"Phoenix head" exquisite "tail" sound around the beam
-- Talk about how to write a good beginning and end of the essay
Anhui Wang Huabin
The beginning and end of the essay is an important position for the reading teacher to read, so to create a wonderful beginning and end, will make the article "highlights", so as to attract the eyes of the reading teacher to improve the score of their own essays.
One, write a wonderful beginning, love at first sight.
Anciently known as the beginning of the article for the "phoenix head", that is to say, the beginning of the beautiful and exquisite, novel and relevant, creative, shocking, attractive, so that the teacher at first sight, a kind of must want to read the feeling of fast. Therefore, before you write, you must be carefully conceived, repeatedly thought out, and strive for perfection.
(a) design inscription, newcomers ear
If there is a full score of composition "friends, I want to say thank you", it begins with this:
Margin, so that I know you in the cinnamon rosy September; dream, and let me and you separately in the hot sun spit in the month of June. Friend, in the four spring and fall days with you, friendship makes me double cherish. It is you who make my miserable days become wonderful, it is you who let me discover the beauty of life, it is you who let my proud heart be harnessed by modesty. Everything, let me trace with you *** with the footprints walked. The title of the article is skillfully interpreted. And the sentence is neat, rich in literary style, very infectious and attractive.
(2) the words of his intention, the path through
such as the beginning of the full marks of the composition "beautiful life":
Some people like to compare life to a road, some people like to compare life to a glass of wine, some people signal life as a mass of hemp. I, however, like to compare life to a flower.
After laying out the various interpretations of life by others, the young author turns the tables and shines a light on his own point of view, "I, on the other hand, like to compare life to a flower." This leads into the main part of the essay, which can be described as a word for this and a word for that, with a twist and a long rhythm.
(C) laying out the prose, ready to go
There is an excellent essay entitled "Door", which begins:
Green pushed open the door of spring
Thunderstorms pushed open the door of summer
Fruit pushed open the door of fall
Snow pushed open the door of winter
Books pushed open the door of knowledge
Wisdom pushes open the door of ideal
Ideal pushes open the door of success
Listen, everywhere is the sound of the door opening ......
This article opens, the author used eight consecutive sentences with the same structure and meaningful meaning to give the "door" from a different angle
(D) the object of rise, the secret of the Chencang
have seen a beautiful exercise, entitled "care forever", the beginning of which impressed me y:
sunrise out of the lake for it to dress; the crescent moon came up, the stars for it to companion; the spring flowers bloomed, the green leaves for it to reflect
lining; the birds singing, the crickets for it to accompaniment! ...... Everything in heaven and earth is telling us the story of love.
The author begins with the natural phenomenon, the object to rise up, and narrates that many things in the natural world are full of strong
"care", and the use of anthropomorphic techniques, so that these things have a human face. The next thing you know, without looking, is that you're going to have to transition to a theme related to the idea that there should be care between people, and that's what you're going to do when you're in the wind and the water, and that's what you're going to do when you're in the wind and the water.
Lu Ji, a writer of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, said, "To set up a piece of speech to live in the main point is the warning of an article." This sentence is also very appropriate to describe the beginning of an essay. There are so many different ways to start an essay that it's hard to list them all. But in short, the beginning must be distinctive, and strive to attract the beginning of the reading teacher, to give him a deep impression, so as to enhance the score of the whole article grade.
Two, hammering a fine ending, the finishing touch.
The Ming Dynasty scholar Xie Hazel said, "The end is like ringing a bell, and the sound is clear." Indeed, a good end of the article can produce a "lingering sound, three days" artistic effect, enhance the infectious force of the article, evoke the reader's thinking and **** Ming, so that readers are immersed in the realm of the article, a long time to savor.
(a) add postscript, long aftertaste
such as Jiangsu Taizhou midterm essay topic for "only one", there is an excellent essay "Mr. Lu Xun, only one", in the body, the small author also added a paragraph of "postscript":
Mr. Lu Xun is waiting for us to get out of the sea of pomp and circumstance, step into his heart, and communicate with him in the depths of his soul!
--Afterword
In the main part of the article, the author highlights the extraordinary value of Lu Xun's works through comparison, shows his indignation in the face of the social neglect of Lu Xun, and then calls on us to get close to and read Lu Xun and his works. And the postscript part is a different angle, from the perspective of Mr. Lu Xun, calling us to communicate with him, so that the article further struck the reader's heart, so as to get closer to Lu Xun. It can be said that this paragraph of the postscript, can be called the finishing touch, and the main part of the article complement each other, complement each other.
