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Higher Three Language Knowledge Points Sick Sentence Training Test Questions (with Answers)
Panel I Improper Language Order
1. In the following sentences, there is no language disease in the sentence is ()
A. The Forbidden City is the greatest human architectural history of the wonders of the art, is the world's historical and cultural heritage in the world of a bright pearl, is more the mark of the Chinese nation's culture.
B．A man suddenly broke into the doctor's office of the rheumatology and immunology department of the First Hospital Affiliated to Harbin Medical University at about 16:30 on March 23, 2012, and hacked and injured three medical staff members and an internship student before escaping.
C. CCTV's "Today's Speech" will launch seven special programs aimed at strengthening safety education for minors and enhancing their legal awareness and ability to save and protect themselves.
D．It is now recognized that the aurora borealis is related to the large-scale interactions of the Earth's high-altitude atmosphere and geomagnetic field on the one hand, and the stream of charged particles - often called the solar wind - ejected by the sun on the other.
Answer: A, the definite article is not in the right order, "the greatest" should be placed after "in the history of human architecture". C, the sentence is mixed, can be deleted "in order to". D. The word "aurora" should be placed before "on the one hand".
Answer: B
2. In the following sentences, the one that has no speech defects is ()
A. In the past two years, with the development and rise of microblogging as a means of communication on the Internet, more and more government agencies around the world have opened microblogs to publicize relevant information in time and to enhance the image of the government among the people.
B. On March 28, 2012, Premier Wen Jiabao presided over the seventh plenary session of the State Council and decided to appoint Leung Chun-ying as the fourth Chief Executive of the Hong Kong Special Administrative Region. He will take office on July 1, 2012.
C．At the present stage of China's development, both economically developed and backward regions should continue to consolidate and improve the results of their economic development, and strive to comprehensively raise the people's material living standards by 2020.
D．The change from "Qiankun Pillar" to "Hallelujah Mountain" actually only satisfies the curiosity of a few people but ignores the feelings of the majority.
Analyze: A, improper order, should be "rise and development". B, component mutilation, the last sentence lacks the subject "Leung Chun-ying". C, improper collocation, "consolidate and improve the results of economic development" in the "consolidate and improve the results of economic development". C. The phrase "consolidate and improve the results of economic development" does not go with the word "improve" in the phrase "consolidate and improve the results of economic development".
Answer: D
3. In the following sentences, the one with no grammatical error is ()
A. At present, Europe, the United States, Japan and other developed countries are vigorously pushing forward the low-carbon revolution centered on high energy efficiency and low emissions, focusing on the development of low-carbon technology, and making major adjustments to the policies of energy, industry, technology, trade and other aspects.
B. Translated works are increasing day by day, and on the one hand these works improve the literacy of Chinese academic culture, and on the other hand promote the development of China's written language.
C．Director Huang Jianxin believes that because past melodramatic films were created with insufficient information, they tended to pattern the personalities of the leaders and characters in a way that was difficult for viewers to get close to.
D. In the special program "Love for Yushu - Large-scale Fund-raising Activities for Earthquake Relief and Disaster Relief" held by CCTV, the famous painter Fan Zeng, after donating 10 million yuan to Wenchuan two years ago, once again generously donated 10 million yuan to the compatriots affected by the disaster in Yushu. He donated 10 million yuan to the Yushu disaster victims.
Analysis: B. The correlative words are not in the right order. "B. The word "on the one hand" should be put after "these works. "D. Inappropriate order of prepositions. D. The phrase "two years ago" should be put before "to Wenchuan".
Answer: A
Panel 2: Inappropriate collocation
4. The following sentences have no grammatical defects ()
A. "Fairness and justice are more glorious than the sun." Premier Wen Jiabao's passionate words powerfully conveyed the government's solemn commitment to solving the problems of people's livelihood and promoting the transformation of social development. It carries forward the value orientation of promoting the transformation of social development.
B. The opening of the Chinese Character Lecture Hall provides a platform for learning Chinese characters in the Internet age and creates a good format for further promoting the profound Chinese culture.
