First
Title
In the dark night, you will be grateful to the person who carries the lamp for you. On the road of life, there is also that "lamp person", to help you open the fog, so that you find the direction of life ......
Please take "Thank you for the lamp person for my " as the topic, write an essay.
Requirements: recall an incident, show a person, to penetrate your feelings for this person; not less than 600 words.
Sample Essay
Thank you to the person who carried the lamp for me
Fourteen years ago, the spring of the recovery of all things. With a clear cry, I came to this strange world. At that time I was confused and ignorant. It was you, who carried the lamp for me all the way without complaint, that made me see the direction of life.
When I was a kid, I was described as a naughty wild monkey. Jumping around, only the world is not chaotic is my characteristics, on the roof, mischief is my "specialty". It was you who brought me into the library. Quiet atmosphere, clean environment, colorful books ...... all this everything, make me hooked here. In the afternoon sunshine, there is always your figure accompanied by me, and I quietly read books together. Swimming in the sea of books I gradually became quiet and well-behaved. Thank you, for me to carry the lamp, let me discover the fun contained in reading.
When I was a child, I knew nothing about life and always sat on my hands. It was you who taught me how to manage my life, how to cook a feast, and how to clean the house. Thank you for holding the light for me and helping me to clear the fog of dependence.
Growing up, one problem after another. The pressure of learning, friends misunderstanding, encountered setbacks ...... I became sentimental, unbearable. You are willing to patiently listen to me, to help me unravel a knot. That sentence of thought-provoking words make me clear. Thank you, for my lamp, help me dispel the fog of worry.
Years in a hurry, now I have grown from an ignorant child to a sensible middle school student, and time has mercilessly left traces on the corner of your eyes. In my growth on the road, if you do not have you for me to carry the lamp, I do not know what kind of misdirection, is you carry the lamp to guide me on the right path.
Analysis
test analysis: The title of the essay "Thank you to the one who carried the lamp for me". In the long journey of life, there are joy, anger, sorrow and happiness. In our lonely and helpless time, there is always a person who carries a lamp for us to light up the lost road ahead. Accompany us to the road to success. The person who carries the lamp is the character we want to write. The key word "thank you" is the main idea of writing, "the person who carries the lamp" in the "lamp" is not the reality of the "lamp", but a metaphor, "the person who carries the lamp" is not the reality of the "lamp", but a metaphor, "the person who carries the lamp" is not the reality of the "lamp". The word "lamp" in the phrase "the man who carries the lamp" is not a real "lamp", but a metaphor, and the word "road" is not a real "road", but a road of life. You can thank someone in reality. You can thank someone in history. The essay dares to speak the truth, express the true feelings, to a certain extent, to show the things around themselves. Hold on to the "lamp people" to write "thank you", write out the true feelings and their own personal experience, at the same time, show the colorful life of the real scene.
Point: The theme of the essay.
1. Grasp the key words, find the eye of the question method. The key words of the title, is the title of the essay title "eye of the title", often indicates the central idea of the article, reveals the meaning of the title. The key words of the title are the "eye", often indicating the central idea of the essay, revealing the meaning of the title.
2. Digging into the subject of the method. Words generally have the original meaning, derivation and metaphorical meaning, the meaning of the proposition essay topic is generally multi-faceted, deep, implied, so our understanding of the topic sometimes can not only stay on the surface, but also should be a deep understanding of the topic of the richness of the connotation of the topic, digging its deep implied information.
3. Fill in the title method, add the language method. Some of the proposition essay, such as words or phrases proposition, we can use "add elements, constitute the context" method to review the topic.
4. The virtual question of the actual practice, the method of turning big into small. Some of the essay questions, due to the abstract concept, it is difficult to grasp. For such topics, you can turn big into small, virtual into real.
The second
Title
Title: Walking on the road
Requirements:
(1) Write an article of about 600 words.
(2) Do not disclose any personal information.
(3) No plagiarism.
