1, focused, detailed and appropriate A good scenic essay often does not depend on how many sights you list in the article, nor does it depend on whether each of the sights you choose can arouse the reader's interest.
Rather, it lies in the fact that no matter how many sights you write about, one must be the focus of the article, you can use descriptive language to describe it specifically, or you can use the technique of white sketches to outline the characteristics of the scenery to impress people. Scenic composition is most likely to Fan's three mistakes, one is to write it into a "running account", like a travelogue, it seems to write a lot of attractions, but each attraction is a one-off, not a good selection of one of the specific descriptions; the second is to write to the scenery, although there is also a background introduction or detailed description, but it seems to be as a dragonfly point of view, touching and bypassing the water, and a little bit. The second is to write to the scenery, although there is also a background introduction or detail description, but it seems some as slapdash, touched and bypassed; third, the article is not reasonable arrangement of details, the beginning of the cause of the part of the introduction of the overly fine and long, and the article in the middle of the part of the article to go is not very well developed, six hundred words of the article to write three hundred words has not been written to the focus.
2, highlighting the specific features or characteristics of the scene This is to say that the features and characteristics of the scene, but also refers to the need to write the thing with other things and things to the difference. Only in this way, can give the reader a deep impression, but here there is a premise, that is, to seize the characteristics of the scenery after the specific depiction, not a one-off.
In the description over the program, to fully utilize the metaphor, personification and other rhetorical devices. Accurate and appropriate use of rhetorical devices to help write the scenery more vivid image, real people.
3, the scenario, through the scene, a single scene description, and then the beauty of the scene can not infect the reader, leaving the reader with a good psychological enjoyment, therefore, the author of the scene at the same time, to incorporate their own real emotions, so that readers in the article not only can "see" the beautiful scenery, but also feel the author wants to express the emotions, the author's thoughts. The author's thoughts. A single for the writing of the scene and the writing of the scene of the composition, can not be a good article to let the reader produce emotional **** Ming, which requires us to write an article, write to the scene, naturally, their own emotions into it, with the help of the description of the scene, to express their own feelings.
4, in the description of the scene to write into the activities of people or animals If the scene is "static" in the composition, then an excellent composition, can not be separated from the "movement", where the "movement" includes the "movement", the "movement" includes the "movement", the "movement" includes the "movement", the "movement", the "movement", the "movement", the "movement", the "movement", the "movement". "Action" includes the corresponding characters with the scene of the activities, play, play, running, animal foraging, jumping, etc., when a landscape composition will be human and animal activities, and the description of the scene when combined, will give a sense of intimacy, static and dynamic combination of the sense of beauty. Therefore, students in the description of scenery, can be appropriate to choose the activities of people and animals, as a backdrop, the article will become more readable.
Article Remembering the Little Chill It has always seemed to me that the seasons are natural, with no human anything; at least outdoors, and rarely experienced indoors. All that can be seen are abstract symbols on a calendar.
So the only people who know the seasons are those who wander outside, or at least those who traverse outside every day. They don't rush for anything else, they don't take shortcuts, they don't ride in a limousine, and they walk calmly and freely through the bustle and the hustle and bustle, and through the silence and the desolation.
At a time when there was no one, where there was no one, I aspired to such a life, even if only for a day. It was the first festival of the year, and I took the bus to the end of the route, the edge of the city, the other side of the small town.
There was a recently built neighborhood, with many houses empty and unfinished. The houses without windows and doors stood against the cold wind, and there was no waiting inside, like a very deep cave.
The square just planted turf has not really together, are frosted. White and a bit thick.
The trees too. There's also a thin layer on top of a couple of oddly shaped sculptures.
It was the very edge of the small town, and there was a dam across the river that kept its surface separate from downstream. There is very little current on the surface of the river, and only a few sporadic streams flow downstream through the dam.
