Writing scenery and expressing emotion
If you want to impress readers, you should write a lyrical article.
Love is true and literature is beautiful. Only when love is true can readers enjoy beauty.
Key points of composition writing
First, the principle of determining the theme of the article
The article should meet the needs of social reality and embody the spirit of the times. The spirit of the times refers to the spirit that promotes the progress of the times in a certain historical period and embodies the characteristics and development direction of the times. The theme should grasp the pulse of the times, answer the urgent questions raised by the times and reflect advanced ideas.
We should reflect the truth and essence of objective things. The theme should faithfully reproduce the original appearance of objective things, not stay in the appearance, but profoundly remind the internal regularity of things.
We should consider the author's subjective conditions. This mainly means that the author must be familiar with and understand the writing object, and the author should have the initial feelings and strong writing enthusiasm.
Second, the correct way to refine the theme
Refining the theme is to use various ways of thinking to dig deep into the internal meaning of the article materials, thus forming some unique ideas or things. The theme of refining should be: 1, based on all materials, and extract the correct ideas from all the materials we have. 2. Explore the essence of things, abandon appearances, explore the inner meaning of things, and reflect the essence and regularity of things. The author should stand at the height of the times, gain insight into the essence of things and deepen the depth of excavation; The author should also consider the expressive functions of different articles such as narration, discussion, explanation and lyricism, and explore the essence of things from different sides. 3. Choose a novel and unique angle to explore the novelty of things. A new angle refers to a new observation angle (exploring the theme from different sides) and a new understanding angle (expressing the author's unique point of view).
Third, briefly describe the relationship between material and theme.
Material is the basis for refining and forming the theme. The theme is refined and determined in the process of analyzing the research materials. The material is primary and the theme is secondary. 2. Materials are the means to express the deep theme, and the theme is expressed or proved by certain materials. 3. The choice and organization of materials are restricted by the theme. When the theme is not formed, the material plays a decisive role in the theme refining; Once the theme is determined, it becomes the most important basis for selecting or arranging materials. The choice, details and transformation of materials should obey the needs of expressing the theme and prevent the material from being out of touch with the theme.
Four, the basic requirements of material selection
To meet the needs of the theme. The selection of materials serves to express the theme and cannot be divorced from or contradicted with the theme. 2. Be true and conclusive. The truth of materials refers to the truth in the strict sense and the truth in the essence of things. The authenticity of materials means that they are both accurate and appropriate. 3. Be typical. Typical materials are materials with unity of individuality and generality and unity of concreteness and universality. It is concrete and individual, and can reflect the essential characteristics and universal significance of similar things. 4. Be novel and vivid. The material strives for concrete images and intimate suspense, which is a little-known new discovery and adapts to the stylistic characteristics (the narrative material is concrete and infectious; Argumentative materials are general and logical; The description material should reveal the characteristics of the object.
Basic requirements of verb (abbreviation of verb) structure
Integrity. Each area of the article should form a perfect and unified whole; Each area should be relatively complete and cannot be incomplete without reason; Each part should occupy an appropriate position in the article. 2. Coherence. It means that all parts of the article are interrelated in the context of the content, and there is a close connection and reasonable transition in the form of language, and the context cannot be disordered and broken. 3. rigidity. There is a close logical connection between the parts of the article, which cannot be contradictory or irrelevant. The full text has inherent cohesion. 4. Flexibility. The article is diverse in structure, lively and not rigid and dull.
Six, try to describe the basic principle of the structure.
Reflect the internal relations and laws of things. The structure of narrative articles is closely related to the stage and order of things' development, forming a concept of time and space that conforms to the original order of objective processes; Argumentative writing reflects the process of understanding things from phenomenon to essence, from part to whole, from analysis to synthesis, and its structure is often to ask questions and draw conclusions. 2, in line with the author's ideas. Thinking is the route of the author's thinking execution. The author's thinking process should follow the same law of human thinking, and it also condenses the author's unique understanding and feelings about things. 3. Obey the need to express the theme. 4. Adapt to stylistic features. Structure is restricted by style. Narratives are written in time and space order, and argumentative essays focus on horizontal classification or vertical depth.
Seven. Summarize the basic content of the structure.