(B) Raise questions, draw deep thought
There is a middle school student's excellent essay "simple and uncomplicated", in the enumeration of all kinds of "simple and uncomplicated" phenomenon, analyze the "simple and uncomplicated" dialectical relationship, the article ends with the conclusion, and then the "simple and uncomplicated" of the "simple and uncomplicated".
After listing the phenomena of "simple and uncomplicated" and analyzing the dialectical relationship between "simple and uncomplicated", the author ended the article by writing:
Every one of us is simple and uncomplicated at the same time, and the question is what kind of simple and uncomplicated we should pursue.
What do you say, my friend?
Here, the author skillfully puts forward the major proposition of "what kind of simplicity and uncomplicity should be pursued", which triggers readers to think y, and inspires people to make correct choices and pursue a meaningful life. Although the author does not say so explicitly, it is thought-provoking and reminds people to wake up.
(C) chapter, the main idea is clear
such as the semi-propositional essay "this is my ________", a candidate in the line filled in the word "commitment". After showing the formation process of "commitment", the author writes in the concluding paragraph:
"No matter what kind of difficulties I will encounter in life, I will never give up and be a strong person in life!" --This
is my promise.
At the end of the article, the author very clearly expresses the content of "my promise", not only closely related to the title, but also reveals the main idea of the article, which can be described as the end of the chapter, the end of the song play elegant. Moreover, this sentence is full of passion, sound words, showing the author's strong determination, heroic temperament, lovely and honorable, touching and deep.
(4) unexpected, abrupt end
This ending is not in accordance with the usual logic of the storyline, to deal with the characters or the end of things, but with an unexpected ending abruptly, so that people in the dazzled, can not help but marvel at the author's whimsical, life's ever-changing. For example, the end of a student work "door - key" wrote "I pinched the key, reached over to open the locked door, the key just touched the door - ah, the door is not locked! It turned out that the door I'd always thought was locked was actually open." This unexpected ending greatly enhances the charm of the article and makes the reader think more rationally after the accident.
The ancients said: "a wonderful, care about the drop sentence." A proper ending, will make the whole piece of colorful, glittering. The method of ending is colorful, there is no fixed pattern, the key is to be good at according to the needs of the content of the article written, choose an appropriate and clever ending.
All-purpose phoenix head
●Youth is with the will of the blood droplets and the sweat of the struggle brewed into the agar - everlasting fragrance; youth is with withered hope and undying yearning woven rainbow - gorgeous brilliant; youth is with eternal persistence Youth is a brick wall built with eternal persistence and tenacity - solid as gold.
●Faith is the beam of the towering building, without it, it is just a pile of scattered masonry; faith is the riverbed of the river, without it, there is only a flood of waves; faith is the star of the blazing fire, without it, there is only a handful of cold firewood; faith is the main engine of the ocean liner, without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.
●Standing on the shores of history to trace the history of a ditch: Chu Daifu sedentary ze, nine deaths; Wei Wu Di raised his whip to the east, heart; Tao Yuanming leisurely south of the mountain, drinking wine and picking chrysanthemums ...... they chose to eternal, even if flattering and defamatory to the hearing and hearing, but also do not follow the flow of their waves, this is the choice of persistence; even if the horse leather wrapped in a corpse, the soul returned to the smoke, just the The soul returns to the wolf smoke, just a magnificent choice; even if a body of suffering, hard to satiate all day, but also willing to be happy, plowing Longmu, this is the choice of elegance. In some choice, the emperor and generals into its greatness, the wise man Qianke into its ancient article.
●Only by setting out on a journey will you reach your ideal and destination, only by striving will you achieve brilliant success, only by sowing will you reap. Only by pursuing will you savor the hallowed man.
●If friendship is an evergreen tree, then, watering it must be from the heart of the spring; if friendship is an undefeated flower, then, shine it must be from the heart of the rising sun.
How much laughter is evoked by friendship, how many tears are wiped dry by friendship. The harbor of friendship is full of warmth, and the breeze of friendship fills the sails. Friendship is not an investment of feelings, it does not need dividends and dividends. (Friendship can be replaced by other words.)
●Full moonlight, I scoop up a cup of the clearest; falling afterglow, I embrace a wisp of the warmest; burning red leaves, I pick up a piece of the hottest; luxuriant grass, I pick up a bouquet of the most brilliant; a long life, I want to pick up the world's heaviest --- perseverance.