Downstream of the riverbed there are only a few small streams, sometimes converging, sometimes separated, hardworking people planted vegetables on it. Perhaps because it is too early, perhaps because it is too cold, do not see above the planting of vegetables, and do not see the people traveling on the road.
I walked along the river bank from downstream to upstream, and I was the only one. There was no one on the other side of the river either.
The sun shines on the surface of the river like gold dust. The buildings on the bank were reflected in the river, their colors lightened, their shapes creased up, and they swayed in the water like swings, a bit like chilling.
There is a bridge over the river, no cars and people walking by when it is obvious to see it hitched on the banks of the and. Across the river those old houses, one standing still.
The walls left a rainwater flow through the prints, the bridge street lamps are still on, the ground left a week of golden circular halo. Holding the guardrail on the embankment forward, a kind of cold through the stone plate to the fingertips.
One paragraph after another. I don't know how far I've traveled at once.
There is no boat above the river, because the water is too small Taizen, can not even let them float. As if I was the only one in the big little town.
Accustomed to the crowded scene, meet a person's time, as if into a new world. This world once belonged to all the people, but at this moment it belongs to me completely.
I was walking through the city I owned, and for a moment I forgot where I could go. After a long walk, the water in the river grew shallow and reached the bottom.
A few tiny streams meandered along a low trough in the riverbed. Further on is a stretch of railroad, and here comes the train, coming over the bridge with its whistle, shaking the earth beneath it.
As the train passed and all was quiet again, a man was seen standing on the bridge from a distance, his shadow dragging long in the morning light down to the riverbed below. Is that a loner in his loneliness looking at the scenery on the railroad, or an inspector walking along the road? Blurred vision saw it fading away, disappearing into the horizon.
The little town is small, very small. There are no borders, no walls.
All at once I had walked through, surprisingly unable to know clearly. The river that came opposite me, I'm afraid, also like me, out of the small town from the other end.
The view gradually opened up. There was no end in sight, and only a scattering of houses on the opposite bank.
The sun rose and shone with a hint of warmth, and the concrete road on the riverbank disappeared into flat gravel and dirt. I don't know how far I've gone, but I can smell the smoke.
Looking forward, it was a fishing boat. Shallow in the riverbed, just like a bungalow, the sound of a strange dialect coming from inside.
Forward.
The more (and, to) the next year, the political and human peace, all the waste with (with "all" full, all) rise. It is to repair the Yueyang Tower, increase its old system, engraved Tang Xian now people poems and gifts on it.
Genus (with "will") I essay to remember. I see that the Baling victory (good scenery), in the Dongting Lake.
The armature of the distant mountains, swallowing the Yangtze River, Haohao Tangtang (water waves volatile look), horizontal (far) boundless (edge) end; sunshine (sunlight) and yin, the weather thousands of. This is a great view of Yueyang Tower.
The previous statement is ready. However, the north through the Witch's Gorge, the south pole (all) Xiaoxiang, moving guests, more than will be here, to see the feelings of things, there is no difference? If the heavy rain (continuous rain) fall, even the month is not open (clearing), the wind is furious, turbid waves row air (to the sky); the sun and stars are hidden, the mountains submerged shape; business travelers can not, mast collapse oar destruction; thin (approaching) twilight meditation, the tiger whistles and apes cry.
The building is also boarding the building, there is a country of nostalgia, worry about the slander and ridicule, full of depression, the feeling of extreme sadness is carried out. If the spring and Jing (daylight) Ming, waves, up and down the sky, a blue hectare; sand gulls gathered, Kam Kam scales (beautiful fish) swimming; Angelica dahurian orchid, lush green.
And or long smoke a sky, the moon thousands of miles, floating light jumping gold, quiet shadow sinking jade, fishing songs and answering each other, this music how extreme! Deng Si Lou also, there is an open mind, favor and shame together with forgetting, put (hold) wine in the wind, the joy of its carry on. Contempt! I tasted (once) seek (explore) the heart of ancient benevolence, or different from the two for, why? Not to be happy with things, not to their own sadness; living in the high temple is worried about its people; in the far side of the lake is worried about its ruler.
