College English composition model essay: health is more important

When we watch TV series, there is always a similar plot. In order to realize their dreams, the protagonists give up the best time for treatment, even though they are seriously ill. It sounds inspiring. The spirit of pursuing dreams has touched so many audiences, but for me, apart from being touched, I feel sorry for the protagonist because of their unwise choice. Life is important. Only the living have the right to talk about dreams. If they lose their lives, nothing is possible. Therefore, health is more important than dreams. People need to stay healthy first, and then they can realize their dreams better. Smart people will choose to receive treatment and temporarily give up their dreams. When they recover, they will continue their dreams. So health comes first, and then other things come second.

When we watch TV series, we can always find the same story. In order to realize our ideals, the protagonists gave up their treatment time, even though they were terminally ill. This sounds inspiring and touched many viewers who are pursuing their ideals. But for me, apart from being moved, I also feel sorry for the protagonist because they made an unwise decision. Life is important. Only the living have the right to talk about ideals. If they lose their lives, everything will become impossible. Therefore, health is more important than ideal. People need to keep them healthy first, and then they can better realize their ideals. Wise people will choose treatment and give up their ideals for a while. When they recover, they can continue their ideals. Therefore, health comes first, and other things come second.