To revise a sick sentence means to modify a sentence with a speech defect so that it does not change the original meaning and the sentence is more fluent. What are the common signs in a sick sentence? The following is my compilation of common signs in sick sentences, welcome to enjoy
Common Signs in Sick Sentences 11. There are parallel phrases, which may be improperly collocated, improperly categorized, improperly sequenced, or of unknown semantic meaning.
1. The relevant departments have promptly criticized, educated and seriously dealt with a very small number of incidents of disrespecting the labor of sanitation workers, making unreasonable demands, and even beating and insulting sanitation workers. (collocation improper, ? incidents? can't? criticize and educate?)
2. Our hometown is beautiful and rich, the land here is fertile, especially suitable for planting fruit trees, cotton, ganja, in addition, it is also suitable for planting pear trees and jujube trees. (Improperly categorized, ? Pear trees and jujube trees? are both? fruit trees?)
Second, there are multiple determiners and multiple gerunds, which may be improperly ordered
1. Criticism and self-criticism are effective ways of correcting mistakes and improving one's thinking. (It should be put ? effective? to? method? before)
2. Yesterday, many delegates spoke to him enthusiastically in the lounge. (should move ? enthusiastically? to? talked to him? before)
Third, there are a number of phrases, which may be unclear, repetitive, inappropriate order, and improperly worded.
1. The student council officers of the three schools met in the teaching office to study the implementation of the second classroom activities for this semester. (The expression is not clear, is it? three schools? or? three student council cadres?)
2. The price of domestic cars is low, suitable for people to accept, like? The city of Beibei? The market price is only 60,800 yuan,? The newest version of the car is the Ingalls. is 68,800 yuan, the new? Santana? is only about $100,000 or so. (Repeat. A hundred thousand dollars or so? is meant to be an approximate number, not to be used again as ? about?)
Fourth, the presence of prepositions, may be improper collocation, structural confusion, subject-object reversal, subject mutilation
1. Instead of being depressed when they encountered difficulties, they gained strength from everyone's trust and care, and built up confidence in overcoming difficulties. (Inappropriate collocation, should be ? from? from?)
2. On March 17, six members were expelled from the IOC because of a bribery scandal. The next day, every newspaper in the world gave a detailed report about the incident which shocked the international sports world. (The preposition is not used properly, it should be ? to?)
V. There is a correlative (conjunction), which may be improperly collocated, mutilated, or improperly ordered.
1. Only by fundamentally solving the problem of why people, we can better serve the people (improper collocation of the correlative, should be a necessary condition, with ? Only? only?)
2. Despite how meager your gift is, it is like a thousand-pound weight on the farmers' hearts. (Associated words and adverbs are not appropriate, here should be a definite reference to the ? So? The same is true for the other two. Whatever? and? Whatever? (after applying the imprecise ? How?)
6. Pronouns appear, which may be semantic and repetitive.
1. This exquisite lantern will be given as a gift to the guest with the highest score today. (The semantic meaning is unclear, ? He? Exactly who is being referred to, the reference is unclear)
2. The old man, at the age of 80, still clearly remembers what his brother said about him when he joined the student movement: a warmonger.
(The semantic meaning is unclear, ? himself? What exactly does it mean? the old man? or does it mean? The old man? or the old man's? brother?)
VII. There is a long object, probably a mutilation of the central word of the object and improper collocation
1. In order to fully promote the use of rapeseed or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and to accelerate the development of the pig raising business, this county held three technical training courses for breeders. (The object center phrase is mutilated, should add ? the experience?)
2. Recognize sandstorms and dust storms, understand sandstorms, in order to achieve the prevention of sandstorms from a scientific point of view, to reduce the losses caused by sandstorms. (? The object center of the sentence is mutilated. the object of the center of the mutilation, ? Losses? After adding? the purpose of)
VIII. More than one predicate appears, which may be improper collocation and stealing the subject.
1. This cultural station has become a place to educate and help backward young people, save and cultivate out-of-control youths, and has been honored by the higher-ups many times (improper collocation, ? cultivate? The same as the "Cultivate" program. The youths who have lost their way?