Sample Essay
Walking on the road
Walking on the road, the candles have the heart, the tears to the way, so that there is a sparkling wave of light; Walking on the road, the willows have the heart, bowed down in contemplation, so that the sleepy earth has the awakening of the life; Walking on the road, the flowers have the heart, the fragrance of ten thousand miles, so that the road fragrance always floating.
Walking on the road of life, it is Hua Yixin selflessly and happily save the lives of others again and again; walking on the road of honesty, it is Xie Yanshun's commitment to the old man, his own comfort; walking on the road of science, it is QIAN Xuesen's perseverance, perseverance in science, the exploration and the challenge; walking on the road of love, it is Luo Yingzhen miraculous call to her lover.
On the road to revolution, Lu Xun used his pen as a dagger to stab the enemy in the heart, and at the same time, his spirit inspired countless young patriotic heart. On the road we need to have Lu Xun like perseverance, wisdom, fearless spirit.
Haizi once said, "Come to the world, to see the sun." Walking on the road of music, it is Beethoven's Symphony of Fate that makes us feel the warmth and amorousness of the sun in the world of man, so that the sun shines into the gaps of life, so that the luster of life has composed an extraordinary music.
Walking on the road, we comprehend the chrysalis cocoon into a butterfly's magnificence ; Walking on the road, we feel the joy when the seed breaks out of the ground ; Walking on the road, we feel the fish on the water outside the world of the longing ; Walking on the road, we look up to the sky, we see the eagle striking the air. Walking on the road, we have to be a person with heart, to pass on their good happiness to more people, so that this long and short road has more humane and beautiful. Sublime spirit like the magnificent rose escaping aroma, clear floating miles, everyone benefits.
Walking on the road, our vision is broad. The way, our thoughts are profound. We are more mature on the road.
On the road, we have to have Li Bai, "Born to be useful, a thousand gold scattered but also come back" confidence; on the road, we have to have "the long wind will sometimes break the waves, hanging straight from the cloud sails Jie Canghai" conviction; on the road, we need to have "Counting the wind and stream of characters, but also look at the present day" of the hegemony; on the road, we have to have "life from ancient times who have not died, and to take the heart of the sweat of the green" of courage.
Walking on the road, we have to have the same open-mindedness as the sea; walking on the road, we have to have a babbling brook of care; walking on the road, we have to have the same enthusiasm; walking on the road, everywhere is the scenery, everywhere there are human beings, everywhere there is spiritual food, everywhere there is the impetus to move forward. Walking on the road, we are happy, comfortable, assured that the road is very beautiful, is the number of times people walk more convergence of a distinctive road, witnessed the beauty of the world.
Analysis
This is a proposition essay. "Road" can be both the original meaning of the road, but also the road to the ideal road, the road of life, but also the process of the relative to the results of ...... "this" and "that" mean The word "that" implies a comparison, a process of choice. The focus is on "walking", emphasizing the process over the result, the importance of participation, practice, pursuit, and struggle. On the road of life, there are successes, failures, experiences, lessons, joys and sorrows. We encountered or experienced things, some of them flashed by, such as smoke; some of them are indelible, engraved in the heart. Our success, give us what joy; our failure, and enlighten us what. Reflection on how to walk their own "road"; not only write "on this road" of the surface, but also from how to "walk" "on this road "Why is this" walk "on this road" and other aspects of the deep excavation.
Point
This is a proposition essay question.
When writing, pay attention to the following three points:
(1) carefully review the topic, clear the meaning of the topic is the most critical step in writing a good proposition essay.
(2) clear center, choose a good material. After clarifying the requirements of the topic, it is necessary to carefully recall the material related to the topic, what is the most familiar, the most innovative, to determine the center to select and organize the material.
(3) the best use of specific examples to make the article vivid and specific, remember not around the key words of the empty speech, that will give people a false sense of emptiness. Appropriate insertion of character appearance, language, psychological description, into a certain rhetoric, so that the article language is more vivid, the character image is more full.
Third
Title
Read the following material, according to the requirements of the essay.