C. At present, Wuhan has made it clear that less than 20 properties will be launched in October, which is nearly half of the 36 properties launched during the same period last year, and it is very likely that the "red October" that the industry was once looking forward to will become a "silent period" for the property market. The company's website has been updated with the latest information on the market," he said.
D. On April 14, less than an hour after the earthquake in Yushu, Qinghai Province, some hospitals in the Lanzhou Military Region of the People's Liberation Army (PLA) rushed to the disaster area at a rapid pace just as they did when they heard the sound of the bugle call on the battlefield.
A.A. The verb and the guest are inappropriate. B. The word "promote" should be changed to "publicize, manifest, show", etc. The word "promote" should be changed to "publicize". "D. "The hospital ...... went to the disaster area" is an inappropriate combination of subject and predicate.
Answer: C
5. In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical defects is ()
A．China imports a sizable amount of pork every year from three major pork exporters - the United States, the European Union and Canada - even though the country's production of pork is completely self-sufficient.
B．Delegates at the two sessions of the National People's Congress expect the State Administration of Medicine to formulate measures as soon as possible to minimize the price and circulation of medicines, so that the people can afford to see a doctor and the problem of the difficulty for the people to see a doctor can be better solved.
C．Typhoon Morakot has caused the worst flooding in 50 years in Taiwan, resulting in more than 500 people dead or missing, and people on the mainland have been actively donating money and goods to show that the Chinese nation's blood is thicker than water, helping the poor and the weak, and showing boundless love.
D. Peking University's "real-name recommendation system for secondary school principals" takes a sunny approach to preventing the possible emergence of "unspoken rules" and "power rent-seeking" that people have been talking about. The system has been designed to prevent the possible emergence of unhealthy practices.
A. The main idea is to make the production of pork more efficient. "The production of pork can't be matched with "self-sufficiency", which can be changed to "production of pork". "B. The verb-object collocation is inappropriate. The words "reduce" and "circulation" do not go well with one of the double-object phrases, so the word "reduce" can be added before "circulation". "C. Component mutilation and improper collocation. It should be changed to "expresses the feeling that the blood of the Chinese nation is thicker than water, and manifests the noble spirit of the Chinese nation to help the poor and the weak, and to love without boundaries".
Answer: D
6. In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical defects is ()
A. The Metamorphosis, The Spot on the Wall, Waiting for Godot, and One Hundred Years of Solitude are the expressionist, stream-of-consciousness, absurdist, and magical-realist literatures that came out from the 1920s to the 1970s in the West respectively.
B. The technical problems of geographic information exchange are now basically mature, and once geographic information is recognized by the general public, then the geographic information industry will rise rapidly.
C．In terms of economy and trade, although the economic and trade relations between China and the United States will become closer as a result of China's accession to the WTO, at the same time, it should be seen that trade frictions and disputes between China and the United States will not diminish, but may increase instead.
D．You have heard of Shanzhai cell phones, Shanzhai celebrities and Shanzhai Spring Festival Gala, right? Shanzhai police stations have also appeared in Jinhe Township, a suburb of Hohhot City in Inner Mongolia, which can't help but make you marvel at the fact that their talents have not been used where they can contribute to society.
A.A. The subject and object are inappropriate. A. The word "work" should be added after "literature". B. The word "problem" should be deleted, or the word "mature" should be replaced by "solve. D. The word "marvel" should be replaced by "deplore".
Answer:C
Panel 3Compositional mutilation or redundancy
7. In the following sentences, the one with no grammatical defects is ()
A．A.Apple's stock price did not fluctuate greatly after Steve Jobs' death, which shows that the market is still optimistic about Apple's future and recognizes that Apple's innovative activities can still continue.
B．The unfortunate incident that befell a two-year-old girl in Foshan, Guangdong Province, has quizzed our indifferent souls, and the moral conscience of "rejecting indifference and conveying warmth" has been awakened once again.
C. Wenzhou City is launching a package of programs to apply for new loans and reduce the tax burden of small and medium-sized enterprises to avoid the recurrence of incidents in which bosses fled because of financing and loan problems.
D．This year, the province will add 2.02 million acres of new forest land, mainly in places affected by pollutants, such as highways or roadsides of main roads, which will be good for tailpipe cutting and dust raising.