2. This factory, though small in scale, has twice won the Provincial Science Congress Award and has been awarded the title of Provincial Quality Product three times, and its products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast Asia. (Stealing the subject, ? factory? can't? was awarded the title of provincial quality products?)
Nine, there is a question ten, the negative word, may be improper Ken.
1. Lei Feng spirit should of course give it a new connotation, but who can deny that now there is no need to learn Lei Feng? (The question and then double negative becomes a triple negative, illogical)
2. In recent years, Wang Fang has accumulated a large amount of information by collecting and organizing folk songs almost all the time (? All the time not? is equivalent to ? Every moment? The same as the word "forget". Forget? used here with "forgetting", as in "forgetting", as in "forgetting". Accumulated a lot of information? (contradiction)
X. There is a fixed structure, under the definition, may be structural confusion
1. The Consumer Rights and Interests Protection Act is popular with the majority of consumers because it strengthens people's awareness of self-protection, so that the rights and interests of consumers are protected to the maximum extent possible. (There? for? the? and? by? by? There is no structure that is The structure of the The structure of the The structure of the structure that is to be The word "by" has been removed from the word "by". word removed)
2. So far, man has not been able to control natural disasters completely, and the good or bad agricultural harvests are still largely due to the good or bad decision of natural conditions (should be? by? decided?)
xi. There are literary words, written words, which may be repetitive.
1. The proposal to set up tolls on traffic arteries must be discussed and approved by the local people's assembly and made public. (? all? that is? of? The first is that the public will be able to see the results of the program and the results will be made public. the? and it repeats)
2. The opening ceremony of the Athens Olympic Games is wonderful, can be called first-class, by the world public opinion of the general praise. (? can? That is, the opening ceremony of the Olympic Games in Athens was a great success. can? The opening ceremony of the Athens Olympic Games was a great success. can? repeat with it)
XII. The presence of ? the? word phrases, may be unclear meaning, improper collocation (steal the subject), improper order.
1. The day gradually darkened, and the wind blew outside, and the pedestrians on the street gradually thinned out, repairing the umbrella's heart was very anxious. (The semantic meaning is not clear, ? The umbrella repairer? It may be? The customer who repaired the umbrella? It could also be the customer who repairs umbrellas. the master who repairs umbrellas?)
2. On the evening of August 3, 2003, the 29th Olympic Games emblem release ceremony was held at the Temple of Heaven in Beijing, and the lights of the Hall of Prayer for the Year of the Lord were brilliant that night, making it even more majestic and magnificent (improperly paired with the misuse of ? The word "的" is used incorrectly, and the word "的" is misused. word, stealing the subject, resulting in? Lights? and? majestic and magnificent? should be deleted. The word "magnificent" should be deleted. words)
Common Signs in Sick Sentences21 ( )
A. An excellent basketball coach of the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience came.
B. To play their infinite embedded power in the construction of new China.
C. There are all kinds of things Lenin used in the past on display inside.
D. Whether this kind of seed should be changed or not has aroused extensive discussion among the leaders and the masses.
2 ( )
A. We came to this world-famous museum and saw a wide range of art treasures, which made us feel proud.
B. The strong and fast rhythm of rock and roll music and the mesmerizing and flashing lighting effects dazzle people.
C. If the ideas in a piece of writing are questionable, then the words, even if they are good, are not to be used.
D. Unless confrontational training is strengthened, Chinese soccer can go global, otherwise it can't even break out of Asia.
3 ( )
A. The production of cotton in China could not be self-sufficient in the past.
B. I think the reply, and the investigation and handling of the issue, show an irresponsible attitude.
C. Before liberation, the money earned by my father and brother was not enough to support the family.
D. We do not entirely deny that the poem does not reveal hope, but rather that the hope is very slim.
4 ( )
A. On October 11, with the idea of learning from the aviation department, our blackboard newspaper was published.
B. Members' family members must have a family badge in addition to the ticket issued, and they cannot be admitted without one of the two.
C. This shows how weak the attitude of concern and responsibility for the working class is.
D. Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection campaign has been launched, in which a series of tasks such as the establishment and strengthening of the technical management system are to be accomplished.