There was a fish who always wanted to know about things on land, but could not realize it because he could only live in the water. He made friends with a tadpole, which grew into a frog and jumped onto land. A few weeks later, the frog returns to the pond and tells the fish what he has seen. The frog describes various things on land, and the fish imagines them according to the frog's description, but everything imagined takes the shape of a fish: people are imagined as fish walking with fish tails, birds as fish with wings, and cows as fish with horns on their heads.......
In fact, how could it not be the same for people? Our cognition of new things, inseparable from the existing experience, and often subject to the existing experience. Therefore, in order to truly recognize new things, we must continue to broaden our horizons and enrich our experience.
Please write an essay based on your understanding and thinking of the above text.
Requirements: based on the overall semantic intention of the material, self-titled, no less than 600 words. If a real name or school name appears in the text, please replace it with a pseudonym.
Model
The importance of practice
The fish living in the water always imagine things on land as "fish", is the lack of seeing this link, the consequences of imagination. This also tells us how important it is to practice!
Animals make mistakes, should cause people to be vigilant. Because of this, we humans have created countless brilliant.
The road of life is long, we need to continue to learn, and constantly strive to live a wonderful life. In the study, then we need to put into action, hands and brain to get true knowledge. You can't just talk without practicing and talk on paper.
Time is the only criterion to test the problem. In learning, we listen to the teacher at the same time, but also to think, while thinking, but also to make notes, not only that, learning knowledge also need us to verify, through their own way of thinking, the way to do, to explore the problem of the right and wrong. "Verbal utterance, written, not as good as the body to make." This is the reason why I say this.
China in recent years, continue to research "Chang'e I", "Chang'e II", "Shenzhou VII" and other aerospace weapons, these can be manifested in China's economic strength, see the country's science and technology continue to strengthen. The first is that the first time I was in the country, I was in the country, and the second is that I was in the country.
The launch of the artificial earth satellite, is a variety of fields, various departments of scientists through continuous efforts, continuous practice, continuous research and development to be successful! This time and again, tell us the importance of it: practice is a necessary condition for success, is to change the status quo of the objective conditions.
"A good memory is better than a bad pen." Therefore, in our daily life and learning, why not put some action for their own dreams, to be a diligent person, so that their ideals can be realized!
The eagle does not wave their wings, never learn to fly; Li Shizhen does not travel the world in the clouds, tasted all the herbs, is not to write the "Compendium of Materia Medica"; and we, do not study well, see more and more practice, and will never succeed. "Hearing is better than seeing, and seeing is better than practicing." Enough to explain this truth.
Numerous facts confirm: put into practice, in order to get true knowledge. In life, we can't just talk without practicing, can't just rely on listening, relying on seeing, relying on thinking can be successful. To succeed, we have to be a diligent person, keep working hard, keep learning, keep practicing, and strive for our dreams.
A
Review: The material of the fish are incorrect, we can analyze, the fish behavior and understanding is the result of sticking to subjective assumptions. Combined with the material of the second paragraph, you can extract the theme of the material: do not subjective, to experience (i.e., practice); practice is greater than fantasy; the importance of practice and so on.
Conceptualization: We tell about the things we did wrong because of subjectivity, or we tell about the things we did right because of experience. You can also write an essay about the dangers of assumptions and the importance of experience.
Writing techniques: Writing a narrative essay, pay attention to the use of detailed description and flashbacks and other narrative order; in the mode of expression, the main narrative, but also the use of lyrical, argumentative and other modes of expression, highlighting the theme. Writing an argumentative essay, in accordance with the structure of the argumentative essay (general and general) conceptualization of the whole, and at the same time with examples, reasoning and contrasting methods of argumentation, to make their own arguments more persuasive.
Fourth
Title
Compose according to the requirements
We are always envious of others, and often blind to what we have. The warmth of the winter sun, the blossoming flowers, the greetings of friends and relatives, the moving article, and even a small act of kindness, a warm look ...... As long as the heart to feel, you will suddenly realize that: it turns out, I also have so much!
Please write an article of not less than 600 words on the topic of "I have so much".
Requirements:
(1) the genre of your choice (except poetry);
(2) the names of people and schools should not appear in the text;
(3) you can not use the material of the reading questions in this paper as the content of the writing.
