A lot of teachers in the ordinary writing practice on the students repeatedly emphasize the composition to "real", but because of the lack of accumulation of materials and the life of the experience of the overly careful not to observe, the composition has become a "discursive" do not have to prove. In the examination room, many students want to certainly, should have responded to the life and essay, into an essay for the fabrication of life, and even fabricated life. Such as the 2007 Hunan Changsha City, the proposition essay "stay a little gratitude in the heart", many students fabricated interaction, study in the false details. Such as: "I" test is not good, a worse than "I" exams of the classmates to counsel me, full of ease to "I" said: "I'm worse than you, I'm like this, you still hurt what heart?" Said the beginning of the night "cry". I know he is pretending, only in a side laugh, he saw me laugh, stop, persuade me to. The content of this fake cry is not real. Shandong Zibo City, the topic of the essay "beauty on the side", a candidate on the fabricated one of their parents adopted children, and then parents have their own children, because the economic level can not afford to give up their own children, this false story to show the adoptive parents of the night, said the "beauty on the side". Anhui proposition essay "our hearts close", a candidate in order to highlight the noble character of the father, even made up the father worked for many years outside, with AIDS but also often free blood donation of false examples. The material of the false, the most basic cause is that we ignore the experience of familiar things around us. The authenticity of the material can be guaranteed by writing about familiar things around us. Drawing on familiar things around us is to draw materials from the natural, study, family, extracurricular and social aspects familiar to the students to write. The unique experience of their own feelings y infected small things, life in the thought, interesting materials and so on. These materials are easy to write a true feeling, and therefore the most impulsive, most able to evoke the emotional **** Ming and we get from the experience of the feeling is also true and unique. Such as the 2007 Jiangsu Yangzhou, full marks in the examination essay "eating salted meat for two months" vernacular, living speech, the character of small actions are filled with strong rural life force interest, the aroma of the local flavor, let a person intoxicated. Behind the words is actually the author of sensitive and subtle perception of life, life from the heart of the joy and love. The flavor of family love is written out. Students in the extraction of familiar materials around, to avoid the selection of material generalization, based on fantasy, resulting in the content of the composition away from the main theme, away from the reality of life, the exposition of the truth. Pay attention to: not less than to leave the article in the middle of a random list of materials or fabricated for the love of the text; to choose to have a certain depth of teaching and inspiring exemplary examples, in order to "small in the big night". That is, to pull out of life seems small and can reflect the deep grams of significance of the work to write. For example, in 2007, Anhui Province, the excellent composition "our hearts close", the candidates drew the daughter wanted to participate in school activities, mother did not agree, and finally the daughter understands the mother's suffering of the life of the small things, reproduced a story of love to understand the love of the family. Selection of materials close to life, to the small to see the night, describe the delicate, describe the daughter of the mother from ignorance to understand the process. Example of our hearts close to a candidate in Anhui since childhood, I have lived with my grandparents, mom and dad went to Shanghai to work, only a few times a year back. So, when I was little, my grandmother said to me: "Your mom and dad go to earn money to buy you candy to eat, and cloth dolls it!" Indeed, every year in the Spring Festival, my parents would bring me back to the rest of the children did not eat the candy, the rest of the children did not play with the cloth dolls. Looking at their adoring eyes, the joy and pride in my heart is beyond words. Until one time in kindergarten I fought with a little friend, his mother came to reprimand me in the afternoon, the heart of the aggression prompted me to cry and make trouble to ask my mother to come back to "give me revenge". But my mom and dad not only didn't come back, but also taught me a lesson. That night, I threw away all my dolls and decided to ignore them. From then on, I was closer to my grandparents than to my parents, who were still busy with my candy and dolls. Later, my mom and dad bought a house in the city so that I could receive more education and study in the city. Mom and Dad still worked outside the home, and I still had very little to say to them. The long distance from home to Shanghai kept our hearts from getting closer. One time when the teacher was explaining "The Song of the Traveling Son" in class, I suddenly felt a pang of sadness in my heart that I had never felt before. The phrase "Who says that the grass has a heart, but the three spring sunshine" made me realize the hardship and suffering of my parents for the first time. And then I always rush to pick up mom and dad's phone, I talk about my nostalgia for them in my diary, I began to understand the pain and suffering of their busy schedule ... This year, "May Day" holiday, my