5 ( )
A. Nowadays, the fishermen themselves have elected the head of the administrative group, who is responsible for the management of the fishermen's life and production.
B. It has been ten years since Lao Zhang died.
C. The People's Republic of China has been established, the ****same program has been promulgated, and women are equal in law.
D, Mr. spoke eloquently, his voice and smile, although there is no change, but the wrinkles at the corners of the eyes seem to suggest the hardship and unhappiness of these years.
6 ( )
A. Only through close contact with the society and the masses can we offer insightful opinions on the safety and security of the country and the worries and happiness of the people.
B. The saying that "if you know the 300 Tang poems well, you can recite them even if you don't know how" applies to those who write poems as well as those who write texts.
C, on the scientific issue of right and wrong, should not take the way of pressure, especially can not engage in a kind of literal prison things, history, where this has been done, there is not a good result.
D. When he drove by, he found a sign written in red on one side, and the handwriting didn't look very clear.
7 ( )
A. The Medical Practitioners Act specifies that in many countries and regions of the world registered medical practitioners must join the local medical practitioners' association.
B. Studying the Internet with the theories and methods of social sciences is a new topic for social scientists.
C, the plaque is vulgar and grotesque, certainly not elegant; foreign pandering, with colonial cultural colors, but also for the people of the country is not ashamed.
D, China's national debt issuance scale of more than nineteen hundred and fifty-two billion dollars this year.
8 ( )
A, the Transportation Research Institute developed a filter that can purify low-grade diesel exhaust, contributing to environmental protection.
B. In order to implement the Teachers' Law, Wanshou County has reimbursed all outstanding teachers' medical expenses on the eve of the 8th March.
C. The director of the wood processing plant reported how they introduced advanced technology, actively improved the plant's equipment, and mobilized the staff to learn how to use the new equipment, thus launching a series of new products.
D. The store openly sells pirated software, and we must crack down on this kind of behavior that tramples on the publishing law.
9 ( )
A. Since the Chinese people accepted Marxism, the Chinese revolution has gone from victory to victory under the leadership of Comrade Mao Zedong.
B. We have to reform and improve the new system of science and technology that conforms to the objective law of scientific and technological development and is compatible with the socialist market economy.
C, in September this year, "Westlake Dali" has two young people less than 30 years old pushed to the knitting branch and the executive vice president of the branch of clothing on the important position, which means that "Westlake Dali" began to carry out in the cultivation of human resources on the awareness of the fast half-beat.
D. One hundred years ago, a fifty-seven-year-old stubborn single man who could still hear the thunder but could no longer hear the large orchestra playing its own music, raised his fist to the roaring sky for the last time, and then died.
10 ( )
A. Congressmen who talk about "human rights" ask what kind of "human rights" are being practiced by white policemen against blacks in the United States.
B. The Austrian mountaineering club is a nationwide organization. They have 250,000 members, who pay a fee based on their annual income.
C. The most fundamental problem facing the Chinese economy is still the lack of demand. From such a macroeconomic situation, it is still necessary to continue to implement a proactive fiscal policy to promote economic restructuring and accelerate infrastructure development, including the promotion of western development.
D. During the decade, the annual publication of books has more than doubled in variety, while the total number of print runs has basically remained flat, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.
11 ( )
A. In the last three years, the total grain output of this county has been making great strides forward with an average annual increase of twenty percent.
B. In addition to groundwater and other sources of river water, rainwater is also one of its sources.
C, Huaisu's exuberance, Bada Shanren's bones is the pride of the Han Chinese people, but Van Gogh's passion, Matisse's rhythm also early for the Chinese people fell.
D, the national general college enrollment of student planning work conference recently held in Taiyuan, Shanxi. According to the plan, this year, the central department of the general colleges and universities for the western and ethnic minority areas of the student source plan will increase, the national provinces, autonomous regions and municipalities directly under the Central Government's college entrance examination acceptance rate will be more than 30%.
12 ( )
A. This is a heroic mother, a mother with an open heart.
B. The article analyzes the characteristics of the strategies adopted by the proletariat and the bourgeoisie in their struggles in various historical periods.