Analysis: A, component mutilation, the last clause lacks the subject. C, component redundancy, multiple negatives inappropriate, "to avoid" already contains the meaning of "negative", can not be followed by the negative word "no". In D, the word "roadside" should be changed to "next to", and the word "dust" should be added to the word "suppress". "to curb".
Answer: B
8. In the following sentences, the one with no grammatical defects is ()
A. AVIC Engine Company is mainly devoted to the development of engines for large airliners, and its founding marks a welcome step forward in the development of China's large-scale aircraft supporting industries.
B．Today, the People's Daily published a newsletter that comprehensively introduces the reform of the management system of the Binhai New Area in Tianjin and analyzes the positive impact of the new area's establishment of a unified administrative structure and the construction of a streamlined and efficient management system.
C. Clarifying the payment items of the central and local finances in accordance with the law and establishing an independent budget for social security institutions and a nationally coordinated budget is an innovative strategy for building the capacity of China's social security institutions.
D．The college entrance exam essays, the fate of which is at stake for millions of candidates, will no longer avoid social hotspots, and will guide candidates to pay attention to others, society and the connection between themselves and the outside world.
Analysis: B. Compositional defects. C. The word "reform" should be added after the phrase "institutional reform". In the "integrated budget" after the "system". D. "by" and "you" semantic repetition. D. The word "所" and "攸" are repetitive.
Answer: A
9. In the following sentences, the one without grammatical error is ()
A. With the continuous progress of the society, the value of scientific and technological knowledge is increasingly apparent, mankind has entered into the intellectual property rights of the belonging and the division of benefits, and has begun to tilt toward the scientific and technological workers.
B．Because of the increase in the reserve requirement ratio, it makes it necessary for banks to adjust the allocation of assets, adjusting the funds from bonds, loans and other high-yield varieties to the reserves, which may put some pressure on the bank's profitability.
C. For the first time, the Shanghai World Expo has set up an urban best practice area display program around the theme of exhibition, which provides a platform for mutual exchange of ideas and experience in solving various problems in the development of the world's cities.
D．The China International Rescue Team (CIRT), consisting of professional search and rescue team members, medical and rescue personnel and earthquake specialists, took a special flight to Haiti on the 13th to support the local rescue and relief efforts, with a team of more than 60 people carrying life detectors and other rescue equipment and a large number of medicines.
A.A. lacks the object of "enter". B. is mutilated. D. Compositional redundancy. D. The word "about" can be removed.
Answer: C
10. In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical error is ()
A. The financial crisis that swept across the globe transcended the economic sphere and penetrated into all levels of society, and the Asian culture is facing a lack of financing power, the ability to consume and the demand for culture have been affected, and the development of culture has been constrained.
B．The Ministry of Housing and Construction is encouraging localities to develop price-restricted housing and affordable rental housing to change the "one-legged approach" to housing construction, thus easing the housing problems of low- and middle-income families.
C．We know that four private universities in Australia closed on Nov. 5 due to bankruptcy, leaving more than 2,700 international students, including about 1,000 Chinese students, out of school.
D．Blue printed cloth is one of China's traditional folk handicrafts, which is simple and elegant in style, and contains the unique life style and aesthetic interest of the Chinese people, exuding a fascinating charm.
A. Components are missing. A. After the word "constraints", add the word "challenges". B. After the phrase "walking on one leg", add "the present situation". C. The word "around" should be deleted.
Answer:D
Panel IV Structural Confusion
11. In the following sentences, the one with a speech defect is ()
A. "Harmonious society", a term full of Chinese wisdom, depicts an ideal state of international relations, which is being understood and endorsed by more and more countries. understanding and approval.
B．By 2020, Jiangsu is to take the lead in the country in basically realizing modernization, the consideration of which includes 30 items in four categories: economic development, people's life, social development and ecological environment.
C．Chinese and Western comparative poetics belongs to a branch of comparative literature, which focuses on the comparative analysis of Chinese and Western literary theories to discover the ****similarities and unique features existing between the two.
D．In recent years, the New Year's Eve concerts of major TV stations have made viewers fatigued because of the seriousness of following the trend, the lack of creativity and the absence of characteristics.
