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Imagine a composition.
Imaginative composition gives students a broader thinking space and is a form of composition that students are more interested in. In their view, imaginative compositions are easy to write. Indeed, it is not difficult to complete an imaginary composition; However, it is difficult to write a good imaginary composition. In view of the present situation of students' composition, how to guide students to write imaginary compositions?
First, life is the basis of imaginative composition.
When writing, students often feel that there is no suitable material to write, or they don't know where to imagine. In fact, it is not that there is no composition material in life, but that students lack the ability to capture composition material. Even the material is limited, so it is hard to imagine. Therefore, it is very important to cultivate students' ability to observe life and form the habit of observing things around them.
How to guide students to observe?
1. Observe the surrounding things and capture typical materials. Students' eyes are often confined to a small circle and feel that there is nothing to write about some common little things. In fact, ordinary little things can also write new ideas. Teachers should choose the best observation object, arrange a reasonable observation order and guide students to observe carefully.
2. Use a variety of senses to enrich writing materials. Psychology believes that observation is the perception of thinking, and observation without thinking is superficial, not real observation. Observation is not only to see, but also to use the senses such as ears, mouth, nose, hands and brain to perceive or judge, so as to obtain a true, comprehensive and profound impression and provide rich materials for composition.
3. Fill in the observation record and form the observation habit. Observation should not be just a routine before writing. As a Chinese teacher, in addition to guiding the order and methods of observation, students should also be guided to fill in the observation records. A better way is to communicate once a week and select the "best observer" in the class to improve students' interest in observation and develop the habit of paying attention to observation.
Second, the imagination should be reasonably rich.
Take The Little Match Girl as an example. The strange sight that the little girl saw when she struck a match five times was the author's imagination. These imaginations are strange and bold, but readers still feel reasonable. Why? Because the author witnessed the tragic experience of poor children with his own eyes and deeply understood their inner needs. In the article, imagination is similar to reality, that is, poor children's desire for a happy life. It is natural and reasonable for the author to imagine that the little girl saw a warm stove, a delicious roast goose, a beautiful Christmas tree and a kind grandmother when she was unconscious, and flew away with her grandmother.
So, how to guide students to make their imagination reasonable and rich?
1. Reproduce. An imaginary composition, which focuses on writing landscapes or narratives, can search the impression of related things in your mind and reproduce it.
2. transplantation. Sometimes imagination can be grafted and transplanted, moving beautiful scenery to a place, or combining interesting phenomena into one thing, or condensing beautiful qualities into a person. That is to say, students can transplant their imagination according to their specific image and the reality of life. Only by being good at linking imagination with facts in real life and skillfully designing the relationship between characters can the article be vivid and interesting.
3. fantasy. Fantasy is bolder imagination. /kloc-the fairy tales of Andersen, a famous Danish writer in the 0 th and 9 th centuries, are full of fantasies. In his works, flowers, birds, insects, fish, furniture, toys and even walls all have life and give people feelings. Pupils are full of illusions about the unknown world and the future world. Teachers should encourage students to fantasize. For the unknown world and the future world, students' imagination can be unrestrained, because any restrictions are superfluous.
In a word, imagination comes from life. Students can write whatever they want, so let them write. This is also in line with the requirements of the "new outline".
Third, imagination should be innovative.
Wen GUI Yu Xin Imaginary composition also needs imaginative novelty. Imagination is a creative thinking activity. Even if it is reproduced, it is impossible for students to 100% copy their lives. There must be change and choice. Change and choice are students' creations. Teachers should try to guide students to diversify their imagination on the basis of reasonable imagination.
As a teacher, we should strive to broaden students' thinking space, stimulate students' desire for creative activities, make students' thinking alive and spread their imagination wings. But it should be noted that the requirements for students at different levels should be different. As long as the imagination is reasonable, it can be novel or plain. For example, the composition of "Basic Training 6" in Volume 10 of "Light Rain" requires imaginative composition around a new shirt. There are articles to do in the proposition, or the topic of "the storm of shirts" or "the story of new shirts" can stimulate students' imagination well. In particular, the latter topic is anthropomorphic, which can arouse students' imagination interest.
Students of different ages and genders can lead to the diversification of imagination. When imagining a shirt in trouble, the boy's imagination is often: when playing ball, the new shirt is lost or replaced by mistake, and then it is found back; Or accidentally burn a hole in your new shirt while playing with fire. Girls imagine that the new shirt is dirty and can't be washed away; Or accidentally hang up, just embroider a small flower and sew a decorative pocket in the stained or damaged place. Obviously, boys and girls show great differences in imagination and are very creative.