father came back to see me, asked me what I want to gift. I said I want a rag doll, Dad hesitated for a moment, gladly granted. Holding the rest of the doll, the heart of happiness and satisfaction like waves, wave after wave for a long time can not be suspended ... ... Although sometimes I will be "Dad" called "Grandpa", making me very embarrassed, but soon we all coincided with a smile, at that moment I invented my father really "lovely". My heart tells me that my heart and my dad's heart are closer. At this moment, I was sitting in the exam room, and my dad was waiting outside the exam room. I told myself: have faith, don't let dad down. His hard sweat, busy back cast this love, encouraging me to boldly move forward ... from home to Shanghai from the end of the wind to the end of the wind from the examination room to the examination room outside from the father's heart to my heart I personally know that our hearts are close! Comment: The highlight of this full marks essay is the selection of materials closely related to life, emotional sincerity and moving details of the description. From a small moment of joy and pride to later on the parents of the cold and then after the integration of gratitude, the candidate with a simple and simple speech to tell the story, in a simple speech to reveal the "our hearts close to the" deep experience. Pulled himself and kindergarteners fight, father working outside, buy me the favorite doll, I listened to the teacher in class, "Song of the Traveling Son" know feel the love of the father and mother love, this year's "May Day" holiday father once bought a doll and other small things in life. Details of life such as the "father" called "grandfather", holding the rest of the doll ... show, real, moving and memorable. The article is clear, the growth of the candidate's ego actually represents the process of the heart close to the end of the extremely expressive. This is a write out of life, write out of their own beautiful article. Material application principle 2 excellent, attractive highlights "text like looking at the mountains do not like flat" to write an article to have ups and downs, twists and turns, change, otherwise it will give people a monotonous feeling. From the narrative essay, should write off the matter of the waves. Or pulling life in the mind, interesting, flavorful small things, so as to dig out the deep meaning, such as the article will be readable. A lot of students write about people and events will only be flat, generalized and write, the article to read people boring. For example, in 2007, Ningbo City, the material composition, many students in the narrative of their own growth with, just simply write themselves, themselves and their classmates, teachers, relatives and so on between a few things, like a running account. Candidates write a "growth diary" recounted four things, no focus, are slapdash, a pass, after reading the bland and tasteless. Another example, the Guangdong Province, a candidate's essay "the best reward": I remember once my test results lower, I thought I would be criticized, I returned home in despair, listless back to the room. Attentive mother came over to ask me what happened, I know that I can not deceive my mother, then told her the truth, ready to receive criticism I heard my mother said in harmony: "Children, this test is not good, it does not matter, but to understand their own mistakes over there, know how to save, which is worse should be more sales force, will not be able to teach to teachers and teachers to teach to do not be ashamed of asking." Listened to my mother's words, I finally made up my mind, since the beginning of that day, every day, study hard, double the effort, it is important to do not be ashamed to ask, and finally deserved a test in my achievements have improved, I thought my mother to see will certainly be a good praise me, so I ran home quickly, interested in the good news ready to tell my mother, who knows that my mother looked at a sentence: "It can be." I heard unconvinced and said: "obviously there is a very big progress, but said okay." I did not expect my mother said in harmony: "children, only so many points you are happy as such, you should continue to do your best ah, not less than a person proud of pride, humility will bring progress, proud of pride is easy to make people fall behind. You should not be so small progress and feel satisfied, but should be doubled than today, and strive to get better results, you know?" Listening to my mother's words finally made me understand, although my mother did not give me any material rewards, but gave me can be applied to the energy of the life of the reward, essay material, "the principle of the use of the material in the composition of the examination". The two tests of the material are very shallow and childish, although the use of contrasting representation of the trick, but the lack of twists and turns of the idea and lively plot, giving people the feeling is still shallow. The exposition of the twists and turns, the lively image of speech, are a good way to make the material colorful. Exposition of a break three fold, that is, to set up waves, can be taken to set up suspense, staccato, unpredictable and so on. Suspense is to tease the reader's curiosity of a method of writing, writing, writing, the first to tease the reader's curiosity, when the reader wants to understand the moment, but suddenly stop, do not tell the reader, and then change the subject of the rest. Staccato, there are first suppressed and then raised, first raised and then suppressed, to the reader caused by the impact on the