Analysis: D, sentence miscellaneous, should be changed to "is due to ...... no characteristics" or "is the result of following the trend of serious ...... ". [中教网]
答案：D
12．In each of the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical defects is()
A..People are generally worried that the cloning of human beings, which is going to appear sooner or later, will fundamentally change the human beings' way of reproducing the two sexes over the past millions of years, so that the human beings will encounter great challenges in the aspects of ethics, morality and law.
B．Many people also believe that the main reason why household registration in big cities such as Beijing and Shanghai is so attractive is that these big cities have higher health care, education, employment opportunities, old age and other welfare guarantees to be the cause of temptation.
C. The phenomenon of counterfeiting and trafficking in counterfeits in today's society has been repeated and intensified, and its root cause is driven by huge economic interests, which should cause us to reflect on.
D. In winter, some students are often late for school on the pretext of traffic jams and long waits for public ****cars.
Answer:B. The structure of B is confusing, "because ...... become the cause of temptation" mishmash.C. The structure of C is confusing, "the cause is ...... "The reason is that ...... has become the cause of temptation." Item C is confusing, "The reason is that ...... has become the cause of temptation." Item D is confusing, "The reason is that ......" is confusing. "It is known as ......".
Answer: A
Panel V Unintelligible
13. In the following sentences, there is no grammatical error and the meaning of the sentence is clear.(
A. I advocate that the suggestions of the teachers should be studied more carefully and that this will be beneficial to both the school and the teachers.
B．I remember when I first met her, she was an eight- or nine-year-old child, innocent, cute and uninhibited.
C．President Barack Obama released the Nuclear Posture Review around mid-April that lays out the future of U.S. nuclear strategy, which promises not to use nuclear weapons against non-nuclear countries, except for North Korea and Iran.
D．The stationing agencies of the Central Commission for Discipline Inspection and Supervision (CCDI) should make it their first duty to strengthen supervision and effectively enhance supervision of leading cadres to prevent loss of control of power, decision-making blunders and misbehavior.
A. There is an ambiguity. A. There is an ambiguity. It can be interpreted as both "advice from the teachers" and "advice to the teachers". Who are the "eight- and nine-year-olds"? Is it "I" or "she"? The word "I" or "she" can be added before the word "or" to eliminate ambiguity. c. Uncertainty of meaning. Delete the word "before and after".
Answer: D
14. In the following sentences, the meaning of the sentence is clear and there is no grammatical error.
B．The success of the first manned space flight has greatly inspired and strengthened the enthusiasm and confidence of the Chinese nation to create a better future and realize a great renaissance, and will surely drive and promote the vigorous development of socialist undertakings with Chinese characteristics.
C．A couple specially rushed to the donation center on their wedding anniversary and donated 1,000 yuan each.
D．The green bamboo has attracted countless painters throughout the ages, and bamboo painting is a bright pearl in the Chinese painting garden, which symbolizes the steadfastness and tenacity of the Chinese nation and its unassuming temperament.
A. There is ambiguity in A. "He" can refer to both the European Union ambassador and Long Yongtu. C. There are two ways of understanding "one person": is it one person in the couple, or each person in the couple?D. The reference is not clear. D. The word "it" can refer to both bamboo and bamboo paintings.
Answer:B
Panel six is illogical
15．The following sentence has no grammatical defects ()
A．After the earthquake, when a large number of sons and daughters of the army went to the rescue, many professional psychological helpers also rushed to the disaster area to help the victims to recover the psychological trauma caused by the earthquake.
B. Xu Shen, the author of Shuowen Jiezi (Explaining Characters in Chinese), categorized Chinese characters according to their initials, a great innovation in the field of philology that has been unmatched by any other people before or since, and is beyond the reach of future generations.
C. In today's rapid economic and cultural development, more and more people realize the importance of mental health, and people want to have a good body as well as a healthy spirit.
D．An article in the U.S. magazine Prevention points out that it is good for the health of older people in their seventies and eighties if they spend more than an hour a day shopping for groceries, cooking and doing housework.
A.A. is illogical. Replace "restoring ...... creations" with "healing ...... creations." B. Contradictory. B. The phrase "no one will come after us" contradicts the phrase "there are many who will come after us".D. It is illogical. D. illogical. "Doing chores" cannot be juxtaposed with "buying groceries and cooking".