The content of the structure includes three aspects: hierarchy and paragraph, transition and reference, beginning and end. Hierarchy is a structural unit that expresses meaning by arranging the order of the ideological content of the article as a whole and expanding the structure and steps of the article. A paragraph is a relatively independent structural unit set by the author in an article, which begins and ends with a space at the beginning of the paragraph. Paragraphs should be single in meaning, complete in content and moderate in length. Transition refers to the cohesive form or means between paragraphs and levels. Common transition methods are: using related words, using transition names and using transition segments. There are two common situations that require transition: one is when the content changes, and the other is when the expression changes. Reference is a structural means of responding before calling. There are three kinds of common citation situations: beginning and end citation (which can be divided into two types: point citation and problem-solving citation), and mutual citation in citation (which can be divided into two types: far citation and recent photo citation). Citation is an important means to make the structure rigorous and vivid, which can make the composition flexible and dense, connect the context and strengthen the key content.
The function of the beginning of a good article: it is conducive to expressing the theme and expanding ideas; Conducive to attracting and guiding readers. The common opening ways of argumentative essays are to come straight to the point, explain the writing background or motivation, and detour into the topic. The function of the end of a good article: the full text; Unforgettable The main ways to end an argumentative paper are: summarizing or reaffirming the argument; Put forward hope or call; Imagine the ending.
Eight, the type of article structure
According to the temporal and spatial order of the existence and development of things, the narrative type of the structure can be divided into two types: the normal type and the abnormal type. Argumentative style, with the internal causal relationship of concepts as the main basis of structure. It can be divided into total score type, parallel column type and progressive type. Descriptive, laid out in the inherent order of things themselves. Comprehensive type, often based on one structural type, supplemented by other types.
9. Comparison between the first-person narrative and the third-person narrative.
The first person narrates things in a tone, which is convenient for the author to fully express his thoughts and feelings and makes people feel cordial and true when reading. Its limitation is that it can only describe what I have seen and heard, rather than what I have experienced, which reflects that the breadth of life is limited. The third person narrates in the third person's tone as an outsider, which is not limited by the narrative scope and can reflect life more widely. Its limitation is the lack of first-person intimacy.
X. Common narrative methods
Sequential narration: Narrating according to the sequence of occurrence and development of characters experience or events. 2. Flashback: A narrative that puts the ending of the event or the prominent fragments in the event in front, and then describes the development process of the event in chronological order. 3. Interpolation: In the narrative process, another narrative about the event is followed by the original narrative. 4. Supplementary narrative: To supplement the narrative of previous events without developing the original plot. 5. Simple narrative: a separate parallel narrative of two or more things that happen at the same time.
XI。 Briefly describe the basic requirements of narration.
Explain clearly: explain clearly the time, place, people, events, causes and effects. 2. Clear clues: Clues are the reflection of the author's ideas of organizing materials, and they are the ideas and clues that run through the development of narrative characters and events. Narrative clues can be arranged according to the development of time, the transformation of space, the division of problems, the changes of thoughts and feelings, or according to a specific object and other styles. 3. Appropriate details: describe the primary and secondary details of the material to express the needs of the theme and make reasonable tailoring. 4, ups and downs: refers to the narrative twists and turns, rich in change, fascinating.
Twelve. Describe requirements
1. The purpose is clear: to describe it from the perspective of expressing the theme, portraying the characters and rendering the atmosphere. 2. Outstanding features: with the art of "drawing eyes", we grasp the essential characteristics of the object to be described and describe it. 3. Both form and spirit: the harmonious unity of form and spirit not only vividly shows the external appearance and modality of the object, but also reveals the internal connotation and spirit of the object.
For the guidance of some of the above writing methods, candidates need to understand and deal with them flexibly according to the materials and requirements of the test paper.
Taishan composition written by blending scenes, combining static and dynamic, changing scenery and other methods! One sunny morning, we came to climb the mountain at the foot of Mount Tai.
When going up the mountain, everyone didn't know much about the scenery on the mountain, so my father hired a tour guide. Introduce the spirit of Dete: Mount Tai stands proudly on the land of Qilu with the attitude of "pulling the earth to the sky and holding the sun in the sky", with an altitude of 1545 meters, which is called the head of the five mountains ... To tell the truth, I can't wait to climb Mount Tai at once.
