First, grasp the characteristics. Some students like studying, some students like helping others, some students like making small crafts, some students like eating snacks, and so on. This love of learning, helping others, making small crafts and eating snacks are the main characteristics of these people. Writing a person's composition is to grasp these characteristics and reflect what kind of person this person is, what kind of ideological quality he has and so on. The more accurate these features are, the more specific the examples will be, and the more impressive they will be to readers. For example, "Thank you, my good mother" is to grasp the mother's good and write out her good characteristics.
Second, choose a good example. When writing a person's article, you should also write examples, and express the characteristics of this person through one or several examples (it is best to write that a person has two or three things). When choosing cases, we should choose those that can impress, influence and infect people, that is, we should choose typical and novel cases. When writing, don't use the first situation you think, and don't use the second situation you think. The third or even the fourth or fifth situation you think of is generally attractive and impressive. This is because it is easy for you to think of it, and it is easy for others to think of it. Everyone writes such a thing in the composition, and the composition becomes a "staple food" that can't get high marks or praise from the teacher. The selected examples should fully show the character and quality of the characters. When you finish reading "Thank you, my good mother", you will be deeply impressed with "mother" and your composition will be successful.
Third, use description. If you want to write the characters vividly, you must use various description methods such as action, language, psychology, expression and portrait. The description should conform to the age, identity and occupation of the characters. The same thing, what a primary school student said is definitely different from what a university professor said.
Fourth, write the details. It is necessary to show the subtle movements of the characters and their changes concretely and vividly.
Fifth, make good use of contrast. Contrast is a common writing method in writing. You can compare your own characteristics, hobbies and specialties with others, that is, horizontal comparison; You can also compare how you compare yourself in a certain way now with how you compared yourself in a certain way before, that is, vertically. Through horizontal and vertical comparison, we can vividly show a person's ideological quality, mental outlook and main characteristics. Contrastive description is not suitable for forced improvisation, but suitable for contrastive writing, not suitable for contrastive writing.
Give you two compositions.
My mother is tall, neither fat nor thin, with a few shallow wrinkles on her forehead and a smile on her face.
My mother is kind. She taught me to be honest and generous from an early age and cultivated my good character from an early age.
I remember one thing, which I will never forget. It was a hot afternoon, and the sun scorched the earth like a big fireball. I sat in my room and kept fanning, but my sweat kept rolling down. I said to my mother, "Mom! It's hot, it's hot! I want to eat popsicles. " Mom said, "Come on, I'll take you to buy some popsicles." He picked up his wallet.
When I got to the place where I bought popsicles, I chose popsicles. My mother took out a whole ticket for 50 yuan from her purse and handed it to my uncle who bought popsicles. After my uncle found the money, my mother and I hurried home.
When I got home, my mother counted and said to herself, "Huh? No, a * * * is 7 yuan. How can I get back 45 yuan? " Hearing this, I said happily, "Great! People who buy popsicles are really confused. They are looking for more 3 yuan money. Mom, can I have 2 yuan? " My mother glared at me and said angrily, "send 2 yuan more back, you can't take advantage of small things!" " ! Besides, it is not easy for people to sell popsicles! "Say that finish, my mother braved the scorching sun and sent 3 yuan money to others.
When I sleep at night, I can't sleep in bed. When I think of the things during the day, I suddenly understand that a man should start from bit by bit, and can't do things that are sorry for others because of the small advantages in front of him. This incident gave me a great education. I love my mother and I admire her from the bottom of my heart.
My mother is thirty-four, and she doesn't look old. There are a pair of big watery eyes on the face of melon seeds. They are very tall, neither fat nor thin.
My mother loves me very much and pays more attention to my study. Some time ago, Galen's English teacher told us that there was a national English competition. I hope everyone can actively participate and show themselves. I signed up for the English song competition. After freshman year, my mother began to look for songs online. After locking the song, my mother taught herself to sing first, whining every day, and began to teach me after singing. The song my mother chose for me is the English version of Girl with Wings. At that time, it was in the final review stage, and the exam was coming soon. My mother spends an hour every day to help me practice singing and correct my pronunciation, so as not to delay my review. Many things happen. I successfully passed the preliminary competition of the Stadium Division and the rematch of Jinzhou City, and entered the final of Liaozhong Division. If Liaozhong Division can win, I can enter the national finals, which I have been looking forward to for a long time.
Mother is very filial to her parents. On one occasion, grandma was ill and admitted to the hospital with mild cerebral thrombosis. This really worried my mother. She takes care of her grandmother in the hospital every day, washes her face and helps her practice walking. Grandma comes home from the hospital, and my mother does housework, washing clothes, cooking and mopping the floor ... Every New Year's Day, my mother never forgets to buy some gifts for her grandparents. I want to follow my mother's example and be a good boy who respects my parents.
Every summer, my mother always says she is fat and only eats two meals a day. Do you know why she did it? Because she wants to lose weight and wear fashionable clothes to make herself more beautiful.