●If life is a solemn castle, if life is a large tree, if life is a flying seabird. Then, faith is the dome of the beams, is the deep roots, is the flapping wings. Without faith, the power of life is gone; without faith, the beauty of life is gone. (Underline can be replaced by other words)
● Perseverance, is a thousand miles of dike a sand a stone cohesion, a little bit of cumulative, before the end of the magnificence of the head; Perseverance, is a silk worm spitting a strand of silk around a strand of persistence, only to have a cocoon out of the light of the splendor of the resurrection; Perseverance, is the voyage of the boat's sails, sails, the boat can arrive at the other side of the shore of the success.
●Love is a piece of winter sunshine, so that the poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; love is a spring in the desert, so that people on the verge of extinction to see the hope of life; love is a song floating in the night sky, so that the lonely and helpless people to get the solace of the soul.
●The true color of the heart should be so. In order to achieve, such as the moon shining flowers, deep pools, regardless of the smooth, regardless of the success or failure of the transcendent, is to raise the whip horse, climbing high and far away from the station; defeat, still dripping water through the stone, sinking into the sea, there is a poor and hard, do not fall into the blue cloud of the arrogance of the "will be the master of the Lord, the man should be self-strengthening," the stubbornness of the. Rong, the mountains are still there, the elegance is still there, cha chaussures louboutin, familiar with the flow of the years, the flash of life, do not care about the smoke and clouds; humiliation, crotch Han Xin, the snow bottom of the pines, like the immortal, know that one step back, the sea is wide open, and refused to choke on the food.
●Happy = material / desire. This is the happy equation proposed by American economist Samuelson. From the point of view of economics, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire, the greater the happiness, which should be a Chinese saying "contentment is always happy". On the other hand, if a person's material consumption is limited, but the desire is infinite, what will happen? Mrs. Luvatsu has so many "dreams" and so much "intoxication", how can she not be painful and sad?
●Russian writer Chekhov said: "There are big dogs and there are small dogs, and the small dogs should not be upset by the presence of the big dogs. All dogs should bark, and let him each use the voice God gave him.
●Maturity is a light that is bright but not blinding, an acoustic that is mellow but not cloying, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that finally stops complaining and begging for help from the surroundings, a smile that does not heed the cajoling, an indifference that cleanses the bigotry, a thickness that does not need to be vocalized,
a height that is not steep.
●Love, sometimes do not need the promise of a mountain alliance, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; love, sometimes do not need the Liangzhu Butterfly's tragic, but she must need the tacit understanding of the heart and fit; love, sometimes do not need to follow the male and female from the fly, but she must need to support and understand each other.
●Smile, to sing the song of life, do not complain that life gives too many trials and tribulations, do not have to complain that there are too many twists and turns in life. The sea will lose its majesty if it loses the roll of the waves; the desert will lose its grandeur if it loses the wild dance of the flying sand. Life if only to go to the two points of a line of smooth sailing, life has lost the significance of existence.
●Even if youth is a delicate flower, but I understand that a single branch is never spring, the spring should be the world of thousands of red.
Even if the youth is a great tree of the earth, but I understand that a plant alone is never upright, rows and rows of trees, is to cover the wind and sand of the Great Green Wall. Even if the youth is a leaf of the sea lonely sail, but I understand that a leaf of the sail is very difficult to sail, a thousand sails is the sea of the spectacular.
●Life is not a "digest", do not accept the bland, only collection of wonderful. She is a complete process, is a "serial", regardless of success or failure, she will not leave a blank behind you; life is not a dress rehearsal, walking bad can start again, she will never give you a second chance to go through the past can not be turned back.
●Try - not like a penguin standing quietly on the beach, looking forward to the opportunity to come, but as a hawk in general, non-stop flying circling, persistent search.
Try to see - not in the face of the peaks and valleys, the future of the weeds in vain, but the thorns and thorns, step by step to explore.
Try - not stuck in the confines of fate, at the mercy of fate, but to knock on its mysterious door, so that it opens a new world. Smile, and sing the song of life.
●The person who can be broken must have really lived. The brokenness of Lin Daiyu lies in the love she has engraved in her bones; the brokenness of Sanmao stems from the moment of clarity and transcendence after she has experienced the vicissitudes of life; the brokenness of Van Gogh is the sun's knife with gold to make him in the light of the constant severe pain, the brokenness of Beethoven is the spirituality to the extreme of the black-and-white keys to crash into the life of the tragic music. If the brokenness of those ordinary people leaking is the purest and most beautiful points of light of human nature, then the brokenness of these excellent souls is like silver pear blossoms blooming in the sky above our heads.
