Combination of point and surface writing essay 50 a 100

1. point and face of the diary 50 words

In our campus, every time you turn around, or change a perspective, in front of the eyes there will be a different scenery to show: quiet and lively teaching building, lush fir forest, colorful and staggered flower beds, pleasing to the eyes of the plastic running track playground ...... and I like the most. Her corner - that surrounded by the teaching building surrounded by our teachers and students affectionately called "quadrangle" place.

In the center of the quadrangle, is a tall pine tree, like a green pagoda. It's so tall that it's almost as tall as our fourth-floor classroom! The bark of the tree is bumpy and full of traces of the vicissitudes of life.

Its feet are covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", the grass are clustered to look up to it, as if nestled in the arms of the father. The left side of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool.

The drip pool is built on the east side of the building. Depending on the wall is a special decorative material made of stone walls, green-gray color, concave a convex one, oblique upper corner of a few brightly colored flowers to make it vivid at once! There is a hole below the stone wall, and the hole is the corridor of the east building of the teaching.

From time to time, there are a lot of first-grade children curious to put their heads in, shrink back. Below the hole is the pool.

The pool is made of various colors of pebbles and concrete. There are plants in the pool! There are also a variety of goldfish: red hydrangeas, pink and white pearls, colorful dragon eyes ...... look, the fastest swimming, the most mischievous is my beloved "little butterfly", she is playing hide and seek with her friends! The right side of the pine tree has a few stone tables and chairs.

The top is always clean! Why? Because we all like to sit there and read and play! When class is over, the place is abuzz. Classes, the little fish must also be listening to the sound of reading ...... a corner of the campus ah, your beautiful how do not let me love my campus more?

2. point and face to write a fragment of 100 words

Night falls, May Day Square lit up colorful lights. Some middle-aged and old people dance beautifully and tenderly in Wuyi Square, so that people all gather here!

The people who come here to watch the dancing are men, women, old and young ......

Look at the posture of their dancing, how beautiful it is. Huh! That someone is dancing in pairs, the two of them hand in hand, hand together to the center, the two pulled apart; hand pulled to the sides, the two stomach against the stomach, one by one neatly jumping. At this time, the female dance partner accidentally stepped on the feet of the male dance partner, I was about to laugh, they danced happily again.

The children who came to watch waved their arms to the beat, and although they couldn't keep up with the beat, they clapped their hands to the beat, clicked their feet, and grinned from ear to ear!

3. point and face of the diary 50 words

In our campus, every time you turn around, or change a perspective, in front of the eyes will have a different scenery to show: quiet and lively teaching building, lush fir forest, colorful and staggered flower beds, pleasing to the eyes of the plastic running track playground ...... and I most I like her corner - that surrounded by the teaching building surrounded by our teachers and students affectionately called "quadrangle" place.

In the center of the courtyard, is a tall pine tree, like a green pagoda. It's so tall that it's almost as tall as our fourth-floor classroom! The bark of the tree is bumpy and full of traces of the vicissitudes of life.

Its feet are covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", the grass are clustered to look up to it, as if nestled in the arms of the father. The left side of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool.

The drip pool is built on the east side of the building. Depending on the wall is a special decorative material made of stone walls, green-gray color, concave a convex one, oblique upper corner of a few brightly colored flowers to make it vivid at once! There is a hole below the stone wall, and the hole is the corridor of the east building of the teaching.

From time to time, there are a lot of first-grade children curious to put their heads in, shrink back.

From time to time, a lot of first graders stick their heads in and back out, and below the hole is the pool.

The pool is made of colorful pebbles and cement. There are water plants in the pool! There are also a variety of goldfish: red hydrangeas, pink and white pearls, colorful dragon eyes ...... look, the fastest swimming, the most mischievous is my beloved "little butterfly", she is playing hide-and-seek with her friends! The right side of the pine tree has a few stone tables and chairs.

The top is always clean! Why? Because we all like to sit there and read and play! When class is over, the place is abuzz. Classes are in session, the little fish must also be listening to the sound of reading children enameled raccoon people crazy paralyzed Fukailang ...... corner of the campus, ah, your beautiful how do not let me love my campus more?

4. point-face combination of essay 100

point-face combination

point-face combination of methods refers to both the face of the article in the description, but also a little bit of delineation, so that the two complement each other, harmony and unity of things in the world there is a dialectical relationship between the whole and the part of the world, the general and the individual. Thus, the selection of materials in the writing of the face with a point or a point with a combination of methods, but also is the embodiment of this relationship. In writing, a little face description, not only can make the object written with the overall appearance and specific posture; and, so described, can also show the essence of the law of objective things, to strengthen the article's ability to perform. At the same time, the combination of points and surfaces, is in the overall view to highlight the content of the point, and therefore rich in expression, so that the article to avoid dull monotonous. Moreover, the combination of point and face can also form a contrast between the two, the point can be specific and vividly reflect the characteristics of the face, the face can be clear and profoundly show the connotation of the point, so that the point and the face of the contrast in the contrast to the performance of the fuller, more full, from the face of the article to strengthen the infectious force. In a word, this technique of expression can make people have concrete feelings about the whole surface and also make people have deep impression about the key things. Yang Mei's Faithful Mirror is a good article written using a combination of point and surface.

