I. Navigation Desk
The main content of the text and the whole idea of the introduction
There is a big river, whose water is muddy yellow, in the shape of a few zigzags, rushing in the northwestern part of our country, what kind of river is it?
Yes, it is our mother river - the Yellow River. So how much do you know about the Yellow River?
Rolling Yellow River, the momentum of the ten thousand horses galloping, is frightening. Who will be the master of the Yellow River? Read the lesson "The Master of the Yellow River" and you will know the answer.
The boatman on the sheepskin raft on the Yellow River is known as the master of the Yellow River.
Why did the boatman become the master of the Yellow River? Read the text again and see what the text mainly writes.
The lesson "The Master of the Yellow River", mainly through the description of the sheepskin raft, the boatman and the passengers, praises the boatman for his bravery and wisdom, calmness and resourcefulness, which overcame the shocking waves, and was known as the master of the Yellow River.
What the text wants to tell us is the spirit of the boatman, so the text focuses on his bravery and wisdom, calmness and sensitivity, overcame the shocking waves, in the rolling Yellow River as if walking on the Yellow River to become the master of the Yellow River this central sentence to write.
And how does the text describe it specifically?
The whole text*** has eight natural paragraphs, the text is divided into three parts:
The first to three natural paragraphs of the first part, describing the first time to see the rolling Yellow River traveling on the sheepskin raft scene. First write the momentum of the Yellow River; then write the mood of the first time to see the raft, as if just a small wave, it can be swallowed whole a sentence pointing out the small raft; and finally write the raft in the river traveling scene.
The fourth to sixth natural paragraph for the second part of the specific description of the author saw the situation on the raft. First point out that the thing in the river described above is the sheepskin raft, and then write about the loading of the sheepskin raft, and the passengers and the helmsman showed in the traveling.
The seventh to eighth natural paragraphs, write the first feelings of the people sitting on the sheepskin raft and the people on the . The boatman's praise.
Second, the fine house
The wonderful snippets of the text to appreciate
After reading the lesson "The Master of the Yellow River", are we not particularly admiring the master of the Yellow River - the boatman on the sheepskin raft? Isn't it true that the text is written in an attractive way? Why is that? Let us now go to savor the three subsections of the text to find the answer!
Highlights (a)
Like a sudden encounter with a strong magnetic force, my eyes were attracted to the center of the river, what is it, is the surging rapids drumming forward? From the shore looked so small, so light, floating in the water, as if just a small wave, it can be swallowed whole.
Comments
1 A metaphor to point out the attention is attracted uncontrollably, feel amazed, new and strange.
2 Two then poles write about the smallness and lightness of the parchment raft.
3 small wave swallowed the whole image of the sheepskin raft in the Yellow River in the small, the danger.
Appreciate reading this paragraph, we seem to also feel a strong magnetic force, the description of the text is y attracted. Why do you feel this way?
Because the author at the beginning, the first to seize their first time to see the sheepskin raft when the excitement, novelty, amazement of the mood to write, more fascinating. Then through the method of analogy, the image of the raft of small, especially compared with the wide Yellow River more people feel that it's small, it's dangerous.
Wonderful fragment (2)
Only ten to twelve sheep so big volume it, but there are five passengers and a boatman, and in their side there are also two loaded sacks.
Comments
1 Comparison with sheep shows how small the raft is.
2 The description of the goods loaded on the boat highlights the fact that although the raft is small, the load is large.
Appreciation
The description of the text shows us a small sheepskin raft, but it is loaded with six people and two full sacks. The small size of the volume and the loading, which forms a sharp contrast to highlight the sheepskin raft traveling in the Yellow River is how dangerous.
Wonderful clip (3)
I can not help but be scared, and the boatman is very calm. He was concentrating on holding up the Penny, carefully watching the water, and boldly breaking the waves. The passengers on the raft talked and laughed, they pointed to the shore, the calm look, as if sitting in a bus **** car to browse the scenery outside the window.
Comments
1 My trepidation contrasts with the boatman's composure, emphasizing his bravery.
2 Capturing the characters' looks and actions, it describes the boatman's bravery, composure and caution.
3 Use similes to further write about the passenger's composure.
Appreciation
In this paragraph, the author mainly seizes the characters' expressions and movements to describe them in detail, which let us see the different reactions of the passengers in the same scene: I was wary and nervous; the boatman was calm, not panicked, and carefully and boldly held up his pole; and the passengers talked and laughed without a trace of fear or worry. The word "and" contrasts my worry with the calmness of the boatman and emphasizes the bravery of the boatman. The passenger's calmness is from the side of the boatman's driving skill, the smoothness and safety of the raft, and my worry, nervousness again form a sharp contrast, further highlighting the boatman's bravery and composure.
The whole paragraph, vivid description, sharp contrast, has a strong expressive power.
Three, Goldfinger
Expression method tips: side description
When writing, we sometimes do not directly describe the object itself, but describe the other, so as to indirectly accentuate the object to be described. This method is called lateral description, also called indirect description. It is customary to say that the method of baking clouds to the moon, is this method.
In the text The Master of the Yellow River, there are several places where this method is used.
1. The six men, as it were, drifted close to the water on the swift Yellow River.
The people are sitting on a sheepskin raft, and the scene of the people drifting against the water is actually an indirect way of writing the scene of the sheepskin raft traveling fast in the Yellow River.
2, the passengers on the raft talk and laugh, they point to the shore, the calm look, as sitting in a bus **** car to browse the scenery outside the window.
The calm and relaxed demeanor of the passengers on the raft is a clear indication that they are not afraid at all. The raft is so small, so light, traveling in the Yellow River is certainly very dangerous, but why the passengers are not afraid? This is written from the side of the boatman driving the raft of skill.
The boatman's bravery, wisdom, calmness and resourcefulness are emphasized and shown from the side through the description of the passengers and other related objects.
The appropriate use of side descriptions can strongly highlight the people and objects to be emphasized, enhance the expressive power of the article, and give people a sense of contrast.
Fourth, Puzzle Garden
Innovation and Practice
Winter is coming, and the weather will gradually become colder, can you write out the cold of winter? Can you write out the cold of winter? You can't write words that directly describe cold such as cold and chilly, etc. Try it.
(Hint: seize the change of people, events and scenes around you in winter, and write from the side.)
Attachment: after-school exercise 3 prompts:
Tentative - the sound of the tape recorder at home, I want to try to fix it, but unexpectedly, I made no sound at all, and I can not help but be tentative, for fear that my mother scolded.
Try - When I do math problems, I am always not satisfied with one way to answer, but try to use a variety of methods.
After-class exercise 4 Hints:
Bilious: war, trembling. Describe very scared.
The terrifying waves: horrified, terrified. Make people afraid of the big wind and waves.
The master of the Yellow River refers to the boatman who drives the sheepskin raft. Because he overcame the waves with his bravery and wisdom, calmness and resourcefulness, and walked on the rolling Yellow River as if it were flat, he can be the master of the Yellow River.