It is also worrying to be in, and worrying to be out. But when is it time to be happy? It must be said that "the world is worried first, after the world's happiness and joy".
Well! Micro (no) people, who I return with (return to?). The first is the first time that a person has to go to a place where he or she is not allowed to go. In the spring of the fourth year of Song Renzong's Qingli, Teng Zijing was relegated to Yuezhou as a governor.
By the second year, the government was smooth, the people were happy, and many things that had been neglected were organized. So rebuilt Yueyang Tower, expanding its original size, on the upper floor of the engraving of the Tang Dynasty celebrities and contemporary poetry.
I was asked to write an article to write about it. I viewed the wonderful scenery of that Yuezhou, all in the Dongting Lake.
It contains the mountains in the distance, swallowing the water of the Yangtze River, the water is vast, boundless, the sun shines in the morning, the evening Yin Qi condensation, the scene is ever-changing. This is the majestic sight of Yueyang Tower.
The account of the former is already exhaustive. Since this is the case, then the north side leads to the Wu Gorge, the south side until the Xia Shui and Xiangjiang River, demoted officials and poets to and fro, most of the gathering here, viewing the natural scenery produced by the feelings can not be different? If the continuous rain continued to rain for many consecutive days without clearing, miserable wind howling, turbid waves rushing white sky; the sun and the stars lost their light, the mountains hide the traces; merchants and travelers can not be traveled, masts down, oars broken; the evening sky dark, tigers roar apes and monkeys cried sadly.
At this time on this building, will leave the capital miss home, worried about the slander of the traitor, afraid of the ridicule of the bad man, full of depression and cold, extreme feelings and grief and indignation of all kinds of emotions. In the spring sunny, sunny, waves do not, blue sky and water color, a turquoise vast; flocks of gulls, sometimes flying sometimes stop, beautiful fish, sometimes floating, sometimes dive; shore of the herbs, orchids on the island, the aroma is strong, color green.
Sometimes a large area of smoke completely dissipated, the bright moon shines on a thousand miles of land, floating moonlight like a glittering golden light, the quiet shadow of the moon is like the present white jade, the fisherman's song sang with each other, the joy of which there is no end! At this time to climb the Yueyang Tower, there is the heart open, the spirit is happy; honor and disgrace are forgotten, raise wine in the wind, happy and all kinds of feelings and demeanor. I have explored the thoughts and feelings of ancient people of high moral character, perhaps different from the above two kinds of thoughts and feelings of the performance, why? They are not because of the good or bad of external things and their own gains and losses and either happy or sad, in the court as a high official to worry about his people; in the remote rivers and lakes to worry about his king.
This is to worry about the people when they are in the court, and to worry about the king when they are in a remote place. So, when will they be happy? They must have said, "Worry before the sorrow of the world, and be happy after the joy of the world".
Alas! If there were no such people, with whom would I join? Written on the 15th day of the 9th month of the 6th year of the Qingli reign (1046) Drinking water to think of the source, to solve the text to find the root. This root is the cause of the author's writing.
The Book of Yueyang Tower is how to produce, teaching this text, the teacher should be with the students *** with the search for this root. This root, the text says understand: "Qingli four years in the spring, Teng Zijing banished to guard the Baling County ...... belongs to the essay to remember."
Although Teng Zijing banished, but the Baling "political and human harmony, all the waste with the rise", see Teng real pillars of the country, he came to less than a year, will be outstanding achievements, and then rebuilt the Yueyang Tower. In ancient times, the construction of pavilions, often written to recount the building, repair process and history, Teng Zijing asked his friend Fan Zhongyan to write a record.
Friends invited, there is no reason not to do. At this time, Fan Zhongyan, also being relegated to Dengzhou as governor, can be afraid of "the same end of the world".
