Beginning of an essay with point-face description

1. point and face description of the essay

Watching the Beijing Olympic Games closing ceremony - hard to say goodbye "10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1, 0!" With the number composed of fireworks counted to the last second, the beautiful welcome fireworks in the Bird's Nest flowers bloomed in the sky above, in the shocking sound, 200 drum line performers in the center of the ceremony stage tiers of steps arranged in a circle, up to the sky dancing drums.

1148 silver bell dancers in the drum call, gathered in the center of the ceremony stage around, with enthusiastic singing to meet the sky drum. The grand Beijing Olympics are coming to a close! With the end of the athletes' entry ceremony and the flag handover ceremony, an athlete in the center of the field who is about to embark on his homeward journey walks up the gangway, he looks back fondly and slowly takes out an exquisite scroll from his backpack and opens it slowly.

At the same time, the athletes for the realization of the dream and the touching moments of hard work in the Bird's Nest above the display screen slowly spread open. Athletes with hard work, sweat, with the infinite love of the Olympics, engraved Beijing 2008 this eternal unforgettable Olympic memory.

With too much love and reluctance, the athletes slowly rolled up the scroll. The flame of the Beijing Olympic Games is also slowly extinguished.

Immediately after, "London eight minutes", "big carnival" and other wonderful programs, and one after another into the people's eyes, which is really called the people to feast their eyes. I think, although the flame of the Beijing Olympic Games extinguished, but our heart Olympic fever continues, the Olympic Games held at home, brought, not only is the brilliant Olympic athletic competition, but also with the Olympic Games and the innate enthusiasm for sports and fighting spirit.

But we don't have to say goodbye to Beijing, because we will see you again in London! Exciting times June 1 is an exciting time. It is not only the long-awaited Children's Day, but also the day when the Holy Fire will be passed in Yichang.

People are early to stand in the place where you can see the passing of the spectacle, can not wait for the arrival of the torch. I am no exception, early in the morning I came with my grandfather and grandmother to the Zhenjiang Pavilion to watch the passing of the sacred fire.

1 quarter of an hour past, half an hour past ...... a police car past, the sacred fire still did not come, and has long been impatient audience often put in front of the patrol police car, traffic police as a torchbearer, they waved their hands in the flag, shouting: "Beijing, come on! Olympic Games, cheer! Yichang, refueling! China, refueling ......" and so back to realize that it is a few police cars, they all laughed out loud. With the crowd a commotion, the sacred fire finally came! The Olympic color car and the torch pilot car slowly came.

After the caravan, we finally saw the torchbearer, who was walking at a good pace, looking bright, holding the torch in his right hand and waving to the audience with his left hand. The crowd immediately boiled over, colorful flags flying in the sky, "Beijing, go! Go Beijing! Go Olympics! Yichang, cheer! China, refueling ......" voice echoed throughout the Yichang.

The faces of the elderly glowed with youthful radiance, and the children blossomed with bright smiles. The peace, friendship, light and hope symbolized by the auspicious cloud torch will always remain in our hearts.

Exciting moments - Beijing Olympic Games opening ceremony after watching "10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1!", with the rectangular percussion array of rhythmic strikes, the beautiful welcoming fireworks around the field, in the Bird's Nest over Blossom-like bloom, in the shocking sound, the fireworks composed of 29 huge footprints are heading straight to the National Stadium. The long-awaited grand opening of the Beijing Olympic Games! The beginning of a short film will be a 70-meter-long huge scroll slowly unfolded in front of us.

On the scroll, the ink scroll, beautiful, presenting evolution, ceramics, bronzes, etc. in the origin and development of Chinese culture in the process of very representative of the cultural symbols. At this time, a group of dancers dressed in black came to the scroll above, with the body to do ink, the performance of Chinese ink painting, with the movement of the dancers, the white paper appeared to undulate and swirl the ink lines.

The paper, which did not exist on the ground, was lifted up in the air, and an ink painting with interlocking mountains and rolling hills was presented. Subsequently, the text, opera, Silk Road, the athletes' entrance ceremony and other a wonderful program are one after another into people's eyes.

Immediately after, by Liu Huan and Sarah? Brightman sang the Olympic theme song "I and you" in the Bird's Nest slowly floating. The exciting moment finally came, the last torchbearer - gymnastics prince Li Ning held high Xiangyun torch to fly to the main torch, the sacred fire lit, *** lit, lit China, lit the world.

Come on! Let's cheer for the Olympics, cheer for China! Happy Children's Day Looking forward to, happy Children's Day finally came. The school in order to celebrate the arrival of the "June 1" Children's Day, specially in the school playground held a form of rich, wonderful content of the "June 1 Celebration".