●Silkworms died, but left behind the noble silk; butterflies died, but left behind the beautiful clothes; eyebrows flew away, but left behind the beautiful song; flowers withered, but left behind the fragrance; candles burned out, but left behind a piece of light; thunderstorms passed, but left behind a colorful neon rainbow.
●"The sun rises every day" Balzac said, "Misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptismal water of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak". After the storm, in front of the gulls and fish swimming in the sky and water; out of the thorns, in front of the flower-filled avenue; on top of the mountain, at the foot of the cumulative emerald clouds of the sky and the color of the mountains.
In this world, a star falling, dull not starry sky, a flower withered, barren not the whole spring.
Life should do its best to get through every hurdle, no matter what difficulties encountered not to give up.
●Tolerance, is a kind of frankness, can be selfless, unrestrained, dust-free.
Tolerance, is a kind of openness, is more broad-minded than the ocean and the sky, is broad and generous superposition, continuation and sublimation. Tolerance has degree, tolerance is priceless, wide wait for others, this is the basic law of life in the world
The college entrance examination full marks essay universal beginning 30 examples of sculpture wind head - play the first shot
Opening method one:
Opening the door to the topic of the point through
Honesty and trustworthiness, is our Chinese nation's tradition. For thousands of years, people have been seeking honesty and honoring honesty. The wind of honesty is simple and mellow, the longer the history, the integrity of the gas more full of China, the light of honesty more illuminate the Chinese summer. Integrity has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture, becoming an important and indispensable part of the cultural gene. Method No. 2:
Quoting quotes to bring out the elegance
If the cause is mixed with emotional factors that the cause is doomed to be unsuccessful; our company's executives will never be able to grow a similar
face. -------- Ford "2003 college entrance examination essay puts the heart in the right place"
When the heart is eyed, the rain is also eyed; when the heart is eyed, the eyed is also rained.
--Wang Guochen
Hamlet once exclaimed, "O man, see thyself!"
And I say, "O man, see the world."
The master of aesthetics, Rodin, once said, "Beauty is everywhere, and for our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." The Eye of Wisdom
Mark Twain said, "The eye of wisdom is the eye of the beholder. Twain said, "A foot steps on a violet and it leaves the scent on your foot. That's tolerance."
Tolerance, From Here
The third method of beginning:
Parallel pointing and arranging the atmosphere
The seed breaks through the confining influence of the rock; it meets the light;
The eagle soars into the sky under the influence of the storm;
The steed breaks through the binding influence of the rope, and it runs through the wilderness;
A sea petrel rushes into the fiercer tempest.
The sea petrel rushes into the more violent storms. FREEDOM
What is it that comes silently and leaves no trace, but stirs up all the colors to dance lightly?
What is it that goes without a trace and comes without a word, but leaves behind a song of love through the season?
What is it that comes gently and goes quietly, leaving behind a golden color in the harvest season?
What is it that comes and goes quietly, spinning white dreams for the silent earth?
The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It is time."
Children hold kites and clap their hands: "It is the wind." ?
The wanderer says: "It's nothing, just a dream." ? ("The Happiness of Having Answers")
Opening Method No. 4:
The Story Fable is Twice as Fresh
There was a mother who always thought her son was a genius. Even though he broke no fewer than ten plates as a waiter, lost his money clip on his second trip as a ticket
salesman, and shut down all the letters people mailed to him as a mailman.
Finally the son went to the army. Three years later the mother proudly went to her son's parade. People looked at the procession walking past and laughed loudly
While the mother was excited and let out a loud shout, "Oh ----- dear Paul! They're all going the wrong way, only you're going the right way!" One of the Nobel laureates was asked, "At which university, in which laboratory, did you learn what you consider to be the main thing?" Surprisingly, the gray-haired scholar replied, "It was in kindergarten." This scholar's answer was echoed by the scientists in attendance. The Beginning of Wisdom
Fifth way to begin:
Quoting poetry is better than saying nothing
I don't think about whether I can succeed or not/
Since I have chosen a faraway place/
I only care about the wind and the rain.
-Wang Guo's "2002 College Entrance Exam Essay Mind's Choice"
The flower in the corner!
When you are alone in the world
The world is small. -Bing Xin
You look at me one moment
You look at the clouds the next
I feel that
You are very far away when you look at me
You are very close when you look at the clouds
-"Far and Near" by Gu Cheng