There is a difference, Fan Zhongyan and Teng Zijing in the world of dealing with a big difference. Teng Zijing "still gas, suave since the appointment", is a very temperamental people, and a little headstrong, it is difficult to listen to the views of others, he is always on his own for no reason to be reprimanded, often out of mouth.
It is said that, on the day of the completion of the Yueyang Tower, his subordinates came to congratulate him, but he said: "fall very into! To be a drink, a big mourning on the fence ten sound only." This is a happy time, Teng Zijing but all kinds of sadness on the heart, see he has not come out of the relegation of the blow brought about by the official.
Read the full text of "The Records of the Yueyang Mansion", but you can not find such a deportation and resentment of the emotions. The reason for this is that he was not a member of the team, but he was a member of the team. The reason is this Fan Zhongyan.
Generally speaking, "the release of ministers and guests, once abandoned far away, the sadness and emaciation of the sigh, sent in poetry, especially for the sour, very much not be able to self-completion of the person." Fan Zhongyan suffered setbacks in the blow, but can not be happy with things, not to their own sadness, free and easy, not mind.
As a friend of Teng Zijing, Fan Zhongyan always wanted to advise him, but never had the chance to speak. Later, Teng Zijing sent a letter to Fan Zhongyan, asked him to write a record for the Yueyang Tower, Fan Zhongyan had the opportunity to speak for his old friend, the text is written in the "do not take the things like, do not take.
3. How to write an ancient writingPeople's Education Edition of the eighth grade book of the sixth unit of the selected text, to write the scenery of the ancient prose tour is given priority to.
Some of the expression of open-mindedness, some show the joy of self-completion, some express the feelings of leisure. Remember the scenery is different, writing a different state of mind, but they are all things to express their feelings, the scene of the famous speech, we can learn from some of the skills of writing, this article focuses on the "full well travel" as an example to analyze.
First, seize the characteristics of the scene to write the scene (seasonal) When writing the scene to seize the characteristics of the scene to write, this sentence usually we hear a lot, but the scope of its real use when referring to the description of natural scenery, how to seize the characteristics of the scene to write, mainly in the writing of the previous to have a position to figure out what they want to write about the natural scenery is when the scene? Where is the scene? What are the characteristics? Then write around this feature, naturally, to seize the characteristics of the scenery. For example, the second paragraph of "Journey to Manjing", the scenery of early spring in Manjing is depicted in detail, and when it is written, it is able to grasp the seasonal characteristics of "early spring", i.e., "the first warmth is still cold" and "everything is recovering". ", in which, "soil paste slightly moist" in a "slightly moist", think carefully, with really wonderful, because in early spring, the earth's gas rises, the temperature is gradually warming up, the winter in the soil in some of the residual "Ice" is also slowly melting, the soil paste will naturally be "slightly moist", the use of this word will be the early spring "first warm and cold" characteristics to show; and then, for example. "Ice skin began to solve" in the sentence, first of all, "ice skin", this word refers to the surface of the ice, but the author used the word "ice skin", with "skin" to describe the "skin". "to describe" ice ", also implies that the ice knot is not thick, early spring, the night temperature is low, ice is not wrong, but the ice must not be very thick, the author used the word "skin" to describe the accurate to, and also captures the "first warm and cold". The "first warm and cold" of the early spring climate characteristics, plus a "beginning to solve" word to modify, is very good to seize this feature, at the same time, these two sentences, "soil paste slightly moist", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve", "ice skin beginning to solve". "Ice skin began to dissolve" this also reflects the "recovery of all things" features; look at the author wrote the water sentences, "wave color at first bright, scale waves layer by layer, clear to the bottom", these sentences, in early spring, the ice melts, the water waves began to melt. Ice melting, the water waves began to emit bright light, reproducing the recovery of the water, coupled with the winter water, the water began to precipitate a variety of suspended solids, since the early spring when the ice melted, the water naturally "clear to the bottom"; and then look at the writing of the willows sentences, "will not Shu Shu" this A graphic depiction of the state of the willows just sprouted, and this state is also unique to the early spring scene, and "shallow hyena inch", the author used "hyena" to compare the wheat seedling, its form written realistically, with the "inch" word, also reflects the "clear water". The word "inch" also reflects the character of "early spring".