Answer: C
16. In the following sentences, the one that has no grammatical defects is ()
A.... Reform of the publicly-funded health care system and the implementation of medical insurance are not readily accepted by the general public, and it is necessary to do a good job of publicizing and explaining them to the government.
B. At 6 p.m. on March 10, 14 members of the Sichuan Provincial Emergency Volunteer Service Team set off from Chengdu and drove to the quake-stricken Yingjiang River in Yunnan province, ready to provide professional volunteer services such as emergency rescue, medical care and psychological counseling.
C．Speeding up the pace of development in the western region, in addition to striving for domestic and foreign investment, building up infrastructure and developing high-tech industries, improving water-saving agriculture and running township and village enterprises is also an important way to develop the western economy.
D．When coming to this place, we realized that what they need is not only tents, drinking water, food and necessities, they also need spiritual comfort.
Answer: A, illogical, can be changed to "for the reform ...... of the issue of the general public ......". C, illogical, a face to face, can be D, illogical, "living supplies" includes "tents, drinking water, food".
Answer: B
17．The following sentence is free of grammatical errors ()
A. Hollywood superstar Arnold Schwarzenegger attended the California governor's election. Schwarzenegger to participate in the California gubernatorial campaign had hired the famous American "stock god", personal assets of 35 billion U.S. dollars, the world's second richest man Warren Buffett as his economic and financial adviser. Warren Buffett, the world's second richest man with $35 billion in personal assets, as his economic and financial adviser.
B. "Five years of returning to China, ten years of two bombs." As the pioneer of the motherland's aerospace industry, Qian Xuesen is a model of Chinese intellectuals. His quiet death has brought the nation endless mourning.
C. At present, China has opened up about 100 countries and regions as tourist destinations, while travel agencies really put less than 30 on the market for tourists to choose from, and 2/3 of the destination resources are vacant.
D．Our table tennis has flourished for three decades and is a world leader in both men's and women's events, team events and individual events.
A.A. contradicts itself. "C. illogical. C. illogical. "less than" "around" contradicts, delete "around". D. improper classification. Several items cross each other.
Answer:B
Panel VII Revision of Sentences
18. Identify one of the following three items that has a speech defect and revise it, keeping the original meaning after the revision.
①Humor can help children cope better with the stress and pain of life and study, so children who are humorous tend to have a happier life. Humor also promotes the healthy development of a child's intelligence and can make it easier for him or her to finish school.
②Google recently launched the "Endangered Languages" program, which aims to save more than 3,000 languages that are disappearing. The loss of languages means the loss of valuable scientific and cultural information, which is no different from the extinction of a species.
3 Besides Liangzhou, Dunhuang was another important post on the Silk Road. The great Dunhuang was discovered by the world when the hand of destiny wiped away a speck of yellow sand.
The one with a speech defect is: ________
Targeted for modification: ____________________________________________
Analysis: In item (ii), the words "aims to" and In item (b), "the purpose is" and "aimed at" are duplicated, so either "aimed at" or "aimed at" can be removed.
Answer: ② Remove either "aims to" or "aims at".
19. In the following paragraph, there are six defects in the sentences, mark four and correct them.
Dieting and enforced food restriction are not a good way to fight obesity, but it is important to make scientific nutritional choices. The British experience is worth learning, the time of eating should be as long as possible, each dish to have a large interval, so that you can avoid not over-eating. This is because when there is less sugar in the blood in the body, one feels hungry. If one eats a small piece of food to fill up first, and then rests for 15 to 20 minutes, during which time the sugar level in the blood increases, the feeling of hunger will decrease. The British scientific method of eating is as simple as that, and this is where the result of the elegant British physique comes in.
