is Yuan Longping, a great farmer who has fed hundreds of millions of people in China. After ten years of persistence, he finally painted a golden landscape in the history of China.
epilogue
When I open my eyes, it's already dawn, and the book next to my pillow is still on the first page, which impressively says: Only by sticking to the end can I enjoy the most beautiful scenery and create the most beautiful scenery.
[ Teach you the finishing touch]
This paper selects the stories of three famous figures in history: Bruno was burned, Zhang Haidi studied hard, and Yuan Longping devoted himself to scientific research, which formed three touching and unique scenes. Although the three stories are "old", the author shows the valuable spirit of different characters in different situations-persistence with sentimental hearts and delicate brushstrokes. In terms of expression techniques, they also have their own emphases. Writing Bruno focuses on the background, writing Zhang Haidi focuses on the laying of inner feelings, and writing Yuan Longping focuses on the description of characters' words and deeds, so that all three characters show distinctive personality characteristics.