The diversity of imagination conforms to the objective reality of life, which is convenient for students to truly express their inner feelings and cultivate their innovative ability. Teachers should give more guidance and less restrictions, and insist on examining the composition with children's eyes. One day, I was playing the first movement of Mozart's Horn Concerto No.1 on the loudspeaker. Suddenly, I found myself sitting on a cloud, and the cloud began to rise rapidly, which scared me to death. But after a while, the cloud began to rise slowly again until it reached a large cloud. I got off this cloud and walked forward. Suddenly I heard someone calling me from behind. I looked back and saw a king wearing a golden crown. It turns out that he has turned into a cloud to meet me! He took me to a city, and the sight in front of me made me dumbfounded!
It turns out that everything in front of us is made of horns! The king took me to the largest French horn, and he read, "French horn, open the door!" " "bang! Bang! Mao! The French horn broke in half in the middle, and I went in with the king. The king told me that this city is called "French horn city", and this is his palace, which was built with French horn. Indeed, the TV frame inside is in the shape of a horn, and the sofa is also made of a horn, but it is not as hard as a real horn, but it is both soft and comfortable. The plate is also made of a horn mouth, and there are horn-shaped sweets in it: hard candy and soft candy, which are used for licking. The king told me that this kind of candy can still blow bubbles after licking, which I think is very interesting. After the visit, the king took me to the second floor. He took out a nice big box. In this big box, there is an instrument similar to the rainbow horn, but there are two unknown keys besides the original four keys of the horn. The king told me that the first key is to let you enjoy music, and the second key is if you are sick, press this key and blow your illness again. Knowing the function, the king will give me this magical instrument. I am very happy! After the king sent me away, I walked and said, "Great!" "What's the big deal? Your boy is daydreaming again! "I heard my mother's voice. When I woke up, I found that I had a dream.
I wish there were such magical instruments in the future world.
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One day, I was playing the first movement of Mozart's Horn Concerto No.1 on the loudspeaker. Suddenly, I found myself sitting on a cloud, and the cloud began to rise rapidly, which scared me to death. But after a while, the cloud began to rise slowly again until it reached a large cloud. I got off this cloud and walked forward. Suddenly I heard someone calling me from behind. I looked back and saw a king wearing a golden crown. It turns out that he has turned into a cloud to meet me! He took me to a city, and the sight in front of me made me dumbfounded! I see all the houses are horns.
The king took me to the largest French horn, and he read, "French horn, open the door!" " "bang! Bang! Mao! The French horn broke in half in the middle, and I went in with the king. The king told me that this city is called "French horn city", and this is his palace, which was built with French horn. Indeed, the TV frame inside is in the shape of a horn, and the sofa is also made of a horn, but it is not as hard as a real horn, but it is both soft and comfortable. The plate is also made of a horn mouth, and there are horn-shaped sweets in it: hard candy and soft candy, which are used for licking. The king told me that this kind of candy can still blow bubbles after licking, which I think is very interesting. After the visit, the king took me to the second floor. He took out a nice big box. In this big box, there is an instrument similar to the rainbow horn, but there are two unknown keys besides the original four keys of the horn. The king told me that the first key is to let you enjoy music, and the second key is if you are sick, press this key and blow your illness again. Knowing the function, the king will give me this magical instrument. I am very happy! After the king sent me away, I walked and said, "Great! "After I went back, I used it to help many people, and I became an excellent doctor. I hope everyone has such a magical instrument! I hope you don't get sick! A writer once said: "A person who can recall, associate and imagine is a person who can get pregnant. "Therefore, writing a good imaginary composition will improve students' imagination, lay a foundation for students to engage in creative work in the future, and is also of great benefit to improving their writing ability.
Imagination is drawing new things in your mind. The Journey to the West was invented by the author Wu Cheng'en according to the story of Xuanzang's learning from the scriptures in the Tang Dynasty. In his book, he created four characters, the Monkey King, Pig Eight Rings, Friar Sand and Tang Priest, as well as the thrilling and bizarre "81 Difficulties". So, how can we write an imaginary composition?
First, think boldly.
When writing an imaginary composition, you must spread your imagination wings and imagine boldly. For example, in the article "Magic Brush Ma Liang", the author boldly imagines that Ma Liang wants the poor to paint and touch the gods. So he got the magic pen, and he got whatever he drew. He used this magic pen to seek happiness for the poor and punish corrupt officials. As a primary school student, we should also dare to imagine, use our pure childlike innocence, use the pen in our hands to imagine the future and paint a brilliant tomorrow.
