So how can we make the center stand out?
First of all, the viewpoint is single and the center is clear.
First of all, we should do a good job in examining questions, clarify our thinking and finally determine a center from multiple angles. The center of some topics in the examination composition is relatively clear; Some topics are deliberately off topic, metaphorical, profound and implicit, showing several different centers. This requires candidates to carefully analyze the topic and grasp the deep meaning of the topic. Even if the article has a variety of angles and ideas, once it is implemented on specific topics, it must form its own writing center. Otherwise, "the meaning is too messy." Remember, you can't have your cake and eat it. The main idea of narrative should not be too broad; Arguments in argumentative essays should always remain the same. The whole article should stick to a central point to prevent deviation from the meaning of the topic.
However, some students do have multiple centers in an article. This paragraph is about this principle, but the next paragraph is the next paragraph. For example, in 2005, a candidate in Henan wrote an essay entitled "Let Go". The first paragraph says to be calm in the face of reality, the second paragraph says not to pretend, the third paragraph says that Madame Curie has made achievements to share with others, the fourth paragraph says that a foreign child learned to use chopsticks with perseverance, the fifth paragraph says to be modest and enterprising, and the last paragraph concludes that he should relax himself. Anxiety and depression, East and West. Another example is the composition "The answer is colorful" in the 2000 college entrance examination. An Anhui examinee put forward the argument that "the answers are colorful" at the beginning, but the examples listed later showed that "there is always only one true correct answer". It says here that "everyone has everyone's ideas". What the author thinks is elusive.
Therefore, when establishing an opinion, you must be single. After the establishment of the center, the composition outline must be listed. Having an outline is like building a house with a sketch, which helps the author to grasp the overall situation and avoid putting the cart before the horse. This can improve the writing quality and speed up the writing.
Secondly, carefully select materials and stick to the center.
All the materials closely related to the central idea and outstanding and powerful in expressing the central idea are selected in the exercise, otherwise they are discarded. After selecting materials, choose the most innovative materials. For example, in 2006, Zhejiang wrote a perfect composition "Drunk Hometown", which was very atmospheric. The author first points out the truth that everything in the world is empty with a four-line poem, and then points out the word drunk hometown with a set of neat sentence patterns, which leads to the full text. In the body part, the author takes Li Bai, Zhang and others as examples. As an example, we should not get lost in ups and downs. At the end of the two paragraphs, with poetic language and beautiful artistic conception, the author once again emphasizes the need to exile his own soul and find the happiest and most natural hometown where he can lead a drunken life. Starting with Vanity Fair, the author leads to the topic of "getting drunk", which is closely related to life, interest and other topics. The listed characters Li Bai and Zhang and the ethereal situation they created all highlight the theme of "drunkenness". Carefully select materials, stick to the main idea, and make the article center stand out.
However, if the selected materials can't be closely related to the topic, even if they are fresh and vivid, they should "reluctantly give up what one favours". For example, there was a 37-point article in Hunan College Entrance Examination in 2006. In the second paragraph of the article, I quoted a famous sentence about the deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others. Although the materials are vivid, they are far from "spirit". The deeds of Zhou Wenwang and others mainly show people's will to fight tenaciously in adversity. "Will" and "spirit" are not the same thing.
After the selection, not only record the material, but also analyze how the material represents the center. Only in this way can the selected materials truly serve the center.
In addition, skillfully use techniques to highlight the center.
Be good at pointing out the center, which is more important in the composition of the examination room. There are many ways to ask questions:
From the perspective of expression, there are lyric themes, discussion themes, narrative themes and description themes. Ru Zhijuan's "Lily" concluded: "In the moonlight, I saw her eyes glittering and translucent, and I also saw a quilt with white lilies on the bordeaux background, symbolizing purity and emotion, covering the face of this ordinary young man dragging bamboo." This poetic description pushes the work to a higher artistic level: Lily, a pure and emotional flower, reflects the noble soul of the protagonist with his body and will remain in the reader's heart forever. In 2005, at the end of the essay "Smoke flies with the wind, fame flows with history", "It is our blessing to dissolve the moon, touch the wind, forget what should be forgotten, and leave what should be left. Let the past go with the wind, watch the clouds roll and relax, smell the fragrance of plum blossoms floating in Wan Li, and remember the elegance of flowers. " The description is fluent and natural, like flowing water, and points out the theme of "forget what should be forgotten and leave what should be left behind"
Rhetorically, there are repeated questions, rhetorical questions, arranged questions, quoted questions and figurative questions. Wei Wei's "Who is the cutest person" begins: "Who is our cutest person? Our soldiers, I think they are the cutest people. " Ask questions directly and lead to the description of typical cases. In 2006, there was a sentence "Please save the symbol of Beijing" in the perfect composition "Symbol of Beijing" written by the examinee of Beijing Volume One. These three sentences are placed at the beginning, one at the end and one at the end. These three sentences are repeatedly pointed out and reflected, which not only highlights the main idea of the article, but also sorts out the structure and renders the feelings.