Let's take a bus to Zhongtianmen first. Along the way, some people struggled to climb up with railings; Some people are struggling to move their feet with crutches; Others climb for a while, rest for a while, and catch their breath while walking ... The towering trees beside the road are lush; The mountains are rolling in the distance; White clouds float freely, surrounded by towering peaks and steep cliffs.
It is said that it is particularly difficult to climb the 18th plate. We took our grandparents, who were too old to walk, and took the cableway from Zhongtianmen to Nantianmen.
The route of the cableway looks steep. The ropeway looks like a small house. Yes, according to the tour guide, it was built more than 30 years ago. Sitting on it and looking down, it seems that there is a deep canyon below, but there are small trees on the bare stone mountain, standing on the mountain like the guards of Mount Tai; Tourists are like colored dots scattered on ribbons. This section of road looks dangerous. According to the tour guide, each plate has 200 stone steps, which are almost vertical. How can we climb there? It made me think.
Standing on the worse gate to enjoy the magnificent mountain scenery, Mount Tai really deserves to be the first of the five mountains. The scenery of the Taishan team is really beautiful, and the peaks are looming in the clouds. The peaks of Mount Tai are really strange. Some of them stand steeply on the horizon, while others look like an old man. The scenery of Mount Tai is really old, some of which are thousands or even hundreds of thousands of years ago. It's really "reaching the top, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky."
Mount Tai is famous for its ancient prose, and the scenery on Nantianmen is the oldest in Mount Tai. There are several small temples about Confucius, but the most famous one is the one dedicated to the grandmother of Mount Tai. Most people like to come to this place. There is a local saying that climbing Mount Tai is safe, but grandma who worships Mount Tai is more safe.
After enjoying the beautiful scenery, we went down the hill along the path.
The writing method of 500 words required for junior high school landscape composition is 1. Change the scenery step by step. 2. Fixed-point description. 3. Scenery blending Cloisonne sky draws a reunion leaf for the towering phoenix tree, and the new moon is like a golden boat berthing among the branches. Granular stars, small white flowers that seem to overflow from the fingers of angels, are embedded in the sky like gems. But they are still dancing, emitting crystal light and falling from the ice-like sky like snow.
The Milky Way is horizontal. Is love in the sky also isolated? Blessed is the Lingque in Kuroha, which builds a bridge for lovesick cows and girls to meet each other every year.
What about her nostalgia, like a lost bird wandering in this sighing night sea, or a memory, or a hope tangled between her toes like a red thread, and her light wings are getting heavier and heavier because of fatigue, and she can't see the green island: can you not get tired of this distant and hopeless journey?
Her head drooped feebly again.
Her white hand touched the stone and seemed to want to support it. A wisp of cold and slender brown snake crawled straight into her heart from her fingertips, slowly curled up in a circle, and her thin tail trembled as if she had a warm resting place. Under the steps, a plane leaf fell quietly, her shoulders stirred up slightly, and her skirts brushed the edge of the withered stone, making a cold sound. The doubt is that her soul fell into darkness silently.
Her hand touched her temple dreamily. As a result, the bitterness and heat in my heart rose, and big tears slipped from my eyes to the beautiful eyelash tips, condensed into delicate particles and mellow light, such as the white dew on the grass, falling silently and irretrievably. ...
Just under the steps covered with moss and without traces of masonry, begonia sprouted. Two petals are round and bulging like a wine disaster between the cheeks of roses, and two petals are long and stretched like wings that envy insects flying. The leaves are green, sometimes the back is red. With the fluffy light hair, vermilion's stem fell obliquely from the dry foundation of the stone, such as holding up an old sweet story.
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There is only one bright moon.
Accompany me into the breeze
I remember the day when I went to Huangshan Park. I got up early in the morning and embarked on a journey with my parents, grandparents. An hour later, we arrived in Jiangyin. After a short rest, our group took a bus to Huangshan Lake Park. As soon as I entered the gate, the mountains were covered with green grass, flowers and weeping willows on both sides of the river. The willow trees are densely planted with long green vines of morning glory, and the sweet-scented osmanthus exudes an intoxicating fragrance. Unconsciously, we came to the lake and saw the dock, where many cruise ships were parked. I chose the most laborious pedal boat, and soon the boat came. I couldn't wait to hold my parents' hands and jump on it.