heart. Unexpected, that is, let the reader caused by the determination of the error, once the final clarification of the true nature of the work, it will be shocked, y impressed. That is, outside of expectation, but in reason, such as Maupassant, "The Necklace" at the end of the Mathilde husband and wife ten years of hard work to pay off the loss of the necklace debt, but the invention of the necklace was originally a fake, very unexpected readers, but think about it, but in reason, leaving a deep impression on people. We control these tricks, bland matters, will also let you say that fascinating. In addition, beautiful, lively image of speech, is also an important aspect of the story is excellent, funny, subtle speech often receive good results. For example, "the value of 20 dollars" in the treatment of the material on the application of the trick of a twist. 20 dollars worth of a father came home late from work, he was tired and a little annoyed, found his five-year-old son leaning against the door waiting for him." Dad, can I ask you a question?"" What is it? What's the question?"" Dad, how much money do you make an hour?"" It's none of your business, why do you ask?" Father asked energetically. I just want to know, please tell me, how much money do you make in an hour?" the child pleaded." The child pleaded." If you must know, I make 20 dollars an hour."" Oh," the child bowed his head, then said, "Dad, can I borrow 10 dollars?" The father fumed, "If you're just going to borrow money to buy meaningless toys, go back to your room and go to bed. Think about why you're being so selfish. I work long, hard hours every day and I don't have time to play childish games with you." The child went quietly to his room and closed the door. The father sat back down and rejuvenated. Later, he calmed down. He began to think that he might have been too hard on the child - maybe the child really wanted to buy something, and he rarely asked for money in general. The father went into the child's room: "Are you asleep, son?" Dad, not yet, I'm still awake." The child replied. I may have been mean to you earlier," said the father, "and I've let all my anger out for the day - here's the ten dollars you asked for."" Dad, thank you." The child shrieked and pulled some crumpled bills out from under his pillow, gradually counting them." Why do you have money already?" the father asked energetically. The father asked energetically. Because it wasn't enough before, but I have enough now." The child replied, "Dad, I have 20 dollars now, can I buy you an hour of your time? Please come home early tomorrow - I want to eat dinner with you." (Tang Jiliu) Appreciation: Why did the 5-year-old son ask his father how much money he could make in an hour? Why did he borrow 10 dollars from his father after learning that he made 20 dollars an hour? When his father gives him 10 dollars, the son screams and takes out some crumpled bills from under his pillow, gradually counting them, what does he want to do? This one after another suspense strongly attracts the reader. The answer is not revealed until the end - "Dad, I've got 20 dollars now, can I buy you an hour of your time? Please come home early tomorrow - I want to have dinner with you." That's how it is! It's a powerful and moving article. Modern life is fast-paced and high-speed, and people are so busy that they often neglect many precious things, including family love. Material application principle 3 appropriate, adequate material, choose the right students to write a group of emotional essay is not persuasive, there is an important cause is the lack of basis, more is the lack of examples to confirm. Either no examples to cite, or examples of bad. Selected materials exemplary, accurate, in order to strengthen the article persuasive, examples of exemplary, that is, examples should be representative of the sensitivity, the night of the **** recognized examples. Instead of the obscure, unrepresentative. The first must control a large number of examples. Such as language, politics, history and other textbooks with a large number of real anecdotes of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign celebrities, are very good argumentative material, newspapers, magazines, television and other media often reported cases, is also the object of our collection. When we have a large number of examples, we should learn to choose, choose those exemplary examples to confirm their own ideas. Examples of precise, relevant, the issue of difficult examples can perhaps fully substantiate the argument. There should be a connotation between the example and the argument. For example, in Nantong, Jiangsu Province, the excellent composition "with a smile", the candidates from the sweat of the figures Sima Qian, Li Bai, Tao Yuanming to draw the power of energy, with a smile to face the pain and shame, ambition and loneliness ... but create a lot of works spread throughout the ages as a model example, to "with a smile, peacefully face all the hardships, we will certainly be able to obtain success" conclusion. It is very persuasive. We have to avoid piling up examples and talking too much. Be careful not to apply examples without analyzing them, and not to confuse the narratives in the group story with the narratives in the sequential story. Use the examples you have at hand. To analyze the example, should be the example can confirm the argument of the connotation of exposure. At the same time, it should be noted that the examples should be generalized and concise. Instead of unfolding the examples to tell a story, many students, examples, do not understand