Sample Essay
It turns out that I also have so much
I thought my life was like a cup of plain water, bland, picked up and drank a mouthful of it, but found that it was blended with honey.
Unconsciously, the season of snow has come again. I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to do this, but I'm going to be able to do it," he said.
Near the end of the semester, the study of various subjects have entered the most intense and frantic state, and the daily homework like a scroll slowly unfolded, although slow but unshakeable pressure on my body. I have a habit of studying in a quiet environment. Obviously, there is no such ideal place at home The sound of oil splattering while frying, the ringing of cell phones, all disturb my mind.
Day by day, homework and noise filled my entire after-school life. It was monotonous and boring, but there was nothing I could do about it. One day, I couldn't stand it any longer, threw down my pen, and shouted out my annoyance : Can you stop it !
The next day when I got home, I started my homework as usual, but today there was something unusual, I couldn't hear any noise. Suddenly I remembered my angry words from yesterday. Well, I finally had quiet.
I couldn't help but thank my mother from the bottom of my heart for keeping her appointment to come. I continued to grapple with numbers and letters in the silence. But dinner became a simple millet porridge, which I did not notice.
As the calendar turned pages, the weather got colder and colder. At my request, dinner was no longer porridge, but only the slightest sound could be heard, and my cell phone was on silent.
One day, the evening meal, my mother said to me : cold and flu will always cough, this time surprisingly on the pressure back. The mother's laughter provoked a burst of guilt in my heart. She coughs a lot, especially in the winter when she has a cold. In order to create a good atmosphere for me to study, this time surprisingly ......
Back to the room, the mood can not be calm for a long time. In order to study, I changed my mother's normal life, yet she had no complaints.
I suddenly thought, the surface of the empty room outside the door but note full of mother's silent care and love.
At the end of the year, all the families are in the New Year's shopping, I put down my pen, open the door, let the pot of boiling oil sound into the ears. It's very strange, very chaotic; but also very familiar, very warm. My life is no longer boring and difficult. I have the best love, as if I had the whole world.
Analysis
This is a proposition essay, the title is "I have so much".
① "I had" means to discover the real situation;
② "also" can be interpreted as "likewise". These two adverbs imply the following: In the past, I did not realize that I had it, and therefore envied others; after experiencing something specific, I suddenly realized that I had it as well.
③ "I" is a personification qualification, must be in the first person; at the same time, it limits the narrative events belong to the individual behavior is not the same as the group "we".
④ "so much" can be expressed both degree, emphasizing the discovery of their own original also has the emotional after; can also be the number of restrictions, the main body of the example can not be too single, to use a wealth of material to highlight the meaning of the text. From the selection of material intention, this topic is very easy to pile up the problem of material selection: family, friendship, teachers and students, the material lack of novelty. Can be selected from the perspective of personal growth, it is easier to reflect the true style of writing, in the intention is also easy to write a profound. From the point of view of genre selection, this article is suitable for writing narrative essays, or narrative-based essays. Choose to meet the theme of the material, write their own life experience or feelings, to express a positive and healthy thinking essay.
Point
The first thing you need to do is to examine the question accurately. To grasp the key words in the title to determine the scope and content of the article, can not be wrong interpretation of the meaning of the topic. Secondly, the intention should be profound. That is to determine a distinct, focused and profound theme for the essay and express positive thoughts. Thirdly, the selection of materials should be precise. To choose materials around the center, use those materials that you are familiar with the composition, in order to write a true feeling or a thorough and powerful argument. When writing, according to the characteristics and requirements of the topic, to highlight the key words in the topic.
Fifth
Title
Read the following material, according to the requirements of the composition.
Life is like climbing a mountain, perhaps because we care too much about getting to the top of the mountain, we often do not carefully choose the path to set off in a hurry. So, some people step on the road, some people into the path, some people run to the shortcut, some people into the dangerous way. Some paths are flat and smooth, bringing you stability or mediocrity; some paths are rugged and dangerous, bringing you splendor or harm. If you choose the right path, you will reach the top of the mountain; if you choose the wrong path, even if you reach the top of the mountain, you will be hurt all over. The only thing that determines the state of your life is not the top of the mountain, but the road you choose to take to the top of the mountain.