At nine o'clock in the morning, the grand celebration finally began. The first item is to raise the national flag, along with the sound of majestic music, a row of neat neat step suddenly in the playground "snap! The crisp sound, very good, the flag bearer tied the flag on the flagpole, arm swing, warm spring breeze blew, brightly colored five-starred red flag immediately fluttered in the air.

Immediately after, the campus group dance competition began. With the beautiful music, the whole playground is like a sea of flowers, colorful, each class of students dance.

Even the audience sitting next to the thumbs up praise. Then came the "Parent-Child Running Competition".

It's not easy to win this race, because every student and parent's feet are tied together, which requires students and parents to work together, the same pace. You see, some students ran too fast, there were mistakes, fell; some students were left behind because they ran too slowly.

At the end of the day, several students and parents finally worked together to defeat the enemy and finally won the victory. Finally, it is by the whole school teachers and students chorus anti-earthquake relief song "Let the world be full of love", with the teacher's command, "gently hold your face, for you to dry the tears of sassafras ......" voice immediately recalled in the ear, deafening.

Although I don't know whether the children in the disaster area can have a happy Children's Day as we do, I know that with the love of our 1.3 billion people, the people in the disaster area will be able to rebuild a better home.

2. point and face description essay

"Spring Festival" is a traditional festival of the Chinese people. Every time this time, families get together to have a reunion dinner. Foreign workers are busy packing their bags, ready to go home, take a year's salary, the heart is warm; we children, made good grades, the heart of the beautiful, waiting for parents to praise ...... on the streets, neighborhoods, supermarkets, everywhere overflowing with joy, a lively scene.

Today is the New Year's Eve. In the morning, the golden sunshine spread over the earth. My mother and I cheerfully went to the street to buy things, the streets seem to have changed overnight, the streets are decorated with lights, bustling, every house is pasted with "pouring blessings", couplets, but also hung with red lanterns. People wearing festive dress, have to smile to the market, some shopping, some ornamental, a happy and detailed scene.

By 8 o'clock in the evening, the Spring Festival Gala began, our family sat down in front of the TV to watch the Spring Festival Gala, the evening program is very wonderful: there are beautiful songs, there are humorous sketches, and comical comedy.... The program is colorful, see my eyes dazzled.

"When when when ......" with the ringing of the New Year's bells, fireworks and firecrackers will ring in unison. My father and I took out the fireworks have long been ready, ignited the fireworks tube, only to hear the "boom" a loud bang, a fireworks bomb rose into the air, exploded in a flash, the explosion of fireworks as if a beautiful lotus in the air to unfold the petals, at this time, a fireworks and fireworks from the tube erupted, like countless bright and brilliant! Meteors, flashing in the sky ...... The sky is also flashing with other fireworks, some of them are like a string of pearls, some are like a shooting star, some are like a chrysanthemum, and some are like a waterfall ...... Let me be dazzled. A loud firecrackers, a radiant, brilliant, incomparable fireworks, flying in the sky, all kinds of, colorful, the sky embellished into a flower, the night sky suddenly became radiant. The scene at this time, surrounded by laughter, firecrackers, shouts, music synthesized melody, really lively.

3. Essay fragments of point description

The beauty of nature

Nature is beautiful, the world is beautiful.

Maybe you hate rainy, wet weather. But it's different when you look at them with your heart.

When it's raining outside the window, it's silent inside the house. At this point, you just need to calm your mind. Sitting in a wicker chair with a spiritual food on your lap, drinking a sip of hot flower tea, the aroma of flowers and tea refreshing the air outside the window of the freshness of the integration, slowly, slowly submerged into your heart and soul. The soft violin music holds your hand and takes you into a beautiful dream. When you wake up, you can put on your coat and umbrella and go for a walk. Look at the smoke rising from the houses in the small countryside, the starry lights are on, and it looks hazy in the drizzle. Smoke, lights, rain, trees and grass. All of nature has made you become friends with them? I think this is the feeling of Mr. Zhu Ziqing wrote the paragraph of the rain in spring!

Of course, not every day can not be cloudy and rainy, there are times when the sky is clear.

The clear sky is one of the pride of the summer, it is the most beautiful of the four seasons of the sky. However, you must be worried about the hot summer sun, but as long as you make friends with them with all your heart.

4. Scene description of the beginning of the essay

Write a scene (essay guide) Open Sesame - with you to meet the happy essay In the school, in the classroom, in the street, in the market ...... often there are many interesting scenes, such as the sports field of the Dragon Teng Tiger Leap , the neon red flashes on the streets at night, the laughter in the playground, and the bargaining in the bazaar ...... Choose the one scene you remember most familiarly and write it down.

Pay attention to the combination of points and reflect the characteristics of this scene. Goldfinger - to send you "stone into gold" ● phoenix head - write a good beginning 1, a direct account of the time, place and characters of the scene of activity.

A. Today, we held a unique wrenching contest in our composition training class. Everyone listened to it and scrambled to try it.