Second, imagination should be reasonable.
Imagination is based on life, so when writing an imaginary composition, we must proceed from real life and develop a reasonable imagination. That kind of unrealistic fantasy is not desirable. For example, according to the dark reality that corrupt officials were rampant and the people were suffering at that time, the author of "Magic Pen Ma Liang" launched a reasonable imagination, asking the gods to help Ma Liang punish corrupt officials and let the people live a happy and stable life. Although his imagination is magical, it conforms to the reality of that society at that time and expresses the same wishes of kind people.
Secondly, imagination should be restrained and centered. People's imagination is infinite, but we can't entertain foolish ideas. Imagination should focus on the ideas to be expressed and serve the central idea of the article. No matter how wonderful we write about the future society, it is to show people an ideal and express a strong desire.
Third, imagination should be concrete.
Imaginative composition should be concrete in content and avoid empty talk. If you want to imagine the future, you must describe in detail the new things outlined in your mind; If you want to imagine what you are doing in the future, you should describe your words and deeds in detail. In short, it is necessary to have substance in words and let the facts speak for themselves.
Fourthly, we should express our true feelings.
Imaginative composition is my fantasy for the future, full of my love and yearning for a better life. Therefore, when writing an imaginary composition, you should also express your true feelings while describing the future.
Imaginative composition can be divided into two categories: one is to write your own thoughts, pursuits, wishes and dreams, often combined with science fiction. The other is fairy tales, which use "personification" to imagine all kinds of animals, plants and objects as "people" and tell readers some truth through interesting stories.
To write an imaginary article, we should do the following:
First, observe life and show it. Imagination is not fantasy, it should conform to the reality of life. Only by being familiar with life and observing it carefully can we have imaginative materials.
Second, define the center and expand the imagination. Before writing a fairy tale fictional article, we must first make clear the center, that is, the purpose of writing. For example, explaining the dangers of complacency is precisely explaining the benefits of mutual assistance. Then we should observe various phenomena about the performance center, observe the habits, living environment and inherent characteristics of animals and plants, and develop rich imagination to write stories on this basis. If you can draw these characters so vividly, you must have made great efforts in this respect.
Third, imagine beautiful and profound ideas. Imaginative writing must have a "beautiful" central idea. If you just make up a vivid and bizarre story, you lose the meaning of imagination. Writing imaginary articles can stimulate pupils' imagination and use their brains.
Landing on the moon
Ma Xiaohong, Class 7, Grade 2, Zhangzhuang Middle School, Gongan County, Hubei Province
It's time for friends to get together again, so I came to our old place-Lin. The forest and grass garden is actually a miscellaneous forest full of flowers and plants. The area is not large, but it is particularly deep and quiet where we rarely see a few trees, so it has become a paradise for children to "explore".
After a long time, none of my friends came. What's going on here? I was going to look for them, but when I turned around, they actually "didn't find" and "Liu Mei, why are you here?" I asked loudly. But they walked past me as if they didn't hear me. I'm even more surprised Did I suddenly hear a voice in my ear saying, "Don't be afraid, we are aliens, and we want you to accompany us to the moon?" I was startled, but when I looked around, I didn't see anyone. The voice added, "You can't see us-but if you look up, you can see our spaceship." I looked up and saw a big disc with orange light flying over my head. ...
"Help-",just when I was so scared that I almost cried out, the strange voice rang in my ear again: "We have reached the moon. Now everyone has twenty minutes of free time. " I tried to take a big step forward, crossing more than four meters at once; I tried my best to jump up again, and my body floated five or six meters high like a hero in martial arts TV, swinging in the air. I just remembered: the gravity on the moon is only one-sixth of that on the earth, so it is no wonder that I am walking like running water at the moment; By the way, let's take a quick look at that beautiful crater. But a closer look shows only some mixed footprints and a lot of rubbish. "It's strange, isn't it?" The familiar voice rang again, "One hundred years ago, the moon was still a pure and beautiful planet; But now-you see, trampling and garbage pollution ... you earthlings have not only destroyed your homes, but also brought disasters into space and spread to the moon? "
"What you said is quite right. But, "I can't help saying," not everyone on earth is like you said. In our country, many people of insight put forward to control pollution ... ""So, that's why we want to invite you to the moon. " The alien said, "Please remember: excessive environmental pollution is equivalent to chronic collective suicide." Ok, time is up, you go back! "
I also want to say something, suddenly shine at the moment, hey, isn't this Liu Mei they are coming towards me? "Where have you been just now? Have we been looking for it for a long time? " Liu Mei asked me. I said with a wry smile, "Liu Mei, have you been to the moon?"