It can be seen that, when we write about the natural scenery, first of all, the characteristics of the scenery to be written after the positioning of the writing, can better grasp the characteristics of the natural scenery to write, writing natural scenery, on the one hand, from the seasonal aspects to consider, on the other hand, can also be based on the unique characteristics of the climate to write, such as "rainy day", "sunny day", "sunny day", "rainy day", "sunny day", "sunny day", "sunny day", "sunny day". ", "sunshine", "snow", "wind" ...... under a variety of scenery The state, with their form to reflect these characteristics. Second, write the scene to pay attention to the order of Noting the need to pay attention to a certain order, write the scene is also the same, write the order of how to determine the scene, we can be based on the observer's observation of the order of writing, which is simple, but also in line with the thinking of the common people, it is easier to grasp.
For example, in the second paragraph of the description of the "full well tour", the author "to the full well", the first to meet the eyes, of course, should be the author can see the full picture of the full well, therefore, the author in the writing, first of all, they will be used to "high willows clamped embankment, the soil paste is slightly moist, a look at the empty space! "A few words briefly outline the whole picture, the next scene description, is a local scene of close-up, but also follow a certain order, come to the embankment, embankment naturally see the water, therefore, the author from the "ice" to start writing, until the distant view of the water in the distance followed by "mountain", the author then wrote again, and then write the "ice". ", the author then wrote to the "mountains", but this "mountains" after all, in the distance, therefore, the author can still only be portrayed from the whole, even if we followed the author at the time of the trip, after seeing the mountains, naturally, the eyes back to the Around, therefore, the author wrote to the side of the "willow", "wheat field", see the near, naturally can also see other travelers.
When writing natural scenery, we must pay attention to the order of writing, we can first write their own scenery in the mind to write a picture, and then write in the order of observation, there is a little attention to the time of writing, distant scenery must be depicted as a whole, the near scenery can be carefully depicted, so that it is in line with the logic. Third, the natural scenery and character activities linked to the scene Almost no article simply write the natural scenery, so that the scene for the scene, the scene or for the lyric, or for the narrative baking and so on.
If the scene is to lyricism, writing should be linked with the activities of the characters, purely natural scenery description, is not suitable for lyricism, let's look at two examples: "full well travel" in the second paragraph of the full well of the early spring scenery for a detailed depiction, wrote "visitors are not yet full, the spring and the Ming people, earthenware and the song, the red dress and Jian people, but also when there is. " Although there are only a few strokes, but portrayed a harmonious early spring scene of character activities, people feel the warmth of spring and scenery.
And then the "Drunken Master Pavilion" in the description is even more distinct, the author in the second paragraph of the mountains of the morning and evening, the mountains of the four seasons of the scene to the end, followed in the third paragraph of the scene description, the scene around the "Taishou Banquet" to start, respectively, described the "Chu people swim", "Taishou Banquet", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim", "Chu people swim". ", "too guard banquet", "guests happy", "too guard drunk" four images, well embodied a prosperous people's livelihood scene, for the following write too guard This lays the groundwork for the following article about the governor's "happiness with the people". It can be seen, write the natural scenery and character activities linked to write, is conducive to the unfolding of the lyric, of course, sometimes we may also be able to see the landscape masterpiece did not write people, such as Liu Zongyuan's "Little Stone Pool Journal" will not write the character activities of the scene, but does not mean that in the writing, he did not mention the people, such as "the four sides of the bamboo tree ring together, lonely and no one, bleak God cold bones! ......" sentence will be written to "no one", which is also mentioned people, just because no one, so do not write in detail, and this is precisely the author in order to express the needs of the need.