I control the direction, and my parents step on the boat. As the boat slowly moved forward, I saw: trees on both sides were like green edges, and groups of small fish were playing happily in the water. The clear lake is like a green ribbon, with small bridges and flowing water, and green trees and mountains reflected in the water, like a beautiful mountain.
Ink painting, then look at the blue sky. There are several cormorants flying around in the sky. From top to bottom, the bright sunshine shines on the sparkling lake, and the lake suddenly turns golden yellow. Ah! The scenery here is really breathtaking.
Near noon, I reluctantly left Huangshan Lake Park, and along the way, the scenery just now has been in my mind.
Move for a change of environment. One-day tour "composition. Today is Sunday, and my father takes time to play with me. I'm so happy, but what shall we play? Still "smart" dad is smart, so I suggest going to the zoo. I haven't been there for three years. I must have changed my old look. My mother and I agree. We talked and laughed all the way and soon arrived at the zoo. Wow, there are so many people! With the crowd, we went to see the elephant house first. Hey! Really changed. Three years ago, the male elephant and the female elephant now have a baby elephant. It is really cute. Long nose rolled up a small stone, a twig, ran to his father, then came to his mother, enjoying the care of his parents. After seeing the elephant hall, we came to the nearby orangutan hall. I saw a very big and not very agile chimpanzee. It may be an old chimpanzee from three years ago! There are several orangutans flying over the eaves like Spider-Man. Another orangutan reached out to his father for mineral water, but his father didn't give it. He became angry from embarrassment and suddenly vomited, scaring our family to turn around and run. Dad smiled and said, "You are a close relative of mankind, and your feelings are really rich!" " In laughter, we ended our visit to the orangutan hall and drove to the beast area. You have to go through two iron gates to enter the beast area, which is surrounded by power grids. It is forbidden to get off in the middle, so as not to be hurt by beasts. I quickly closed the window, which was a close contact with wild animals. I'm afraid those big tigers and lions will jump in and bite me. Let's enter the lion garden first. Those lions are all magnificent. They have brown fur and sharp teeth. They growled and trembled. It was really scary. We made a big detour and came to the Tiger Garden. The tigers here are not as bared as I thought, and they are quite docile. Maybe because I am a tiger, I am not afraid of them at all. Then, we came to bear's habitat with trepidation. There are black bears and brown bears. Although they look stupid, they are actually smart. As long as someone throws food at them, they will stand up and bow to you with their front paws. Seeing how clever the bear is, I dare to open the window and have a look. It's interesting. How time flies! It's almost noon. We left the beast area and entered the African amorous feelings garden. Here we had a rest, ate something, and saw giraffes with long necks, beautiful sika deer and gentle zebras ... A day trip to the wildlife park not only broadened my horizons, but also increased my knowledge. How's it going? After listening to my introduction, you can't wait to visit!
200 words of grassland composition touched and changed the beautiful grassland.
My hometown is in Inner Mongolia prairie, where the scenery is picturesque and beautiful all year round.
In spring, the ice and snow melt and everything recovers. At this time, we came to the grassland. In the warm sunshine, the grassland is covered with new green clothes, the ground is covered with green grass, and colorful wildflowers are in full bloom in the warm spring breeze. From a distance, white mushroom-shaped yurts are dotted on the carpet-like grassland, which is particularly eye-catching. Groups of cattle and sheep want to embed cotton in the grass, and the grassland in the distance echoes with the beautiful singing of shepherdess.
Summer on the grassland is a season of abundant aquatic plants. This is, you came to the grassland, as if you were in a colorful ocean. Only when the breeze blows gently occasionally can we see herds of cattle and sheep on the grassland, and let us experience the scene of "seeing cattle and sheep in the low wind" written by the poet. The smoke rising from the yurts in the distance adds a calm atmosphere to this green grassland. Autumn, grassland days, is so high, so blue. There are white clouds floating in the blue sky, and some are like continuous sheep; Some are like white cotton; Others are like mountains. The endless grassland under the blue sky turned into a golden ocean. The grass seeds are ripe, and the heavy ears crush the straw. These fine grasses can feed horses, cattle and sheep well.
The cold winter quietly came to the grassland. The north wind roared, and the snow was flying all over the sky, like goose feather catkins, flying on the grassland, which was covered with quilts and covered with snow everywhere.