"No-have you been there?" She patted me on the shoulder.
"So, do you know that human pollution has involved the moon?" I asked again.
"yes! Don't worry so much, go and play! " Liu Mei said.
Looking at the scattered backs of my friends and thinking about what happened just now, I gave a wry smile-am I worrying too much?
[Brief Comment] This is a classic science fiction novel. From landing on the moon to returning to the earth, it is full of strong science fiction flavor, but what you saw and heard on the moon involves a serious topic in real life. Protecting the environment and controlling pollution are really no longer alarmist.
Third, the types of imaginative composition that middle and senior students will come into contact with in primary school.
1) Use imagination and childlike interest to write fairy tales. For example, take advantage of primary school students' love for animals and express their emotions as animals. Or praise a certain sentiment or virtue, such as praise for excellent qualities such as diligence, honesty and helping others; On the contrary, we can also criticize lazy, greedy, lying and other bad qualities. With the material, you can write a good fairy tale with clever plot and wonderful sentences.
Of course, you can also arrange characters into other things and give them thoughts, words and behaviors at the same time. For example, the article "Little Mole's Leather Shoes Car" has the following fragments: Little Mole squeaked at home, felt bored, and there was no wonderful TV program, so Little Mole went to play in the mountains. It saw a broken leather shoe thrown on the mountain. It thought, "I want to turn it into an old car. It must be great!" " "... (omitted) A beautiful old car was replaced! The car started, beeping ... the little frog was crying sadly by the pond. When he saw the leather shoes cart, he said to Jiale, "Jiale, my leg is broken, but I'm going to participate in the forest music singing competition today. Can you take me? Jiale said, "Yes, Mr. Frog, please get on the bus!" " Jiale helped the little frog get on the bus. The above short fragment vividly shows us the spirit of the little mole to help others, and also vividly shows the anxiety and pain of the little frog when he is injured.
2) Write a science fiction composition with sufficient scientific knowledge and rich scientific interest. This kind of composition is more difficult to write, because it requires young authors to have enough scientific knowledge, be interested in a scientific phenomenon at the same time, and write with their own imagination, which will make the article better reflect the high-tech level of the future world. For example, you can choose topics such as new inhabitants on the moon, Mars exploration, space roaming, UFO exploration and so on. But such an article should not be imagined out of thin air, only ideas, no material, so it is not only poorly written, but also deviates from the theme.
3) Write an imaginary composition about future real life by combining real life with your own imagination. This kind of imaginary composition is often encountered in the fifth and sixth grades at present, and it is also a kind of imaginary composition that is relatively easy to write. This kind of composition is mainly based on realistic materials for reference, so it is easier to write. For example, when we meet after 20 years, we can imagine the future campus with reference to the present study and living environment, and we can also imagine what they will look like after 20 years by observing the classmates and teachers around us, and even imagine what we will look like now after 20 years. Then design an ideal storyline to bring different people together on the appointed day. How have students and teachers changed on this day? It should also be reflected in the text. The requirements of this kind of composition are bold imagination, rationality, truthfulness and conception. For example, the following topics are all based on reality: League A on the moon, me in 20 years, class reunion in 2030, future musicians, cloned fathers, teachers getting younger, grandchildren of the same age, dream hotels and so on.
Excerpt composition: I am 20 years later-Zhejiang Yin
On 2021March 10, the "Kuaibule" restaurant which I planned to invest and operate officially opened. Speaking of my "fast" restaurant, there is still a lot to learn! My restaurant pays attention to all aspects. The food sold in restaurants has high nutritional value and delicious taste. In the past, all the dishes we ate contained hormones, pesticides and other substances harmful to the human body, but my restaurant was full of pollution-free food, so people could safely eat it. I will not only keep these dishes fresh, but also keep their "appearance" unchanged. The "Kuaibu" restaurant also has a major feature-robot service. These robots are carefully made by me. They have different shapes and different functions. They are no less than those real waiters. They will entertain guests, clean up, sing and dance to entertain customers. My restaurant is divided into three areas, which are fully equipped: there are all kinds of toys that children like in the children's area; There are many fitness equipment in the youth area; There are reading rooms and chess rooms in the elderly area. Oh, I forgot to tell you: "Kuaibule" restaurant provides fast food, which can be eaten immediately; High efficiency, can receive thousands of people a day, and is favored by customers. In addition, I plan to open chain stores in various countries and regions.
You are welcome to visit my restaurant in 20 years. We will warmly welcome you and make sure you eat comfortably and have a good time.