This is a read after reading the "Little History of Mirrors", the text of the mirror's "biography" as a general introduction, the overall narrative of the "Little History of Mirrors" of the main content, from the water as a mirror to the silver-plated glass mirrors, as well as the scope of use of its brief description, which is the face. Then, the author specifically points out: "I feel most y or this passage: 'The mirror is always so faithful, not hidden to tell you, your face has no stains"'.

The focus of the elaboration in the text is placed on the metaphorical meaning and derivation of the meaning of the mirror, which constitutes the point of the article. This is an after-reading, after-reading must be the object of your reading to make some summarized introduction, so the small author of the ins and outs of the mirror to make some explanation is extremely necessary. But the author is not satisfied with this point, but from the perspective of ideological education, to explore the depth of the "feeling". The author started from the word "faithful", the role of the mirror for life, mentioned a new height, pointed out that the mirror has a "faithful" and 'unfaithful' points, and finally expressed Finally, it expresses the idea of "making friends with faithful mirrors". In this way, not only coincides with the physical properties of the mirror, but also accurately expresses the author's new and unique feelings, so that the point and the surface of the organic blend together, seemingly extraordinarily profound. Using the method of combining point and surface, should pay attention to the dialectical relationship between point and surface. To write in the face of the overall unity of the point, in highlighting the profound significance of the point of writing the face, so that the two are born of each other, melted into one, can not be point is the point of the face is the face, away from each other, not involved in each, and even contradict each other, if so, it will make the article content diffuse and messy, the center of the uncertainty.

5. with "point and face" method to write a labor scene 100 words or so

In the opening ceremony, the referee representative and athlete representatives were made after the oath, President Sun announced the official opening of the Games. The campus has always been quiet, all of a sudden lively: the athletes hold "friendship first, the competition second" spirit, on the field of play out of the level, out of the style, and strive to be civilized athletes. They strive to fight, constantly enterprising, beyond the self, not only exercise and show their physical fitness, physical fitness, but also exercise the will to overcome difficulties and improve the quality of thought and personality. Off-field students learned a lot from them, and what is more touching is that every student has a strong sense of class honor. The off-field cheering motivated the athletes of each class. The school radio broadcast time and time again the progress of the game and the class correspondent enthusiastic script.

The afterglow of the Athens Olympics has not yet disappeared, our school's 23rd Games and *** on stage.

When the list of winners in the green field over the flying, when the students on the stands for the 100 meters and 100-meter hurdles students shouting, when the certificate winners face others with a smile of victory. We have not forgotten that the long jump, basketball shooting competition in the corner of the stadium silently, 3000 meters of the last few students are still in the back of the catching up, the pace of the students who did not win the ranking may still be frank.

Since ancient times, it is the winner is the king and the loser is the enemy. However, in the spirit of sports, we are all equal, perhaps, the people who won the championship will be remembered on their faces after the game a big smile, pay more attention to the story behind them, but the people who did not get the ranking of the spirit is still commendable. They tried their best, they were not afraid of the strongest players, and they did not give in. Although there is no champion to witness all this, there is a spirit running through it. That is the spirit of sports: tenacity, never say die.

There is always a kind of power to make me move forward, there is always a kind of spirit to make me moved, there is always a kind of faith to make me tearful. When I saw the athletes who did not play out the true level of shaking their heads after the game, when I saw the last player in the 3000 meters was about to fall but still insisted, when I saw the last player in the 100-meter hurdles because of the fall and blood seepage of the hand, I have the impulse to tears, there is also the desire to shout. These players, with their brave action head above the blue sky, feet on the green ground, created a legend on the green field.

The famous writer Rabindranath Tagore once wrote, "The sky did not leave traces of wings, and I have flown." In the final results of the final did not have their names, but in the green field shed their sweat and tears. A few years later, they can proudly say that they once participated in the school games. With the passage of time, we slowly grow up, careful we will find that we have been far from the once *** and vigor. Especially now, facing the pressure of work and graduate school, the opportunity to participate in activities is even less. Why don't you take advantage of your youth to leave some eternal memories for yourself? Therefore, as long as the players are involved in the contest, they are the most adorable and the best!

Mission in many cases is given by others, in their own life and learning must go to do some of their favorite or not like things. However, some of them are also attached to themselves, especially in today's highly competitive society, to give themselves some exercise is also to give themselves more chances of success. The performance on the green field is the embodiment of one's charisma and the indication of one's ability. Whether cheering in the face of victory, or smiling in the face of failure, is the triumphant completion of the glorious mission.