A. ________Modify: ______________________________________
B. ________Modify: ______________________________________
C. ________ modified: ______________________________________
D. ________ modified: _____________________________________
Answer:" Scientific Nutrition" was changed to "Scientific Nutritional Approach". "Each course" was changed to "between courses". Delete the word "not" from "avoid overdosing". Replace "a small piece of food" with "a small piece of food". "Hunger will be reduced". Replace "diminishes" with "lessens" or "disappears". Replace "the result of elegance" with "the cause of elegance". (Revise any four sentences)
20. The following report contains four errors in language, in addition to content.
①This year, the province's key projects for foreign investment are in agriculture, transportation, technological transformation of the information industry, ②and will improve the investment environment at the same time, ③pay attention to the scope of the policy allowed to give foreign investors appropriate concessions. According to the introduction, all the cities in our province have formulated some measures to reduce the burden of enterprises according to the principle of "national treatment". The General Administration has announced that from January 1 this year, the temporary import tax on 345 serial numbers of production equipment will be reduced by nearly 50% or more.
(1)Error at (fill in serial number) ________, revise __________________________
(2)Error at (fill in serial number) ________, revise __________________________
(3)Error at (fill in serial number) ________, modify ___________________________
(4)Error at (fill in serial number)________, modify ___________________________
Answer:(1)②Replace "improved " to "improve". (2)③Add "within" after "range". (3) ⑤ Move "some" to "alleviate". (4)⑥ Delete "nearly" and "more than".
In the process of doing the following methods:
1. sense of reading method
Sense of reading method is to find the fault of the sentence through the statement of prudent reading. Where it reads awkwardly and sounds ambiguous, it may be the place where the language is faulty. When reading and analyzing, you should slow down and look at the statement with a critical eye. This is the method of finding sick sentences by analyzing and making judgments based on the intuition of the language. To use this method correctly, we must rely on the usual accumulation of a lot of reading, only read more good literature and other cultural readings, in order to gradually build up a keen sense of language.
2. Tightening Analysis Method
Tightening analysis method is to use the means of simplifying the components, first of all, the additional components in the sentence (determiner, gerund, complement) to remove, to retain the main body (subject, predicate, object), and to check whether there is any problem in the main part of the main body; if the main body is fine, then check the local, to see whether there is any problem between the modifier and the center word and within the modifier.
3. Logical Meaning Analysis
Some of the grammatical problems are not good to find a problem, we have to analyze the logic, which is the logical meaning of the analysis. Logical meaning analysis method from the use of concepts, judgment, reasoning and other aspects of the consideration of whether it is appropriate, before and after the order of the statement, the relationship between the sentence is appropriate to start.
For example: some people in the city are unscrupulous in imitating shoddy products ...... ("imitating shoddy products" is not appropriate, should be changed to "manufacturing shoddy products" or "Imitation of brand-name products.")
For example, all people with outstanding achievements are honed in a hard environment. (The use of "all ...... all" this alludes to the affirmative judgment, it is overstated, should be "all" removed, and the "all "should be replaced by "mostly").
4. Sentence-making analogies
Some sentences are faulty, can not be seen for a moment, the structure of the original sentence is modeled after a commonly used sentence, for comparison, the imitation of the sentence has a problem, may indicate that the original sentence has a problem, which is the sentence-making analogies.
For example, this experience deserves the attention of educators, especially primary and secondary school teachers. (The structure of the original sentence is more complex, first compressed and simplified to "this deserves the attention of educators". Then compare its structure to make sentences: "It is worth their study" "It is worth our emulation." (It is found that the sentence made compared with the everyday saying, there is an extra "the" word, see the original sentence in the "the" should also be deleted.)
5. Characteristic Analysis Method
Each sentence has its own characteristics, seize the characteristics of targeted analysis, can be faster diagnosis of the disease.
Sentences with juxtaposition of components, juxtaposition of components may be guilty of repetition of meaning or improper order, juxtaposition of concepts are often cross-inclusive relationship; there are more than one negative sentence, there may be improper negation of the error; there is a "can" "whether ", "can", "whether", "good or bad", "should", "should", "to" and so on. The sentence, may be out of the view of one side and two sides do not correspond to the error; prepositional structure at the beginning of the sentence, there may be prepositional structure to cover the subject of the error (these examples have appeared in the previous sentence, will not be listed). When doing questions, you can follow the trail according to the characteristics of such sentences and find the crux accurately and quickly.
Extended reading: insurance how to buy, which is good, hand to teach you to avoid the insurance of these "pits"