A possible version:
Dear Linda:
If you want to
A possible version:
Dear Linda:
If you want to be healthy and happy, you need to have a healthy lifestyle. I am writing to give you some advice, which I hope you can follow.
As a young student, first of all, you need enough sleep, so you need to go to bed as early as possible every night. You should sleep at least 8 hours every day, which will help you stay active and energetic at school. Second, it is also important to do more exercise. Besides, you should remember to eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food. More importantly, sometimes listening to music after studying can relieve your stress. Last but not least, smiling as much as possible can help you stay happy and forget your troubles.
I hope my suggestion can help you. Good luck to you.
your
Lihua
Analysis of test questions: This written expression requires writing a letter and giving some suggestions to friends on how to live a healthy and happy life. Letters are a familiar genre, and the content is close to life, so students will not feel speechless. There are many points involved in this article. We should not only pay attention to the comprehensiveness of the points, but also pay attention to the logic of the language, and use some conjunctions appropriately to make the content of the article coherent and clear. In addition, the content of the article is about suggestions, so we should pay attention to some expressions of suggestions.
The highlights show that the main points of this written expression are comprehensive and clear. In this paper, the author presents five main points one by one with the first and second conjunctions and the parenthesis of progressive relationship, such as what's more and last but not, which makes the content of the article coherent and compact, and is the biggest highlight of the article. In addition, the concise and fluent language of the article makes these suggestions more desirable.