This is my hometown-the beautiful Inner Mongolia prairie.
Walking for a change of scenery, combining scenes and writing in the campus, my beautiful campus (walking for a change of scenery) has just entered the campus, and you can see the mighty buildings. This building is not very tall, but it looks very special. That is the administrative building of our school. Go straight to the square. At the junction of the stairs and the square, there are seven pots of Cycas lined up, just like the seven dwarfs welcoming students. There is a camphor tree on each side of the square. The dragon on the left looks like a plate and seems to be watching our every move. The one on the right looks like love, probably trying to warm everyone with himself. When I walked into the administration building, I suddenly felt dazzled. Red, orange, yellow, green and purple chrysanthemums came into view like a flood. How colorful it is! If you look around, you will be attracted by that pot of white chrysanthemums. That pot of chrysanthemums can make you understand what it means to stand out from the crowd. Her curly leaves always make people feel wet and reluctant to touch them. Plus the green flowers in the middle, there is only one word-beautiful! When I walked out of the administration building through the back door, I suddenly saw another world in front of me. People suddenly came out of the gorgeous world and came to a quaint and elegant paradise. Green grass can definitely reach the point where everyone loves it. Although she is not as brilliant as flowers, she has a kind of natural beauty and harmonious beauty. After walking through boxwood and clusters of holly trees, I came to a stone road. Both sides of the path are covered with Chinese roses. In the time when it should have withered, a few flowers are still standing tenaciously and blooming their own beauty. Ah, my beautiful campus!
Bright primary school's 600-word composition, look good in autumn. The autumn wind blows the Buddha slightly, making a small sound, like a little girl playing the piano, playing beautiful music for us.
Autumn has come, the leaves on the tree are yellow, and the yellow leaves rest on the tree like birds; Leaves fall in the air like birds, and leaves fall to the ground sparsely like sleeping; And those fragments fall to the ground, just like putting new golden clothes on the earth.
However, pine and cypress are different. They are still so green, so tall, covered with green gauze clothes, as if standing guard for people. Some are not pine and cypress, but their leaves are also green, giving people an illusion, as if they are still in the hazy spring scenery.
In autumn, rice fields in Huang Chengcheng are like a golden ocean. The sky is blue, like an endless sea. This is a day that the farmer's uncle has been looking forward to for a long time. This is the day when the farmer's uncle harvests rice with a sickle. This happy mood is beyond words. At this time, the fruit is ripe. Looking at these fruits, my heart and mouth will definitely drool.
In autumn, other flowers have withered, but all kinds of chrysanthemums are still blooming so beautifully, adding a lot of color to autumn.
Ah! How beautiful autumn is. Autumn is not only a beautiful garden, but also a beautiful music.
Autumn is not only a harvest season, but also allows us to enjoy the charming scenery. Jinhu Park is decorated by autumn girls like a shining pearl!
When you come to the park, you find that the artificial lake is clearer and the colorful stones at the bottom of the lake are clearly visible. Small fish and shrimp are more lively and lovely. The willows on the shore are more gaunt, and the golden leaves fall one after another, just like flocks of golden butterflies flying in the air. The holly on the side is still so beautiful and so tall.
When I was still immersed in the solemn atmosphere just now, my eyes suddenly widened. Standing on the stone steps of the temple, I saw dozens of European-style buildings of different styles, large and small. It seems that the center of European cities has arrived.
Walking on the high stone steps, I first came to the "Music Fountain". Looking closely, I saw the blue waves rippling in the pool, and more than a dozen bronze statues were vivid and varied. Among them are old people with beards and bitter cheeks, soldiers with strong physique and ready to attack, and many graceful girls. In the center of the pool is a mermaid in a fairy tale, holding a vase in her hand and holding it high in the air ... Just as I was enjoying this beautiful statue, the music suddenly sounded, and I saw that the vase held high by the mermaid first sprayed a water column more than two meters high. Then, the water column kept coming out of the pool. These water columns seem to be commanded by an invisible conductor, sometimes fluctuating and sometimes twisting with the beat of music. These water columns make up one beautiful and changeable pattern after another, and look at the statue still standing in the water. There is movement in silence, and there is stillness in movement. Once again, I was impressed by this exquisite art and deeply admired the intelligence of human beings.