This is my mother, sometimes gentle, sometimes severe, sometimes lovely, I love my beautiful mother!
My mother is of medium height, fair-skinned, not very beautiful but dignified and generous, and wears clothes just like people, which are not fashionable but elegant. Mother has a bad personality and often loses her temper. Every coin has its two sides. Do you want to know? Mother is an ingenious person who can make many exquisite handicrafts. The wind chimes she made are very beautiful, in all shapes and colors. They hung in front of my window, very beautiful. Especially some small decorations under the wind chimes are very beautiful. Whenever the wind blows, they will sound sweet bells, which sound like wings and can fly far away.
I like my mother's handwriting, neat and clear; She is good at typing with five strokes on the computer. Only urr saw ten fingers flying up and down on the keyboard, which dazzled you. With just a few clicks, a long line of words appears on the computer screen. Mother likes singing and sings very well. I can hum the songs she can sing, but I don't like listening to songs and I don't want to sing.
Mom is also good at conditioning in family life. Her steamed bread is round and white and has a special fragrance. They are delicious. I have a healthy body, and I can't do without those delicious steamed buns. Mom's cooking is more delicious. I like her snacks best, such as fried cabbage, mutton kebabs, steamed stuffed buns and mushrooms, which are much more delicious than those sold on the road. I don't have enough to eat. Mom is a very serious and careful person. When she takes something seriously, her eyes are so wide that she won't stop until there is no result. She is more careful when typing on the computer. No matter how wonderful any sound or program appears on TV, she seems to have never heard or seen it. Mom also has many shortcomings. Usually I dare not say that writing a composition today is a good opportunity. My mother has a bad temper and is always angry for no reason. When she speaks, she often raises her voice by an octave, which scares me. Then the air in the whole room seems to be cold, so I naturally have no good fruit to eat. I think it would be better if she didn't lose her temper. At least I won't be treated as a punching bag. What's more, sometimes my mother doesn't keep her word. For example, I once agreed to take me to Tianqi Temple on Sunday afternoon. I was very happy and prepared early, but she didn't take me because she didn't get enough sleep in the afternoon. I was really disappointed. Also, my mother always compares my shortcomings with the advantages of others, which is what I hate most. I really hope my mother can get rid of these bad habits and make our family full of joy forever. This is my mother, a respectable, lovely person with personality, but people can't understand her temper.
I love my mother, forever, forever.
My mother often wears colorful clothes, long hair, round eyes, a flat nose and a smile on her mouth. She looks very gentle. Mom is busy from morning till night. She gets up early every day. How can I get bread and powder when I get up? How tired she is!
My mother is very enthusiastic. Every time she takes her classmates home, she will be hospitable. The students all say that my mother is good, saying that my mother is not only enthusiastic, but also the food is particularly delicious. So my good friend comes to our house whenever he has time. I am jealous of my mother, but I am more happy and proud to have such a mother! My mother is very cheerful, not like an elder at all, but more like a friend, so that my friends have no pressure or restraint at all.
My mother's personality is very different from others. My mother has a bad habit of not saving face when she speaks. I remember one time, I failed the math exam, and my mother was very angry. Instead of hitting me, she sarcastically said I was a big fool. Maybe some people have the same personal experience as me. Do you know how much damage this has done to our door? My mother is also a nag. My mother always tells me to walk slowly and carefully at school in the morning, and not to be naughty at school ... Mom, mom, I 1 1 year old. Do you need to tell me about these things?
Mom, the advantage of my mother is that she is very original. She even knitted me several sweaters! My mother is very honest and often teaches me to be an honest child. My mother's only shortcoming is that she is talkative. I have to say one thing several times, and my ears are getting calluses. But my mother is really good to me and my father, and she is also a competent and good mother.
Mom! Thank you for your love and concern for me and for giving me a warm home! In short, a thousand words can be summed up in five words: thank you, mom!
Ding Lingling ... The school bell rang. When I walked out of the school gate, I saw my mother at a glance, because the mothers of other students were wearing fashionable clothes. Wearing a ring on her hand, earrings on her ears and a necklace around her neck. And my mother, dressed simply, never wears fashion, let alone jewelry.
My mother is over 50 years old. She has been frugal all her life. How I wish she could wear those fashionable clothes!
I remember the last mid-term exam, and I got the first place in the whole grade. When I told my mother the good news, my mother didn't mention how happy she was. She took out all the savings at home and bought me a computer to encourage me to study hard.
Another time, the teacher asked us to subscribe to magazines. I went back and told my mother that she didn't hesitate to take out 50 yuan and let me subscribe to all the magazines. Ah! Mom, you would rather invest money in my study than spend it on clothes.