4. Kneeling 200 words of literary essays, writing scenery, not too esotericThe tide of Zhejiang, the world's great view.
Since both hope to eighteen days for the full. Fang its far out of the sea door, only as a silver line; both gradually close, the Yucheng Xueling inter-heaven, loud as thunder, shocking shooting, swallowing the sky and the sun, the potential is extremely majestic.
Yang Cheng Zhai poem "sea surge silver for Guo, Jiang Heng Yu system waist" is also. Every year, when the capital Yin is out of Zhejiang Pavilion to teach and review the navy, hundreds of warships are divided on both sides of the river, and all of them are running and dividing into five positions, and there are riders who make flags, spears, and swords in the water, like walking on the ground.
When the yellow smoke rose in all directions, the characters did not see each other, and the water exploded and shook, and the sound was like the collapse of a mountain. Smoke disappears wave quiet, then a barge without trace, only the "enemy ship" for the fire burned, with the wave and pass away.
Wu children good swimmers hundreds of people, all wearing hair and body, holding ten large colorful flags, the first to drum up courage, back to meet and up, out of the whale in the wave of ten thousand refuels, Teng body hundreds of changes, and the flag tail slightly not wet, so that boasts of the ability. Jiang Gan up and down more than ten miles, beads and emeralds Luoqi overflowing eyes, four horses blocking the way, food and drink are times the dome time, and taxpayers look at the curtain, although the seat can not be idle.
"Tide".
5. Write the beginning of an essay on warmth in literary languageThe beginning of an essay on warmth (3)
Warmth is like a guiding light, giving a little bit of light to the people walking in the dark; warmth is like a piece of oasis in the desert, giving a new hope to the people who are starving and thirsting; warmth is like a bunch of fires in the snow, letting the people have firm beliefs to fight against the wind and snow.
The beginning of the essay on warmth (4)
Kindness is a sturdy umbrella to protect you from the wind and rain; Kindness is a thick cotton coat to protect you from the cold; Kindness is a soft bed, you are tired, so that you can forget about the exhaustion; Kindness is a dry towel, you cried, for you to brush away the tears of your heart; Kindness is a cup of sweet iced tea, you smiled, so that you are sweet from the mouth to the I'm not sure if you're a good person or a good person.
The beginning of the essay on warmth (V)
The wind of the hot summer night blew my hair as well as the apprehensive heart. And with such a temperature, the spectrum of drops of crystal sweat.
Summer is here as promised, which means summer vacation is finally here. All this is full of freedom and hope in the eyes of students. Izzy looked through the water, just for the arrival of this day. In my case, it is the enjoyment of affection.
The end of the essay on warmth (a)
If life is a beautiful piece of music, then the pain is an indispensable note; if life is a colorful painting, then suffering is a process that must be experienced; if life is the stage of the show, then the injury is an essential road.
The warmth and love of family is the most valuable in the world, and those who have it will be happy all their lives, do you have it?
6. 300 words to describe the scene in class in literary language"Ding ding!" Class is in session! The students walked into the classroom and found their places to sit down.
Quietly waiting for the teacher. The teacher came! The teacher began to lecture.
At the end of the 20-minute period, (a lesson lasts 40 minutes.) A 'mega-bee' flew into the classroom, and the students were scared and 'screamed'.
I said in my usual tone, "What's there to scream about, 'mega-bee' is very common in my home! Next time, I'll catch you with this 'Mega Bee'." This 'little warbler' seemed to understand what I was saying and flew out of the window in a hurry.
Master comment: You really are a very cute child! With the family's "mega-bee" to drive away a "mega-bee", as if the bees were given feelings, making the bees retreat. The language is lively and clear.
The beginning of the article portrays the scene of the students waiting quietly for the teacher to arrive as realistic and accurately describes the atmosphere and state of affairs.
But the article lacks a profound central idea.