the exposition in the order of the book ordering contract essay in the difference between the exposition, the examples stretched out a long time, and even the article appears to be incongruous, I do not know is a group of feelings of the essay according to the order of the book. In short, the example of the analysis and interpretation and the organic combination of arguments, either after the first narrative, or after the first discussion of the narrative, or the side of the narrative and discussion, but not less than the narrative does not discuss. Such as the 2007 Chongqing Municipal Examination of the excellent essay "long fly", the candidates in the text of the string analysis of the three noble character, clean energy of the model, so that the "cohort" has a contamination of the mind, cultivate sentiment function, so that the abstract topic has the power to impulse the readers. The speech of the article can also be used as a model for many students, talk about how elegant and gorgeous, but exceptionally concise and expressive, sentence and sentence, paragraph and paragraph, candidates are aware of the construction of a neat and tidy beauty, give people a feeling like osmanthus, not colorful, but definitely the fragrance of the nose, aftertaste! The first thing you need to do is to get your hands dirty. A candidate in the Shaanxi class reform area hates the enemy, thinking that the enemy often puts them in a crisis, no sense of security, and sometimes even a tragic loss. This is true. But I also say, this kind of not inevitably some unilateral, because they do not see a lot of time with the enemy will progress, will be harvested, without the enemy will regress, will perish side, so I want to sing loudly to the enemy, and to the enemy sincerely ask: the enemy, how are you? There is such a story, said in a group of reindeer on a small island, a meritocracy exceptionally love them, the hunters will be arranged to the island reindeer's natural enemy - wolves, the results of the meritocracy but saw a scene of his extremely reluctant to see the phenomenon: reindeer in the day in the absence of enemies in the comfortable situation, not afraid to eat, not afraid of being eaten by the wolves, originally good runners, they are not afraid of the enemy to eat. The reindeer, who were originally good runners, refused to run any more, so the physical condition of the whole herd got worse and worse, and their reproduction ability was also significantly reduced. Merit does not understand the reason, go to teach zoologists, zoologists told him the importance of the enemy to the reindeer herd, the merit of the special from other places to introduce some of the wolves, in the wolf's "threat", reindeer not less than every day to practice Mercedes Benz's skills, its physical fitness naturally strengthened. Enemies to the growth of animal populations have great benefits, the beneficial effects on people is also indisputable. Athens Olympic diving eyebrow three-meter board champion Peng Bo said in a post-game interview with reporters: "I'm especially grateful to two small me, one is a teammate Wang Kernan, a foe Saudin. If Wang Kernan hadn't participated in today's event to give me encouragement, my gold medal wouldn't have gone so well. I have to thank Saudin because I didn't expect him to play so well today. The fact that he fought so hard at such an old age stimulated me to fight harder." That's how important an opponent is to a person's development. Not coincidentally, the same in the Athens Olympics won the women's 100 meters breaststroke champion and broke the Olympic record Luo Xuejuan in response to a reporter's question about the moment, also said "I want to be grateful to my parents who gave birth to me and raised me, grateful to my coach and my hook cultivation, but also grateful to all the people who care about me, love and hatred of me," can perhaps show that the adversary to a small me to grow up is extremely important to a clanging voice of the words. So, so I want to sing loudly to the enemy, and to the enemy sincerely ask: enemy, how are you? Comment: This is a full score essay. It is also a very successful group love essay. The author bluntly put forward "many moments with the enemy will progress, will harvest, without the enemy will regress, will perish," the middle point of the argument point, the next two paragraphs of the arrangement of the full factual argumentative material, by the object (reindeer) and people, the positive and negative than the argumentation, the reindeer and the wolf example, exemplary, fresh and personalized. Peng Bo and Luo Xuejuan's examples are exemplary and precise with the smell of the times. The last paragraph takes care of the beginning, perfect conclusion. Thus, this paper is profound, persuasive, clear, and carefully constructed. Material application principle 4 fresh, personalized thinking, advancing with the times a lot of students ordinary ordinary "two ears do not hear outside the window", do not pay attention to the accumulation of material, essay repeatedly with the few old-fashioned material; some of the material was good, with more people, but also lost the original glory; some students applying the material is simply copied, without their own views on the issue of thinking. Lack of novelty, lack of sense of the times, is the most important cause of the material is the same as the most important cause of stale. Personalized treatment can make the material fresh. Material fresh, the first is to material for personalized thinking and analysis, so that even if it is relatively stale material can be new. Contrasting