Please write an essay based on your understanding and thinking of the above text.
Requirements: based on the material of the overall semantic intention, self-titled, not less than 600 words. If a real name or school name appears in the text, please replace it with a pseudonym.
范文
Difficult Choices
Yesterday, Mr. Tong accompanied us to play a merciless little game, this game is small, but it made our whole class weep and sob. Let me tell you about this matter.
The third class, the child teacher let us take out a piece of paper, write the name of their favorite five people on the paper, I do not hesitate to write on the paper correctly: father, mother, grandmother, teachers and friends of these five people. Unexpectedly, Mr. Tong would say, "A disaster is coming, but your ability is limited, you can only save four people, which one will you cross out?" The words just fell, the students have discussed, everyone is very torn, these five people are the world's favorite, no matter which one to abandon, we are all very reluctant. After careful consideration, I crossed out my grandmother. At the moment, my heart is very bad taste, although my grandmother lives in Beijing for many years, and seldom come back to visit us, but, after all, my grandmother is also my relatives, give me warmth and care.
But then Mr. Tong said, "Another disaster is coming, and you have to cross out another one." My eyes were moist, trembling hand picked up the pen, but delayed to pen, because I realized that every loss of a favorite loved one, my life will lose a share of joy and warmth, attacked the pain of the heart like a knife. However, the disaster was merciless, taking away my laughter again and again. In order to end this disaster sooner, I endured the pain and crossed my friends.
I thought the disaster was completely over, but God arranged the disaster again, which means I will lose a favorite person again, and face the pain of another parting of life and death. At this moment, my tears came out of my eyes and became broken beads, and the pen in my hand became a sharp, sharp knife, and if I was not careful, another person would be far away from me. Time was running out and I stabbed this sharp knife at my teacher. Teacher goodbye, thank you for years of care for me, give me knowledge, put me from a weak sapling, raised to a branching tree, I am grateful for a lifetime!
The disaster came again like a cannon bomb, and I was sobbing, as if I had fallen into a big black hole and could not climb out anymore. This time, the disaster turned into a rough sea, rolled away dad, rolled away my support, rolled away my courage ...... Now, I am only left with endless fear, fear that my last only will also be taken away, what should I do.
God! My mom, my one and only, was finally taken away by disaster. Now, my world has been completely devoid of color, and this loss of my mom has also taken away my life and my smile. No more, joy and happiness are all gone. Dad, mom, grandma, teachers, friends, you go only left me endless thoughts and grief, I just want to go back to the past, live with you!
I must cherish everything, cherish the time with my favorite people, cherish every second of happiness now! If I miss it, I will really have nothing ......
Ans
This is a material composition question. The key sentences should be grasped. Key sentences often have the role of implying the center of the material. So you can take the key phrases in the material as a breakthrough in choosing the angle of the idea. Carefully read the material is not difficult to find the key sentence is "to determine the state of life is not the top of the mountain, but you choose to go to the top of the road," therefore, we can refine the central meaning: the importance of choice, the role of choice on the growth of the choice of the significance of life.
Life is faced with many choices, some of which are superficially simple choices, some of which are choices of the heart. This essay, if you want to be profound, you must write about the choice of the heart. "Choice" is a kind of trade-offs, the choice at the same time means the abandonment of another kind of thing, is a reflection of the values. Such as "choose honesty", that means the abandonment of lies; "choose strong", that means the abandonment of cowardice. Can be conceived according to the following ideas: the first paragraph to point out their own past from a choice to gain insights and gains, leading to the following memories of the past, and set the tone of feelings; the text of the write-up, you can recount one of their own in the road to see a grandmother fell down, in the help and do not help, he made the right choice, took the initiative to help up the old granny's events; the end of the text is to sublimate the theme of the argument or lyric, summing up At the end of the text, the theme is sublimated by argument or lyricism, summarizing the whole text and echoing with the title or the beginning of the text. The process of choice is the process of psychological change, pay attention to the portrayal of psychological activities to be wonderful.