From the position of the topic, you can put the topic in the topic, at the beginning and at the end. We know that the marking speed of college entrance examination composition is very fast. If you bury the main idea of the article in the text, the marking teacher will not probe it carefully with tools like an engineer sweeping the floor, and will not help you summarize it. Therefore, the center of the composition in the examination room should be prominent. For example, in 2006, the perfect composition "Let Life Walk with Health" in Zhejiang College Entrance Examination began: "Life is an irreversible journey. In this journey, only constant pursuit, unremitting efforts and unremitting struggle can create the value of life. Confucius said,' Life is endless.' It clarifies the basic attitude of life and inspires people to forge ahead towards the goal of life. "The author cherishes ink like gold, comes straight to the point, sticks to the theme, and expounds the great significance of" being born boring ". The topic is fast, clean and unscrupulous.
There is no definite method for writing. Naturally, there are many ways to make the center of the article stand out. I hope the above words will help you a little!
The Role of Landscape Description in Narration
The text of junior high school is mainly narrative, and narrative can not be separated from description. Students can't understand this expression well, and often confuse the content and function of the description. Now, according to some junior high school texts, I will talk about my personal role in scenery description.
Scenery description is mainly to show the environment of the characters' activities, so that readers can be there. Preliminary analysis mainly has the following functions.
First, explain the time and place of the story and reveal the background of the work.
For example, the description of the hotel pattern in Luzhen at the beginning of "Kong Ji Ji" "The hotel pattern in Luzhen is different from other places: it is a big counter on the street with hot water, which can warm wine at any time. People who go to work get off work in the afternoon and evening and often spend four pence to buy a bowl of wine. " Explain the social background and specific humanistic characteristics at that time.
Another example is the fifth paragraph in "Once Met". "Outside, it was twisted by the autumn wind like a drizzle, flying in all directions. The store is as cold as a cellar, and cold air comes up from the trouser legs. " It explains the time when the story happened and the natural environment at that time, and also implies the social environment at that time.
The second is to render the atmosphere and contrast the emotions of the characters.
The opening part of "Pear Blossom in the Post Road" is "Mountains, big mountains, rolling green hills, one after another, extending into the distance and disappearing into the confused twilight." This sentence says that mountains are big, and the same characters reflect the anxiety of the characters at that time.
Another example is the sixth paragraph of the text, "A crescent moon has risen, and we are walking in the swaying pear tree forest with the help of the faint moonlight. The night wind in the mountains makes people's faces cool, and the white petals of pear flowers gently fall on us. " The beautiful scenery sets off the cheerful and relaxed mood of the characters.
Third, show your character.
For example, the description of the hut in Pear Blossom on the Post Road: ① "On the white wooden door, two words are written in black charcoal:' Please come in'"
(2) "The ashes in the fireplace are cold. Obviously, no one has lived in it for many days. A simple bamboo bed covered with thick straw. The big bamboo tube against the wall is full of water. "
(3) "There are a few lines of rough words written on the wall:' There is dry wood behind the house, and there are rice, salt and pepper in the bamboo tube on the beam.' "This reflects the host's enthusiasm, hospitality and careful personality.
Fourth, promote the development of the plot.
Under the scorching sun and heavy rain, the description of scenery in the scorching sun and the description of scenery in the heavy rain show the same tragic fate of Xiangzi in different natural environments, which promotes the development of the plot and highlights the theme of the story.
Fifth, borrow scenery to express emotion and blend scenes.
"All scene languages are love languages. Listening to the tide is silent in the sea. " At our feet, the waves gently kissed the rocks, like drowsiness. On the calm and dark sea, the moonlight opened a long, narrow and bright Ting Yun, shining and trembling like silver scales. The red light from the distant lighthouse is embedded in the dark space, like a ruby. It and the silver light of the sea reveal the mystery of the sea in front of us-it is not the terrible mystery of violent accidents, but the mystery of tranquility, peace and joy. Our feet seem to be relaxed, calm and wide, with joy and hope, walking on the silver road leading to Redjade's Qiongtai. "Show the author's praise for the quiet sea.