In the green field sweat friends, it is because of your active participation, all the talents so energetic. In the national fitness in full swing today, it is everyone's high morale, only to return to the International Olympic Organizing Committee of Beijing's trust. 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, there are your credit, but also because of your tenacity and shine. After the courage to lie down, will be the plum blossom fragrance from the bitter cold to the joy.

Suddenly remembered the Sydney Olympics when cctv-5 often put a song: "...... beyond the dream of a take-off, so that you and I need to sincerely face, so that the time to remember this moment ..." The song was then I'd like to give it to all the players who participated in the Games, and I'm proud of you for being petrified

6. point and face of the composition, more than 60 words

fierce "tug of war"

"Dingding", the teacher said. "The teacher said we were going to have a tug-of-war today, and the students cheered. Suddenly a student asked the teacher how to play in such a small place. Only to see the teacher mysteriously took out a few pens, said, "We play a different kind of tug of war today, we use a pencil to pull."

The teacher briefly explained the rules of the game, first of all, we two people in a group for the game, I and Xie Yang a group, is about to start, the students one by one fists.

With the teacher's order, the game began, I used the milk, I saw Xie Yang face red, closed his mouth, holding his breath, desperately pulling back, ah, the pencil like a loach from my hands slipped through, too bad, the first game I lost.

After a fierce match, it was time for the final. Xie Yang and Li Wenhao went to war. "Start!" They both pinched the end of the pencil tightly, no one is willing to show weakness, so, they have been stalemated, next to the cheerleaders of the students can be anxious, some straight beat the table, some sitting in their seats to shout for them, some are standing on the stool, everyone's eyes are tightly fixed on that pencil mark, the game is still stalemated, Xie Yang is looking for an opportunity, look, the opportunity came, Li Wenhao's palms are sweating, Xie Yang Seeing the right, fierce pull, heh, won, our team won, the second game began, Xie Yang hands back and forth constantly on the clothes back and forth, in order to make the hands not too slippery, a look of confidence. Really, he did not bother to win, students are cheering up, into a melodious tug-of-war symphony.

The game slowly came to an end amidst the students' singing and laughter

7. Use the method of combining points and faces to write a certain kind of activity scene fifty words

The atmosphere in the classroom e799bee5baa6e997aee7ad94e4b893e5b19e31333431373163 all became heavy and depressing, and the classroom was suddenly plunged into a cacophony of noise as soon as the school bell rang. Into a cacophony of sound, students are gathered in groups of three or five, some in the photo to remember, record our classroom together in class, together with the production of the blackboard newspaper, together with the companionship of more than a year of classmates.

Some are laughing and joking, hiding their unhappiness in the bottom of their hearts, still the same as before, leaving the happiness in the last time to separate. Some hold hands, quietly say some parting words, can't bear to see their friends leave, and can't bear to see the class apart, talking, can't help but have tears in their eyes.

My fellow in writing, I saw her in a slight tremor, mouth muttering, the word written very quickly, with the font is not as neat as before, but with feelings, with the parting of the reluctance to leave, I patted her shoulder, smiled at her, she looked back, also smiled at me, I found that smile inside no sadness, but the tacit understanding, is to encourage. Suddenly the lights went out and there was singing.

The noisy classroom quieted down and became silent. We all looked up to the podium, it was the class president playing a song with multimedia, it was "Friends"! We were all touched by this familiar song, and in the song the class president told us in a deep voice that this song accompanied us through the first new year of our meeting and won the first prize in the singing competition.

The poem.

Said the class president could not speak, the classroom was a sobbing, tearful everything in the past came to mind. In the darkness, the students are quietly looking at the big screen, followed by a light singing, "friends for life together, those days are no longer there ......" At this time, suddenly resounded oooh, sitting next to me Qin Yiming cried out, and I do not know how long it has been accumulating Tears, in the song sounded this moment can no longer hold back, big drops of tears dripping down.

But his mouth was still humming the melody of "Friends". The classroom is a sea of tears.

8. point and face essay, about on the way to school 100 words

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Early in the morning my mom and I walked on the way to school, the breeze gently blowing on my face, cool and comfortable. Dodo! From time to time a car drove by on the road beside me. Pedestrians in twos and threes were hurrying along the road. Listen: there were voices of chatting, memorizing words, and singing. In the distance, the sun has just emerged from the horizon, and it looks like it will be a sunny day again!

Along the way, the grass on the roadside swayed in the wind, the branches and leaves on the trees waved to me, and a pretty little flower smiled at me. Not far away, a few birds chirping, jumping like to say hello to me. I waved my hand and said to the birds, "Good morning!" Oh! The birds flew away shyly. Time flies! Unconsciously came to the door of the school. Thinking that I would soon meet my lively classmates and beloved teachers, I quickly said "goodbye" to my mom and ran happily to my classroom. I was happy to run to the classroom, look back, mom is still not far away from me smile.

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Famous Teacher Comments

This article is a landscape article, but the scene is blended, through the environment to set off the mood of the characters, very artistic. The description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, and supplemented by anthropomorphic rhetorical devices, vivid image, as if the reader is brought into the happy paradise, soothing.