The above imaginary components are just a few that are often encountered at present. But no matter what kind of imaginary composition you write, you should proceed from reality and accumulate materials. For primary school students, you should carefully observe life, observe the people and things around you, often practice writing imaginary compositions, and use imaginary compositions to give full play to your rich inner world. Teachers believe that only children who are good at observing and practicing pens can write vivid and bold imaginative compositions.
Fourth grade sports training:
Choose the following set of things, imagine boldly and make up a story.
1, streams, rivers and oceans
2. Ant eggshell frog
3, pencil eraser Pencil Sharpener
You can do anything if you are ambitious.
Jacky
Once upon a time, there was a family with a daughter who was very clever and hardworking, but her mother was in bed for many years. Because my mother has a disease, the local doctors don't know what it is.
One day, my daughter dreamed that a fairy said to her, "son, your mother's illness is not incurable." As long as you have ambition, you can cure it. " There is a place where water is colorful. Just let your mother take a sip of colorful water to control the water, and your mother will be fine. "
The next day, he went to the stream first, but the water in the pool was clear and colorless. She waded through mountains and rivers again and came to the river on the edge of Leshan cliff. There is still no colored water there. She is desperate. Where is the five-color water? Is it a dream? No, it's not. As long as I have ambition, I will find it! She started a more difficult journey, and this time the road was even more difficult. She bypassed the mountains and waded across the river, but there was no colorful water in front of her. In this way, she is full of hope. She has reached the seaside, but she hasn't seen the colorful sea water yet. She can't walk at night now and fell asleep on the beach ... when she woke up, she found that the sea around her had become a "colorful pool"! It's not that the sea has changed, it's actually the colorful pool on Kunlun Mountain in the west. Passing 18-wheeler, she quickly went over and filled a bowl full, holding colorful water carefully, and happily returned to her hometown.
Mother drank the water that symbolizes hope that night, and she can really walk. Needless to say, Shenshui is really effective.
Not because God cares for mother and daughter, but because her daughter has such a strong ambition, how can she not be moved by God? If we are ambitious, why should we worry about climbing mountains and wading? Because there is a good saying: "If you are not afraid of the long road, you are afraid of short ambition." There is another saying: "If you have ambition, you can do anything."
Xiaomayi moving
Wu Yu
"Oh, oh, fun!" In spring, the little ants happily throw themselves into the embrace of nature, singing and dancing. Everything is wonderful.
Go, go, "Hey? An egg? I must give him to the hen at once! But ... yes, get out! " Alas, the little ant is too careless. "Pa-"The eggshell cracked. "Ji, Ji, Ji ... you must help me find my mother, right? Don't worry, I will go home safely! " The chicken was surprised that a newborn chicken could talk. "Forget it, here, in order to reward you, I give you my baby-flying eggshells!" In an instant, the eggshell that gave birth to the chicken turned into a beautiful "ant car". "You just tell it where you are going, and it's ok." "Wow-"God chicken is gone. This is another voice: "Remember, there are only three chances, and then you will lose your magic …" "I met a fairy! With the' ant car', I am not afraid of anything! Ha ha ha ... "
The setting sun gradually washed away the dust. The little ant who originally wanted to go home now wants to go to Beijing, Hainan and space. These dreams have all come true. After having fun, I remembered my home again. "Go home!" As soon as these two words were exported, they fell to Ogawa-CHO. The frog slept soundly. Suddenly, a sudden noise woke him up. The frog saw it and said happily, "I was worried that there was no supper, but I didn't expect …" The frog ate the ant in one bite. When ants enter the tiger's mouth, they say, "People should not be lazy, and ants should not be greedy!" "
be sure of oneself
Guo Yanbo
"alas! I am really useless! " The pencil sighed again. It turned out that his little master Xiao Ming had mechanical pencil, so he left it aside.
When his good friends Eraser and Pencil Sharpener heard this, they advised the pencil to say, "Friend, don't feel inferior. You are better than mechanical pencil in some places! " "Hum, no, I am easy to break, mechanical pencil is not easy; I went bald after using it for a while. Mechanical pencil is very durable. I can't accept the' core', and it's easy to get the eraser in the pencil box dirty. Mechanical pencil won't. You say, what's the use of me? " Pencil said, and the tone is lower. Hearing this, the eraser and pencil sharpener were speechless and had to go.
Once, when Xiao Ming was doing his homework, he found that mechanical pencil had no core, so he took out a pencil to use. Only then did the pencil find itself useful and valuable. Everything in the world has its advantages and disadvantages. You shouldn't feel inferior because you are backward. To be a man, you must be a man of backbone!