Another time, my mother and I went to the store to sell shoes, and my mother chose a pair of shoes that fit well and look good. Ask the price, it's too expensive, 100 yuan! Mother quickly put the shoes back and reluctantly left the shop. Then, my mother saw a pair of shoes that fit her in a very humble shop, but they were not good-looking. My mother asked about the price, 20 yuan. Finally, my mother bought this pair of shoes for half a day, 10 yuan. After buying shoes, my mother went to the bookstore and bought me many books. The price of these books far exceeds the price of shoes. My mother suffered for us. Walking out of the bookstore, my mother said to me, "I lost the opportunity to go to school." You must study hard and get into a good university in the future. " I secretly made up my mind: I will never live up to my mother's hope.
Ah! Maternal love is great, maternal love is selfless.
My mother has long black hair and red lips. She always has a smile on her face and treats people kindly.
Mom is an excellent graphic designer. Saturday came, and my mother slept in bed for a while. My mother is really hard. She works for five days in a row and works overtime every night. I can't bear to disturb my mother, so I do my homework quietly. "Ding Rinrin", mom's cell phone rang. I'm confused. It's time for a nap Who is calling my mother? "Hello, tsai ... oh, so that's it. I'll be right there, I'll be right there. " It turns out that mom has to go to work at work. I am very angry. It's so hot on Saturday that everyone is resting. Why does mother have to work? Why not let someone else go? My mother came back in the afternoon, and I spoke out my dissatisfaction angrily, but my mother said kindly, "What's wrong with contributing to society?" I happen to know about this job. "I looked at my mother's haggard face and felt very uncomfortable.
It's the weekend. I'm going out to play with my parents. Mom brought a big bag of snacks. I was so greedy that I ate them secretly during the break. Mom seemed to find me, so I quickly hid the snacks in the back. "What is the baby doing?" "No ... nothing!" "Oh, there are 3 kilometers! See if you are full, son? " Three kilometers left? It's my first time to go to the airport. I don't know how far it is. Hum! Lie to me, I have seen through this trick! Mom often uses this trick on me. Dad is sweating like a pig. Why doesn't he drink so much water? It may really be 3 kilometers away. Dad is so fat that he is too tired to support himself. They were afraid that I wouldn't hold on, so they left me some water in case I was thirsty. Mom and dad are so good to me! I put the snacks in my bag. After about ten minutes, my mother said, "The airport is here!" I responded. Mom and dad teamed up to bully me. I shouted, "OK, you are acting to cheat me! Ah, let's have a snack. I know you can't wait. This is just a test on the road. What if it is really 3 kilometers? You must learn to be patient!
My mother is the best mother in the world! "
Only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are like fast treasures. If you throw yourself into your mother's arms, you won't enjoy happiness ... "
This familiar ballad suddenly sounded in my ear. I felt a slight shock in my heart and fell into deep memories. ...
I remember that Saturday and Thursday, I got up early. After breakfast, I sat by the window and did my homework. While the author was writing, I suddenly met a math problem. I reviewed the question several times first, but I couldn't think of a clue. I had to hang my head on the table and chew on writing.
At this time, my amiable good mother seemed to see my mind, left her work behind and walked gently to my side. I thought you would swear, because I didn't attend class or do my homework until my eyes were wet. But you didn't. You just gently stroked my head with your gentle but calloused hands, sat quietly beside me and taught me carefully and patiently. It was not until I understood that there was a gratified smile on your face. Your smile is like a blooming peony flower, so beautiful. Ah! I feel a warm current gushing from my heart.
My good mother not only cares about my study, but also cares about my health!
It happened in the middle of a cold winter month. My father is on a business trip and the neighbors are asleep. The cold wind whistling outside the window is like a devil sneering. I was lying in bed, and suddenly I felt a headache and wanted to throw up. It was dark, as if the whole world had an earthquake. I know I have a high fever. But in the middle of the night, my name is not everyday, and my name is invalid. I had to lie in bed and moan in pain. Just then, my amiable good mother appeared at my bedside. Before you put on your sweater, you grabbed my king's back and shook it, and "knocked" ran downstairs. It is too late. Nobody took me to the hospital. Mom, you are as anxious as an ant on hot bricks. The only way is to take me to the hospital. But my home is 3 kilometers away from the hospital! Mother settled down and made up her mind. Without saying a word, I trudged forward behind my back in the biting cold wind. I think every step you take is so difficult. I heard my mother's heavy breathing. You must be tired. I said weakly, "Mom, I don't need your back. I want to go by myself!" " "But you said," I'm not tired! You are sick and can't walk. "You barely smile. Mom, I'm in my teens, and I've caught up with you. Now you have to take me to the hospital. How ashamed I am. Although it was a cold winter, I saw pearls of sweat hanging on my mother's forehead. After my mother's efforts, I was finally sent to the hospital. The doctor gave me an injection and prescribed medicine, and my mother was relieved. Later, I had to be hospitalized. It was mom who stayed with me all night. When I woke up the next day, I was much better, but I found that your eyes were bloodshot and there were many silver lines on your temples.
My good mother, how much effort you have devoted to me! When I grow up, I will repay you well!