B. The ten-minute team meeting on Thursday became a sea of joy. We played a fun game - drumming.

C. On Thursday, the sun shone brightly. Mr. Wang took us to the new playground for a unique head-to-head relay race.

D. In today's composition class, we had a fun game - sticking noses.2. Describe a close-up shot.

A. See, they both held each other's hands tightly and wrenched hard to their side, holding each other. Some of our audience on the field waved their hands and shouted cheer, some stomped their feet anxiously, and some looked at the two of them that trembling hands, shouting vigorously: "Chen Heyu cheer, Chen Heyu cheer!" Tell you what, we're having a wrenching contest! B. Hey, come and see the students in our composition class! Boys and girls alike are all sweating profusely.

Oh, they're having a wrenching contest. C. They're breathing hard, their palms are sweaty, and they're watching the contestants in a stalemate.

The air also seems to condense as if, and as if it is constantly expanding, expanding, as long as there is a tiny spark, surely will explode ...... our relay race, is in full swing, very intense and tense ...... D, "Let me, let me!" Several students shouted. Originally, my classmates are playing the "stick nose" game.

The game is played this way, the teacher drew a big-headed doll, with hair, eyes, ears, and a big mouth, the beauty of the lack of a nose. This nose will need us to put it on.

E, "hahaha ......" classroom has been covered by the sound of laughter, each member of the body, are lingering in the breath of joy - original ah, the teacher is teaching the We play the game of "Sticky Nose". 3, with shouts of cheer, laughter to start.

A. "Come on, come on ......" A burst of shouts floated out of our classroom. We are having a wrenching contest, hurry over to see it.B. "Hahaha ......" A burst of laughter comes out of our classroom from time to time.

What's going on? We are doing the game of sticking noses! C. "Come on, come on" hear the crisp and loud cheering, this is the fourth grade relay race we held the Games, it's really wonderful! You do not come to see? Don't regret it. 4, to the students heard the news of the wrench strength of the reaction of the beginning A, Thursday afternoon composition class, Mr. Yang announced that the class to carry out the "wrench strength" this activity.

Mr. Yang's words just fell, some students jumped up and down with joy, and some students began to make preparations for the activity. b. Classes started, the teacher came into the classroom with a smile on his face, and said: "Students, today we will do the game of passing the flower on the drum."

The students were happy to hear that. C. Today, in the composition class, Mr. Huang said that he would like to introduce you to a game called "Sticky Nose".

We all talked and talked: strange! We have a nose, how to post ah? Everyone looked at Mr. Huang with a curious look. 5, write their feelings at the time.

A, the students look forward to, finally looked forward to our school's fall sports meeting. The sports field was full of tension and fierce competition, especially the relay race.

B, the last project of the Games - the head-to-head relay race began immediately, I was excited and thrilled, because I am also a member of this project ah ● Pork Belly - write a good focus paragraph Let's first read two fragments together: fragment one: The kite competition began, and the colorful kites scrambled up into the tile blue sky. Hey, there are so many styles of kites! There are so many styles of kites: the "lab coat", the "one-legged swallow", the "dragonfly", the "goldfish", the "butterfly", the "goldfish", the "butterfly", the "butterfly" and the "goldfish", "Butterfly", "Monkey King" ...... they show their skills in the air, so that people are dazzled.

You see that dancing "red butterfly" more colorful, it seems to say proudly: "I am the king of the butterflies, my beauty who can not be compared." You see that the monkey king "Monkey King" is more than the spirit, hand holding the golden rod, two eyes flashing gold light, rocking up.

Among them, Wang Weimin tie: "yellow coat" put the highest. He is calm, cool, slowly backward, and then pull back vigorously.

The kite seemed to understand the owner's mood to participate in the competition, the more the more energetic. Clip 2: One afternoon, under the grape arbor on the campus, there were a lot of students watching the game.

The students who participated in the game, each stood beside two small partners: one ready to count, one ready to time. At this time, I saw the referee teacher raised the red flag, shouted: "Start!" Just see the participating students reach up and down quickly pat the ball, only to hear the ball on the ground issued a "pop" sound.

"Come on! Go for it!" Onlookers of the students cheered one after another. The game was tense.

Some racket high, some racket low, some inattentive racket to the soles of other people's feet, causing a burst of laughter from the little ones. Xiaofang students squatted and racketed the ball short.

"One, two, three, four ......" As the counter reported loudly, she was fully concentrated, her eyes staring at the ball bouncing up and down, beads of sweat oozing from her head. Suddenly, her feet slipped and she sat down on the ground, and the ball bounced all the way up.

Just as her classmates were sweating for her, she violently stood up again and continued to shoot the ball with her hand. "71, 72, 73 ......" The counter's report grew louder and louder, and the onlookers cheered and laughed from time to time.