C. Smuggling of cigarettes is so rampant that China's Customs has made the fight against cigarette smuggling a priority.
D. The limitations of the author's own time and class cannot but be reflected in his works, which is something we must pay attention to in evaluating ancient literary works.
13 ( )
A. The temptation of surfing the Internet is too much for modern people to resist, but the expensive online spending makes Internet fans heartbroken.
B. A few days ago, it was confirmed by the relevant departments that the high school freshmen in China, who were enrolled in September 2000, will no longer use the existing high school language textbooks, which have been in use for 20 years. Local high schools may, according to their own situation, decide on their own to choose one of the two new textbooks, the Experimental High School Language Textbook and the Experimental High School Language Textbook, prepared by the People's Education Publishing House.
C. It is necessary to overcome the tendency to focus only on the development of tourism without paying attention to the protection of tourism resources, and to take practical measures to do a good job of protecting the river embankment.
D, according to statistics: Henan Province carries at least two hundred million plants of paulownia, agricultural tung intercropping area increased to more than ten million mu.
14 ( )
A, Tsinghua University used the network test, so that candidates online and professors "talk", and then voted by a number of professors to recommend, and finally the school decided whether to accept.
B. China's accession to the WTO and its participation in international competition require the protection of intellectual property rights and the enforcement of trademark law.
C. The creation of the Zhengzhou Huayuankou breach directly flooded more than 6.19 million people in 13 counties in the provinces of Henan and Anhui.
D. Lu Xun attaches great importance to the literary and artistic creation of children and young people, he pointed out: the fate of children is the fate of the future.
15 ( )
A. The director of the National Safety Production Committee will broadcast a televised speech on safety production at noon today.
B. His parents are both middle school teachers, and his mother teaches at his alma mater, Xixiang No. 1 Middle School, and has traveled a long way to Beijing as a representative of the school.
C. The magazine is aimed at secondary school language teachers and other language workers.
D. Looking along with the sound of the flute, I saw a young man sitting by the lake playing the flute, which sounded so mournful and miserable.
Answers
1, A (B "hidden" moved to the front of the "infinite". C "Lenin used in the past" moved to the front of the "various kinds of". D "caused" moved to the front of the "extensive".)
2, D (A "all make people" is not consistent with the subject of the previous sentence. B "rhythm" "make people look" subject-verb mismatch. C "words" after "even".)
3, B (A can not "self-sufficiency" is "cotton" rather than "cotton production". C "feed" "life" verb-object mismatch. D negative inappropriate.)
4, B (A subject inconsistency, the second half of the sentence changed to "we also set up a blackboard newspaper" C subject subject does not match, changed to "?
The subject does not match, "strengthen" changed to "improve".)
5, D (A go "master" B go "away from the present" C
"women are equal in law" is unclear, whether "women themselves are equal" or "women and men are equal in law" is not clear).
6, B (A "insight" and "opinion" semantic repetition. C remove "a class of things". D "put one on the side" ambiguous.)
7, B (A "to join" the subject is not clear. C improper use of words, "shame" to "teeth". D expression is not standardized, "more than 100 million" to "more than 100 million".)
8, D (A subject inconsistency, "developed" changed to "developed" B "all" to "teachers" after. C
"report" lack of object, can be added in the original sentence after "the practice of").
9, D (A) "since" to the beginning of the sentence. B. The word "reform" should be changed to "establish", and C. "young people" should be followed by "be".)
10, C (A "those" to the beginning of the sentence . B "pay" to "collect". D "double" to "half".)
11, D (A "production" "development" subject-verb collocation is not appropriate . B go to "and so on". C "correctly carry out -" and "a deep understanding of" to switch the order. )
12. D(A "a heroic mother" is ambiguous. B "and" is a preposition or a conjunction is ambiguous. C Add "the work of" after the original sentence.)
13, B (A improper use of words, "online" to "online". C "overcome" and "tend to" verb-object mismatch. D "at least" and "around" contradiction.)
14, A (B improper use of words, "good management" to "work well". C "flooding the population" verb-object mismatch. D the first half of the sentence is ambiguous.)
15, A (B "thousands of miles" to "also". C remove "facing". D subject inconsistency, remove "the sound of the flute".)