application, combination grafting, new stories, rebound pipa and other methods can make the material old look new. 2007 Hunan Yiyang a candidate's essay "kite and the line of bondage" is important to write that he accompanied his mm to fly a kite, to see the kite to get rid of the kite line out of balance and fell to the ground, and finally gained the feeling: today accompanied by the little sister to fly a kite, so that I understand the reason that we must hold tightly in the stop in the line! We must hold on to the line of stopping and let ourselves reach the other side of the shore of success under its binding and pulling, and let our dream fly in the blue sky as high as a kite permanently. Kite flying this material is very old-fashioned, but the candidates to deal with the material method is more clumsy, "understand a matter of fact" old-fashioned and dull, lack of personalized treatment of the material consciousness. Secondly, the material cited should be personalized, as far as possible to cite some of the approach to keep up with the times full of modern smell of living examples, so that will make your article full of vitality. Such as the annual selection of the center of the television station impulse of China's top ten people and other examples, many of which are both exemplary, but also fresh. Example: Forgiveness in the side of the beauty in the side of Zibo, Shandong, a candidate "a foot flat violets, but it left the smell on the heel, this is forgiveness." Andrew Matthews in the "forgiveness of the heart" said such an enlightening words. --Pang Juan is narrow-minded, he did not allow Sun Bin to win over him, and thus all sorts of assassination, and ultimately died in defeat; Zhou Yu is narrow-minded, he did not allow Zhuge Liang to win over him, and thus secretly tricky, and ultimately spit out blood and died; Cixi is narrow-minded, she did not allow others to win over her in chess. After their deaths are looked down upon by the world ... centrifugal separation of Germany and deceit, our lives will be in the cold, defensive, jealousy, hostility in the past, the state of mind has been suppressed, the growth and progress of society can not talk about, the beauty of the side will no longer exist! Only tolerance, in order to smooth out the pain in people's hearts, remove barriers, so that people can learn to appreciate the beauty around! King Zhuang of Chu night banquet, the wind blew the candles out, a general drunkenness out of shape, pull the princess's dickey, was removed from the hat tassel. King Zhuang knew, ordered all the officials to remove the tassel, and then light the candle. The general was so grateful that he fought bravely in a siege and saved King Zhuang of Chu. What a beautiful heart of tolerance! Liu Xiu defeated Wang Lang and entered Handan. When checking the official letters of the former dynasty, he sent a lot of documents of courtiers flattering Wang Lang and even assassinated himself. Liu Xiu burned all of them, not to be scrutinized. Afterwards the courtiers are loyal, loyal to their duties. What a beautiful heart of tolerance! In the Virginia Tech school shooting, the murderer killed 32 logical students and then committed suicide. At the memorial ceremony for the victims, 33 balloons were released and 33 bells were rung, including 32 victims and the gunman who committed suicide. The next day, 33 semi-circular limestone monuments were placed on the lawn of the middle square of the campus, and one of the monuments read "Cho Seung-hee, April 16, 2007," with flowers and candles next to the murderer's tombstone! What a beautiful heart of tolerance! Tolerance is not wanton appeasement, but reflects the light of humanity of a virtue; tolerance is not a fabrication, but the invisible gift; tolerance is not a favor gift, but the seed of space. Tolerance is not only the fine tradition of Chinese humanities, but also with today's advocacy of building space social goals and socialist honor and shame mutual attention. If everyone can more tolerance, all society will be doubly warm, doubly space, doubly stable, doubly prosperous, doubly beautiful! Tolerance is everywhere, beauty is everywhere! Comment: The material of this article can be described as a wide range of ancient and modern, including historical allusions, historical figures, hot topics and so on. Each material candidates have done a careful treatment, some sketches, form a prose; some details, focus on, let them obey in the "tolerance" under the topic. After the application of each material, are used "how beautiful heart of tolerance" sentence to do the end, seems to be well organized. In some cases, the material listed in the "U.S. Virginia Tech campus shooting" is April 2007 news material, can be described as fresh, full of the smell of the times; the end of the understanding of tolerance, can be described as fresh and unique, showing the material of the personality of the thought. The big talk 2 emoticons sewing machine history today: 2010-09-30 helpless grand appearance 2010-09-30 Tengfei Group: industrial real estate giant power 2010-09-30 to carry out the "each a fine class" teaching design selection 2010-09-30 plant mother has a way 2010-09-30 [the principle of the use of materials in the composition of the Chinese examination] to conquer the fear of building up the The fastest and surest way to conquer fear and build confidence is to do what you are afraid of until you get the experience of success.
The use of empathic techniques, connecting the five senses, making the aroma into a square, calling the sound into a shower of petals, such a wonderful writing technique;