At this point the referee shouted: "Stop!" A wonderful game is over, the teacher announced: "Xiaofang shot more times, won the first place!" The little friends ran to her and congratulated her. (Clip 1 depicts a lively kite-flying competition.

First of all, the colorful and varied kites are described in general terms, such as: "Hey, there are so many different kinds of kites! There are so many different kinds of kites",.

5. Using the combination of point and surface

What is the combination of point and surface? The so-called "point", refers to the most able to show the image of the state of the personnel scene characteristics of the detailed description; the so-called "surface", refers to the personnel scene of the narrative or generalized description. The combination of point and face is "point" of detailed description and "face" of the narrative or generalized description of the organic combination. "Point", can highlight the key points, reflecting the depth; "surface", can take into account the overall situation, reflecting the breadth. The combination of point and face, can have both depth and breadth to reflect the image of the state of the personnel scene, the fullest expression of thought, expression of feelings.

The combination of point and face mainly refers to the structure of the article. The face of the meaning of the structure of the beginning and the end, generally

is to summarize or introduction. The point is the article's paragraphs.

I believe that the pro must be able to write your own work, o (∩_∩) o hope to help you!

o(∩_∩)o Please give timely favorable comments or adoption, thank you very much! (*^__^*)

6. Using a combination of point and face

In our campus, whenever you turn around, or change the perspective, there will be a different scenery in front of you to show: quiet and lively teaching buildings, lush fir forests, colorful and staggered flower beds, pleasing to the eyes of the plastic running track playground ... ...And my favorite corner of her - that is surrounded by teaching buildings, by our teachers and students affectionately called "quadrangle" place.

In the center of the courtyard is a tall pine tree, like a green pagoda. It's so tall that it's almost as tall as our fourth-floor classroom! The bark of the tree is bumpy and full of traces of the vicissitudes of time. Its feet covered with a layer of dark green furry "carpet", the grass are clustered to look up at it, as if nestled in the arms of the father.

The left side of the pine tree is the most exciting drip pool. The drip pool is built against the east building of the school. Depending on the wall is a special decorative material made of stone walls, green-gray color, concave a convex one, oblique upper corner of a few brightly colored flowers to make it vivid at once as a finishing touch! Below the stone wall there is a hole, and on the other side of the hole is the corridor of the east building of the school. From time to time, there are a lot of first-grade children curiously put their heads in, and shrink back. Below the hole is the pool. The pool is made of various colors of pebbles and concrete. There are water plants in the pool! There are also a variety of goldfish: red hydrangea, pink and white pearl, colorful dragon eyes ...... look, the fastest swimming, the most mischievous is my beloved "little butterfly", she is playing hide and seek with her friends!

The right side of the pine tree has a few stone tables and chairs. It is always clean! Why? Because we like to sit there and read books and play games!

7. How to write a 200-word essay on scenery with "point and face"

What attracts you most when you walk through the door of the Pinghu County Children's Palace? The most important thing is that you have to be able to get the best out of it. The most important thing is that you have to be able to get the best out of it. No, no, it should be the beautiful fountain!

Around the fountain, is the oval, white concrete railing. Pool in the center, towering a wonderful, lifelike statue. Look, a big carp jumping happily cocked tail fins, holding up the chest, that a piece of fish scales, in the sunlight flashing, flashing, really like a crystal pearl miles!

A little boy carrying a big carp, pouting ***, dragging the pectoral fins of the carp. Looking at his look of concentration, I thought I could hear his "吭唷吭唷" horn sound! On the left, there is an innocent little girl. She was on her tiptoes, dragging the carp's dorsal fin with one hand, and waving to everyone with the other, as if to say, "This big carp is so heavy.

The statue sits on top of a reddish-brown base sandwiched with white spots. The unfolding hexagonal shape resembles a lotus flower in bloom. The lower end of the base, seems to be a six-sided pagoda, rooted in the center of the clear pool of water, looking at it, I seem to see a small pool, a few mischievous little goldfish jumped out of the water, to the pool of water to draw a few big rippling circles.

Round carp mouth, spraying six strands of water columns, shot into the air, scattered down, like a large bead curtain hanging down, and like a holiday gift sprinkled all over the sky. Water, splashing on the head of the little boy, so pleasant, so melodious, how like the "rocking bell" sound: "Dingdong Dingdong". Water, splashed in the little pool, so crisp, so melodious, how like a musician playing "spring water tinkling winter" sonata! Water, sprinkled in the girl's head, the little girl seems more lovely; water sprinkled in the big carp, the big carp also seems to jump up happily ......

I looked at this spray out of the clear water column, it seems that the water also sprinkled to my body, drilled into my neck, and then I feel so cool, make a person's mind happy, extraordinarily comfortable. Misty water in the sunlight reflected colorful rainbow, to the fountain added an incomparable magical color!